Friday, May 4, 2012

Mmmmm Violence...

Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.

The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.

Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.

This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)

It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.

But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?

In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.

And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.

The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.

And now a picture!


4,870 comments:

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Zathract Mist said...

Poor Fire...

Eve, write more of that kind of stuff, it's great. Blabbing is great, and so is your writing. Ups for everyone.

I'm sure it'll be great, Nix.

...Hi!

Eve the ROCK said...

Hi Mist!

Can't really babble much more about pigeons. I'm actually finishing the Drucilla one for this competition...

Nixion Strange said...

Poor fire? And I suppose my tests don't get a mention?
Anyway, it's up
http://readthismortals.blogspot.com.au/

Zathract Mist said...

Good! Yaaaaaay!

I'll try and read it Nix but sometimes my iPod decides that blogs wont work on it. But I'll try.

Your tests don't get a mention because mine didn't get a mention from you. :P

*cluthces head and looks for panadol*

Zathract Mist said...

That "good! Yaaaaaay!" part was for Eve btw.

Nixion Strange said...

Yeah, well, year 7 is easy. Year 9...
Anywho

Zathract Mist said...

*is staring at screen blankly*

*digs finger into a ditch in eye socket*

Ahh...nice, natural panadol. *laughs*
What?

Huh...should I post this?
It's the most stilodist...what am I saying?

Hate this...hate that...bleeeisidhfbdisnsbcidnch...

Nixion Strange said...

Life's a piece of s**t, when you look at it. But always look on the bright side of life
*whistles a tune*
I may have forgoten a bit, but it's been some time since I've heard it

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I'm back now.


Sorry, I had to tell my mom that I felt really sick and that when I stand up I get so dizzy I practically fall over again... because it's true....

Nixion Strange said...

Well, Val, that's not good
I guess the world is facing a world wide sickness, cause I've been feeling lousy the last few days, and Mist seems to be feeling pretty bad

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hey, have any of you tried driving? I would advise against it. *remembers yesterday*

Nixion Strange said...

No, no driving for moi

Zathract Mist said...

Wheeosbdjsksdismandheuwkwndhduei.

*starts crying*

What?

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Driving isn't all that fun...

Eve the ROCK said...

Poor Val. Get well. And Mist, with your headache.

Nixion Strange said...

Now I'm going to spend some time away
Good luck to you all in your endevours. I'll be back in an hour, give or take any amount of time
Bye!

Eve the ROCK said...

You crying irl, Mist?

Eve the ROCK said...

Bye Nix!

Did you drive, Val? Wow. Here in Oz, you can only drive once you're sixteen and a half or something.

Zathract Mist said...

I am. I'm crying, laughing, coughing, feeling miserable, high, horrible and I'm typing at the same time.
I hate this...

*looks for panadol again*

Eve the ROCK said...

Interesting.

*flips a coin*

Eve the ROCK said...

You hate what?

Zathract Mist said...

Not sure...

Eve the ROCK said...

What were you going to post?

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Well, it's six in the morning, I'm leaving for now.

Zathract Mist said...

MSD. Bye Val.

Zathract Mist said...

Leaving now. Night.

Eve the ROCK said...

Bye Val

Bye Mist

Nixion Strange said...

Yellow?

Nixion Strange said...

My computer's messed up!

Nixion Strange said...

And on that note, I bid you farewell
Bye!
*leaves*

Eve the ROCK said...

Purple!

Eve the ROCK said...

Bye Nix

*goes back to nothing much*

Eve the ROCK said...

Fine.

Goodnight then.

Inky Flame said...

hi val!
how r u?

Luciana said...

I will be here, pretty much all night...But I may be distant, because I am revising. ^_^

Oh and hello. *waves foot, in the air*

Inky Flame said...

hi

Inky Flame said...

*munches on watsits*

Luciana said...

Hello, Chloe.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Dammit, my comment disappeared...

Luciana said...

I'm alright, yourself?

Inky Flame said...

im just dandy, got 3 7yr old comin over -_-

Lemony Good said...

Dear Mr Landy,
I was just wondering what sort of motorbike Tanith has. I was also interested in Skulduggery's Bentley and would love to know why you chose that as his car.
Hope you're well,
Emily (AKA Fervid Colt)

Lynxia Lost said...

Maths h/w. Fun fun fun...

You'll never guess what I did in art! :)

Hi, btw!

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hi Shadow!


Post more of your story!!!

Lynxia Lost said...

Which one?

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

The one with me in it. And any other ones. I need to read something really badly or I'm going to die...

Lynxia Lost said...

*is going through iPod's library* OMGG, I haven't listened to this in years! Literally! *puts on Shake It by Metro Station* This is one of 4 normal songs on my iPod. I.e. not death music, screamo or orchestra.

Inky Flame said...

i like mambo 5
lou bega

Lynxia Lost said...

One For You? Yeah, I'll try and post more soon. I've got a quote from Elaisse that's coming up soon. And I've got good lines for you and Nix to come as well... I've been accumulating good lines.

Inky Flame said...

i like LMFAO

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I love it when ever you make Ivy talk because you always make her act right and say funny things.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I like Adele and the Ramones and... uh... oh, I like the Beatles...

Inky Flame said...

i like cascada and sinatra

Inky Flame said...

*starts talking to my self*
cant believe twist n pulses dance grop didnt get through on bgt

Lynxia Lost said...

These aren't in the same conversation btw.

Ivy - Yes you are Tallulah. All alone in that little head of yours with only your mangled and tormented screams for company.

Nix - Oh right, you're already dead. Maybe because of that I can make you my own personal punch bags. You know, tie you up and laugh as I repeatedly beat you into unconsciousness.

Elaisse - Don't ever call me that again and don't underestimate me. Do you know what I do for a living? I'm an assassin. If you think all the best assassins are male, think again. Now get them results or I will cut you up, pull out your insides and use them to paint a work of art. Understand?

Lynxia Lost said...

Hey Star!

Star Inkbright said...

Cool lines lynxia!

Like the last one best, me tuh-hink:)

Lynxia Lost said...

Thanks Star. You said I should use the one I'm giving to Nix.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

*laughs at the lines*


Who would say that all the best assassins are male if Elaisse and Ivy were there?

Star Inkbright said...

HEY CHLOE AND LYNXIA!

Call me Bsoithea:)

Bih-SOY-fee-uh.

Lynxia Lost said...

Well, told me to use it. I think Elaisse said it to Nagier. I'll check. *goes to check previous pages*

Star Inkbright said...

AND HEY VAL! AND L!

Lynxia Lost said...

Yeah, I know but the guy is pretty stupid and Ivy isn't there and... Surrounding the whole Elaisse thing - it's a bit complicated at that point.

Inky Flame said...

how r u? *listens to craxy frog*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Oh, that makes sense

Lynxia Lost said...

Yeah. Very complicated. As in still no memory, True name form getting impatient, need the results and violence making him work faster and the new no-memories Lynxia is a bit of a weakling.

Inky Flame said...

LA BOMBA

Star Inkbright said...

Nix always finds my stories confusing.

If i had a ruber chicken for every time he's tolde that . . .

Star Inkbright said...

*told me

I'd have a lot of ruber chickens.

Lynxia Lost said...

You would have a lot of rubber chickens?

Star Inkbright said...

Uh, ruber.

(Don't ask. It's a reference from nix's comment on rebellion chap one)

Lynxia Lost said...

I love this opening line to part 2. -

Linden's smile was sweet but evil seemed to wrap and curl and play along her features.

Lynxia Lost said...

*among

Inky Flame said...

(^_^)
/( )\
||

Inky Flame said...

almost mastered the element song

Luciana said...

May suddenly disappear...

Star Inkbright said...

K L.

And, IT'S MSD! THE WORD IS MSD!

Lynxia Lost said...

K L!

Lynxia Lost said...

Poor Sheldon! :'(

Luciana said...

I know it's 'MSD', but I...No...I prefer using full words, to be honest. I sometimes say 'tbh', though. But that's about it...Or 'WBD'...Meh...

Inky Flame said...

omsl at i cat stuck in a hamster wheel

Inky Flame said...

that was suppose 2 b pmsl

Lynxia Lost said...

You guys wanna read some of Part 2?

Inky Flame said...

yep
JAI HOOO

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

*waves at Shadow frantically* ME! I WANT TO READ IT!

Star Inkbright said...

YES!

. . . No. I'd prefer to save it for when it gets posted. To get the full effect, you know.

Lynxia Lost said...

brb while I type.

Inky Flame said...

i <3 moulin rouge!

Luciana said...

Getting so bored of revision, you begin to take selcas...

Lynxia Lost said...

Linden's smile was sweet but evil seemed to wrap, curl, dance and play among her features.
"Li-Linden?" Sheldon stammered, repeating what he had said when we first saw her in the building except this time it was in horror, not pleasant surprise.
"Yes Sh-Sheldon?" Linden said, looking innocent.
"How could you do this? Don't you... Don't you love me?" he asked, shock being replaced by hurt and, by the looks of it, nausea.
Linden laughed, a tinkling laugh that should not have belonged to her. "Love you? Who could love you, Sheldon? You're weak, mindless; a sheep and you should be dead. I never loved you. I acted and played along and you sang like a bird and what I couldn't get out of you I simply took from your mind. To me, Sheldon, you are a book. A very boring book, granted, but a book nonetheless." she finished giving Sheldon a mocking wink but his face had gone from hurt to an empty, emotionless feature and his eyes were hollow, barren and unfeeling.

Inky Flame said...

1

Inky Flame said...

yay!first

Luciana said...

Will be very distant, now...I am...Busy...

Inky Flame said...

i dedicate this page to music and swansea city fc!

Lynxia Lost said...

K L!

Lynxia Lost said...

brb.

Lynxia Lost said...

Val! Your comment disappeared! :(

Back, as you can see.

Lynxia Lost said...

Have to go now! Bye! *hugs anyone still here*

Luciana said...

Bye, Lynx...

...

Inky Flame said...

byii

Inky Flame said...

im goin

Luciana said...

Bye..

...

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I'm back

Komodo Devious said...

HAHAHAHA! FIRST OF THE DAY! ah, it is a good day indeed to be slightly psychopathic.

Komodo Devious said...

crud, forgot that the comments page doesn't show all comments

Mary Contrary said...

Rawwr :D

Komodo Devious said...

wish this page had a refresh button

Mary Contrary said...

*pokes Komodo* Hi!
I like the pic, btw. It's ever so slightly creepy. P:

Komodo Devious said...

hehe

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hi people

Komodo Devious said...

i have to post ev3ry time i want to refresh the page
*sighs*

Komodo Devious said...

hey

Mary Contrary said...

Hi Val! *waves*

Komodo Devious said...

btw valkyrie, before you ask, i am technically not new

Komodo Devious said...

brb

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Well then, who are you?

Not in, you know, a stalker way. In a 'did you have a different username and if so what was it' way.

Komodo Devious said...

*sighs* great now i have to comment again in case i missed something

Komodo Devious said...

nah, ii just started out mon aquila's chat and now i am here

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Oh. Well, I don't think I've met you then.

Komodo Devious said...

sooooooooooooo

Komodo Devious said...

no, you haven't, unless you have a different name

Komodo Devious said...

this is getting tiring

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I did in September, but only for a little while, so it wouldn't matter.

Rim. said...

Hello!!!!!!! Helloooooo!!!!!

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hi Rim!

Rim. said...

Hi Val!!! Casually listening to slipknot cus I'm in a heavy mood!!

Luciana said...

Hello, anyone else that is here.

Sorry I am being so quiet, I am talking to the guy I like and he's just had me in tears complimenting me...*is in a seriously good mood*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I'm looking at a dictionary and trying to say words with diffent types of accents. It's hilarious.

The sad part is that I'm talking to myself...

Komodo Devious said...

i may leave soon

Rim. said...

That's not really that sad Val. I looked up new words that mean hate today, because I'm fed up of using despise.

Komodo Devious said...

brb

Luciana said...

Nice to meet you Komodo! *waves and shakes foot* I'm Luciana, or L (or Luce, or Lu - but only Sparky calls me Lu x3). *jumps up and down*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Animosity means hate.

Rim. said...

Hi Komodo! Very sorry, I didn't see you until now... Oops.

Rim. said...

If anyone is still on, I'm going. BYE!!!!

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Bye

Komodo Devious said...

back

Komodo Devious said...

my kitten is beinmg so cute

Luciana said...

Bye, Rim! *waves*

AND Komodo, d'you have a nickname we can refer to you as? :')

Sophie said...

omg yay!!!!!!!!!
cant wait to read kotw have read all your books like a million times go you hope the is kinda violent i am kidding make it violent!!! yay go you for finishing it!!!

Komodo Devious said...

why are you saying hi again?

Komodo Devious said...

no, no i do not, call me komodo, or devious

Luciana said...

Okay, Komodo! It's a cool name!

Hola!

Lord Vlaedr said...

I have never met Komodo! That means I can use the "Greeting Message"!

Luciana said...

*groans* Not the greeting message...

Luciana said...

I am off for a shower, now. I should be back, soon. If not, g'bye! *hugs and disappears*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Awkward silence

Luciana said...

Hello, again. My dearssss. *throws cupcakes in every direction and grins, innocently*

Rose Black said...

*catches a cupcake and noms it*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

*tries to catch cupcake with mouth but ends up getting hit in the face*


MY EYES!!!

Luciana said...

It's all so quiet.... :C

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I've noticed.


*is writing*

Luciana said...

I've not written in over twenty-four hours.....I feel so deprived...

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I keep writing about two pages of entirely different stories, then just deleting the whole thing and write something else.


Do you want something to read? You can read my long story on my Blog. It's amazing.

Luciana said...

I may well read it one day, but currently...I have reading in French to do...And it's not even Skully Fourbery, yet! :O I have to wait, for that...


I am going, now. Exam tomorrow and I need to get at least an A!!! BYEEEEEEE. *hugs anyone here*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Bye

Flame Phoenix said...

hello.

Flame Phoenix said...

shizzlesticks/

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hi Flame

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hellooooooooooo?

Lord Vlaedr said...

Hi.

Its you.

*vision narrows*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hello

Lord Vlaedr said...

Hello.

Mad one.

Johanna Remmus (The Mad One) said...

Hi 😄

Rim. said...

Hi Jo and Vlaedr!! Not seen both of you in a week or so!

Lynxia Lost said...

Hello! Msd though.

Rim. said...

MSD. The internet is being stubborn and refuses to stay connected.

Rim. said...

Hi Shads!

Lord Vlaedr said...

Yes. Yes indeed.

I have been busy. Doing messy things...

Like being extremely sick, coughing up my lungs, and having ear infection! The Fun!

Johanna Remmus (The Mad One) said...

Yes. I haven't been on in ages.

Lynxia Lost said...

Hello all!

Your coughing up your lungs Lord Wolfy? Good to know.

Rim. said...

Wow Vlaedr... Total fun...

Lynxia Lost said...

*You're

Johanna Remmus (The Mad One) said...

My beastie FINALLY started reading SP. so now she can join the blog!

Johanna Remmus (The Mad One) said...

*bestie

Rim. said...

Aww don't be mean to the puppy, Lynx; pass him his chew toy and let him play.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I just realised I forgot to say that I will be distant...

Lord Vlaedr said...

You know Lynxia, if I didnt know better, I would say you dislike me......

Lord Vlaedr said...

Rim, why am I a puppy? WHY?

Johanna Remmus (The Mad One) said...

Hi Val. It's seven in the morning here.

Star Inkbright said...

HI PEOPLE!

Lord Vlaedr said...

11 pm here.

Rim. said...

Cus Wolves start off as cubs and they look like ikkle puppys!! Aww!!

Johanna Remmus (The Mad One) said...

Ah! I gotta go... Bye! Ill get back as soon as I can?

Lord Vlaedr said...

*gasp*

I called you thick? That is mean. I apologise sincerely then. In the words of a perfectly crazy person:

"Sometimes I say things, and I dont know why."

Rim. said...

Bye Jo!!!!

Do you like me Shads??

Lord Vlaedr said...

Goodbye Mad One.

Star Inkbright said...

VLAEDR IS A PUPPY???

*frowns* no. He can't be a puppy. He's not evil.

Rim. said...

Hi Star!

Lynxia Lost said...

Bye Jo.

Cause I do Rim!
Still passing judgement on Vlaedr though...

Lord Vlaedr said...

In the words of Rolof of Riverwood:

"Who, are you?"

Star Inkbright said...

I was getting tired of having a name i could barely pronouce . . .

Lord Vlaedr said...

Gotta go. I am sorry, Lynxia. No, I am not a puppy, and my name is Vlaedr.

Cheers everyone.

Rim. said...

*puts hand where heart should be if I had one* Aww! That means a lot Lynxia!!!
I keep calling you Shads then Lynxia... It's confuzling.

Rim. said...

Bye Vlaedr!!! *hugs*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Bye Vlaedr! *throws poison ivy*

Star Inkbright said...

May the fours be with you person who is not a puppy and is called Vlaedr!

Rim. said...

When did you change it again? It seems so long ago.

Lynxia Lost said...

I changed it in January I think. I changed it back for one comment with my original pic a couple of weeks back.


Have to go now! Bye guys! *hugs*

Rim. said...

Bye!! *hugs back*
So Star...

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