Friday, May 4, 2012

Mmmmm Violence...

Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.

The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.

Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.

This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)

It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.

But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?

In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.

And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.

The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.

And now a picture!


4,870 comments:

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Nixion Strange said...

Girl who sang friday...
*shudders*

Eve the ROCK said...

I couldn't stand his "Good Night", then I kept singing it and wouldn't stop.

Well, mostly I just sang the first seven words.

I got my t-shirt and sneakers on!

Eve the ROCK said...

That's Rebecca Black, dude. Get it right. And she was very upset about all the haters. She just put a video on YouTube. The poor girl. I dislike the dislike button.

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

yeah. that song is pretty good.
i dont think i've heard of friday by Jessica Black

Nixion Strange said...

I think it's a goof thing i don't remember her name, that would be sad
As i said, no hate, only pity

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

opps, i meant Rebecca Black.

Nixion Strange said...

*good

Eve the ROCK said...

That's mean.

You know, just because you don't know them personally, doesn't mean you should be so nasty. Imagine if a million people were talking about how youre not good at something you do, and how you should stop doing it, and how they 'pity you'. What would you do?

HM?

And don't say you'd be fine with it, you know you wouldn'tp

Eve the ROCK said...

I, on the other hand, simply make light-hearted jokes about their funny hair. XD

Nixion Strange said...

Eve, I am struggling not to yell at you
I pity her because so many people hate her, and give her death threats and stuff
I really feel like yelling at you

Eve the ROCK said...

Gtg bbihah

(be back in half an hour*

Gb!

Nixion Strange said...

Bye Eve

Eve the ROCK said...

Oh, right, okay. I thought you meant the other way, which is what most people mean...

Anyway, spare your yelling voice. I have a purple banana for you.

Later.

Eve the ROCK said...

Bye!

Nixion Strange said...

Now I'm in a bad mood again

Nixion Strange said...

Bye Eve

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

back again! had to finish my test because mum came in my room and only left when i've finished it.

Nixion Strange said...

Okay Fire

Nixion Strange said...

they're answering the phone, might disappear

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

Okay:)

Nixion Strange said...

msd for a while, cause sometimes the internet doesn't fail for a while

Nixion Strange said...

be back in about 15 minutes

Eve the ROCK said...

Nananana, nananana, hey hey! We took your stuff!

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

what do you mean, Eve?

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

wait, brb.

Eve the ROCK said...

Oh, nothing, just a Futurama thing. You know, in two Futurama movies, there is something pink and weird and alien.

Eve the ROCK said...

And it kind of makes you want to throw up.

Eve the ROCK said...

Dinner bye!

Izz said...

Is there anybody......out there?

Selena Gasp said...

hi

Selena Gasp said...

i'm out here! and i think i count as a person

Selena Gasp said...

hi izabell how are u?

Selena Gasp said...

hello!

Selena Gasp said...

i'm all alone again!
*glumly walks to lake and sits under tree muttering "always alone"

Izz said...

Hi!
Sorry I got distracted... ooooh shiny thing!
*starts to walk off*
*stops*
Oh yeah! Hi! Call me Izz!

Selena Gasp said...

sigh i am talking to my self. Again. (its a bad obbsession)

Selena Gasp said...

hi izz

Selena Gasp said...

i have a friend called izzy. so izz,whats up
*lamely tries to make convosation*

Izz said...

*grins*
There are so many reasons not to kill yourself. Flowers, for instance.

Tumblr distracted me.

Izz said...

brc in two minutes!

Selena Gasp said...

ignore my speeling
joke by the way.not the ignoring bit,but the speeling bit. um.

Izz said...

chip!

(brc = bacon rice chip AKA brb)

Selena Gasp said...

are u back yet.izz.izz.IZZ DON'T LEAVE ALONE IN THIS COLD,DARK,COLD WORLD!

Izz said...

Exactly two minutes too.

Selena Gasp said...

has it ever crossed your mind that derek has a blog that he uses to post comments and we have all talked to him but don't know!thats right,i know who u are

Selena Gasp said...

what power would u have if you were an adept. sorry i blurt a lot and don't stay on the same subject for to long

Selena Gasp said...

i would have telepithy. but spelled correctly

Selena Gasp said...

i like butterflys

Selena Gasp said...

um are u there!

Selena Gasp said...

I'M ALL ALONE AGAIN!NOOOOOOOOOOOOO ohh butterfly

Selena Gasp said...

so vena how are u?

Selena Gasp said...

good thanks and how are u?

Selena Gasp said...

i'm good,but i'm feeling a bit lonely

Selena Gasp said...

why do u feel lonely?

Izz said...

I so sorry I keep disappearing!!

This time my mother started attcking me (don't ask).

Selena Gasp said...

cause i'm talking to myself

Selena Gasp said...

oh sorry, i was just talking to my self.

Selena Gasp said...

so what power would u have if u were magic

Selena Gasp said...

hi dancing fire.

Selena Gasp said...

how are u!

Izz said...

So what were we saying?
right um yeah no that never crossed my mind. That would be cool though, even if it meant derek didn't write as much.

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

hey guys! btw, you can call me Fire.

Izz said...

magic....

Selena Gasp said...

it would be
if i were magic i would hav ohh i'v already said that

Izz said...

Hi Fire.
btw if I say Servus it means hi or bye (like ciao but german) and if I say Auf wiedersehen it means bye.
I like using german words sometimes...

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

i know that i would only be magic in my dreams. when i'm asleep.

Selena Gasp said...

i am eating pudding that my mum gave me

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

yeah....
i know a bit of German. it use to be my second language in the old school.

Selena Gasp said...

sooo are u guyes in n.z orrr

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

nope. in Aus.

Selena Gasp said...

my sister is learning german. i like listning to in the jungle in german. its sounds like this.in de tungle de puffty dungle de leba shleep twanight

Izz said...

Well in my SP multiverse character (me on this blog) I have the ability to act like a ghost.

But in other situations I might like shape-shifting.
The ghost thing suits me better on here though. But really it's a long story.

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

hmmm.....
i always thought that Hallo is how you say hello in german. maybe i'm wrong....

Selena Gasp said...

i am in n.z whooooooooo

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

oh! first!

Izz said...

I'm in Aus.

Nixion Strange said...

Yellow?

Selena Gasp said...

my post is second

Selena Gasp said...

hi nix

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

one of my best friend comes from n.z. she's new to our school. just came last week.

Selena Gasp said...

are u in n.z

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

hey Nix!

Selena Gasp said...

GO n.z we rock hard out

Nixion Strange said...

Hey Izz, if you're at all interested, my second chapter of HG is up

http://readthismortals.blogspot.com.au/

anyone else who wants to read it go down until you find HG chapter 1, then read this one. Chapter one is only a couple of posts away

Selena Gasp said...

sooooooooooo
* looks at butterfly* u can't fool me nix * slashes butterfly down. ha,your fancy disguies don't work on me

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

Kk Nix.

Izz said...

Hey Nix.
Hallo works too. But I think they use Servus more. or at least they do in Inspector Rex...

Selena Gasp said...

i feel like i am annoying u guys,please tell me if i am

Selena Gasp said...

is anyone here in lit quiz?

Izz said...

I noticed Nix. I always check the dashboard before i come on here.
I will read it, just later. In school maybe.

Izz said...

What Vena?
btw Fire you need to dedicate.

ALSO... the only way any of you are annoying me is by having no profile picture. But i can deal.

Selena Gasp said...

how old are u guys (i'm full of questions,just ask my friends) (not my imagenary ones)

Nixion Strange said...

K Izz

at least one person besides me reads there dashboard. I know Mist does, but does anyone else?

Nixion Strange said...

favteen, but insane and immature

Selena Gasp said...

lalala SOME DAY I WILL FLY!

Dancing Fire (Directioner!!!!!) said...

brb in about 10mins.

Selena Gasp said...

*feeling stupid* favteen? use numbers please

Izz said...

I'm fifteen!

Yell "orange peel!" if you had to think about that for at least three second before typing it.

ORANGE PEEL!

Nixion Strange said...

K Fire

*sighs*
Numbers are so boring. Fine, 15. As if you couldn't work that out. Or am I more insane then I realise?

Selena Gasp said...

just for the record i am 12 and a girl.and i am cool

Nixion Strange said...

ORANGE PEEL

Selena Gasp said...

i feel intimadated (but spelled right) i am smart don't worry! i just can't spell very well or do maths very well,but i am very good at reading and writing. really i am

Selena Gasp said...

ummmmmmmmmmmm butterfly

Selena Gasp said...

WHO HERE LIKES CHEESE!

Nixion Strange said...

Not a fan of cheder cheese, but every other kind is good
I'm the supreme ruler of cheese. It used to be cream, but I was promoted

Izz said...

I like cheese. But only certain types...

Selena Gasp said...

so

Izz said...

You should get a profile pic Vena.

Nixion Strange said...

Yes, it be annoying with no profile pick

Selena Gasp said...

i really can't think of anything to say but me and my friend kept passing back a piece of paper with our story about face inhaling zombies on it instead of work. so far we have five pages and 4 charaters:derp,karen,mowegly and lurpya. the last two are zombies

Nixion Strange said...

You should post it on your blog, i would read it

Selena Gasp said...

i will get a profile pic but right now i have to go have more pudding

Selena Gasp said...

i will post it soon
bye for now

Izz said...

Nice. I started writing a story about a pencil straightener called Gerald in maths today.

Nixion Strange said...

By Vena

Nixion Strange said...

*Bye

Hey Izz, do you have NAPLAN next week?

Izz said...

*waves to Vena*

Zathract Mist said...
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Selena Gasp said...

i love yogurt with blue berries

Unapplicable. said...

Hullo.

You're all fifteen?!
This isn't fair
Just a few more months to go.

Selena Gasp said...

um mist u all right

Nixion Strange said...

Hi Cal

Mist, what's up?

Selena Gasp said...

i am 12

Unapplicable. said...

What's going on, Mist?

Zathract Mist said...
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Izz said...

*looks at Nix*
*sigh*
yes.

*looks at Mist*
You always have to make a dramatic entrance don't you?

*looks at Vena*
Of course you do.

*looks at floor*
What?

Zathract Mist said...
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Izz said...

*looks at Cal*
*waves*
(I can't be bothered with greetings today)

Nixion Strange said...

Ooooookaay...

Unapplicable. said...

*waves back*

Selena Gasp said...

some fun facts about vena: she has two sister,one 14,one 7 and a three year old brother.she hates spiders and gossipy,giggly meany girls in her class.she likes hanging out with friend izzy and watching friends (and reading and playing hockey and bloging)

Selena Gasp said...

why are comments being removed?

Izz said...

B T W everyone I'm still looking for movie recommendations!

Also I have a friend who's half NZ.

Nixion Strange said...

Because it's Mist

Selena Gasp said...

oops i amde a few errors in some fun facts with vena

Selena Gasp said...

go hockey! and procrastinating and hating maths

Izz said...

I believe Mist would rather erase himself from existance than talk to me.
Understandable.

Unapplicable. said...

Have you seen Hugo?
I liked the movie, but the book is better! As usual.

Selena Gasp said...

so everyone one here is from aus!

Izz said...

Never seen it Cal. But I'll look into it.

Selena Gasp said...

um didi um didi um

Selena Gasp said...

how come derek won't post anthing

Nixion Strange said...

Oh, Izz

Dark Knight, Harry Potter, Iron Man, Hunger Games, Pirates of the C____, Social Network, Inception, Hugo (there's a book? I must read it!), X-men First Class, the rest of X-men aren't that good, give me a sec...

Zathract Mist said...

As weird/pissed as I am at the moment, I feel obligated to tell you that I don't even have a GRUDGE against you, Izz. Don't know where you got that idea from...

Selena Gasp said...

that was a typo

Izz said...

Any recommendations Vena?

Selena Gasp said...

hi mist again sup?

Nixion Strange said...

Don't bring up Derek not posting with me Vena
*fumes*
Good news is i no longer feel empty on that matter. Bad news is i feel angry

Selena Gasp said...

no sorry unless u have not seen the hunger games

Unapplicable. said...

Nix, the book is wonderful!
I'd give it to you... but there's a problem with that solution.
It's quite a big book, mostly comprised of illustrations... but absolutely worth it.

Selena Gasp said...

sorry nix
*sharpens sword*

Selena Gasp said...

hi cal how are u

Unapplicable. said...

I'm good thanks for asking, Vena. What about you?

Selena Gasp said...

.

Izz said...

It was a joke Mist.

Checks off movies from Nix. I think I've seen most of them. I love the HISHE for X-men first class but haven't seen it...

Selena Gasp said...

i'm good thanks

Izz said...

Edit:
*checks off movies from Nix*

Nixion Strange said...

Little Miss Sunshine (i find it funny), Red Dog, hang on...

Selena Gasp said...

someone tell me an interesting please,like theres a fish in the amazon river that swims up your ummmm when u pee in the water

Selena Gasp said...

that is true by the way

Nixion Strange said...

Up (cause I like the dog), hang on...

Izz said...

Seen those too Nix.
Only ones I haven't seen so far are Social Network, Hugo and X-Men First Class.
Should I spend more time doing other stuff?
*grins*
nah.

Selena Gasp said...

i forgot to put the word fact in my post soz

Nixion Strange said...

Sherlock Holmes

Selena Gasp said...

sigh sigh sigh sigh

Unapplicable. said...

Despicable Me!
The minions were the best part. Let's not forget the fluffy unicorn. *snickers*

Izz said...

Elastic bands last longer when you freeze them.

I acyually spend a good part of two days watching nine movies with a friend. Then the best part of the next two days in bed.

Nixion Strange said...

The Shawshank Redemption

Selena Gasp said...

is anyone here the smartest person at there ? i'm not but i'm friends with the guy who is

Selena Gasp said...

school i mean

Nixion Strange said...

I am smart not in the facts sense, but in just using common sense. Honestly, sometimes people can be so thick

Selena Gasp said...

sigh
meh
derp

Nixion Strange said...

Toy Story 1 and 3, wasn't a huge fan of 2, but better than some other rubish i've seen

Izz said...

I don't know about Despicable Me... Perhaps when I've got nothing else to watch.
*exasperated sigh*
Seen those too Nix...

Unapplicable. said...

Sherlock Holmes BBC.
Not a movie but a television series. Still quite good and the fandom is so full of feels.

Selena Gasp said...

yeah
*snore,snore,snore* yyy ffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuu wha! oh soz i am sooo tired cause i have to get up early in the morning

Nixion Strange said...

Monty Python and the Holy Grail

Nixion Strange said...

The Lion King, a classic

Selena Gasp said...

dc who the tv show and movies

Nixion Strange said...

Jaws. I dunno why i like it, but it was well directed

Izz said...

I would say I'm the smartest. But I do level two english and advanced maths. Still, I'm not super smart.

*grins*
Definately Sherlocked Cal!

Seen it Nix.

Unapplicable. said...

The Lion King all the way.

And Doctor Who. Is. Brilliant.

Nixion Strange said...

How to Train your Dragon, Fantastic Mr. Fox

Unapplicable. said...

You're Sherlocked, Izz?
Ohgod. Let me love you.
All the feels. Do you know when the next season comes out?
*hugs*

Selena Gasp said...

umm i hate dance sport and gossipy girls as i may have mentioned. i won't say there names even though there's zilch chance of then reading this but they really get on my nerves.

Unapplicable. said...

The Lorax!

Unapplicable. said...

Why do you hate them, Vena?

Nixion Strange said...

Finding Nemo

Selena Gasp said...

u a doctor who fan cal?

Izz said...

*taps pen on desk*
I've slowly been working through the top ten titles in IMDb but some of them are just odd.

*laughs at Cal*
No word on next season yet. Gotta love the unoffical website, Sherlockology.

*writes down How to Train Your Dragon*

Keep thinking people, BRC.

Unapplicable. said...

Sure am.

Selena Gasp said...

urm because i do. they always push in at line and there's one girl who sits at my desk and she is mean.just mean. But hate is a strong word. i hate maths. i dislike gossipy giggly girls

Selena Gasp said...

bye i have to go now bye

Nixion Strange said...

Bye Vena

Nixion Strange said...

brb

Unapplicable. said...

Bye Vena.

Izz said...

Chip.

Love DW. I'm taking David Tennant, you can have Matt Smith.

BTW (copy and paste)
So it turns out brainy really is the new sexy as Benedict Cumberbatch is voted No.1 in The Sun’s Sexiest Man Poll with 7,115 votes, more than double the number of second-placed man David Beckham.

Unapplicable. said...

*laughs* Benedict Cumberbatch, that wonderful, wonderful man.

I want David Tennant and Matt Smith. But I share.

Nixion Strange said...

Now that I'm here, could we please change the subject

Unapplicable. said...

WB Nix.
And sure, aha.

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