Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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Yo peeps!
:D
I'm grumpy. GRUMPY. -.-
*Moans on about stuff you probably don't care about*
Yep. Hope you enjoyed my whining.
Hi All. Long time since I've been here. How are we all doing?
My day has been a bit skittery. We just had the grumpiest teacher yell in our faces and I was fighting the urge to slap her silly.
Lol... I can picture it now...
'Cause I did..
Hehe, I would've laughed, then dragged you away screaming about crazy teachers.
THERE MUST BE MORE PEOPLE ON, COME ON M'DEARS!
SERIOUSLY, I'M LONEEEEELLLLLY.
Hmmm... Voilence
The world needs violence.
Or Michelle does, anyway.
I need violence!
I will be distant...
Lol. I have to agree with you there. One thing I absolutely can not tolerate is someone yelling. I would have preferred to have a month of detentions than have her yelling in my face without a piece of my mind, but unfortunately she walked away too soon...
Damn the teacher's walking.
I was being perfectly civil.
But noooo, she's right. Of course.
I am savouring the image of her head rolling along the floor right now.
Mmmmm....
That would be good to see.
In other news, I like fudge.
Yum....
I like fudge.
And hugs.
No hugs. But fudge is just grand.
And fedoras rule!
Uh... Okay. I was writing a story a few weeks ago and one of the main characters had an obsession with russian fudge.
I'm gonna go now.
Bye
*is making a card for Sparky's b-day*
Gosh, to edit it digitally is so hard on the hand.
*shakes right hand as if it helps*
Yep, I'm doing it digitally.
Passing comment.
Lol. I anybody on?
Hello?
Pasta
Anybody?
Note to everyone: don't try to teach thirteen year olds to drive.
Don't give up Derek!
Fight!
Bye...
*walks in glaring*
Oh, wait, I'm supposed to practice marching.
*marches in*
Hello?
Hi Nix!
Hi Eve
I was just trying to sing. I want to capture a Mockingjay.
Oh, also, this talent show my friend wants me in...
But mostly the Mockingjays.
Here, Mockingjay Mockingjay Mockingjay Mockingjay!
Biscut tun
*jumps* Footsteps? But I'm home alone...
Your echo of footsteps?
Wait, it was next door. What...?
I'm sitting on my bed, and I heard it come from the dining room.
And my house doesn't echo.
ECHO!!
...Nope.
Hi people!
*glares at derek*
*runs off and hides in cave*
Hi Star
I'm not happy with him either.
That is precisley WHY i am hiding. So i'm not near you when you start killing things.
DEREK! POST BEFORE YOU START LOSING FANS!
Hi Seastar!
Aw, guys, don't be angry at Derek. It's not even his fault. I doubt he has any input in what happens on that site. It's HarperCollins you should be angry with.
Yes, but Derek has a responsibility to remind them. It's his book series, after all
Okay. Bsoitheabsoithea ist angry with harpercollins then. *ist still hiding*
Anyway, I just sent an email to Harper Collins, saying no winner has been announced, and that they put the link to enter the competition on the homepage after it ended
Stupid harpercollions.
I am not happy with Harper Collins
Who said anything about reminding? They didn't put th winners of the last competition on the site, so they must send an email to the winners. They make the rules, not Derek. Derek is only in charge of writing the books, signing the books, blogging about things and being awesome. He's not in charge of the HarperCollins competitions.
Yeah, so, less Mad At Derek, more Throwing Stones At HarperCollins Window.
Still disappointed at Derek, never been angry with him. Just disappointed
But I've been angry at Harper Collins the whole time
Damn. Gtg. *looks this way and that before dashing out of hiding place and running towards the school* may the fours be with you both!
Bye Star
Well, I guess that's as good as i can hope for.
DAMN YOU, HARPERCOLLINS!!
Not a happy camper
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Be back in 15 minutes
Bye!
Hi Mist
Bye Nix
Hi, Eve. *laughs*
Bye, Nix.
*smiles* Knew it.
*shrugs*
Lucky guess, I bet you. *grins*
Everyone knows it's you
No guess is lucky when it comes to mysterious deleted comments. It's always you.
Except when it's not.
How are glue?
Hi again Nix
My glue is empty. How about yours?
Hi, Nix. Distant.
"Either that, or he was still having an awful amount of trouble comprehending the matter. It was impossible. Nixion had already straightened that out with himself; Mist was not a traitor. It made about as much sense as Nixion did himself."
*frowns* My glue has glitter all over it. That's what you get for letting people borrow your stuff.
I don't make sense. I'm a insane killer who is for some reason one of the good guys who still likes killing. Whaaaaaa?
You're one of the good guys because you owe ME. BENDER.
*frowns unhappily* Stop copying me! Bender!
I don't see that as Nixion's reason... I had it at one point, but now i've forgotten
I was kidding. I just wanted to use the Bender reference.
*glares at Eve and holds up the "I'm Bender" sign*
*puts on Bender mask*
Psh. That's lame. *pokes Mist's face*
*transforms into a bending unit*
Mm-hmm.
*transforms back*
*puts on a Fry wig*
*sits down*
That's boring. You can be Bender if you want.
*puts on Darth Vader mask*
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Back, sorry
I used to have a Vader helmet. It changes your voice too. I used to wear it all the time
Dinner bye!
Bye Eve
I DO have one of them.
Must go to dinner, then guitar. Nix and Mist should be done by tomorrow, Nix.
Bye!
Okay
Bye Mist
So it was THEM who sawed off my hand and swapped the doomsday device for the empty bag!
*walks in crying and sniffling* It wasnt them. It was me! Bender! The greatest criminal of all time!
Stop it! You're obsessed with Futurarma!
I think the correct term is "Futurama Fanatic".
And yes! I am!
That is not a good thing
I guess it's also not a good thing that I'm obsessed with SP, right? I would never have come here, never have met you guys, never wasted your time with my nonsense.
I don't know what argument I'm trying to make.
SP is not Futurarma.
Futurama is SP in cartoon tv show form. Except it's completely different.
I'm going to go read for a while. Be back later
Bye
Bye Nix
Distant to anyone who comes on
Hello!
*yawns*
*stands up and strech*
hello?
anyone?
i'll be doing a online test which i'm going to fall alsleep in the middle of it and then woke up again by mum yelling, so i'll be distant.......*yawn*......
hey, Caroline:-)
Hi Fire!
Hi Caroline!
hello. i'm going to be dead soon.
*curls up in my chair*
*sigh*
*a tear rolles down my cheek*
Are you okay, Fire?
*snorts*
Year long battery. I've had this mouse with a supposed year long battery for two months and it's run out of batteries
i'm going to be dead in about, let say 5 mins.
literally dead
Never trust a mouse, Nix. They're as unreliable as any rodent.
1st
Why, Fire?
that's unlucky, Nix
because, well my mum is putting a lot of pressure on me for getting good grades and i've been practing a lot so i'm tired and now she wants me to complete a online test and get them all correct when i've got no concentration what so ever and she is going to come back soon and kill me when she saw one of the test resultes.
and i have a history test tomorrow, which i know hardly anything about and is very important for my end of the year grade
*studies*
Does anyone else have NAPLAN this year?
i have one next year
I hate school...
Yep, NAPLAN next week.
Year 9 NAPLAN... I had a look at the practise test for maths. I don't know anything on it. I'm lucky that most of it is multiple choice, so i have a fighting chance
i have a very hard test next saturday. some people already did it and said its very hard so that's why mum want me to study for that.*sigh*
Next week
And guess what? My maths teacher is giving out class a test on the friday of the NAPLAN. And I've been away for the past week, so I have no idea what the maths is about. I'm so going to fail this test
I don't get the simpilest bit. I did do a bit the week before last, but I've forgotten everythign about it. Something about gradient = m= Rise over run
Rise
----
Run
Yeah, I don't get it
i feel sorry for you, Nix
But for now, I'm focusing on the History test, which we've had three leasons for it, and it is about 100 years of history
Australia was such a racist country...
Luckily we've already covered how Australia was racist to the Indigenous last test, so this one is just on how Australia was racist to every other country/race
i'm focusing tring to redo my test again and to stop mum from reading it but aparently it's not working
*rubs temples*
Okay... white Australia policy... Immagration Act... dictation test...
Typing just helps me remember
Receate brittan... Federation... immagration laws... inferior, culturly different, threatened jobs... first law...
*ugh*!
i just cant concentrate on my stupit test!
Dinner
Bye!
I dedicate this page to mice and the abolishment of tests.
Wait, abolishment...?
wow, that's a lot of things you've remenbered.
Hello!
And I like that a lot, Eve. A lot.
Hi Calamity!
hi Calamity!
oh no! mum's back and i havent got rid of that stuipt score! i'm dead!
*bangs head on the table*
*rubs head*
Ah! Good luck, Fire!
thankz:)
Good luck, Fire!
it's not working and mum's back.
*felt tears welled up in my eyes*
i still got one last test to do and ..... i'm dead.
Oh, Fire...
Just hang in there, you'll be fine.
yeah....
*slowly turn my head away....*
i'll be back in a few mins. i suppose i'll find an excuse that is belivable.....
Okay Fire
Back! Now attck! Falack! Wack!
SHORTSTACK!
back again.
Shortstack? As in... the band?
I'm having trouble adjusting to this mousepad again...
Year long battery! Ha!
Hello Nix!
WB Fire.
i dunno.
hi guys!
Ah. Gotta go!
kk. bye Calamity!
Hi Fire
Bye Cal
hello:)
Hi Fire!
There's a band called Shortstack?
i wonder when the winner for the world book day comp is going to be announced......
Oh, don't even bring that up with me Fire
hi Eve!
um, ok but why?
Bye Calamity!
Because he's angry
oh. with who?
I've sent an email to Harper Collins, I've lost some of my faith in Derek, I'm angry at Harper Collins, I'm refusing to write anything SP related at the moment, I don't feel any compulsion to read SP (which i almost always have) and I am disappointed in Derek
Come on, Bender! Your grandmother could push harder than that!
No crap. My grandmother was a bulldozer.
Okay, I'll stop.
For now.
I'm angry with Harper Collins, but disappointed with Derek
oh. because they havent announed the winner yet and it's..... ok, i'll stop talking about that.
They said they would announce it by the 7th. It is now almost the 10th. That just isn't good enough
i know. i've been checking on the blog every day and derek never post anything about it. i'm very disappionted.
That's it. I'm done with the studying for now
good for you.
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay!
Now I want to write something... not SP related. Eve, what would you like me to write? HG or HP?
Hunger Games... and may the odds ever be in my favour to not mess this up
Yeah, I'm doing Hunger Games
Goodnight everyone !
(So bored)
In australia!
Was gonna say that anyway. That the one with Jonathan Maywood?
Night Viv!
good night vivstar!
Yep.
Hi Vistar
Or is it bye... were you saying good night to the Aussies, but it's morning for you, or are you actually saying good night?
Nix, you can not begin to understand the mind of one who says confusing things.
It's like someone trying to understand my mind. Or yours.
You know, I want to see a phycologist just to confusing them. No one can tell what goes through my head!
Yeah, but you never talk about what's inside your head. I talk all the time, and still I leave everyone confused.
that would be very funny, Nix.
I talk about it. I talk about it with you people. No one gets it though. I don't get it
*shrugs*
It makes no sense!
Now what is that line from, i remember it's from somewhere...
...
*chews lip* ...Nope.
Nix, I never ever sever got it.
Probably from you
Quite possibly
same here. i 'm going to bed now. i'm so tired from all the drama today because of that stupit test.good night, Eve and Nix.
*yawn* *waves good bye to Eve and Nix*
Eve strode through the park, eyes on the moist green grass. She could feel the gentle drumming of innocent raindrops on her head. She would have stayed indoors if the rain was heavier, but the weather seemed to be behaving for the while.
She walked past a pigeon, which flew away before she could get too close. Eve was VERY intimidating, up to the point where pigeons fled in terror of her haunting presence. And, she had razor sharp teeth and nails, and she could make people see their worst fear, blah blah blah blah banana. The title of Notorious Pigeon-scarer was much more noteworthy, and besides, Eve didn't use her magic extremely often, and her claws and fangs (for some reason everyone hated it whenever she said that...) were taken for granted by others and simply not noticed by herself. So all she had left was the joy of chasing birds through a park.
Eve + Babbling = that
Goodnight, Fire!
Bye Fire
Done with HG chapter! Now just re-read it, spell check it and expand it, and I'm done!
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Y!
Hi Val
This chapter is a short one, and i have a feeling that it isn't as good and the first
Um, hi Val! Can't see you!
I'm sure it'll be great, Nix
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