Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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«Oldest ‹Older 2601 – 2800 of 4870 Newer› Newest»Oh right. You haven't finished Mockingjay yet have you.
No. To me bad memories are bad but you can't do a thing to get rid of them so you have to live with them and try and find the silver lining.
What the hell are you all talking about?
Oh. *relaxes*
Heaps of crap happens to me. Or maybe some people feel it more than others do.
When something bad happens to me, though, it's pretty bad, so everything else mostly fades when something happens.
Unless it isn't very bad. Then they don't fade.
Am I making sense? No I'm not. Excellent. *does the Mr. Burns thing*
I have trouble finding a silver lining
I'm talking about Dr Syoning's Slaughterhouse of Horrors!
Me too. Silver linings are stuff I can only dream of.
Not yet. I'm close though!
*reads the next part of Mockingjay*
*stares at the page*
*slams it shut*
Yep, no, Finnick's all well and good.
lol! Smosh are doing Aussie accents!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://www.smosh.com/videos/bacon-milkshakes-lunchtime-smosh
Skip ahead to $ mins 55 ish!
Yup, you read it Zath.
Those are pretty bad Australian accents
SLAUGHTERHOUSE!!!
I know. God, mine is better and mine makes people's ear drums pop.
...BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
AHAHAHAHAH!
HAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAH!
BWAHAHAHA!
GAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!
...
HAHAHAHAHA!
*sags* Everyone tells me how much I say 'um' when I talked to a group or in front of a group. I don't even know I'm doing it!
...Zath?
Smosh is amazing! I'm watching the Lunchtime w/ Smosh playlist. It's so funny but Mailtime is better.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SU1HcKfDUag
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
DELETE THAT COMMENT!
And i don't even think that's right... i dunno. i haven't read it in ages
*is still laughing irl*
That's...AHAHAHAHA!
Watch this on Youtube:
Llamas with hats! Funny as hell! It's awesome!
Yeah, I need to follow some more blogs. Anyone want an extra member?
MEEEEEEE!
myuselessshortstories.blogspot.com.au
!!!!!
Finished! The reason I've been so distant is because I've been writing some of Rogue. You guys wanna read it?
And THIS TOO!!!
mistandnixseries.bogspot.com.au
I do, Lynxia!
Wait, is it deleted yet?
Yeah! I'd love to read it Lynxia
I gotta go. Ill be back in a few mins.
Bye Harpie.
OK, brb while I type.
is anyone there?
hellllloooooo
Hey Vene
K... what do i call you?!
*Vena
I'm so lonly :( its just me and my bad spelling
Oh, never mind me. I don't exist
oh hi nixion sorry bout the lonly thingymabob
Or me. Hi, Vena.
i'm a pixie actually and were'r invisible
i'm feeling oddish tonight,please ignore my weird behaviour and spelling and hi zathract
If you think you're odd, stay here for half an hour. Careful, we're contagous
And not odd as much as insane!
does anyone elsees laptop/comp/thingy
do this thing where u post then it loads then u scroll down and see what people have written?
Sometimes. Most of the time
so have u entered the comp?
i realllllyyyyyy want to meet derek landy.it would be so cool
Yep. It's reveled today...
DINN
ER
MY
Bye Eve
Lily walked to her locker.
God, she hated school. She checked her time table. She didn't have and technology lessons today but she did have double computing so that was something to look forward to.
The form bell rang.
Crap, she was late.
She grabbed her English book and ran to the Art room that was her form room.
She got there just as Mr. Harper was about to close the door.
"In." he barked and slammed the door.
The mutual hatred was strong. He hated technology wizz kids and she hated arty farty idiots. He took all the opportunities he could to give her detention but technically, she wasn't late so he had been cheated out of his fun.
She sat down at the end of the table in the corner and pulled out her phone while he was taking the register.
She quickly loaded the Hazard homepage and checked the leader board. There she was. Alien at the very top. Over six billion kills and behind her was Ski Man with five billion and ninety six thousand. She would have to keep an eye on him.
She looked up as sir finished the register and saw Mark looking at her but he quickly turned away.
He had moved to Newcastle from Long Island Sound two months ago and tried constantly to catch her eye. He was also a techy like herself but he used it to impress not to disrupt.
She found it all incredibly annoying.
I f he was in Hazard... If only, she would show him who the tech nut was round here.
Not much but some.
LALALAlaalLALALALALALALALALALALALALLA.As i said weird.LOLCATS!
Hi Vena. Bye Eve!
*double computing tomorrow
Hi lynixa.how are u?
That's really good Lynxia. Reminds me of an idea I'm working on...
I've come up with five more ideas over the weekend. I never going to have time for them all
That's great, Lynxia!
For some reason I really like school-scene stories...
Byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyye, Eeeeeeeeeeeeve!
. are overated
Speaking of which, Nix and Mist, Nix?
Hi Vena. I'm good. How are you?
(This is the first time we've met, is it not?)
*is now humming Never Forget by Two Steps From Hell*
"."'s have a name, ya know?
don't go everyone!
I LOVE TWO STEPS FROM HELL!!!!
Black Blade is my favourite!
Mist, i'm really not feeling well, and I've got just a little mor ehomework. I'll be done by tonight though
That's fine, take as much time as you need.
Just wondering.
What happened?
Nothing, i'm just not feeling well
*can barely move fingers to type*
So cold...That is another awesome song, but I actually meant it this time...
Fair enough...
Not leaving... *gives Nix, Lynxia and Mist weird looks*
*gives Nix a bottle of tomato sauce*
*gives Lynxia a trident*
*gives Mist a pat on the head*
*is very confused*
*walks in opposite direction*
i'm good thanks lynixa and sorry about blurting random things at random timeslike please don't everyone ,its what i do.
No, Invincible or Moving Mountains! We did a medley once at regional... It was fun!
Maybe you like school scenes because we can relate to them? I based Mr. Harper on one of my least fave teachers. He's a prick.
What Eve?
My worst teachers are pure evil. Three of the worst have to be related to some sort of deamon
me and my friends are gonna make a movie about face inhaling zombies.
*looks at trident* Thanks Eve. *shadows flow on to trident and it coats in silver* Silver is more my colour.
Not bronze but bronze is better than gold. No idea why. It just is.
No! BLAAAACK BLAAAADE!
*laughs as self gets patted*
*watches Eve walk away*
I don't really like To Glory or Dragon Rider.
Jonny's in the bathroom,
Jonny's in the bathroom,
Getting his fix today!
Jonny's in the bathroom,
Have you ever been him?
Throwing his life away...
Nothing. It's just....
I feel....
Not myself today.
*bites lip*
*turns around* Wbat would you say if I told you I was a pear?
Gtg bye!
I would say a pair of what.
Bye Eve! *hugs*
If you were a pear? I'd say where's the other Eve?
Gte it? Cause a pair... two Eve's...
*Hagrid bursts into her room*
Your a lizard vena
I'm,i'm a what?
A lizard
I can't be,i'm just plain vena
Have you ever done something lizard like,like having your legs drop off then grow back?
*vena opens window and flyes away*
Bye Eve
I would nod and then sit under a tree, wondering what to do with my life.
Bye, Eve!
*looks at Lynxia*
Okay... that was very alike
i made a few mistakes in that
Great minds think alike. Or deranged ones. *smiles*
i am feeling left out!
Poor you Vena! *huggies*
Here
*give Vena a flying car and a spoon*
also i'm a,a,I'M A TABLE!
You're a table? Well I'm a chair!
*Vena flying in car*
*chucks her spoon at nemesis*
hahahah
Yay!
NEMESIS!!!! (Not Little Pete, the song by Two Steps From hell.)
no,really,i'm a table!actually i'm ballon.
Weird. I posted that ^^ before seeing your comment Vena. I'm getting creeped out! STOP PROBING MY MIND! *grabs Foaly's tin foil hat and put it on*
Lynxia, somehow you are subconciously telling everyone your ideas using telepathy
my school is having battle of the bands and i'm not in a band!
*gives lynixa a hairbrush*
*glares at nixion for no reason at all*
No. You are all probing my mind! Especially you! *points at tree* And you two *points at rock and lake* are helping him and you and Vena are the probes! AAAGGGRRRHHHHHH!!!!!
Hello Hello
is anyone home?
Hello Hello
just pick up the phone.
I am supreme at mind reading by the by
Hi Gab
Vena... glaring isn't sharing
Hi people.
Hi Gab. I'm having a meltdown... Again!
*sits under tree shaking*
hi gabriel
*grins scarily at gabriel*
Hi Gab1 I'm having a meltdown... Again!
*sits under tree shaking*
You okay Lynxia?
Okay..okay..calm down people
*sigh*
No. No I'm not. I've had no breakfast. Was up the whole night reading and am having a lack of sugar. I'm not OK. And you're probing my mind! Would I be OK?
nixion i'm sorry for glaring at u
*mutters under breath,i'll glare at who ever i like*
I'm not proping as much as skiming through it
And I'm listening to very melodramatic music which is setting me on edge.
*glares at Vena*
I AM MASTER OF WAR AND SUMPREME RULER OF CREAM!
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!
lynixa,don't worry i won't ever probe minds again.In this lifetime.mwhaaaaa
GET OUT! OUT OUT OUT!!!!!
nixion do u watch doc who?
Fine
*reluctently leaves Lynxias mind*
I'd but a lock on that, btw
No, never seen an episode of Dr. Who
*is now over shouting phase*
*falls in lake and floats on back*
*in side lynixa's head*
Now what do we have here...
boys,boys,clothes,boys.Ahh,here we go
world domination
*looks up from lake*
I'm gonna get you Nix. And when I do I will pull your brain out through your nose. Caprende?
you guys are crazy../
Nose? Don't I at least get through my ears?
i just watched a really scary episode
Clothes? that's BS. Boys? Only if you mean stringing up Callum and boiling him alive. World domination? HELL YES!
Gab, you can't tell me you just got that
KILL CALLUM!
And I right here, you know...
Piccolo: Okay Gohan! It's time to kick some Saiyan ass!
...
Piccolo: You're still there, aren't you...?
Kami: I'm just so lonely...
Piccolo: GET OUTTA MY HEAD!!!
gab,no one is crazyer then me the leader of crap spelling and sparows
*gets out of lake and runs at Nix* I AM gonna get your brain and poke it! SEE HOW YOU LIKE IT!
* charges to Invincible*
Yes I just got that now.
*stops 2 feet from Nix and looks at Gab*
Only now? OMGG! O_O
crazy....
Um...
*turns into Lord Vile*
And Vena, my spelling died in the Personality War. Killed by... i think it was Pickled Onions?
Lord Vile? Please. *eyes glint silver*
You think you can take me? You're probably right
*shaow walks away*
*back inside lynixa's mind*
World domination plans.lets see,no,nope,maybe...nope.finally.world domination plan j.relase the face inhaling zombies,become queen,eat jelly yhadyhadayhada.i'll be taking this
*leaves lynixa's mind with file
*follows Nix* You can't run. And you can't hide. And yes, I can take you.
*turns into Derek Landy*
You can't win
*pulls out bow and arrow and aims at Vena* I said stay out of my head so - STAY OUT OF MY F*CKING HEAD OR I WILL HURT YOU!
Of course I can Nix. I'm me!
*turns into lizard*
oh man,hagrid was right!
omg...
"FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
But now I'm Derek Landy
Actually
*turns back into Nixion*
You can't win, so i'll give you the smallest of chances
I don't care. You're still you at heart. And I can see what remains of your soul and it will be mine. *evil grin*
lynixa,lynixa,lynixa.when will u learn.I AM YOUR HEAD.
What remains of it
Lynxia, did i ever tell you how i got these scars
*blows up universe 27*
JOKES
You are NOT my head. My head is mine and I shall not have it compromised by you or anyone else!
UM hello where did everyone go?
I'm in the destroying mood right now
Next page Vena
ok,ok.
*sighing,shoots file back into lynixas mind*
so,ima going to go to sleep now
*ties self to the tree*
*makes sure self can't escape*
*tries to escape*
wertyuicfb whoa i'm tired
Bye Vena. *locks mind and sits by lake with feet in the water*
Bye Vena
*repairs universe 27*
I felt sorry for them
HAHAHAHA IT'S ALMOST DONE.
On the violence topic...
Some people can be reall wierd about that kind of thing.
For example, my friend is allowed to watch the Twilight movies, and is not allowed to see the Hunger Games or the last few Harry Potters. Peoples view differ, I guess.
Me? I'm glad you asked. ONWARD WITH THE BLOOD, THE GORE AND NYE!
*is now listening to Exodus* This is a kick ass song.
huh
You said you were going to sleep.
i'm still here for a short time only though
And Myth...
Get into New Zealand's Got Talent.
Cause you, mate, have talent. :D
i am but only when *falls asleep on key board* d7777777777 f BDDJJJCJDCJCCHScdtsbgasdfghjedssssssssssssssssdsds i am forced to
OK. *is now re-writing the finale of One For You to Exodus* Much better. Much moire dramatic to music. I love the sub plot which is kind of the main plot but nobody's noticed. X)
hi molly
*laughs* KEYBOARD FACE!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm writing a book.its a picture book
omgg... Griffindor has past Slytherin in pottermore...
Kia ora!
Lynxia... it never happened
tell me if i'm not making sensing
Oh crap! *goes top Pottermore and starts duelling Huffs* Take that you little badger! FEAR THE SNAKE!!! Now I'm duelling, writing and blogging.
Pictures...
*Drools over Fang*
Hehe, I love Maximum Ride. Less than Skulduggery and co, of course.
What never happened?
the last ten years have been a dream!
Keyboard face
what?
no.
ravenclaw has to win.
go maximum ride!
I am Iggy! I'm OK at cooking and mu=y name would have been James if I was a boy so therefore, in Tamara's mind, I am Iggy.
urghhh a blugghrry
Push your care,
Push your burdens aside,
Erase everything inside,
And leave just one thing on your mind...
YOU ONLY GET ONE SHOT,
SO JUST GO F*CKING NUTS!
GO!c
lynixa don't spoil the books for me!
Nix... You will hate me after the next part of One For You. I don't think I'll ever be able to show my face here again. It will be funny to watch your reaction though. *leaves the re-write and goes to type up next part* he he he he...
Iggy, or Fnick? *Arches eyebrow, grinning*
Not keyboard face... Lynxia!
Figgy
brb
bye guyes,the law has been inforeced
Hello Molly.
Bye Vena.
*laughs at nix and runs*
nope i'm still here
FNICK. Hahaha.
"You love me this much!" God, that bit was funny.
Hey Lynxia!
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