Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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I just had about 6 conflicting edits with that comment before about the fish tails
It's midnight. I'm going to go to bed
Bye!
Hello. Anyone here?
I WROTE JUST UNDER 500 WORDS WITHIN 3 MINUTES ON MY PHONE, WALKING HOME, TODAYYYY. I am pretty proud o' that. :'3 (probably really bad, but it was really cold...)
Eve, nixion, your conversations up there were making me laugh irl . . .
You are sehr funny:)
Going on laptop, brb.
Back!
Hello, Star! *waves*
Now i got to change my pic:)
Now i got to change my pic:)
Hi Star!
Goldengoddammit, double post . . .
Hi L!
Wbd.
Hi L!
I just posted some more of Rogue.
I really need to finish this bit in Wilting Rose. It's kicking ass and sad at the same time! Poor Fia!!!! :'(
FOR DEREK'S SAKE, HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE JUST TO OPEN A WORD DOCUMENT???
Hey, Lynx!
Wbd, History and English homework.
K L!
I don't type on word. word hates me. It goes straight from pad to blog.
Wbd. I have a BRILLIANT idea!!!!
I never used to use word. Now i do. It's easier:)
Was ist es, lynxia?
I can post the beginning of it if you like. I'm writing it to music so it feels a little empty without it.
I'll post the link to the music too.
(It's quite away into the story. It might not make sense.)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O-jrFcobLQM
Listen to this. ^^^
Their winged shapes were dark silhouettes on the clear blue sky.
I stood at the front of the army and watched. Waited. Hoped.
I clutched my staff in my right hand. The cool bronze still moulding to my grip. It wasn't ready. I wasn't ready.
I braced myself. "Stand tall. Your chains have all broken. Use your powers. Do not show mercy as you will receive none in return."
Read that whilst listening to it. ^^^
Um, can't, me don't think . . .
Doesn't zath used music to write too? In fact i think quite a few people do . . .
No offence, but kids are exposed to a lot more violence everyday in real life than what they would come across in these books. Nothing wrong with a little blood and what not.
I have no idea. I just know I tend to use Two Steps From Hell to right fight scenes.
Once again - POOR FIA!!! I'm so sorry for what I've got to do to her.
Let's just say there is a sequel! ;)
*is struggling to read my writing*
Good:)
Good:)
Sorr double post^^^^
Good what? That there's a sequel? Well... Define good, good that there's another or good stuff happens?
*Sorry
*Sorry
*Sorry
Bb in 15!
K Star.
#GetLordLandyOnTwitter
^We're trying to get this to trend on Twitter, if you've got it please tweet it! :')
WB Star.
Sorry L, me no have Twitter.
ood that there's another.
Hello, Star! *waves*
*Good
Me no have twitter neither. My mum has twitter though. She always looks at what twitter people think about the voice, and stuff.
I have to go now! Bye all! *hugs*
Bye, Lynx! *hugs*
May the fours be with you lynxia!
Parent's evening tonight . . . :(
This is me on my phone. Ignore this comment.
I don't have parents evening, anymore. We have a review day, but the last couple were cancelled. :L
Muh-huh. Well, i have a parent's evening tonight, AND I'M NERVOUS!
I bet you'll be fine, Star!!!
According to microsoft word, "ow" is not a word.
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH . . .
Yeah, but i'm still nervouas.
Word hates me, 'tis fine.
And you shouldn't be nervous, you'll be reyt. ^_^
Hello, Flame! *waves*
Hey, hands up, honestly if you've noticed Sparky hasn't been on, or cared?
Yeah, I was going to ask you about that, but I have been too busy to talk to anyone properly. I've just been here, kind of.
Where is Sparky? Same with Lav...I've missed them both... :'c
Goood Answer. I'm offically not mad at you/
Yay. But d'you know where Sparky is? I miss being called Lu.. :C
Yeppers.
Can you say where Sparky is? Or is it going to remain a mystery? Until she returns and we can all celebrate?
REBELLION CHAPTER ONE IS UP!!!!
Six and a half microsoft word pages, font times new roman, font size twelve.
Hi flame!
Yep, sparky went bye-bye . . . Somebody told me it was something to do with exams or something like that.
Well, i cannot disclose. but yeah.
Okay.
At least it's nothing really bad.
(I'm on my phone now btw)
Okay, Flame. And as long as it's not as bad as why I disappeared for a while. :') HOPE SPARKY'S ALRIGHT!
Parents evening sooo-ooon . . .
Aaaaarrrrrrgggghhhhh . . .
. . . If i'm really honest, i would have left blogland in fed-upness if not for my stories.
I would've probs come back, but still.
I left the internet for a while.....I left pretty much everything, for a while, in all honesty...Meh. It took me a lot to come back, but I am glad I did. You guys are awesome and you're some of the very few people that can actually make me laugh. Thanks guys, I love you all. :3
. . . Thanks, L . . . *warm fuzzy feeling*
I'm glad you came back. I missed you when we were all on the old posts and you werenet . . .
Aww, I missed you too, Star! I'm glad I came back, too. I doubt I could've made it this far in life without you guys, tbh. I probably would have committed suicide. Thank you, for everything.
Coz you didn't kuh-now about it . . .
But now you do and there is NO EXCUSE.
*wonders if L knows that Scath means mirror in irish*
Star, yeah I did know about it...I've been to the older posts, before, but I don't always go on them..
Flame, my friend (who is Irish) says it means shadows :L but mirror is cool too. *grins* I was supposed to be learning Irish...But I got bored of it... :)
*is confuzzled*
I am confuzzled.
I dunno whether parents evening is tonight or tomorrow. My dad confuzzled me.
IT'S TOMORROW!
Damn my maths teacher. He misinformed us.
That's good to know, Star!
I will be distant, again. Got an essay or two to write, BY TOMORROW. D:
Hello!!! I have 10 minutos!!!
*grumbles* star want it to be tonight. Get it over with.
Hi willow!
That looks bad, L . . .
I hat football socks!! They're just so hard to put on! And then when they get caught on the shin pad Velcro... UGHH!!!
Hi Star! Hi Flame! Hi L!!
G2g.. Bye.
I don have to, but i am gonna go.
stuff to do.
BYe#
I love football socks! They're all warm and cozy!
May the fours be with you flame!
Aww... Bye Flame! Are you leaving cus I came on??
LOL. I WILL BE FINE.
Hello, Rim! *waves*
Aww... My 10 mins are up...
BYE! *hugs*
Bye, everyone that has left. *hugs and waves, with foot*
May the fours be with you rim!
*glares at pen* how DARE you leak???
Now my english book and my hand amd my phone screen are all inky!
STILL NEED TO WRITE THE TWO ESSAYS...... :O
:O indeed!
Rim, L, and Ink.
I bid a good evening to you.
Vlaedr. *nods*
I MUST BE OFF. D: BYE, GUYS. LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. *hugs everyone*
Hugs are for weenies...
Im a weenie!
:D
Vlaedr commented on my blog . . . *is afraid to look*
Usually i close my eyes before reading the first comment on a story post.
*moans*
*closes eyes again*
*opens email*
May the fours be with you L!
Hi Vlaedr! And thanks!
You are afraid of what I comment?
Your faith is inspiring....
I'm always afraid of the first comment on a story post. Which is why it's so disappointing if it's a bad one.
YAY! I INSPIRED YOU!
Hahhaha, okay.
Meh.
What is new?
A word i just wrote. It is very newly formed.
Passing comment:
MIGHT BE GETTING SKULLY FOURBERY!!!!! *screams*
Now to write two essays...And print off my History homework...
Good thing, my extremely sick phase is passing!
I am no longer coughing up my lungs! Nor sneezing 5 times in a row!
Oh, are you sneezing seven times in a row then?
In seriousness: THAT'S GOOD:)
I AM THE ENEMY OF THE LLAMAS!
I have some time. Here I am!
Hi lynxia!
Hello, people. I'm on my phone. Whilst writing an essay...About a tumor...
Hang on. One last comment.
Why the Hell is it that nobody does my What If?s?!!
Humph.
*leaves slightly angrily*
Wbd. This essay is so weird
May the fours be with you lynxia . . .
Coz me no like what ifs in general?
~laughs~ 4,001 comments...
Yesterday I came at the bery beginning of a new page too!
THIS IS BECOMING A HABIT!
I DEDICATE THIS PAGE TO . . .
Names.
Imagin a world without names. A world with a loada pointing and hey youing. A world where people had to describe objects when they mentioned them, instead of just saying their names. A world where giving directions is made so much harder. We need names. We would be lost without them.
Names define us, give us individuality. You think of a person differently depending on thier name.
Names are just so flipping NICE. You get some wonderful names. Kayla, Sapphire, India, jewel names, flower names, names of forms of water like river and stream and waterfall. Names are brilliantio. End of.
Was this ded long and meaningful enough?
Hi skyril!
Hiya, Star!
I like your dedication! :]
~strokes imaginary beard~
I wonder how people would describe me if I didn't have a name...
Sorry for the slow replies.
~frowns~
Blogger is giving me a bit of trouble.
*glares* BAAAAAAAAAAD blogger . . .
The purple outlined one, or something like that.
The purple outlined one wearing a hat?
No, coz 'hat' is the name of an object . . .
I think "hat" might be ok... because almost every word is a name... purple is a specific color too... O_o
I don't knooooow....
AWESOME DEDS, STAR. XD
Would i be the bluey blonde haired one holding a shadowy long thin object?
And my other account would be the red one with the long wooden branchy things in the backfround?
DANKE, L.
No, adjectives are okay. Purple as a noun isn't allowed, but purple as an adjective is.
L, you are the yellow with bones-in-fabricy-stuff one.
Hiya, Luce!
~hugs~
@Star
Ahh, okie, I see...
Maybe you'd be the "bright, shiny object up in that huge thing above"
Star... xD
It's hard to describe things like that :P
You're welcome and...Okay, nice to know. One day I might have an actual pic of me...Maybe. One day...*ponders*
Wbd, still writing two essays.
*laughs*
Call me Bright Shiny Object In That Huge Expanse Above.
Star would be:
The inky one. XD
Hello, Skyril. *hugs*
YES, L! BRILLIANT! I AM THE INKY ONE!
My display name with no names^^^
BSOITHEA LSITTYWW-HYEL (LSITTYWW!) for short.
*grins* Yay. I just thought...Inky one. And...Yeah...Now I'll call you The Inky One, or TIO for short (if I remember, that is. XD)
Okay L! Thanks!
TIO. Doubt it'll catch on, but whatever. :3
This better?
Now you can see all the writing. *nods*
LOL, Star!
That's awesome!
I think you have the longest name here :P
[again, sorry for disappearing and slow comments ~sighs~]
S'okay skyril. I've met slower people.
And, longest name? Maybe, but i think Freakfan's is longer
LOL. I'm really slow to reply, too. *grins*.
Msd.
@Star [yeah, I like names a lot :P]
Really? Slower than ME?
That's saying something xD
I also msd.
And BSOITHEA-BSOITHEA ist only commenying slowly coz you guys are . . .
LOL, Star!
I can pronounce that!
BSOITHEA-
"bih-SOY-thee-uh"~
Wow! Cool! I couldn't pronouce it till now!
YOU HAVE A NAME EVEN WITHOUT A NAME!
I couldn't pronouce my own name . . . :(
I'm going, now. I have another essay to write and I've not even finished this one...I'm f*cked. The, guys. *hugs*
Don't feel bad!
It's a pretty hard name to pronounce :P
Bye*
Bye*
Aw, okie, Luce!
~hugs~
It was nice seeing you! :]
YES! I HAVE A NAME WHEN I DON'T HAVE A NAME!
This is probably how names started . . . With people calling each other things like TastyStewOne coz someone makes tasty stew.
May the fours be with you BonesWithYellowBackgroundOne!
@BSOITHEA [whoo-hoo! I got the letters right without looking at it!]
~cough cough~
xD
Your name sounds cool! And it's just initials of a description!
THAT'S AWESOME
THANKS!
LOL, Bsoithea! I bet you're right!
That's just awesome.
Bih-SOY-thee-uh Luh-sitt-ire - high-el?
Bih-SOY-thee-uh Luz-ITT-irrre - high-el?
What does the second half stand for?
And... YES!
I see that pronunciation!
Coolio!
Lsittyww-hyel = LiqquidStuffInsideTheThingsYouWriteWith-HurtingYourEyesLight = Inkbright
I think, the strong syllable should be "LUH-sit-ire," though
*thinks* yeah. Strong LUH.
AH!
Yes, oh course!
THAT'S AWESOME!
You have a name even though you don't have a name...
~laughs~
Brilliant....
Thanks for helping me create it! :)
Bsoithea Lsittyww Hyel
You sound royal...
You should be Princess Bsoithea, or something ~grins~
~grins~
You're welcome!
It was FUN!
Nice idea skyril!
Your name sounds like a bird. A skyril:)
I might use the name Bsoithea in a story one day actually . . .
It WAS fun!
lol, you're right!
I've never thought it sounded like a bird before until you mentioned it :P
One of the main purposes of other people is different ideas.
I think. I just made that up! :)
Msd:(
Hey, I like that!
Good one!
And alright!
MSD TOO, Actully
Hiya, Zathract!
Mind if I call you Zath?
Pleasure to make your acquaintance!
~shakes hand~
~gives purple lollipop~
BY THE WAY, Bsoithea is Star Inkbright :D
Hi mish!
A load of people call him Mist. A few call him Zath. I often call him Rain . . . Don't ask.
And sometimes i call him Mish or Mished Potato just to be a crazy annoying inky person.
Awww, I have to go now!
See you guys later!
~hugs Bsoithea Lsittyww Hyel~
See you later 8]
~shakes Zath's hand again~
See you later too!
I know, I read the comments. Ink, you are mad.
*shakes hand and holds lollipop in the sky*
'Tis a sign!! ...Or not. *eats purple lollipop*
Sure, you can call me Zath or Mist or Rain or whatever. Wait, Rain isn't on my name anymore.... Oh well.
Hi, Lsittyww.
Bye Skyril!
Rain, my name ist pronouced "Bih-SOY-thee-uh LUH-sitt-irrre - high- el" and it stands for BrightShinyObjectInThatHugeExpanseAbove LiquidStuffInsideTheThingsYouWriteWith- HurtingYourEyesLight, which is how you would describe my names without using nouns.
May the fours be with you skyril!
Ah. You read. Right. *nods* I AM MAD!
@Bsoithea
Well, that's why we love you ;]
MAD = Meyhem And Destruction.
You love me for my meyhemanddestructionness?
:(
What about my IOUEness?
That too.
Back now, the train appeared suddenly...
Ah. Okay.
*shakes head*
Nix is going to kill something if Derek doesn't post soon...
IT'S ELEVEN PM ALREADY???
But it was only half nine a second ago!
*runs off and hides in cave* just in case nix appears suddenly like your train. I don't want to be the thing he kills.
I wouldn't want to be either...
Derek, you're going to lose a fan soon. Post it.
*is lying on front in cave*
The rock digging into me . . . It's uncomfy . . . And it's all damp and shady . . . And cold . . . *curls up into ball*
Distant.
Derek, you are not only going to lose a fan soon, your other funs are not going to like you as much, meaning you have no BIG fans. We'll fill the competition post.
*fans
Okay.
Think Robin may have already filled that...
Gtg. Bye!
May the fours be with you mish!
NO! 2129 comments there!
Msd
Star, I probably pronounce sehr very different to how you're supposed to pronounce it
I like celery
PASSING COMMENT:
I FINISHED ONE OF THEM. Now I am just going to rush the other one...Then to bed, I guess...Yayayay. Have I ever explained to you how much I hate essays? Because I hate them. A lot. So much, it ain't even funny.
*hugs anyone who reads this and vanishes, again*
Bye Luciana! Good luck!
Maybe you could do two versions of this book, an edited version for the little guys and an awesomely gory one for us older readers who can handle it. It might be more expensive I guess (I don't know how this kind of stuff works) but it would be worth it.
Also I want to know about Skulduggery's wife and child will there be any mention of them beyond what we already know?
Do you watch the BBC show Sherlock? I think you would like it.
HAPPY TUESDAY!!!
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