Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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Eve, write more of that kind of stuff, it's great. Blabbing is great, and so is your writing. Ups for everyone.
I'm sure it'll be great, Nix.
...Hi!
Hi Mist!
Can't really babble much more about pigeons. I'm actually finishing the Drucilla one for this competition...
Poor fire? And I suppose my tests don't get a mention?
Anyway, it's up
http://readthismortals.blogspot.com.au/
Good! Yaaaaaay!
I'll try and read it Nix but sometimes my iPod decides that blogs wont work on it. But I'll try.
Your tests don't get a mention because mine didn't get a mention from you. :P
*cluthces head and looks for panadol*
That "good! Yaaaaaay!" part was for Eve btw.
Yeah, well, year 7 is easy. Year 9...
Anywho
*is staring at screen blankly*
*digs finger into a ditch in eye socket*
Ahh...nice, natural panadol. *laughs*
What?
Huh...should I post this?
It's the most stilodist...what am I saying?
Hate this...hate that...bleeeisidhfbdisnsbcidnch...
Life's a piece of s**t, when you look at it. But always look on the bright side of life
*whistles a tune*
I may have forgoten a bit, but it's been some time since I've heard it
I'm back now.
Sorry, I had to tell my mom that I felt really sick and that when I stand up I get so dizzy I practically fall over again... because it's true....
Well, Val, that's not good
I guess the world is facing a world wide sickness, cause I've been feeling lousy the last few days, and Mist seems to be feeling pretty bad
Hey, have any of you tried driving? I would advise against it. *remembers yesterday*
No, no driving for moi
Wheeosbdjsksdismandheuwkwndhduei.
*starts crying*
What?
Driving isn't all that fun...
Poor Val. Get well. And Mist, with your headache.
Now I'm going to spend some time away
Good luck to you all in your endevours. I'll be back in an hour, give or take any amount of time
Bye!
You crying irl, Mist?
Bye Nix!
Did you drive, Val? Wow. Here in Oz, you can only drive once you're sixteen and a half or something.
I am. I'm crying, laughing, coughing, feeling miserable, high, horrible and I'm typing at the same time.
I hate this...
*looks for panadol again*
Interesting.
*flips a coin*
You hate what?
Not sure...
What were you going to post?
Well, it's six in the morning, I'm leaving for now.
MSD. Bye Val.
Leaving now. Night.
Bye Val
Bye Mist
Yellow?
My computer's messed up!
And on that note, I bid you farewell
Bye!
*leaves*
Purple!
Bye Nix
*goes back to nothing much*
Fine.
Goodnight then.
hi val!
how r u?
I will be here, pretty much all night...But I may be distant, because I am revising. ^_^
Oh and hello. *waves foot, in the air*
hi
*munches on watsits*
Hello, Chloe.
Dammit, my comment disappeared...
I'm alright, yourself?
im just dandy, got 3 7yr old comin over -_-
Dear Mr Landy,
I was just wondering what sort of motorbike Tanith has. I was also interested in Skulduggery's Bentley and would love to know why you chose that as his car.
Hope you're well,
Emily (AKA Fervid Colt)
Maths h/w. Fun fun fun...
You'll never guess what I did in art! :)
Hi, btw!
Hi Shadow!
Post more of your story!!!
Which one?
The one with me in it. And any other ones. I need to read something really badly or I'm going to die...
*is going through iPod's library* OMGG, I haven't listened to this in years! Literally! *puts on Shake It by Metro Station* This is one of 4 normal songs on my iPod. I.e. not death music, screamo or orchestra.
i like mambo 5
lou bega
One For You? Yeah, I'll try and post more soon. I've got a quote from Elaisse that's coming up soon. And I've got good lines for you and Nix to come as well... I've been accumulating good lines.
i like LMFAO
I love it when ever you make Ivy talk because you always make her act right and say funny things.
I like Adele and the Ramones and... uh... oh, I like the Beatles...
i like cascada and sinatra
*starts talking to my self*
cant believe twist n pulses dance grop didnt get through on bgt
These aren't in the same conversation btw.
Ivy - Yes you are Tallulah. All alone in that little head of yours with only your mangled and tormented screams for company.
Nix - Oh right, you're already dead. Maybe because of that I can make you my own personal punch bags. You know, tie you up and laugh as I repeatedly beat you into unconsciousness.
Elaisse - Don't ever call me that again and don't underestimate me. Do you know what I do for a living? I'm an assassin. If you think all the best assassins are male, think again. Now get them results or I will cut you up, pull out your insides and use them to paint a work of art. Understand?
Hey Star!
Cool lines lynxia!
Like the last one best, me tuh-hink:)
Thanks Star. You said I should use the one I'm giving to Nix.
*laughs at the lines*
Who would say that all the best assassins are male if Elaisse and Ivy were there?
HEY CHLOE AND LYNXIA!
Call me Bsoithea:)
Bih-SOY-fee-uh.
Well, told me to use it. I think Elaisse said it to Nagier. I'll check. *goes to check previous pages*
AND HEY VAL! AND L!
Yeah, I know but the guy is pretty stupid and Ivy isn't there and... Surrounding the whole Elaisse thing - it's a bit complicated at that point.
how r u? *listens to craxy frog*
Oh, that makes sense
Yeah. Very complicated. As in still no memory, True name form getting impatient, need the results and violence making him work faster and the new no-memories Lynxia is a bit of a weakling.
LA BOMBA
Nix always finds my stories confusing.
If i had a ruber chicken for every time he's tolde that . . .
*told me
I'd have a lot of ruber chickens.
You would have a lot of rubber chickens?
Uh, ruber.
(Don't ask. It's a reference from nix's comment on rebellion chap one)
I love this opening line to part 2. -
Linden's smile was sweet but evil seemed to wrap and curl and play along her features.
*among
(^_^)
/( )\
||
almost mastered the element song
May suddenly disappear...
K L.
And, IT'S MSD! THE WORD IS MSD!
K L!
Poor Sheldon! :'(
I know it's 'MSD', but I...No...I prefer using full words, to be honest. I sometimes say 'tbh', though. But that's about it...Or 'WBD'...Meh...
omsl at i cat stuck in a hamster wheel
that was suppose 2 b pmsl
You guys wanna read some of Part 2?
yep
JAI HOOO
*waves at Shadow frantically* ME! I WANT TO READ IT!
YES!
. . . No. I'd prefer to save it for when it gets posted. To get the full effect, you know.
brb while I type.
i <3 moulin rouge!
Getting so bored of revision, you begin to take selcas...
Linden's smile was sweet but evil seemed to wrap, curl, dance and play among her features.
"Li-Linden?" Sheldon stammered, repeating what he had said when we first saw her in the building except this time it was in horror, not pleasant surprise.
"Yes Sh-Sheldon?" Linden said, looking innocent.
"How could you do this? Don't you... Don't you love me?" he asked, shock being replaced by hurt and, by the looks of it, nausea.
Linden laughed, a tinkling laugh that should not have belonged to her. "Love you? Who could love you, Sheldon? You're weak, mindless; a sheep and you should be dead. I never loved you. I acted and played along and you sang like a bird and what I couldn't get out of you I simply took from your mind. To me, Sheldon, you are a book. A very boring book, granted, but a book nonetheless." she finished giving Sheldon a mocking wink but his face had gone from hurt to an empty, emotionless feature and his eyes were hollow, barren and unfeeling.
1
yay!first
Will be very distant, now...I am...Busy...
i dedicate this page to music and swansea city fc!
K L!
brb.
Val! Your comment disappeared! :(
Back, as you can see.
Have to go now! Bye! *hugs anyone still here*
Bye, Lynx...
...
byii
im goin
Bye..
...
I'm back
HAHAHAHA! FIRST OF THE DAY! ah, it is a good day indeed to be slightly psychopathic.
crud, forgot that the comments page doesn't show all comments
Rawwr :D
wish this page had a refresh button
*pokes Komodo* Hi!
I like the pic, btw. It's ever so slightly creepy. P:
hehe
Hi people
i have to post ev3ry time i want to refresh the page
*sighs*
hey
Hi Val! *waves*
btw valkyrie, before you ask, i am technically not new
brb
Well then, who are you?
Not in, you know, a stalker way. In a 'did you have a different username and if so what was it' way.
*sighs* great now i have to comment again in case i missed something
nah, ii just started out mon aquila's chat and now i am here
Oh. Well, I don't think I've met you then.
sooooooooooooo
no, you haven't, unless you have a different name
this is getting tiring
I did in September, but only for a little while, so it wouldn't matter.
Hello!!!!!!! Helloooooo!!!!!
Hi Rim!
Hi Val!!! Casually listening to slipknot cus I'm in a heavy mood!!
Hello, anyone else that is here.
Sorry I am being so quiet, I am talking to the guy I like and he's just had me in tears complimenting me...*is in a seriously good mood*
I'm looking at a dictionary and trying to say words with diffent types of accents. It's hilarious.
The sad part is that I'm talking to myself...
i may leave soon
That's not really that sad Val. I looked up new words that mean hate today, because I'm fed up of using despise.
brb
Nice to meet you Komodo! *waves and shakes foot* I'm Luciana, or L (or Luce, or Lu - but only Sparky calls me Lu x3). *jumps up and down*
Animosity means hate.
Hi Komodo! Very sorry, I didn't see you until now... Oops.
If anyone is still on, I'm going. BYE!!!!
Bye
back
my kitten is beinmg so cute
Bye, Rim! *waves*
AND Komodo, d'you have a nickname we can refer to you as? :')
omg yay!!!!!!!!!
cant wait to read kotw have read all your books like a million times go you hope the is kinda violent i am kidding make it violent!!! yay go you for finishing it!!!
why are you saying hi again?
no, no i do not, call me komodo, or devious
Okay, Komodo! It's a cool name!
Hola!
I have never met Komodo! That means I can use the "Greeting Message"!
*groans* Not the greeting message...
I am off for a shower, now. I should be back, soon. If not, g'bye! *hugs and disappears*
Awkward silence
Hello, again. My dearssss. *throws cupcakes in every direction and grins, innocently*
*catches a cupcake and noms it*
*tries to catch cupcake with mouth but ends up getting hit in the face*
MY EYES!!!
It's all so quiet.... :C
I've noticed.
*is writing*
I've not written in over twenty-four hours.....I feel so deprived...
I keep writing about two pages of entirely different stories, then just deleting the whole thing and write something else.
Do you want something to read? You can read my long story on my Blog. It's amazing.
I may well read it one day, but currently...I have reading in French to do...And it's not even Skully Fourbery, yet! :O I have to wait, for that...
I am going, now. Exam tomorrow and I need to get at least an A!!! BYEEEEEEE. *hugs anyone here*
Bye
hello.
shizzlesticks/
Hi Flame
Hellooooooooooo?
Hi.
Its you.
*vision narrows*
Hello
Hello.
Mad one.
Hi 😄
Hi Jo and Vlaedr!! Not seen both of you in a week or so!
Hello! Msd though.
MSD. The internet is being stubborn and refuses to stay connected.
Hi Shads!
Yes. Yes indeed.
I have been busy. Doing messy things...
Like being extremely sick, coughing up my lungs, and having ear infection! The Fun!
Yes. I haven't been on in ages.
Hello all!
Your coughing up your lungs Lord Wolfy? Good to know.
Wow Vlaedr... Total fun...
*You're
My beastie FINALLY started reading SP. so now she can join the blog!
*bestie
Aww don't be mean to the puppy, Lynx; pass him his chew toy and let him play.
I just realised I forgot to say that I will be distant...
You know Lynxia, if I didnt know better, I would say you dislike me......
Rim, why am I a puppy? WHY?
Hi Val. It's seven in the morning here.
HI PEOPLE!
11 pm here.
Cus Wolves start off as cubs and they look like ikkle puppys!! Aww!!
Ah! I gotta go... Bye! Ill get back as soon as I can?
*gasp*
I called you thick? That is mean. I apologise sincerely then. In the words of a perfectly crazy person:
"Sometimes I say things, and I dont know why."
Bye Jo!!!!
Do you like me Shads??
Goodbye Mad One.
VLAEDR IS A PUPPY???
*frowns* no. He can't be a puppy. He's not evil.
Hi Star!
Bye Jo.
Cause I do Rim!
Still passing judgement on Vlaedr though...
In the words of Rolof of Riverwood:
"Who, are you?"
I was getting tired of having a name i could barely pronouce . . .
Gotta go. I am sorry, Lynxia. No, I am not a puppy, and my name is Vlaedr.
Cheers everyone.
*puts hand where heart should be if I had one* Aww! That means a lot Lynxia!!!
I keep calling you Shads then Lynxia... It's confuzling.
Bye Vlaedr!!! *hugs*
Bye Vlaedr! *throws poison ivy*
May the fours be with you person who is not a puppy and is called Vlaedr!
When did you change it again? It seems so long ago.
I changed it in January I think. I changed it back for one comment with my original pic a couple of weeks back.
Have to go now! Bye guys! *hugs*
Bye!! *hugs back*
So Star...
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