Friday, May 4, 2012

Mmmmm Violence...

Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.

The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.

Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.

This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)

It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.

But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?

In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.

And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.

The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.

And now a picture!


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DogsLikeBones said...

Aww, see you late Skullbug!! ^^

Flame Phoenix said...

Yeah, Guys, keep reposting this.


DEREK! SUBLINE FOR BOOK NINE, Pleasant Dreamsa, please....


PLEASSSSSSSSSE;

Luciana said...

Umm...Do you know when anyone else is likely to be online? Like Eve, Mist, Sparky ect. ? Because I haven't talked to them in ages...And I kinda miss them and I haven't smiled in a while...They always manage to make me laugh, which reminds me...Where's Ink?

Skyril A.K.A the Vociferous Chatterer, Loyal Forever and Always, The Ever-Present, the Pluviophile said...

HAHA!
I can't believe I got it!
~cheers~

I DEDICATE THIS PAGE TO GEPARD VALK!!
You're awesome!
Been trying to do this forEVER!

Flame Phoenix said...

i dunno.

I think we all deceided to take a break from the blog.. for a while liek./

Flame Phoenix said...

Ugh, that guy, Ugh.

NO.
NO.

He's my blog brother.

Skyril A.K.A the Vociferous Chatterer, Loyal Forever and Always, The Ever-Present, the Pluviophile said...

Okie, I have to go now. Sorry, guys, but hopefully I'll be back soon!
~hugs and waves to everyone~


See you later, Derek Landy!

~dashes off~

Flame Phoenix said...

Bye Blog sister to be.

DogsLikeBones said...

Bye Skyril!!! See you soon kay? *hugs*
Sorry I spaced out there! *puts on spacesuit* I am a professional spaceman!!! XD

Luciana said...

Bye, Skyril.

And, okay. I had to take a break from everything...For...Reasons...

DogsLikeBones said...

It's okay Luciana, we all have to take a break sometimes ^^ I just just hope that everything's okay now and that your reasons weren't too serious :)

Flame Phoenix said...

I have to go.

Bye all, *hugs all around*

Luciana said...

Depends what you class as serious, tbh. And I have had to take a break from all my pages, blogs, writing, drawing...I almost had to take a break from school...But...Meh...Life is life, I guess...

Willow Storm said...

Bye Flame!

Luciana said...

Bye, Flame..

DogsLikeBones said...

Bye Flame!!! *big hugs* ^^

Willow Storm said...

Bye all, I'm going too, to read SP all over again. Bye! *Leaves a couple hugs*

Luciana said...

Bye, Willow...

DogsLikeBones said...

Bye Willow! *hugs*

Robin Snowscar said...

FOR THE ACCLAIMED GOLDEN GOD:
To be quite point blank Derek, kids just aren't phased by violence anymore. The nine year old will buy KOTW but only after he's bought the latest violent video game.
My brother and I were playing 16+ from the age of seven. No one minds!
I think we need to keep the violence and the gore because it needs to grow up with Val, like you say.
Even if they are too young for the violence generally it will go over their heads. At my primary school I introduced the book and they adore it - the boys love the action because that is the only thing they really like now they're nine and too big for spider man. And the girls well, the girls love Fletcher *grins* Which I find rather funny.
If you are genuinely worried bump up the age rating - it won't stop people from buying them. Trust me.

Robin Snowscar said...

Oh and hi if anyone is still here

Robin Snowscar said...

OH AND DEREK:

May the fourth be with you...

Luciana said...

Yeah...I'm here...Kind of...

Robin Snowscar said...

*waves at L kind of*

Luciana said...

Sorry, I am in that funny depressed mood, again...

Robin Snowscar said...

*mutters* Why?

Luciana said...

It doesn't matter. I just need to learn to smile, is all, I guess. I'll be alright.

Willow Storm said...

I am back. Hi All.

Robin Snowscar said...

*nods at L*

Hi Willow I'm a little distant

Luciana said...

I'm here, again...But I am drawing, so I'll be distant. I've cheered up a tad, too, which is good, I guess..

Robin Snowscar said...

I'm actually going to go so bye

Luciana said...

Bye, Robin.

Nicole Cerundolo said...

HELLO ALL :3

Derek: Looking forward to it. Verily.

I was a little surprised, though. I had thought that TEOTW was actually one long book. That's why I thought the price was normal.

I now have about fifty of them.

>><< But in any case, wanted to pop in and say hi. HI!

Star Inkbright said...

HI PEOPLE!

THIS IS AN IMPORTANT ACCOUNCEMENT.

AFTER WE HAVE FILLED UP THE POST, WE GOT BACK TO THE NEXT MOST RECENT POST WHICH ISN'T FILLED, IF THAT MAKES SENSE.

THANK YOU.

Star Inkbright said...

I got three totally different books out the library today and they ALL had black covers . . . Creepy.

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Weird. I gtg for a bit-- dinner-- but I'll be back soon :3

Star Inkbright said...

Will still be here . . .

Star Inkbright said...

K ruby!

And, HI!

Limeirawr said...

Personally, I think the books are very teen-oriented as I am a teenager myself and everybody I know that reads the books are also teenagers.

Star Inkbright said...

NO, limerawr! I know two people who read them and are twelve, one who is eleven, and one who is ten.

Adra Cruciatus said...

Derek!
Congratulations!
Although this sounds really intimidating... I'm going to read it anyway... Of course. I'd be mad not to.. :D
So excited.
Damn. Now I have to work on my book 2 of my series... Procrastination.. I'm sure you know the feeling, but I have to catch up!
again, Congrats!
~Adrasdos Dark

Luciana said...

Hey, Star. Nice pic, I was like 'Who the hell is this?' then looked at your name and was like 'Ohhhhhh, t'is Star...That makes sense, the awesome pic, and all...' You had me confused for a moment...

Niamhy Jay said...

I WANT MORE VIOLENCE
FORGET THE YOUNGER READERS!! They are just WEAK!! :P
Anyway Derek guess who I am following on twitter... Guess... No, although I wish that were true. No TOM PERCIVAL!! Yup and I tweeted to him AND HE REPLIED!!
I think it may be the start of an awesome friendship.
I can tell you are seething with jealousy.

Star Inkbright said...

Hey L!

MY PIC IS NOT MEANT TO BE A PIC OF ME! Just saying.

Luciana said...

Hello.

WBD. Writing, for a few friends...

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Back. :3 If I spitz (YES I MADE A WORD) If I spitz out I'm just switching comps.

Star Inkbright said...

WB ruby!

REMEMBER, PEOPLE, WHEN THIS POST IS FULL, GO BACK TO THE OLD POSTS!

We're all the way back to October 2011 now.

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Yeah, but which one.... XD

I'm happy waiting for the Golden God to update his blogs. Gives him a little incentive, what with all his minions filling up his blog.

<3<3<3

HI GOLDEN GOD DEREK DEREK GOLDEN GOD HELLO <3

Star Inkbright said...

Just the most recent one which hasn't been filled.

And i, personally, am NOT happy to wait. I come here every single day. Not that anyone else is ever here when i am . . . :(

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Switching comps. Your patience is requested.

Luciana said...

I'm here a lot...It has just been the past week or so I haven't been on blogland...Or Fb...and hardly been on Skype, too....I took a break from pretty much everything...

Fibbles! said...

yay!!! i like a bit of violence in the books!! i didnt actually realise that there was an age rating on the books will go an scan my copies now to find them!!!!!!
;)

Star Inkbright said...

The age rating is by the barcode . . .

Break. Cool:)

You missed my german phase. Don't ask.

Luciana said...

Break, not at all cool...I wanted to talk to you guys, so much. I missed you all, but I knew I had to think everything through and come up with a coping strategy...It failed...Miserably...

And I am sure it was humorous, dear.

Star Inkbright said...

It annoyed everyone. Most people couldn't understand what i was saying a lot of the time.

Well at least you're back now:)

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Hm. Did my comment get published? I think not. BLOGGER OBEY.

I mean, even Daleks obey.
Obey.

Hi. I return.

*chucks muffins at everyone*

Star Inkbright said...

WB ruby!

*noms muffin* danke!

Star Inkbright said...

I still keep accidentally speaking german to people irl . . . Just small things like danke and das ist gut and ja.

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Do itashi mashite.

I do the same with Japanese. <3

I apologize for spelling mistakes in that area... ANYWAY.

Anyone seen Hetalia before? So funny. Makes fun of almost every country. Ever. XD I'm watching Hetalia: Axis Powers.

Star Inkbright said...

*yawns* look, i should probably go to . . . Have to get up and go somewhere tomorrow morning . . . Bye . . . May the FOURS be with you . . . Yes, fours, NOT force. It's a quote.

Star Inkbright said...

*now not to

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Or May the Fourth be with you XD

Making the Legend said...

Ah yes, this is good. And the antecednt of 'this' would be the word count. The violence, as you can guess given my comment history on the website (March 2011), is nto s great. But I think I can handle it since I just want the book. Alot.

Might I just remind you of my upcoming visit from July 1-10. Just saying. And, you know, if you just happen to have an event scheduled during those days, you can bet that I'll be there. Yes, yes I will.

Well, other than that, I've voiced what I need to voice.

DFTBA,
- Molly, needing Derek product.

Luciana said...

I'd have worked it out, haha. My sister did a GCSE in it and my friend (who happens to also be my ex) is completing a German GCSE currently and he always speaks to me in German. I am used to it, now. Me and him are pretty close, anyways. Well, yeah...I guess. :)
And hello, again.

Luciana said...

Bye, Star.

Nicole Cerundolo said...

...Hey, Luciana :3

Luciana said...

Hello.

Nicole Cerundolo said...

So....

*grabs sparkly unicorn*

*gives unicorn to Luciana*

Nicole Cerundolo said...

Hm. I'm gonna watch a Hetalia episode and then some Doctor Who. Ta ta!

Luciana said...

Okay, bye.

Xanthe Grey said...

Oh the arguements I've had with my 10-year-old sister about why she can't read some of the chapters of Deathbringer. Maybe the age rating on the back of the covers in later books should be raised a little bit. I've really enjoyed the way the stories get a bit darker with each year, it's one of the things that makes the series such a good one.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Im ungrounded!!!! Muhahaha!!!

Also i got TEOTW yesterday and finished during Reading. EPIC!!!!! :D derek you sooo are bloodthirsty but thats the best part :) i'm glad you almost finished. I can sooo read KOTW in a week once its released . Im just that epic

Luciana said...

Hey, Zaf. I'm going now. :( I have to get some sleep, 'cause I am feeling ill, again. :c I need some sleep and I want to do some drawing in the morning, too - which is rare, for me...G'night.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Derek, you making your book longer is going to make it use up more of the single day that it takes me to finish one of your books...

However, I'm not complaining.

Jakro Tintreach said...

hahaha... I dont have to take the msp because I'm on vacation
*giggle, Giggle*

Lavender Hope said...

Yay, Derek posted! :)

I know I should be doing homework, but maybe this post can explain why I stopped.

http://blog-of-random-things.blogspot.com/2012/05/omg.html

Started to lose focus and wander around my garage. Found a box with TONS of old things from when I was between 6-13 years old. Wow, that makes me remember the good times I had then.

Lavender Hope said...

Makes me sound old too... :S

Jakro Tintreach said...

hi lav

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Haha. I just turned thirteen the other day :D

Eve the ROCK said...

I see your dilemma, Mr. Derek. In situations like these, I'd NORMALLY be screaming "BRING ON THE BLOOD! JUST MOVE THE AGE LEVEL UP!" But I know I can't do that, because if I scream, I will wake up the neighbors. I don't think this series was ever really for nine-year-olds...i read all up to Mortal Coil when I was eleven... I mean, this is a twelve-year-old's opinion, but I think the only think that will really help, after Death Bringer, is bring the age level up a bit. Hmmmm....

Eve the ROCK said...

*thing

Eve the ROCK said...

No, I'm actually seventy-two, but I look eternally young.

Eve the ROCK said...

And if that mockingbird don't sing,
Imma break that birdie's neck...

Eve the ROCK said...

These freakin walls must be talkin coz man I can hear'em...

Actually I can't hear anything. SHOW YOURSELVES!

*swings greatsword around*

Eve the ROCK said...

*reads it again* That little son of a...

*leaves*

Nixion Strange said...

Hello?

Anonymous said...

Wonder if there's going to be bigger fights than the one in death bringer or just someone very major dieing

Eve the ROCK said...

Hi nix

Nixion Strange said...

Bit of both, i'd imagine

Eve the ROCK said...

Hi vivstar

Eve the ROCK said...

Msd

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

If Billy-Ray dies I call dibs on spooning his killer!

Nixion Strange said...

Billy-Ray dying... I did not think about that...

Eve the ROCK said...

Billy...Ray....Dead?

Yee-haw!

That would be my reaction.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Nobidy knows what Derek thinks of. I' still call dibs killing his killer. I'm not even joking :P

Nixion Strange said...

Derek will probably end up killer nearly everyone by the end, so I'd say he has dibs with killing his killer

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Hey I git a right xD Billy-Ray and Dreylan Scarab my favorite Americans! Plus they from my country muhaha see this is why I'm called Sanguine's twin in school

Nixion Strange said...

They're the only American characters...

Eve the ROCK said...

1st?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Exactly! Soo I will avenge deaths. Scarab in prison :( I love how I get the versions of the books with the cool Irish or English add ins xD. TEOTW had those deleted scenes and Derek's little speech :P had me dying in 2nd period good thing my teacher read the series

Eve the ROCK said...

No, not really.

Nixion Strange said...

Could someone please write up those deleted scenes? I've never seen them

Eve the ROCK said...

I wanna read them!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Ooh gosh...i need to go retrieve my copy of TEOTW i believe its in my bag...or with my Hunger Games guides its tiny xD fun sized

Eve the ROCK said...

Breakfast be back soooooon

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Uhm these are very very long

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Its not even funny. I'll be here a day typing eep!

Nixion Strange said...

Not in one day, btu over the course of, say a week?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Yeah just not tonight, i'm barely able to focus. Uhm they basically alternate things without the reflection. Hmm...while i can function we should try to wake Derek xD yes yes evil child i am.

Nixion Strange said...

I want Derek to talk to meeeeee...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Always wanted to xD just cuz he brilliant. I swear one more crack of thunder....*whips shadows at storm cloud* SHUSH IT

Nixion Strange said...

Never seen him before... i must meet him!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I know I should just write to him but I never know where to send to. Even if dad works fir the postal service

Nixion Strange said...

there's an email, but it only goes to Harper Collins, to dorectly to him. But maybe he reads some of the emails

Eve the ROCK said...

Back

Nixion Strange said...

Hi Eve

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I really just should i dont exactly see the odds of him going to America. Im better off writing. I just cant think what the heck to say

Nixion Strange said...

I just pointed out a mistake I saw in the series... maybe that'll just get him mad...

Nixion Strange said...

It was sometihng that i thought should be pointed out!

Eve the ROCK said...

He wrote Skudluggery in Playing With Fire. Hehe. Skudluggery.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I actually got him on the wall of shame

Eve the ROCK said...

LUCIANA, IM HERE, IM HERE!

For some reason I want to call her Lucy. Maybe because there's no Lucy to talk to anymore. Lucy moved schools and I'll probably never see her again. Or Anastasia. :(

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I feel so random knowing I'm gonna get attacked for TEOTW on Monday.

Nixion Strange said...

Attacked?

Shaylin Adams said...

HELL YES!!!! Ive been waiting for the day that it is released and it is coming up fast!!!! Even better, the book is bigger and more bloodthirsty! Im talking my friends into reading it and i know they will be hooked :D

Eve the ROCK said...

ATTAAAAAAAACK!

*attacks Zafira*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Yes by minions in school who borrowed off me as the SP mobile library

*whips shadws at Eve*

Eve the ROCK said...

*whips ice cream at Zafira*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*shadow walks behind and sends shadows at*

Eve the ROCK said...

Huh?

Anonymous said...

I read Death Bringer in around 4 hours so this probably adds another half hour

Nixion Strange said...

But... it's twice as long... at least two more hours to read it

Nixion Strange said...

Brunch
BBL

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I can read it in 2 hours i bet xD

Eve the ROCK said...

Bye Nix

Eve the ROCK said...

Haha. There's a brand called Eve's Sister. XD

It's funny because I don't have one.

Eve the ROCK said...

I'm gonna go for a little bit, or else I'll be banned from my iPod. Bye!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Im going to bed *shadow walks*

Eve the ROCK said...

Msd

Nixion Strange said...

Hi Eve

Eve the ROCK said...

Hi Nix

Nixion Strange said...

*hums a tune*

Eve the ROCK said...

*hums a different tune*

Nixion Strange said...

*hums three different tunes*

Eve the ROCK said...

*teams up with mockingjays*

Nixion Strange said...

*teams up with more mockingjays*

Eve the ROCK said...

*teams up with penguins*

Nixion Strange said...

*temas up with shrimp*

Eve the ROCK said...

*teams up with krill*

Nixion Strange said...

*teams up with polar bears*

Eve the ROCK said...

*teams up with killer whales*

Nixion Strange said...

*teams up with tankers*

Eve the ROCK said...

*teams up with Dumbledore's Army*

Nixion Strange said...

*teams up with Avengers*

Eve the ROCK said...

No fair! *teams up with Spiderman*

Laksikan J said...

You know that my 10 year old bro reads this series and kids these days play like GTA and MW3 and those have "suggestive content"

Nixion Strange said...

*teams up with Justice League*
And did you know Spiderman was an Avenger?
*Spiderman joins me*
Hi Necros

Eve the ROCK said...

Same with mine, Necros. Except he doesn't read SP, because it's "too long".

Eve the ROCK said...

Spiderman's an Avenger?

Nixion Strange said...

At one point, he waas an Avenger. At another, he was part of the Fantastic Four when they had about ten members. I think they changed the name then...

Eve the ROCK said...

Huh.

Nixion Strange said...

I only know this cause I'm reading up on superheros right now. Don't ask me why...

Nixion Strange said...

Nerd math time! Thor can swing his hammer at twice the speed of light. The speed of light is 299 792 458 m/s. Double that is 599584916 m/s. That equals out to 35975094960 m/h.

Now lets calculate Thors strength into the equation. He has been shown to be able to lift 100 tons with ease and that is no where near his limit. He also has a belt that doubles his strenth so for arguments sake we will make it 200 tons with ease. 200*2000=400,000 pounds.

Now lets combine them. 400,000 pounds of pressure times 35975094960 m/h equals 1.439037984e+16. And 1.4390037984e+16 = 1.4390038 x 10^16 which equals 14390038000000000 pounds of pressure in one blow. That is equal to 7195019000000 tons of pressure. Which is 7195019 megatons.

Side note: Thor can distroy planets with one blow. It take at least 53 quadrillion megatons to distroy earth and it is relativly small.

Nixion Strange said...

*grins*
I am such a genius

Eve the ROCK said...

....

Nixion Strange said...

Okay, i copied that. And the maths is wrong, i think. But still

Eve the ROCK said...

I don't even know what a megaton is.

Nixion Strange said...

It's a robot in charge of the Decipacons, but missing an "r"

Nixion Strange said...

Abd I'm aware i spelt that wrong, thank you

Nixion Strange said...

*looks at keyboard*
Why do you hate me so?

Eve the ROCK said...

I know who Megatron is, and I prefer Frenzy from the first movie. And Ironhide. And bumblebee, just because he's Bumblebee. XD

Nixion Strange said...

Bumblebee is awesome

Eve the ROCK said...

*grins* I love how he talks through the radio.

Nixion Strange said...

Yeah, I'm glad they didn't keep the fact that it was repaired

Nixion Strange said...

Hi Mouse. I'm just going to call you Mouse. Is that okay?

MonsterMouse said...

Sure, I dont mind.

Eve the ROCK said...

They did at the end of the first movie, for some reason.

Hi monster mouse.

Gtg I'll be back soon though.

Eve the ROCK said...

Bye!

Nixion Strange said...

Bye Eve

deadman chicken said...

Um hello and bye eve.

MonsterMouse said...

I like your nerd math. I could never do that, you made math actually interesting.

MonsterMouse said...

Bye Eve

MonsterMouse said...

How long did it take you?

Nixion Strange said...

Hi... chiken?
And I found that, and it was apparently wrong, but it's Thor. Either way nothing is really going to make sense

Nixion Strange said...

I'm hopeless at maths

deadman chicken said...

hello nix.
Call me whatever aslongs as it's easy to rekonise (i think i slept that right).

MonsterMouse said...

you cant be as hopeless as me, i got 27/50 on my math final.

Nixion Strange said...

Recongise

Nixion Strange said...

Okay, i scrape passes on maths tests. I have a friend who was amarter then me with maths, and he got 0%. Want to know how he did it?

MonsterMouse said...

found all the answers and purposfully didi it wrong?

Nixion Strange said...

He had every questoon right, then subtracted three from all of them
...?

MonsterMouse said...

that hilarious!

guess what im watching in my english class!?!?!?!?


SHERLOCK HOLMES

Nixion Strange said...

Hi Val

Nixion Strange said...

*hums Sherlock tune*
first or second?

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I think I'm leaving... *passes out on the floor again*

deadman chicken said...

thank yu for the correction i just had to do something.Hello valkyire

MonsterMouse said...

first. its better, the second has too much unrealisiticness

MonsterMouse said...

like him surviving off a waterfall and then when they are running away from these "expert shooters" nobody can hit, they all miss and they all make it to the train.

Nixion Strange said...

Hahahahaha
You got first with the first word being first and you didn't try to. For some reason i find that funny
Now you can dedicate

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Actually, I'm staying for a few minutes...

Hi Nix, and nice to meet you Mouse and Chicken.

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