Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
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Friday, May 4, 2012
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friends
*chases after Lynxia*
No keyboard face!
WHO HERE HAS READ THE HUNGARY GAMES?
Yes Keyboard Face1 *shadow walks away*
*!
Guys i feel sad
cause i'm bumble bee
MEMEMEME!!! :D I read 'em when they were uncool!
*takes a step forwards and breaks free of the ropes as the tree snaps in half*
Read it
*the planet shifts so I'm next to Lynxia*
No keyboard face!
Oh crap, not again.
boo capital
*rides her pet dragon to lynixa's lake and chucks a orange to gab,molly and nix.
*gives ly some penuts
Oh, come on Mist
Though I am in the fighting mood...
It's not her lake, it's the Blogland Lake!
i read them when they were uncool to!ONG
(oh nixes gosh)
Capitol. I must have proper respect for the Capitol! *puts on Seneca Crane beard*
what ever actually its moi lake now
brb
N.Z IS COOL! YEAH :)
bye guys
SOO how is eveybody
dam i forgot the r
bye gab
Sorry Zath, but not again.
um hello i say that alot but really
hi elaisse how are u
*gives her a anvil*
Dinner. I really wanted to join in on this fight, but i guess that'll have to wait
Bye!
Keep away. *picks up anvil and throws it in the lake*
...Excellent.
*grabs Nixion by the throat and slams him into a tree *
no bodyies answering!(me)
Goodbye Nixion.
Oh, Elaisse is kinda Lynxia, btw
Bye!
Keep away from him! *grabs Nagier and flings him off Nix*
I am sorry Vena. I am Lynxia's true name form. Pleasure to meet you.
take it *gives elaisse an axe* there coming
*laughs* I don't need an axe.
pleasure to meet u to.sorry about this
*probes her mind*
*rolls in the air and lands softly on the ground*
*laughs and sends a wave of shadows at Elaisse*
*grabs Vena and throws her into a tree* Lynxia may not like to do this to 'friends' but I have no such problem.
I;m back.
Isee Elaisse is here...
*draws a sword* suit your self
demons appear....
*lifts hand and the wave slows to a trickle at my feet*
Necromancer vs Necromancer. Interesting. *throws shadows knives at Nagier*
Welcome back Star.
ay... im new here... Hi golden god. See u in AUS!
Okay. I'm just going to watch you people kill yourselves.
*uses mind bolt to crumple elaisse to the ground*
Hello Iguana. Bit of a bad time.
*raises a hand and watches the knives melt into a several shards which are redirected at Elaisse*
Something tells me that this is going to continue in a similar fashion...
*stands up and continues to face Nagier* Leave me alone Vena or I swear to the Golden God I might break you.
Turnips. ^_^
*offers ink her hand to help her up*(elaisse just tripped her)patners?
* slashes the knives* Yes, it does doesn't it?
But you nearly hurt Nixion, Nagier. Lynxia wouldn't like that. And if I let her down then I'm the one who doesn't see daylight. Not nice being trapped in her mind.
*runs at Nagier and shadow walks him to the middle of the lake, drops him and returns to land*
*vena vows* I will crush u elaisse.*uses mind bolts to pick elaisse up and chuck her round*
*floats*
*shadow walks from grip of mind bolt*
Silly Vena.
Miss Inkbright, will you help me defeat Nagier. He can be incredibly annoying.
*mind bolts elaisse*stop hurting innocent people!
Nagier innocent! *laughs* That is the biggest pile of crap I've ever heard.
*shadows encase self and returns to land*
*laughs as the shadows absorb the water*
It's no nicer being trapped inside Mist's head, let me assure you. In fact, I have no idea why he's let me out. Perhaps he's distracted.
Or feeling particularly murderous. It doesn't matter to me, I don't know.
*hurls a shadow spear at Elaisse as a distraction, shadow walks behind her and forces a shard of darkness into her back*
*whistels for pet dragon ione*now i will kill u!
*hurls a shadow knife at Vena*
Stop interrupting this battle. Or I'll personally destroy you after I've dealt with Lynxia's darker side.
*ione eats elaisse*good boy ione,good boy.
*turns to nagier* your turn
*watches everyone*
Hell...
*activates sigils*
*feels for shadow in back* Very nice Nagier. maybe you like you cell but I don't like mine.
*shadow moulds into a spear which turns and goes through Nagier and out of my back*
*shadows heal me*
nagier,i'm sorry.*sends mind bolt*
*looks at people asking me to help them*
Erm . . . How 'bout i just sit down here and see what happen
*Teleports away* man,some people are violent
Back!
Yes, some people are.
*laughs as the spear get stuck in body and pulls it out easily*
Perhaps you've forgotten, my dear: I'm dead. You can't hurt me.
*agrees with Star*
*summons protective field around Star and self*
Hello again Eve.
ione still at lake bye people!
THANKS GAB!
Pet dragon? Cool. I have a pet phoenix. She's called Zephyr. Flame from blogland gave her to me.
Hello again, Rock.
*sends a swarm of shards at Elaisse*
Hi eveianioba!
Oh right. You're dead. And I'm not your dear. *kicks Nagier the punches his gut*
Maybe because you're dead I can make you my own punch bag. You know, tie you up and laugh as I repeatedly beat you into unconsciousness.
*laughs again and straightens up again*
That could work. Only that I would easily break free. And it is impossible for anyone to take me out of my state of consciousness. One of the many advantages of being dead.
Lynxia, if you're in there somewhere, use that last paragraph in a story coz it sounded really good.
*rolls eyes* Hello idiots.
Hi Starlight!
Where did vena go?
I've had enough, Nagier. Get lost.
Hi eveianioba!
Umm...I'm going to be writing...I will be distant, but hello to anyone who is here...
...Git.
*kicks Nagier again*
I hate you! You are everything that I hate in a body. You live to get under peoples skin. I may only be here to kick your sorry ass but I still hate you. I wish you would rot, die, decompose or go jump off a cliff because, Nagier - YOU'RE A GIT! *punches his face*
I also think that Elaisse was good this time, Eve.
*staggers backward*
Ow! And I wasn't even him!
*sits and glares at Elaisse*
Rain, why is your face all mushed up? *points at rain/zath/zathract/mist's profile pic*
*collapses on ground unconcious*
Hi L!
Because I made it look interferancy.
*is still clutching at face*
yEAH..
Mist why is it like that?
*lowers shield*
Oh. Maybe because Elaisse smashed you around..
Hi lynxia!
Use this paragraph in a story:
"Maybe because you're dead I can make you my own punch bag. You know, tie you up and laugh as I repeatedly beat you into unconsciousness."
Please. Coz it sounds really good.
Hi Luciana!
*wanders in*
Hello!
Hi Taia!
Hi taia!
You just missed all the fighting.
Yes, be thankful.
Hello, anyone who said hello. *waves, half-heartedly*
Hi Eve!
Hi Ink!
Aww, But the fighting's fun. And the violence works pretty well with the name of the blog post.
Hi Luciana! *waves back*
Hello L.
hELLO people
@
Hello Gabriel! *waves*
Hellio gabio!
Uh... did anyone notice Lynxia colapse back there?
Hi gab!
Wbd
Lynxia...is she okay?
*goes to Lynxia*
Are you okay?
No, Nixion, I wasn't here...
*pokes an unconscious Lynxia*
You okay?
Are you even still here?
I wasn't there, but i noticed it
WAKE UP LYNXIA!
*jumps up and spins round jerkily* Oh crap. Sorry Zath. *holds up hand is pleading gesture*
Lynxia!
*hugs*
That's fine...
*coughs up some more blood*
I didn't get to fight...
Did you only just arrive then keyboard face?
I thought the collapsing was just part of elaisse leaving her . . .
*hugs back * WB Nix. Sorry Zath. It was meant for Nagier but you kind of got in the way(?).
Unconcious? That's not usually a good thing
How could I be the first no notice if i wasn't even here?
Hi Lynxia! *waves*
SHE'S ALIVE!
Hi lynxia.
Please use these few sentences in a story:
"Maybe because you're dead I can make you my own punch bag. You know, tie you up and laugh as I repeatedly beat you into unconsciousness."
Hi Taia. *waves back*
No idea Nix. You're the only one who cares?
Hmm. That IS a little worrying, Nixon.
*glares at everyone else*
How could you not care?
I don't know where Star. I'll try but I don't know where. It'll have to be One For you because I can really see Ivy saying it.
In doing my homework, Nix. I didn't really have time to sample her blood while she was out.
I noticed. I cared.
But I was too busy dealing with the fist that HIT MY FACE.
Yeah Mist. I've seen mashed potato that's looked better
You should get that checked out
Cool. Thanks.
And, OF COURSE I CARED! But i thought her collapsing was a good, elaisse-is-gone thing.
I said sorry all right! God, I try to get Elaisse to do something good for a change and suddenly everyone turns on her. You do realize if you rip her apart I go too, right? K-put goes my life and down the drain with everything.
Not my fault Nagier got out.
*shrugs*
You chained yourself to the tree. You got to keep a lid on him. you can't boil over every 5 mins.
*tries to avoid looking confused*
I liked how you defended me... or was that Elaisse?
Mished potato.
Mist + mashed potato = mished potato.
*is laughing irl*
Bits and pieces of both Nix.
Okay
Mist + mash = mish.
LOL Ink!
Star....You've actually got me giggling irl, with that. Haha.
Mish. :L
OK Star... That's... Um... Completely normal.
*rolls eyes*
It isn't funny in the slightest...
Look, it's over now. Lets forget it.
I love this flashback in this chapter of Nix and Mist
Zath, now you have to dedicate for two pages.
I do.
Oh...A new page...
*abruptly stops laughing*
*coughs*
You don't have to watch it, but i find it funny. At least, some of them
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLEE6E4AF38BC19EC2&feature=etp-pd-nnn-12
I'm giggling irl too L! Thanks!
Okay. So:
Nix and Mist = Keyboard face and Mished potato
NEW PAGE!!!!
*glares at Ink*
Hehehehehe.
DEDICATE!
I am struggling not to explode here...
*wraps Nix in selotape* Now you can't.
bYE NOW. peRMA bye now.
Bye Gab!
Bye Gabriel! *waves*
Bye, Gab...*waves, slightly*
Bye Gab
May the fours be with you gab!
Please don't expolde, keyboard face. It would be very messy.
Bye Gab
This page goes to METALLICA!
You guys are awesome!
The LAST page goes to Eve, Nix, Lynxia, L and Ink. You guys are my best friends here.
Well, assuming you aren't all pretending to like me, of course (which I'm sure some of you are doing).
I LOVE THE DEDICATIONS! Metallica are AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.
And n'awwwwwww!!! I wouldn't pretend to like someone, it's not the kind of person I am. C:
KAYBOARD FACE!
You're lucky that I'm cheered up slightly by Mist's ded. But i swear...
Of course I'm you friend Zath, even if occasionally I hit you but it was meant for Nagier and it wasn't actually me and... I'll stop, it's hurting my head trying to understand.
*hugs Zath*
YAY! THANK YOU VERY MUCH MISH!
Oh Nix, you're gonna hate me sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
I swear to god, Ink...
Thanks, Lynxia.
Lynxia, please don't
And Mist, if you think I need to tell you that I'm your friend, then you don't know me. I do not point out the obvious unless it needs to be done
Rain, you have a Crazy Inky Nickname. I only give them to friends. I can't give them to all my friends though coz i can only think up so many that are truly Crazy Inky Nicknames . . .
Too late Nix. Look at the Bubble. XD
No...
Yes...!
Mybrother and sister have haf tons of Crazy Inky Nicknames. My friends i've known from primary have had quite a few too . . .
Emma Dilemma.
Bonkers Conkers.
Franna Montana.
Book Murderer.
*explodes*
WHY ARE YOU ALL OBSESING OVER SOMETHING THAT NEVER HAPPENED?!
You just pointed it out, Nixo
*laughs* Calm down Nix. It's only a joke.
*glares at Eve*
What do you mean?
brb.
Nix, try not to kill anyone.
*shadow walks*
*twitches*
There's a... There's a b-book murderer?
*gathers up the inhabitants of her bookcases and herds them into safe*
*is wearing spectacles*
*shuffles papers*
By implying that what you are not going to point out is obvious, you are, in fact, pointing it out.
No I am not. I am informing Mist that I shouldn't have to point it out, because i do not point out the obvious. Whether I did or did not point it out is irrelevant, my point was I shouldn't have to point it out
Lynxia, maybe i'm just mad and starry, but i thought that was hilarious.
Random something: Some books i read and i can't stop laughing in parts of them, but then my sister reads them and she doesn't laugh ONCE . . .
Yeah, my friend's a book murderer. She has no respect for books and think's it's just okay to swipe a shelffulls of books into the bin. I am never forgiving her for chucking all those books out. I mean, she could have given them away or something!
Star, I remember having a conversation about that, before... :'3
French revision is HELL. Seriously. Eurgh.
*nods*
Giving them away would also benefit somebody else, I suppose.
Yeah, well
Bluh!
Urrrrrgggggghhhh.
French. Yuck.
Yes, we probably did L.
Yes it would taia!
But i just feel so sorry for those poor books . . . :(
Indeed.
A new home would've been much better suited for them.
*shakes head sadly*
*thinks of them covered in potato peelings and soaked in brown yucky stuff* she should've given them to a charity shop!
Star... that's just horrible...
Back but distant and only for a few mins. Then I'll be back in around 20 mins at my nan's house.
The books?
Yeah. It is. I'm never, ever forgetting it.
Okay Lynxia
Okay lynxia.
katnip
Katniss!
Kit Kat
katniss!
Chickdip
This is still funny
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=iv&v=nGbRMT1i76c&src_vid=7LcDm1Dm6CM&annotation_id=annotation_756841
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