Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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Bye Vena!
*sighs* i wish i could fly
Bye Vena
Okay. 4 chapters, each just a rewrite of the Avatar last four episodes. I'm doing it, so meh
Okay, Nixiono
Don't like it, there's the door. You can tell it you don't like it
I...didn't say I didnt like it....
I'm just saying if you didn't, you could have a nice chat with the door. It doesn't like it, and would be happy to complain about me with anyone
AND IT'S MADE OF ALDER
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kctk454fuLo&ob=av2n
Please listen to it. And wait to the end! *laughs*
I will blow that door up...
Actually, it's half way, not the end...
Australian's rule with music
This song is amazing. I love it.
ONLY IF YOU WATCH A JAKE AND AMIR EPISODE!!!!
Hehehehehehehe.
Blow it UP!
I ALREADY HAVE!!!
WATCH ANOTHER!!!
Actually never mind, I can't watch it. It said it couldn't load the movie.
Nooooo!
I bet you'd enjoy the rap part...
That was a good song
I know!
I'm addicted to The Cat Empire now...
...Rap part?
Tell me what the songs called and by who
Sorry, back now.
Days Like These by The Cat Empire.
I'll be distant now.
Dinner bye!
Bye Eve
has anyone noticed how many plots run through the series. Like right now we have the darquesse plot, the church of the faceless plot, the kenny dunne plot and the Roarhaven changing the world plot. To be honest I'm not sure if they all form together or are separate
I've noticed. Never thought about them comming together...
Hi Vistar
HI just had time to post this so now i need to go bye
Bye Vistar
Ah, yes, hello. I've found some of my spare time. I had a heart transplant on Saturday, yes, scary, I know, but if you have common sense, you'll realise that I'm alive, as I am writing this comment, yes? :)
I thought so. And NO IM NOT BACK.
You had a heart transplant?!
Yep. I had chronic heart rejection, but they found out early, so they did a heart transplant and... bam.
Scary...
Wow...
Well HOW DO YOU THINK I FELT?
...You seem unstable. You should sleep...
And when I came home from the hospital, it had to be in a big tube thing. Because there's not as much oxygen in my lungs YET, the cold air in Canberra could have, well, frozen me. Even if I wrapped up really hard. It's because I have to breathe, and the oxygen that DOES enter is really cold and... yeah.. It's hard to explain.
...Hello?
I don't know what to say...
Because you're flooded with bewilderment that I've had a heart transplant or just that you don't know what to say?
Both...
And I'm busy with an assignment... *cough*
Both...
To the gods in the sky
There's one thing you can do
You can send us some sun
And we'll play you this tune
Because sitting in our room
Lying down with a scoob
And the sunshine
Through our window
It's days like these
That make us happy
Like a puppy getting lucky
With a Lassie
Hassle-free
Hours passing by
With the beat one two
Said it's days like these kicking back
Just doing what we do
Number one I'd find some
Loving in the sun
With someone that can make me
Growl and hum say "mmmm..."
A boom boom shack
And the beat that she throw at me
Knocking me flat
Number two
I'd cruise where the grass is smooth
And the sound of the sea
Is a dreamy melody
Snooze all afternoon
'Till the night time wake me
Cos shakedown soon
Number three
I'd be dancing like a monkey up a tree
Find sweet simplicity
By kissing my honey
Get funky like Bond
When he's played by Connery
And get crafty
Like Don Corleone
Four
Watching Oliver jam a little more
Remember the night when I saw
What I never never never seen before
Lavender wrestling a rich wild boar
It's days like these
That make us happy
Like a puppy getting lucky
With a Lassie
Hassle-free
Hours passing by
With the beat one two
Said it's days like these kicking back
Just doing what we do
---
Whack, peace, black
Wake up on the attack
Wrote myself fanning to the moon and back
Now it's evnin' and the suassages are f'yin' out back
I write my mum for this track
As the sky fade ta' black
Now I remember earlier in the day as I was swimmin' through the bay a bass player I know swam my way
He said "G'day, hey you wanna go see something S'nd'y? Starts at eight plays trough 'till sunrise the next day."
So nine o'clock sees me headin' out towards the tabba-nackle
Uncle Reggo fear bought me free outta my shackles
Uncle little Reggay, DJ, I salute ya, crackle crackle crackle crackular, devine, one our one hine, it was a spectactular night ahead
I met a Mexican called "One"
"There's a party on the hill, would you like to come?"
Yeah
"Then bring a bottle of rum."
Can't afford it, but I bought it
And then I sung:
It's nights like these when you know that you love life
Nights like these when you know that you're good fire
Nights like these when ya don't have to try
For the life is bingin' smiles from every girl walkin' by
I'm alive, I'm alive, I'm alive, I'm alive
And my eyes, wanna cry, coz the night, the the sky, is so high, and my life, is sublime, and it's mine
And it's time! (It is now time)
Woah,
It's nights like these when you know that you love life
Nights like these when you know that you're good fire
Nights like these when ya laugh until you cry
Nights like these when I'm drowning and you're high [I feel like life's worth living]
Nights like these when you know that you love life [I feel like life's worth living]
Nights like these when you know that you're good fire [I feel like life's worth living]
Nights like these when you laugh until you cry [I feel like life's worth living]
That's all the love I'm giving
---
It's days like these
That make us happy
Like a puppy getting lucky
With a Lassie
Hassle-free
Hours passing by
With the beat one two
Said it's days like these kicking back
Just doing what we do
---
And dirty hands
I like them see
They make the music that we play
Sound oh so sweet
And my mother always made me eat broccoli
And now look at me
I'm as strong as can be
So put some spice in my sauce
Honey in my tea
An ace up my sleeve
And a slinky plan b
And most importantly
My mad family
They named me lucky
And for that I'll sing about
Days like these
---
[Solo]
Wrote all of that myself...
Except that the bridge is slightly different to the link I put up before because there are two different versions.
So talkative...I can't even keep up anymore.
I'm reading, sorry
*shrugs*
*laughs because self can now recite the rap part to the song without lyrics*
Back!
Hi Eve
Hi, Eve!
Hi!
Dinner, bye!
Bye Mist
Bye Mist!
i'll be back in about 15 minutes
Bye!
Bye Nix!
Back!
Wait, no, I'll be back in ten. Sorry.
*vanishes again*
Bye mist
Back
Distant until I finish my homework
Purple, yellow...
Green, blue.
Okay. Now I have to go. Again. Not sure when I'll be back.
Bye!
A female sheep is called a ewe!
Bye Mist!
Sorry, computer messed up
S'alright
I was far to busy DOING MY HOMEWORK to notice
So yeah
Dinner Bye!
Bye Nix!
changed my photo! Getting seriously bored so just posted something
Hi vivstar!
Hi Nix!
My friend in the newspaper!
Hi Gab
Hi Gab!
Hi People
Okay I'm going now...
Bye people.
Bye Gab
Bye Gab
*throws an oven at Nix*
Excuse me while I pack my homework away
(brb)
Now you guys talk.
:(
Bye.
*turns oven to golf ball*
Okay
I was reading Gab, don't blaim me. I talk when other talk. If you wanted me to talk, you should have started a conversation
Actually, I was saying BRB in an awesome way
That's hardly talking
(back)
WB
Um...
BLAME
Um...
I DON'T CARE.
And I knew that as soon as I hit publish. But alas, it was too late
Hate it when that happens.
It always happens to me
It happens MORE to ME, Bender.
Sure it does
*laughs*
What so funny?
*is deadly serious*
Nothing at all.
*laughs my head off*
nothing at all
*laughs more*
NOTHING IS FUNNY!!!!
*is watching 82 comedy shows*
*explodes*
Hot dogs
*bursts out laughing*
HOT DOGS!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
*bangs fist on table*
That is mahogany!
(hunger games)
Who said that when...?
Effie on the train in the movie after Katniss stabed the table with a knife
*sobs*
No more Mockingjay. No more Hunger Games. Sad face.
Ah yes, now I remember.
"How the Hulk did you end up with the doomsday device?"
*245th moment of egotism*
What Mist?
Did you finish?
DON'T SAY ANYTHING!!
"Fry! Was this an idiotic trick to get me and Lars back together?"
"Quite idiotic."
Awwww. That's probably the sweetest part in Futurama ever.
...
Wimmy wam wim wozzle!
What are you-
No, never mind. I don't want to know
Yes you do!
I'm watching FUTURAMA!!! Wooh!
I didn't, but thanks for telling me
1st
I dedicate this page to Futurama!!!!
Wimmy wam wim wozzle!
Im walkin on sunshine! Wooooooah!
No you're not. It's night
Not here.....
That's what makes it so special!
...Huh?
Wait, that might not be the one Mist was talking about...
Hi Vleadr who isn't here
What Eve?
Oh, wait, no, that's the one.
No, I meant it isnt night HERE....
And Lord Wolfy? Seriously?
The song he was talking about on the other page.
I never said Lord Wolfy...
Lord Wolfy!!!
ah. No. Of course. What? Never mind
Stop putting up the same comment!
...We get it, dude.
OKAY....
Okay, cool song. But, like, no offende, but Eminem does way better rapping.
He does awesome on-the-spot rapping.
That just sucks. It posted my comment THREE TIMES.
And you did call me Lord Wolfy. On my blog. It was humiliating.
Oh. Well...
You know you could have deleted it if you wanted? And Lord Wolfy isn't that bad a name
*thinks of name they give me*
I swear I didnt post it three times....
And please dont call me that Eve.
I didn't. It was merely an exclamation of randomness.
*decides not to talk about the subject*
Smart move Mist
I like celery
Sooo....
Whats new?
I like celery
That's not new Eve
I'm slightly disappointed in Derek, I have a test on Thursday even though we just started the topic... wow, not much
Damn straight it's not new. I liked celery before it was cool.
A test? What for? Pin the tail on the makeshift donkey?
It wasnt about Vlaedr, Nix...
I don't know what I'm saying Mist, so please don't take whatever i type to seriously
History. I like history, but we just started, so i hardly know anything about the topic
I am extremely sick.
Coughing out my lungs and that sort of thing....
Oh and dont forget ear infection.
History. Ugh. That's all I have to say.
My lil bro had an ear infection...everyone had to stand a meter away from his ear. He did too.
Sorry about that Vlaedr
Eve, I'm not going to dignify that with a response
I leave everyone speechless is what you're trying to say.
No Eve, what I'm trying to say is that the sentecne wasn't worth my response
Speechless.... Or just coughed out his lungs.... Either way....
And that misspelt word isn't worth my response either. *sips tea*
My lungs still remain pre-cough out, thank you
I know it isn't. That's why I put it there
You know, sometimes I do it to annoying you
*grins*
*narrows eyes* Well, it's working, although id never admit to that.
No Eve. You're much to smart to admit to something like that. It's not like you said "Well, it's working" at anytime
I'm deciding not to point out that that is incredibly annoying.
This conversation lacks.....
...a lot.....
I am incredably annoying
Lordy, I think it lacks sanity and reason
Hehe. Lordy.
*acts as though self said nothing*
Sanity? Reason? Psh. Who needs it? Armadillo away!
*lalalalala*
Sorry, no offense. I'll just call you Vleadr. But I always forget how to spell it...
Im tempted to call you Lord Vlodmort.
*Vloldemort
Fwoooooosh!
Whoosh!
Can I call you Vader instead?
Dear Mr Landy
Have you considered going on Twitter? It would be really awesome if you were. It's like blogging but less tiring and you will be constantly bombarding the world with your opinion. :)Plus: tons of followers!
Or if you are and you don't want weird fans (hi!) following you then never mind, I understand.
Dom
Not Voldemort, I have a long, nice muzzle.
Not Vader, I can breathe perfectly fine.
Vlaedr. Just Vlaedr.
Is it pronounced
Vlay-der?
Yes. Yes it is.
Good. I was worried it was going to have some crazy pronunciation. Like when Breeze said her name was pronounced
Breez
What is with that? Seriously.
Spelling is always a funny thing.
Especially when your mispronounce a common name wrong. Right in front of that person.
I just avoid addressing them by their name so I don't mispronounce it. EVER.
Night.
Bye Mist
I'm going to go for a while as well
Bye!
Bye Mist
Bye Nix
AND ONCE AGAIN I AM THE ONLY GUY.
Back. That was quick
I'm going to bed soon though
WB nix of Nothing
Gtg I'll probably be back soon though
Bye!
Bye Eve
Msd
Yep, you came back
Yep, I did. And I slipped on a shoe.
The poor shoe
The poor shoe rack. I friggin knocked it over coz it was balancing on another shoe. It was quite embarrassing.
The poor shoessss
Indeed. And when I say embarrassing, I mean embarrassing for the shoes, of course. They should know not to sit in the middle of a walking space. Appalling behavior.
They're only young Eve
Yes, but we train our shoes like soldiers.
I don't. I let them teach themselves. They get very street wise that way.
How do you punish them then?
They get beat up by the other shoes. I don't go near them, they don't bother me. I hardly own them
So you walk around barefoot most of the time?
I wear them when i wear them, when i want to. The universe is comprissed of many fish tails
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