Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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I dedicate it to you for talking to me
it is kind of funny
Nice to met you too valkyire *tips non-exiting hat*.
Hi val
Did Val actually leave? I couldn't tell...
Bye Val
Oh, no, i missed her comment.
Hi Val... again
Hi again Nix.
Rolls eyes. the best art of the second one is were sherlock rides the pony
Hye, Mouse, i'd think you'd like Sherlock Holmes HISHE. Have you watched it?
Oh, and who was it that tipped their invisible hat to me? *tips existing fedora back*
You sure it's not a horse?
it was me *looks at the hat and frowns*me want.
Oh, be back in about 15 minutes
Bye!
whats HISHE and yeah, its defintely a little shaggy pony, maybe three and a half feet tall, poor thing
No! I do the Sherlock Holmes tune!
*replaces humming with 'dun's*
I've got at least two fedora's. Very useful for when I want to play detective and interrogate the wall.
sound like you need a stuffed animal to intterogate.
How it Should Have Ended
http://www.howitshouldhaveended.com/videos
Look for the Sherlock one
Haha that sounds fun and ok mouse i jut thought it was a horse.
Well, all my stuffed animals are headless. Me and my friend decapitated them all already.
Bye all! have fun doing fun things.
Bye Mouse
bye mouse have fun yourself.
Bye mouse
TACOS!!!! *cuckd a taco at Eve's head and hides from blood sampling tools*
*chucks
NO! I ONLY LIKE SOFT TACOS!
*runs after Val*
*is terrified*
brb
*throw knifes at a wall*
*eats a rainbow bear*
*catches knife and throws it back*
*stands very still*
*waltzs with an iceberg*
Watched the new HISHE ep.
"You Superman, I Super Mario. It is the same."
*arches an eyebrow at Nix's iceberg*
I'm Batman
I'ma Mario
I'm Batman
I'ma Mario
*throws mandarines at Val*
Ahhhh! I hats orange citrusy things!
*hate
*taps dances on clouds*
*throws oranges, orange grapefruits, orange limes and orange lemons*
bye! have fun with killing or dancing with iceburgs. hopefully talk later
Bye Chicken
Bye dead chicken!
*cries out while being plummeted by fruit*
PUMMELLED! The word is PUMMELLED!
I'LL KILL YOU!
*screams and waves arms around*
Bye Val
Bye Valereno. I'll be looking forward to getting rid of these apricots...
*laughs as killer apples surround me*
THE APPLES ARE KILLERS!
you'd think the red ones would be the killers, but it's actually the green ones
*gapes* My cousin is a green apple.
Gtg b bak soon
Bye!!$
*eats a red apple*
Fancy that
Bye Eve
hello!
Hi Fire
have you seen the Avengers yet?
No, not yet...
oh. it's really good and funny.
I know. I want to see it!
yeah.....
sorry, i gotta go for a while. I might be back later
Bye
gtg. my mum is telling me to clean up my room.
Back!9
Hi Eve.
Hi Mist
I'm watching star wars. *laughs*
Haven't seen A New Hope in ages...
Only liked the prequels
*shakes head sadly*
You poor soul.
Couldn't get over the crazy yoda
I've been reading the series since the first book was released what seems like an age ago. It took me through high school. I was 12 when I read it and am now 17 so I've grown up with the Skulduggery books more than I have with the Harry Potter series....
I guess it's true what you say about the violence, I mean reading Skulduggery isn't picnic time with lots of little fairy cakes, but a lot of the violence you leave up to us to imagine. It's great because we only make it as violent as our imaginations do. I re-read the series as you've written it so far about twice or three times a year and as I've gotten older I kind of realise just how violent the books are.... I didn't really notice it when I was younger though.
I guess what I'm really trying to say is that when you're younger and you have less experience with violence, the books that you read seem less violent.
Yeah.... I don't even know if that made sense... Whatever.
Although, since a lot of us would be older now maybe you could release an uncensored version as well? Unlikely but it's worth a shot... :)
Anyway, I can't wait for the next book!
I agree with your idea, Arcanine. Agree with it I do.
The crazy yoda didn't make much sense but I love the original trilogy.
HI PEOPLE!
Hi Star
Hi everyone else
Hi Ink!
*nods*
Hi Starbucks! Hi Nix...on?
I might have to go somewhere in five minutes, do msd. But on the other hand, i might not . . . *is confuzzled*
See, i go to this string orchestra thing on a saturday morning every two weeks. I didn't go last week, so i assumed i was going this week. But my,mum's acting like it's not on this week . . .
I'm not going to ask her about it and remund her. If she's just forgotten, good. Then i won't have to go:)
STARBUCKS!
I always liked the name of Starbucks and their sign, but not the actual place especially extraly muchly.
strbucks have very nice cookies....hello
I'm writing/editing so will he distant. Anyone wanna take a guess as to what I'm writing?
Battle for Blogland?
HELLO DEADMAN!
*looks at clock*
Ten minutes to nine . . . Once it's half past, i think i can stop worrying.
Zathract Mist?
*is going for the less likely in the hope of suceeding*
Uh... What If?
SP Fan-fic?
Succeeding.
I used to say a load of rubbish about sucking seeds and stuff about that word . . .
Yup!
Yup, yup or yup?
Yup which one?
Sorry, ZM.
"Hi, youre watching Jake and Amir."
"At the SAME TIME."
"What?"
I lost track of that, i have to read it again...
YAAAAAAAAAAAY!
*sucks a seed* i won!
"Hi, you're watching Jake and Amir."
"AND WE'RE WATCHING YOU."
"No we're not."
"Hi, you're watching Jake and Amir."
"ON TV."
"Not on TV."
What is the meaning of this madness?
The madness is the meaning
*is reading Gone*
"Now, the key to brushing your teeth is-"
"I know, once a week, mother."
"...?"
I love Gone! Have you read Fear yet?
if this madness discribs madness then there is no madness.
NO. I started reading Gone FOR THE FIRST TIME yesterday after school. Due to my brother and sister having swimming lessons, rockclimbing, and the fact that i have been reading another book, i am now only 269 pages through.
It's a good series
"you dropped your keys."
"Nope."
"I just saw you then, you dropped them."
"I don't drop sh*t, I don't pick sh*t up. That's kind if my ish, so..."
"But you just dropped them, I saw-"
"I've never dropped anything, EV-ER."
Hey, DC, It's Scribbles! ^.^ (We are le admins on a facebook SP page )
WE ARE THE EIOUEMGG! PRONOUCED I OWE YOU A MUGG!
(EIOUEMGG = Extremely Insane Outsane Unsane and Exsane Minions of the Golden God)
What about Evesane...?
Hi ValkyrieCain!
That it is, nix.
And I DO owe you a mug. *gives Star a mug*
I like to sing-a, about the-
Sorry, popped into my head
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Popped? Pop? POPPLER?
Pop a poppler in your mouth, when you come to Fishy Joe's!
Eve... don't... please...
*starts to die*
Ugh...
I did think about Evesane, Eve, but i decided not to put it in coz only you can be Evesane. We can all be IOUE, even if only in small amounts of some of them, but only Eve can be Evesane, so it doesn't really describe the minions as a whole.
M
S
Deeeeeeee!
Nix, don't die! You have too much to live for! Like making that teleportation pad!
Excellent. Thanks for clearin that uuuuuuuup, Starship.
Never again... no...
Yay! A mug! Danke eve!
*looks at mug carefully*
*tries to eat it*
OWWWWWWW!
*jumps around screaming*
BAD MUG! BAD! YOU HURT STAR-STAR'S TEETH!
Starships, were meant to flyyyyyyy . . .
This girl at my primary used to call me Lollystick:)
Oh, Star, is a harmless mug-
*mugs attacks my teeth*
AGH, YOU SON OF A CUP!
*cures more*
*laughs*
MUGGY THE MEANIE! *hits muggy*
I've lost a tooth!
*points to gap at side of mouth*
KISS.
I'm listening to one of their songs right now. Yaaaay!
Hello..
Hi L
Mwahahahahahaha.
*sways* When you've been in three situations in one day where you've had to hold up a plank of wood with nails sticking out of it with a thin, wobbly plank of wood while your dad hammers the nails in, and the wood is cutting into your skin, and you can't loosen your grip or else it will fall on top of you, and you can't look up at it because the dust will get in your eye, and your dad is taking his time with measuring the wood, and there's a nail somewhere on the floor and you don't want to step on it, and the hammering is hurting your ears, you can't blame me for feeling a little queasy.
Hi Luciana!!!
Hi, L.
*suddenly feels empty again*
*sits down under the tree to stop head pounding*
MUGGY TOOK YOUR TOOTH??? *looks at Muggy, horrified*
How could you, Muggy? How could you? *Muggy leaps for my face* -ARRRRRRGH! - *and slips off, covered in ink*
dinner
Bye!
Dinner bye!
Hi L!
Some advice - keep away from Muggy.
May the fours be with you nix and eve!
*is guessing it's dinner time in australia*
Bye, Nix, bye Eve!
Speaking of which, dinner time, bye!
*has reached the 300 mark on Gone*
*puts book down and leans back*
I have a new rule for when i read books. Stop every 100 pages.
May the fours be with you rain!
Usually takes me an hour or so to read 100 . . .
Bye, whoever is leaving...
Sorry, I'm distant...Because of reasons..
*decides to get writing for a bit*
Come on, Star. Write. Get on with it.
K L.
THIS IS COMMENT NUMBER 555!
oh is it scribbles hey.
Back. Distant. Watching We Bought A Zoo
Dinner has been eaten!
You might have to comment SLIGHTLY faster than that deadman . . .
WE ARE YOU EATING AND STOP EATING THE SAME TIME I AM EVE?!
WB eve and nix!
Rain should bb sehr soon.
I kuh-now nix. And mist a few seconds afterer.
I don't know. But what i DO know is that we bought a zoo.
Did it come with the Loins, or are those knew additions?
Hey, Eve. Hey, Nix.
And hello, DC. (if you're still here).
No loins in this zoo, I'm afraid.
Hey Luciana. Lucy Anna. Lucianne A. Lou Ciana. Lucia Nah.
I can see them Eve
*points to the Lions*
Mumumumumumururururururururdrdrdrdrdrdrdededededededededererererererererererererer
I love words playing.
*points* see my long word up there? It could be murder, but then it could also be murderer.
It's murder
Back. Distant. Watching a KISS concert.
It's BOTH. I wrote it, i should know.
Mumumumumumumumurururururururururururdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdededededededededererererererererererererererererererererer
No, it's murder, because the length of the "er" is aproximatly the same as the "mu" and the "rd"
If it was murderer, the "er" would be longer
Oh, LIONS. Yes, there are six billion lions in this zoo.
A car just crashed into another car in Rebellion . . .
Marigold was asking for it though. Sapphire should have made Marigold pull over and stop driving as soon as Sapphire woke up.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vbgLapRAloQ&feature=relmfu
lol
The erererererererer IS longer than the mu and the ur and the rd and the de, but not by a lot.
Like i said, i wrote it, i know.
But it should be near as twice as long, so it is murder
ES IST BOTH!
Stop taking the mystery out of my word.
*thinks* hey, i could put this in Rebellion.
NO IEST IS NOT
I believe the word you're looking for Nix is nine. That means no.
Isn't it nien?
Hi Izz
NIEN ES IST NICHT!
You mean nix.
I'm fairly sure it's nine.
But I'll google translate it anyway...
Hi lorelei!
Hi Izzzzzz
NIEN, lorelei, NIEN!
Google says it's spelt nien but you say it nine.
*nein
JA, lorelei, google translate ist RICHTIG.
i'm here lucy just not here.
Nein is German. You say it as "nine"
*leaves*
i knew this already Izz...
I only really know how to say most words. Spelling's not top.
How are we all today anyway? Good? Good.
*sigh*
I always forget what I'm going to say when I get a chance to say it.
I really hate that.
btw should I become a Forensic Pathologist? I can't figure it out. Careers suck.
Gut, danke.
Ich bin better with written down stuff . . . Ich habe a visual memory.
Wie geht's?
Was ist a forensic patho-thingy?
WAS????
ICH GOT FIRST????
DED RIGHT GO TO THE FIRST PERSON TO SAY "MICH"!
Mich ist me im deutsch btw.
Ich bin gut.
Did you know that tonight is a supermoon? It means the moon's at its perigee (it's as close to earth as it gets) and it's bigger and brighter!
Mich!
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