Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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ein zwei drei vear fĂșnf sech sebein
auch neun zehn. i can count to ten yip yip.
Forensic Pathologists do post-mortems.
I think I watch too much Silent Witness...
Actus Reus = guilty act
Mens Rea = guilty mind
You need both to make someone guilty enough to be charged. Apparently.
DED RIGHT GO TO EVE!
Nien lorelei, ich nicht know gemacht. Das ist cool:)
*hopes i got that right . . . *
Whatever. No, lorelei, i didn't know. That's cool:)
I'm bored. Can you tell?
*RIGHTS
Nien.
Gut.
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tod
I'm thinking of a carer in phycology
*is laughing sehr hard*
SOMEONE IN GONE JUST GOT A KEYBOARD FACE!
*is still laughing*
If you don't get the joke, don't ask.
You know what Star?
You should watch Inspector Rex. It's and Austrian crime show about a police dog called Rex.
It's all in German (but obviously with subtitles).
*turns back to book, reads next sentence, and starts laughing again*
*glares at Star*
I'm watching a movie, be back every few adds
*leaves*
I don't get the joke and I'm not game to ask anyway.
I don't think that's how you spell it Nix.
Hmm. Yeah. But i'd prefer to learn visually seeing as i have a visual memory and learning words without seeing them written down sounds sehr hard for me. Much easier to see them then find out how they're said.
May the fours be with you keyboard face.
Gone as in the book?
It's not for learning. It's for loaughing at beautiful german shepherd dog as he tricks the police officers into giving up their ham rolls.
*laughing
K.
I'm just saying, i wouldn't learn much from it.
Ja, Gone as in the book.
The first one?
Ja. I'm 346 pages through. Reading it for the first time.
have you seen the double rainbow guy?
And the songify version of him?
I HAVE TO SHARE MY EXCITEMENT WITH YOU (this actually cheered me up a little, and I am no longer depressed, which is goodddd)...
I HAVE MY FIRST TEN-THOUSAND WORDS OF MY FIRST STORY TOGETHER. I have loads of other chapters all over the place, but I am proud because the first ten-thousand are in order. XD Yay. Happy times.
Gtg now but i'll bb in about 10.
Hello freds of the world!Yes I said Fred. I also like ramblings. Not that you need to know but i threw up last night, and frankly i feel complete RUBBISH! Im sat now, on a settee, in some checked pink p-j's! And im pressing buttons on a laptop. While being stupid and such. What not. What not. I like that! Yay! 622nd! Very far from 1 but still! Yay, ba-bye now!
YAAAAAAAAAAY YOU L!
Oh hello!
Bye, Star.
Hi! Say hi back please
k servus Star.
I will warn you, sh*t gets real in Gone. Very real.
Hi back please
Cool pic. It looks AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Danke (means thanks in german)
What should we call you?
Ring ring banana phone!
emmmmm how about Toffee?
Awwwww. Bears are so cute.
*shrug*
Works for me.
So Toffee. Do you drink coffee?
yeah Eve. they're all kisses and hugs until dinner time.
bbblllllllllaaaaaaaa! As his homepage on his laptop, my bro has a grizzly bear, on a shark, surfing with an eyepatch shooting a machine gun (cartoon obviously.) Random huh?
No i hate coffee. I like toffee though
*wayches bear bat the tranquilizer gun away and roar* Ah.
Hello, person I have never talked to before. I'm L. Nice to meet you (online, that is).
Will be distant, determined to get to 15K words, together, today. X3
*watches
Hello, person I have never talked to before. I'm L. Nice to meet you (online, that is).
Will be distant, determined to get to 15K words, together, today. X3
indeed.
I have now officially run out of conversation starters.
Ninja turtle!
Hoiw about that as a conversation starter? Maybe Fred the potato could be a conversation starter
Back!
Hi Toffee! Hi eve!
SQUAWK!
Hi star!
Hi Starfish!
Woah. I never realised but i have toes!
Distant for a bit. brushing teeth.
Check this out on you tube: Special Fred and Potter puppet pals: the mysterious ticking noise! It is AWESOME!!!!!!! EPICNESS TO THE EPIC MAX!!!!!!!11
Snape, Snape, Severus Snape...
I used to have a pollypocket called Starfish.
*face saddens* and one called Star . . . Which had nothing to do with my name.
Star was one of my fav pollypockets . . . But then i lost her. Near a river. I renamed the river the River Star. *is sehr sad*
Star, i'll never forget you.
Oh so you know it? Snape snape severus snape, snape, snape, severus snape. DUMBLEDOOR!
I'VE HEARD OF THAT ONE!
A few years ago.
My friend wouldn't stop ron weasleying for a whole day. Es war swhr annoying. Whenever i think of ron i think of that ron weasley tune thingy.
I used to have pollypockets...
I can't remember if they had names though.
Ron, ron, ron ron WEASley . . .
What are polly pockets? Im a girl, i just dont do girly stuff. Are they girly? Going back to my first question: What are pollypockets?
Mine did. I had tons.
Playing with them was just like making up stories, only i could actually hold the characters in my hands.
*shudder*
i hate that thing.
What are pollypockets? Im begging you here coz im getting really confused
Girly. But fun all the same.
Lorelei im confused, is your profile pic a turnip?
Um, like barbies, but smaller, with plastic hair, rubber clothes, and loads more awesomeness. The new ones are crap. The very old ones were apparently a lot tinier. The ones in the middle were BRILL.
Ja, es ist a turnip.
I shall reach 15K by midnight tonight (I hope!)!!!!! I think I might be getting way too excited, about this...
Oh, ok. I just googled them. I have never had them. But by what your saying they are pretty good. I just dont play with that stuff. Random fact: When i was in Y5 (year five) I went to Y6 for english. It was complete cr#p.
...?
?
???
Nien L - ES IST EXCITING!!!!!!!!!
15K by midnight? YAAAAAAAY!
Hi rain!
Nein! EVIL turnip.
Computer going flat.
Auf wiedersehen alle!!
May the fours be with you lorelei!
I HAVE LIKE.....Five thousand to write in around twelve hours....Wish me luck! I'll probably be here, unless I go out (then I shall give myself extra time, because I would have lost it...But, yeah). So I am likely to be here all day, just very distant! :'3
Hey, Mist.
Bye, Lorelei! *waves*
K L.
Hi everyone! How are you all?
Hi white!
You are, like, famous, you know. We all hear about you before we meet you. You're famous like Dragona and Kallista and Octaboona.
I'm okay. You?
Hey, Willow.
And Star, you're pretty well known, too. Just like I am a pretty well known admin on FB. :'3 I love the Skuttlebugs, such a nice fandom. :')
I'm good.
Yeah, but has anyone heard about me lots of times before they met me?
Yes, they have Star. I heard of you before I first talked to you. I heard of most of you before I first started talking to you.
You had to be,
In worse for me,
I don't know what to say so let me be,
And now I find,
You left me behind,
I don't know what to say so never mind...
Hi, Willow!
REALLY???
YAY! I'M FAMOUS!
I heard of sparky before i spoke to her. She was sehr famous. And i heard of eve. Anyone else, my memory is so bad i can't remember.
Yeah, seriously. I heard of most of you before I first spoke to you. You're all pretty well known. It's like with Becky, Ellie, Joe, Andrew, Nathan and Jordan on the SP page on FB. Most people know of them, before they talk to them, too. It's just one of those things. You've made a name, for yourself.
Ugh. Stardoll is pissing me off.
I didn't hear of anyone because my first appearance on the blog I happened to meet everyone.
I'm not famous...
That's a good thing I think.
No one should be burdened with having to deal with my company.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
*is happy*
Ever since i found out about blogland, I've always wanted to be famous in it. Looks like i finally managed it:)
Thanks L.
You are, rain.
Oh yes, because if i speak to you i'll die a slow, torturous death. *sarcasm*
Mist, yes you are. I knew of you, too! Sparky was the first I heard of, then the rest of you. And I am glad I started talking to you, all! Because you're all amazing.
I'm not. And don't want to be.
There's only one reason I'm still here.
*smiles at the thought of the reason and sits under the tree*
Ja, sparky is sehr famous.
*sits on a branch*
Hi eve!
You are, though! And you're an awesome person to talk to! Not to mention the fact that you tend to understand how it feels to be depressed and everything, but you're still here - to me, that's inspirational, Mist! Seriously, you guys, ALL of you guys, have helped me through the past few months, just being there to talk and help me to smile for even a second...I don't think I'd have made it through without you guys, y'know? You're all amazing people and I don't care if you disagree with me, because it won't change my opinion on you.
I knew of nearly everyone because I sat beside Pink Rose, one of my best friends. So I knew who was who.
Hey, Eve. *waves*
*looks up at Eve*
Hi. :)
Thanks L. I still don't believe it though. *laughs*
*feels all warm and fuzzy inside*
I'm honoured, L.
You should believe it, the truth is sometimes a horrible thing...But this time, it's not.
If you're anything like me, you choose to believe things like this aren't true and because it's not true, things don't seem as bad, because there's nothing good for it to be compared to...
Good Saturday, Luciana.
*smiles down at Mist* Hi.
I'm...not sure I entirely understood that.
*reads it through mulriple times slowly*
I think i get it now, L.
I never make sense to anyone, t'is fine...I should be getting back to writing, now, anyway. I will be here, but I'll be distant, my break is over. :)
Oh, and hi, Starling!
I should continue editing Zathract Mist too.
*mutters out of corner of mouth*
(Next time call me Starly. Just a suggestion)
THAT IS AN ADORABLE POKEMON!
And I was going to call you that next anyway.
Coolio! :)
My brother used to be mad on Starlys.
I was just love Eevees. XD
Muh-huh.
I like lotsa pokemon.
Laaaaaa! I want a zoo
I am off to disapear, bye!
*Leaves hugs for those who want them*
Bye, Willow. *waves*
May the fours be with you white! *accepts hug*
Bye Willow!
*refuses hug*
I don't deserve a hug. Bye, Willow.
And you, are, the only exception...
REPEAT. IT WAS A REPEAT!
I KNOW! IT SUCKS!
I like to wave...*waves some more* It's fun. *waves, again*
I just wrote 323 words of a filler in Ch. 2... I really ramble. A lot.
I refuse to ramble. Rambling is bad. Nope. Not good. Don't ramble.
Oh god, I'm going to end up rambling.....
*hangs upside down in a tree* I might be able to think better, now...Hmmm...
Gtg bbs!
*waves to Luciana*
Bye Star
Bye, Ink.
*closes eyes and laughs*
*Star!
Bye, Star! *waves*
*waves at Eve*
What are you laughing at? It better not be my socks. *looks down at blue socks*
No. *is still laughing* I'm just thinking. And your socks look cool. *wishes self had some other sock colour other than grey*
I have red, purple, light purple, blue, purple+blue, pink+light pink, and purple+light purple BED SOCKS. Don't get me started on my day socks.
Back!
I won't.
...
*starts laughing again*
Hi Starly!
What? What is it? *starts throwing acorns*
Agh!
*take cover from acorns*
My hand started bleeding on Friday because I whacked an acorn. That hurt. *wonders why self can't stop laughing*
*takes
Hi, Ink.
Okay, now I'm watching Terminator 2
Msd.
I have pink+blue, pink, brown, white, red, red+white, and . . . Probably other colours that i can't remember of top of my head. That's day socks.
I don't have bed socks
My elbow has jumper fluff on it from yesterday since I whacked cement.
*tries to stop laughing*
*starts laughing in real life*
This is hopeless.
STAR WARS
THE EMPIRE STRIKES BACK
*is actually watching this now*
I'm addicted again! Yay!
*does the Star Wars dance*
There is no Star Wars dance.
Hahahahaha
Arnie: *takes the man's gun*
*walks up to him*
*takes his sunglasses*
*is now wearing awesome sunglasses*
Cats? Why cats?
Everybody wants to be a cat,
Because a cat's the only cat, who knows where it's at...
I get a feeling its a bad time...
QUESTION.
What would be your perfect date? (I haven't been on a date in ages, and I am pretty weird when it comes to dates, anyway...That's why I am asking you guys).
Um...
I don't really want to talk about that kind of thing right now, L. Sorry.
Hi Vlaedr!
Hi Val!
I would like to be a cat.
*stops laughing and goes empty again*
Hi Val.
Hi, here for a minute
Val, *nods* , and other people, *nods again*.
I am with Val in that aspect. Hey nix.
Never actually been on a date either.
*shuts up on the subject entirely now*
Hi people who said hi to me.
Hi Vlaedr
Perfect date? For some reason I want to go see a movie with Lynxia, then get something to eat. Don't ask me why i want the movie and then food, but i do...
I have never actually been on a date
Hi Nix....
I'm too young to do that kind of stuff. I've never had a boyfriend either. (Of course, that doesn't meean I haven't been asked...)
Hi Nix
Hello.
And...Nix, the majority of my dates are movie then food. :L GAHHHH. I need to think of something else...
I've been on plenty of dates, not always as much fun as you'd hope...OH! IDEA. Popcorn fight! YAY.
*is still not feeling any happier*
*slumps against the free and hums Nothing Else Matters quietly*
*tree
Oh, by the way, I won't be on tomorrow. There's a slim chance that i might be on around 7, but i probably won't
7 at night, btw
Mist....You've now got Nothing Else Matters, in my head...
Okay, i gotta go now. See you all whenever i see you all!
Bye!
I don't even know what Nothing Else Matters is
Easier said than done. *takes a bite out of the cupcake grimly*
Thanks.
Nothing Else Matters is a Metallica song. A sadder one. At that. Fade to Black is better though.
*huns that instead*
Bye Nix!
You're welcome.
Bye, Nix! *waves*
Fade to Black, is good, too. I listen to that like every night. Right now I am listening to Nothing Else Matters. Have you heard Disturbed's cover of Fade To Black? That's good, too.
I have. I really like that.
I always listen to songs like that when I am in a depressive mood, but I am in the middle, today. So I am listening to pretty much anything that comes on. X3 Ooh...Tenacious D's new album is out in May.... XD
*is looking through photos*
...Oh...
*looks at the ground and discards camera*
Not moi.
Good. So I am not the only little lonely lamb here, that never had a date.
Mist, I get the feeling you are telling us to ask about you're dating experiences...
"Never actually been on a date either.
*shuts up on the subject entirely now* "
Boom.
Not me.
I am currently listening to anything Metallica, whilst wearing an Iron Maiden - Power Slave hoodie...Like a boss. ;D Oh and I am writing murder. xD
I just noticed how long it's been since I said anything on this blog..
I check it everyday but most of the time when I do the comments are filled up... :o
So, how is everyone?
I know of a play called Blood Brothers
Oh, HI!!
I'm not, Vlaedr. I really don't want to talk about this now...
*looks away from Eve and picks at grass*
Ded time...
Yeah, I saw the musical of Blood Brothers, in London on a school trip...
And HELLO.
BATTERY. XD
Well, I'm not talking about the musical.
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