Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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Aww, I have to go, guys!
Bye, Star and Suede [have you noticed all our names start with S?]
~hugs~
~waves madly~
Hopefully see you guys soon!!!!!!
I've never actually talked to dragona . . . Buti've seen stuff he's said.
I have a People I Really Don't Like List. There are three people on it. He's one of them. I prefer not to use words like hate so i'll say i strongly dislike Dragona.
Bye Skyril!!!! *hugs*
*walks back in with a chicken burger* Hi Zath!
I have a long list of people I don't like. Most of them think im friends with them irl. Just to warn you, I hold grudges really bad and I'm good at pretending to be friendly. I wouldn't go as far as 2 faced though.
Msy the fours be with you robin!
Hi rain!
I used to think dragona was a girl too!
I am one of those people who is very good at forgiving. I can and have cometely forgiven a person who was totally horrible to me, my friends and other people in the past, and has wrecked over a year of my life. Now . . . I talk to her on the bus and i'd comsidor her a sort-of-half-friend. I like her now. She's nice. But my point IS, i still strongly dislike dragona even with my amazing forgiving powers.
*completely
YOU ONLY HAVE 3 PEOPLE YOU DON'T LIKE!!! How is that possible! Even if you forgive them surely you don't forget?! How is it possible to erase something that easily!
*jumps in*
Hi Ink and Willow!
*is waiting for Derek to announce the winners*
I hope Eve gets it, Eve had better get it...
Hi Robin!! Long time no see!! *hugs*
I think that if i was a demigod from percy jackson, my forgivingness would be my fatal flaw. It's already fataled me in the past. I think it's better to be a grudge-holding person.
What days he announcing the winners Zath??
Oooh people! YAY *claps*
TOOOODAY!
Mondy for him.
Hi Robin.
Winners for what?
Are you sure Star? I Despise sooo many people. Isn't it better to have more than 3 people that you trust?
I only trust 3 people. That's not many...
Winners for the aussie comp to go backstage with Derek.
I hope Eve or You or Sparky wins!! For Derek's sake.
Zath, do you have an Australian accent??????
Hi robin!
I do forget rim. I forget what people've done in the past without meaning to and just judge them on the last year or so.
But also, i forgive people coz i can emparhise with them. Think i understand why, exactly, they thought it was okay to do this, that, and the otjer. I put a lot of things down to messing around and having fun, but then taking it too far and not realising that for other people it isn't a game.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY SPARKY!
I don't care if you aren't on right now, I hope you have the best fourteenth birthday that anyone had had in all of history!
Happy Birthday!
*nods* Good luck! When's he announcing, today? It's the Monday 7th at 22:50 here.
Depends what you mean. Yes, but no one really as the seriotype aussie accents with the "G'day mate" and such.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SPARKY!
It's Sparky's birthday? Happy Birthday!
I mean different to my English accent. Ever seen Downton Abbey? That's pretty much how one of my friends speaks.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SPARKY!!!!!!!!!!
I know what you mean zath! There seems to be this american assumption that english people say guv'nor! It's a loada rubbish! I've never heard anyone english say that!
Star - you ever been to the East End of London? *grins*
I've said it but it didn't feel right without the cockney tone.
I usually trust people unless i have a good reason not to.
Yeah, stereotypes are annoying. Some people think we have kangaroos in our backyards....
You do don't you Zath? *frowns*
I kid...
Dunno. I've been to londen. Don't ask me WHERE in londen.
*sighs* okay. Some english people say guv'nor. BUT THE VAST MAJORITY DON'T.
Lol! I am partial to the odd scone and jam though.
Are you from London then Robin?
Rim, I just listened to that email XD
"... but nobody will hear this because Rim doesn't have any friends"
That made me laugh really hard :D
Hilarious, Robin.
Yea. "It is quite ... Delightful."
Are we talking about stereotypes? I hate stereotypes.
Just so you know, anytime someone says something stereotypical about the UK or Australia or anywhere else I make sure they stop immediately...
*bows for Zath* thanks
No, I'm not from London - my dad is.
They don't say it anymore Star, you're quite right only some cocky little brats who're trying to be clever say it now.
I think we speak The normal Chav dialect here in Derby.
Thanks, Val.
You're welcome. And once I tell someone to stop they won't start again because everyone is terrified of me.
Kangeroos in your back yards?
*snorts* that just sounds stupid.
I am strongly againat sterotypes. Whenever i tell people i live in my village, nearly all of them assume i'm posh and it REALLY irritates me. Most of them people in the village down the hill probably have bigger houses than i do coz there are lots of big houses there and houses in my village are more expensive coz of our outstanding primary school so people who live in my village have to buy smaller houses to live here than if they were living elsewhere!
If that makes sense.
I'm Going now. Bye!!! *hugs*
*is ever so slightly confused with Star's comment*
*snorts* Yeah right Val
Bye Rim!
Bye Rim
Thank you very much val.
Would you mind telling everyone in yorkshire that hull (nearby city) is a good place (people usually think it's crap) and that not everyone in swanland (my village) is posh?
May the fours be with you rim!
Okay. In simple terms, I AM NOT POSH but people tend to think i am when i tell them the name of my village.
Bye Rim.
Going distant now.
We don't even have any swans in swanland. A pond and ducks, but no swans.
Apparently, there were two swans, but one got ryn over by a car and the other one (you know they mate for life?) pined away.
I'm gonna go byebye!
People actually are scared of me, Robin. You should see my English class. That's just funny, because all of the guys try their best to stay as far away from me as possible because of the time where I stabbed someone in the back of the neck with a fork so hard they started bleeding.
Bye bye Robin
May the fours be with you robin!
*has switched keypad to german mode*
The z and the y have switched plaves. Like on our old german keyboard in the attic.
I better go too . . . School tomorrow . . . Bye . . . Fours be with you all.
RAH! Why havent they announced it yet?!!!
Hi Eve!
Derek's probably busy.
I don't know
What would Derek be busy with right now? It's 11:30 for him. He should be able to post.
Hi Mist!
But who said Derek's choosing? It said the JUDGE'S decision will be final. Unless Derek is a judge...
Well Derek has to announce the winners.
Gtg. Bye.
Bye mist
Bye Mist
*looks outside* Oooh, Ember just got home. Yay!
I'm gonna go, bye!
Oh man, i feel terrible now. HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRO! HAVE AN AWESOME DAY AND EAT CHOCOLATE!!!!
Hello?
hi
.....the winners aren't going to be announced....
COME ON! ANNOUNCE IT ALREADY!
Oh, Hi Eve
No later then the 7th... Ha
Hi Nix
I looked on the site, looked at another competition. The winners were supposed to be announced last month. Something tells me they won't be announcing them at all
You know, you're really just repeating yourelf with the email and this
I feel repetitive today
I feel repetitive today
I feel angry
I feel outraged
Derek, I'm simply disappointed. I know it might by actaully run by Harper Collins, but this is important to us. We should know if we didn't or did win, not just wait after it's finished. I'm disappointed
hi guy's i'm back!
*eats orange*
vena is coil.HA (its a joke)
HELLO!
I'M going to watch friends now bye!
Bye Vena
bye nix this is my friend izzy now
Izzy? Okay then...
I've only got a few mins so HI!!!!!!!!!!
Bye vena
Derek, have mercy!
Hi Izzy!
Hi Lynxia!
Hi Lynxia
As you can tell, I'm not in a good mood
Oh wait. Nope, I gotta go again.
Bye.
(Go do the What If? !)
Bye Lynxia
Derek, you have no idea how disappointed I am. Let me put it this way, if you were any other author, I would stop reading your books. Yours are just to addictive. But I love reading, and that is the worst thing i can think of. You're on thin ice with me from now on Derek. What did you say in an interview once? We're more believeing and less critical, but once you lose us, we're gone
Tread carefully
hi i am izzy
Bye Lynxia!
Derek, you let my fellow EIOUEMGG down. I am ashamed of you.
Hi people.
no i am not i am vena hahahah
Oh nix, you know that's not true.
hi ink how are you
Hi izzy!
Hi Startrek!
so,does any one here watch friends?
I am not too good. It's school soon and derek let his EIOUEMGG down.
Hi Star
Eve, you have no idea how angry I am at the moment. If it was any other series, I would at least stop buying it
I watch friends sometimes
No ve- er, izzy. Sorry.
Eve, i think it's amazig how you keep finding new star-thingys for me. I'd run out after about three!
its a cool program
I have dance sport tomorrow.Its so
auckward because the boys have to choose the girls for patners
Niiiiiiiiix. NIIIIIIIX. Niiiiiiix. NiiiiiiiiIIIIx. NIIIIIiiiix.
(all in different tones*
I am feeling powerfull!
*uses mind bolt to send things flying
about*
one question: my friend has a own blog since a few weeks. And she's not really into it yet, but she will be. So maybe you could follow it...
By the way, she's german like me, so her english isn't always that good (mine neither, as you may have noticed)... And she likes Skulduggery too. So if you want to follow her: here's the link:http://lunaslittleworld.blogspot.de
Star, I am so amazing you shan't even bother trying to live up to my standard.
Kidding, you're awesome.
hi eve!
*uses mind bolts to send eve a cup cake*
Okay, I want to write something, but i'm not going to write something i normally write. just ideas that I've rejected and I'm going to try out. Some I rejected because they are just weird, some stupid, some no one will read, some make no sense...
Avatar Fan-Fic (the TV series, not the movie)
Secrets of the Immortal Nicholas Flammel Fan-fic
That's it. Two things i can think of. Make a choice
*frowns* ANOTHER one of my vomments just disappeared. This is looking worrying.
I am about to active my world domination plans.So watch out!
*cackles with evil laughter*
Boom!
Av-! Oh, right...
Eh. I have no idea who Nicholas Flannel is so Avatar.
*comments
YAY! I'M AWESOME!
*looks at nix* did you know that name 'star' means 'one who cannot make descision'?
Kidding. It doesn't. But if it did it'd suit me well.
*sighs*
For some reason I'm choosing the Avatar. It used to be my favourite series, so i'm going to try a fan-fic
mwhaahaaahaha
Hi Mist!
Hi Mist
Nicholas flamel from HP. He has his own series. And i haven't read it.
I'm really bad with the names though, and with this one... I'll give it a shot
Hi mished potato.
The series is really good. But if you haven't read it, i can't do it
i have loads of home work
boohooo
Goldengoddammit, school, gtg, bye. May the fours be with you all.
Bye Star
hi mist :)
bye star
oh, btw, if any of you heard of the sequel to Avatar, the mini-series, i'm going on like that never happens.
Hi...Izz...y...
*is desperately trying to suppress memories of another Izzy*
It's just Vena
And hi Eve! And Nix!
i am watching the simpsons now
It is?!
Excellent!
*no longer has to think about Izzy*
I'm writing Nix and Mist now! Well, editing...
You know, i actually came up with three Avatar fan-fics when i was younger, all in my head. But which one, i don't remeber it all, and the names...
I changed my mind, I'm not doing it. But i need something action packed to take my mind of it...
I would ask who Izzy is, but I doubt you'd answer.
this is auckward.my friend is called izzy and she was at my house because we are neghibors.i was wacthing friends and she was on my laptop.
then I came back and she went home.my name is samantha
I need to write something action packed, and not at all related to SP
sorry about spelling
I'm looking at all my books for an idea... but nothing comes to mind...
hi nixion! how are you!
What about a 39 CLUES fanfic!
Oh god...
What about a PJ fanfic?
*curls up against the tree*
No I wouldn't answer...
i am writing a book with my friends
about face inhaling zombies.
I considered both of those, actually Eve. But 39 isn't action packed enough, and PJ is just to funny for me at the moment. I'm not in the mood to think up those sort of jokes
Thought so
What about a Lord of the Rings fanfic?!!!!
:D
you should write a fourth hunger games!
A single scene from Avatar... i wouldn't have to bother with an introduction...
I'm going to write that scene at the end, with the comet. That whole scene, i'm writing it
What about...no, 100 cupboards confused me...
Er... Does it have to be a fan fic or just any random story idea?
yeah man!
*flys to lake on pet dragon ione*
who will duel me!
*pulls out awesome sword*
Never watched or read Lord of the Rings, and I'm already doing that Vena. First chapters here, bellow the Harry Potter thing
http://readthismortals.blogspot.com.au/
Hi Lynxia!
Hi Lynxia
And random story idea, as long as it has nothing to do with SP. Nothing in the same universe, i just don't feel like it
um,just tell me if i'm irritating anyone
YOU HAVEN'T WATCHED TGE LORD IF TGE RINGS?!!!!
*faints*
My...precious...GOLLUM! GOLLUM!
Erm... I'm all out of ideas for new stories. All of my ideas went into finishing One For You and coming up with Fate and Rogue. Sorry. :(
You could do an Artemis Fowl fan fic. That would be interesting. I'm only on Opal Deception though.
who will duel me?
*asks while laying on couch watching simpsons*
Lord of the Rings is amazing!!!!!!!
They're taking the Hobbits to Isenguard!
Artemis Fowlmis hard though. You've got to get the genius and the humour balenced. I wouldn't manage it
Bye Lynxia!
I call him Smeegle mostly.
I love the Hobbits!! I love the Shire!
write a fan fiction on maximum ride
go the lord of the rings!
WRITE A HORROR ABOUT THAT DREAM I HAD!
It's so senseful.
huh.meh.derp.
Smegaol: Look master! Look what smart Smegaol finds! *holds dead rabbit in hands*
Sam: You're going to make him sick! *takes the rabbit*
Smegaol: No!
Sam: There's only one way to cook rabbit! *dumps it in stew*
Smegaol: Aaaaaagh! Nooooooo...! What's he doing?! Stupid fat hobbit! He ruins it!
Smegaol: What's to ruin? There's barely any meat on 'em.
Smegaol: Uuuuurgh...
Sam: Not even you couldn't have eaten that anyway. You have to COOK the rabbit first.
Smegaol: No Smegaol doesn't!
Sam: It'd be better! A nice stew with a hunk of rabbit. And a side of nice, juicy 'tators.
Smegaol: ...What's "taters"? Precious!
Sam: PO-TA-TOES? Like chips?!
Smegaol: Eeeeeergh!!
Sam: Come on, not even you could resist that!
Smegaol: Yes we could!
Sam: *shakes head and goes back to stirring the stew*
Smegaol: *crawls up to him* You give it to us, raaaaaaaw! And wwrrrrriggling! *snaps another dead rabbit in half and runs off with it*
Sam: ...Disgusting creature...
ACTION PACKED! Anyway, if you look, you'll see i made a decition ages ago
*Sam on 6th line, not Smegaol.
*uses mind bolts to drag nix and eve to lake* now we fight.*draws sword*
*uses mind bolts to drag nix and eve to lake* now we fight.*draws sword*
...Uh...
No thanks, I don't eat mind bolts.
*smeagol
I feel so hypocritical today.
Sorry, any fighting i do is related to Nix, who is my character, who is in the same world as SP, which I am not in the mood for
Sorry
i'm back guys!
whoop whoop!
brb
K nix
*kay
i really wanna fight! *swings sword around dangourusly* please someone.*sends mind bolt to everyone who is reading this*fight!
come on guys!
Yeah, well, you can fight this armadillo. *gives vena the armadillo*
No. Not in the mood. Sorry
come on!
*sizes up the armadillo* this will be a breaze *armadillo shoots lazers from its eyes* eve,you could have warned me!
*shrugs* Armadillos are deadly.
*dives out of the way and comes up rolling* its ON armadillo.*slashes with sword and kills it*well,that was easy
oh well,bye people
Always what you least expect
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