Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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«Oldest ‹Older 2201 – 2400 of 4870 Newer› Newest»Hello, Raven! *waves*
Skyriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiil! *hugs back*
Hi Luce! *waves back*
hi Lynx! *hugs back*
HELLO! *jumps up and down* I'm in a bouncy mood...Boing! Boing
Does anyone here know the word Susurrus besides me?
Okie, Lynx!
kk lynx
lol luci
'Kay, Lynx!
*resumes bouncing* Boing
Heeeeeeeey, Luce! You should sing the TIGGER SONG!
The Tigger song is perfect for when you feel bouncy ~nods~
LOOOOOOOOL.
BOING *is still bouncing and starts singing the Tigger song* It reminds me of:
It's theeeeeeee GREAT BIG BOOK OF EVERYTHING, WITH EVERYTHING INSIDEEEEe..... *bounces again* Boing
The wonderful t'ing about Tiggers-
'Cause Tiggers are wonderful t'ings-
Their tops are made outta rubber!
Their bottoms are made out of springs!
They're bouncy, bouncy, flouncy, flouncy,
Fun! Fun! Fun! Fun! Fun!
But the most wonderful t'ng about Tiggers is I'M the only one!
IIIIIIIIIIII'MMMMMMMM the only one!
Is it wrong that I read that in Tiggers voice? And I could imagine the scene it's from...?
*stops bouncing*
lol sky
Definitely NOT, Luce!
@Raven
It's a good song!
~grins toothily~
no its not wrong, luci
tbh, i did that too :P lol
Oh good! I was slightly scared, for a moment. I really wasn't, but whatever.
Boop. Beep. Boop. Beep. Boopy. Beep.
brb
~starts humming the bar song from STar Wars~
back
Okay, Raven. :)
CAN I JUST SAY....
Will.I.Am..... <3 I F*CKING LOVE HIM SO MUCH! XDDDDDDDDD <3 He makes me laugh A LOTTTTTTTTT.
Back!
K Raven.
Can you guys read something for me? It's part of a new story I'm erotic.g called Fate. It's near the end but I wrote this bit before the middle because otherwise I'd forget. (I wrote it whilst listening to Invincible. It's very melodramatic)
Hello, again.
MY COMMENTS TAKE FOREVER TO SHOW UP. :O
It's a good song ~nods~
Boo be boo BOO-doo boo bee doo-buh-duh-doobie-buh doo-duh-duh-DOO-doo
Welcome back Lynx and Raven!
~hugs~
Awesome, Luce :D
@Lynx
THAT'S it!
I couldn't remember what it was called :P
thx sky! *hugs*
wb lynx!
*stares at the sky* It's still bright. Yay. XD
sure, lynx, i'll read it, might take me a few minutes to comment though
You're welcome, Raven!
@Lynx
I can try, but I'm easily distracted xD
Where is it?
Sure, Lynx! XD I like reading. :')
*writing
erotic.g? Wtf phone? This is a new form of wtf!
Can you guys read it? Pwease?
I just posted this then it vanishes. Stupid phone.
Brb while I type.
which blog is it on?
~pokes Luce~
Still bright? Does that mean it's not dark yet or it's not cloudy?
Does it mean you like sunshine or rain?
Or does it just mean that the afternoon is not yet here?
Okie-dokie, Lynx!
It's not dark yert. XD
I like both the sunshine and the rain.
It's 7:27PM, here. :D
*pokes Skyril*
yet*
God, I failed. ¬_¬
Oooh, okie, then. I was wondering...
Wow! It's late for it to still be bright...
~pokes the sky~
Do you prefer the sun or do you like clouds and rain?
Eh, typos, schmypoes. ~shrugs~
I like the rain, better, I think. :'3
And it's England, everything is messed up. X]
Yaaaaaaaaay! Great minds think a like, Luce!
RAIN FTW!
YAYYYY. We clearly have great minds! Rain is amazing! *starts singing Green Day*
Rain is brilliant and lov-el-ly. ~Nods~
Same with fog... and clouds... ~nods~
I don't understand why most everyone dislikes them so much. Doesn't make aaaany sense!
Oh, yes, absolutely, Luce!
Great minds. :D
I agree with you completely, Skyril! I love storms the most, I think! :'3
Definitely. ~sighs and dreams of a wonderful storm rampaging outside my window~
I always feel happy and excited when it rains. It's so pURDY!
I agree. I love taking pictures in the rain, as well... :'3
Ahh, yes, me too. I love how everything looks, how everything is slightly dreary and damp. I love the smell and the sounds too :]
Latnmae looked out over the ocean.
The wind hauled the storm clouds across the sky streaking it with shades of grey and black.
The lightening forked from the storm clouds, silhouetting the ships on the stormy horizon.
The ocean was a deep, violent shade of blue that thrashed and coiled seeming to have only one purpose; to destroy.
Latnmae stood on the cliff, the wind ripping around her. Her face was a mask of calm and fearless determination but inside she felt as churned up as the waters beneath her.
Closer and closer.
She could feel the tension before battle. Every time one of those ships moved, the closer they came to war.
Charles laid his left hand on her shoulder and gripped his sword with his right. She smiled slightly at the encouragement but said nothing.
Blainen stood on her left, red and orange war paint streaked his tanned face, his blonde dreadlocks blown back and the wooden beads shimmered in the rain and faint light, and his amber eyes burning with a lust for vengeance.
On Blainen's left stood Gyalta. She stood tall, her grey-blue skin a soft light against the raging sky. Her white hair flowed around her like flames licking at the air. Her deep grey eyes colder and harder that stone.
One Charles's right stood Recknam. He stood strong despite his size, with his axe at the ready. His short brown hair and beard were drenched with rain like everyone else, his weather worn skin stretched tight over tense muscles and his red-brown eyes searching for a weakness in the ships' movements.
The Elements raged havoc under the control of the Elfin Elders on top of the cliff. The Earth producing spires of rock, snagging the ships. The Air tearing at the ships sails and often blowing down masts. The Ocean doing all it could to claim the fleet for its own murky depths. The Fire in the lightning striking the ships causing them to burn and sink in a rising pillar of black smoke.
But no matter how many were sunk, more came.
Many more, filling the horizon and moving closer.
Closer and closer...
Can someone copy and paste this for me invade it disappearance. My comments like to do that...
~suddenly feels like singing Disney songs... like... the one about the coconuts...~
DOWN at an English fair- one evening I was there
WHEN I heard a showman shouting UNDERNEATH the flare,
"H'I've got a lov-el-ly bunch of a coconuts! There they are all standing in a row!
BIG ones, small ones, SOME as big as your HEAD!
Give them a twist, a flick of the wrist,"
That's WHAT the showman said!
*in case not invade. Stupid phone. *phone laughs*
ASDFGHJKL. LYNX IT'S AMAZING. XD
Lynx's fic:
Latnmae looked out over the ocean.
The wind hauled the storm clouds across the sky streaking it with shades of grey and black.
The lightening forked from the storm clouds, silhouetting the ships on the stormy horizon.
The ocean was a deep, violent shade of blue that thrashed and coiled seeming to have only one purpose; to destroy.
Latnmae stood on the cliff, the wind ripping around her. Her face was a mask of calm and fearless determination but inside she felt as churned up as the waters beneath her.
Closer and closer.
She could feel the tension before battle. Every time one of those ships moved, the closer they came to war.
Charles laid his left hand on her shoulder and gripped his sword with his right. She smiled slightly at the encouragement but said nothing.
Blainen stood on her left, red and orange war paint streaked his tanned face, his blonde dreadlocks blown back and the wooden beads shimmered in the rain and faint light, and his amber eyes burning with a lust for vengeance.
On Blainen's left stood Gyalta. She stood tall, her grey-blue skin a soft light against the raging sky. Her white hair flowed around her like flames licking at the air. Her deep grey eyes colder and harder that stone.
One Charles's right stood Recknam. He stood strong despite his size, with his axe at the ready. His short brown hair and beard were drenched with rain like everyone else, his weather worn skin stretched tight over tense muscles and his red-brown eyes searching for a weakness in the ships' movements.
The Elements raged havoc under the control of the Elfin Elders on top of the cliff. The Earth producing spires of rock, snagging the ships. The Air tearing at the ships sails and often blowing down masts. The Ocean doing all it could to claim the fleet for its own murky depths. The Fire in the lightning striking the ships causing them to burn and sink in a rising pillar of black smoke.
But no matter how many were sunk, more came.
Many more, filling the horizon and moving closer.
Closer and closer...
~copy and pasted for Lynx~
Latnmae looked out over the ocean.
The wind hauled the storm clouds across the sky streaking it with shades of grey and black.
The lightening forked from the storm clouds, silhouetting the ships on the stormy horizon.
The ocean was a deep, violent shade of blue that thrashed and coiled seeming to have only one purpose; to destroy.
Latnmae stood on the cliff, the wind ripping around her. Her face was a mask of calm and fearless determination but inside she felt as churned up as the waters beneath her.
Closer and closer.
She could feel the tension before battle. Every time one of those ships moved, the closer they came to war.
Charles laid his left hand on her shoulder and gripped his sword with his right. She smiled slightly at the encouragement but said nothing.
Blainen stood on her left, red and orange war paint streaked his tanned face, his blonde dreadlocks blown back and the wooden beads shimmered in the rain and faint light, and his amber eyes burning with a lust for vengeance.
On Blainen's left stood Gyalta. She stood tall, her grey-blue skin a soft light against the raging sky. Her white hair flowed around her like flames licking at the air. Her deep grey eyes colder and harder that stone.
One Charles's right stood Recknam. He stood strong despite his size, with his axe at the ready. His short brown hair and beard were drenched with rain like everyone else, his weather worn skin stretched tight over tense muscles and his red-brown eyes searching for a weakness in the ships' movements.
The Elements raged havoc under the control of the Elfin Elders on top of the cliff. The Earth producing spires of rock, snagging the ships. The Air tearing at the ships sails and often blowing down masts. The Ocean doing all it could to claim the fleet for its own murky depths. The Fire in the lightning striking the ships causing them to burn and sink in a rising pillar of black smoke.
But no matter how many were sunk, more came.
Many more, filling the horizon and moving closer.
Closer and closer...
@Lynx
Wow, I liked that a lot! It was excellent!
It really grabbed you, and made you see the scene. Awesome!
Thanks L! For reading and copying!
*hugs*
You're welcome, Lynx! *hugs back* :') I honestly enjoyed reading it LOADS. XD
Awesome, well, it's a brilliant bit of work!
It's not my best stuff. All my best stuff went into the finale of One For You, Two For Me... The ending if that.... I've edited it into almost perfection. I would post it but... The regs are in it and it's a HUGE spoiler of the sub plot.
Hello all!!
How is everyone??
hi NJ!
Well I really enjoyed that bit, Lynx!
It was good!
I just LOVE how most of Blogland likes to write! And most are really good at it too!
HEY RAVEN!!
*hugs*
NJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ! Heeeeeeeeey! ~hugs~
I'm okie, thanks!
How are you? :]
SKYYRILLLLLLLL *hugs*
I am Grand! :D
I am thinking of writing a NEW FanFic after my GCSE's which Finish on the 7th of June, what d'you all think??
Awww, farewell, Lynx!
~hugs~
Thanks for the slab of concrete! It's a adorable!
~hangs it on my bedroom wall~
Hopefully see you soon :]
@NJ
I think that's a great idea :D
Hello, NJ.
Bye, Lynx! *hugs*
@Lynxia BYE!!
Do you wanna be in it??
Hey Luce *hugs*
How're you??
Hello, NJ! I'm alright thanks, yourself???
I am grand.
Much Craic with any of ye's??
#PureIrish
Good to know you're grand. C:
I think we should compose a poem together. ~Nods~
That would be fun!
See, even if you're not a poet, you know how poems go...
Someone should start off with a first line, then someone should make a next like and continue it!
Any volunteers for a first line or should I think up something interesting?
HEYY
sky memememem
PICK ME!
Hello, Flame! *waves*
Hey Flame!!
How're you??
PHOENIIIIIIIIX! ~hugs~
AND I PICK YOU!
START WITH A LINE!
~grins~
OAKAY
The light upon the windowsill beeseeths, sending shadows bouncing through the sea.
WBD, again. C:
"WBD"?
What does that mean?
ALSO, WHO WANTS TO GO NEXT WITH OUR BLOGLAND CREATED POEM?
Will Be Distant, Skyril. :'3
@Skyril I AM THINKING!! :P
It's gonna be so bad though LoL
OH SKY
Could you maybe, if you see pyro, get him to add me to the poets of greatnees again, under the email address i gave you.
btw, i loved the story. The fight scene left me bemuddled though.. :?
@Luce
OI! You can't be distant JUST because we're writing a poem together! It's going to be fuuuuuuuuuuun!
@NJ
Yaaaaaaaay! Okieeeee!
@Phoenix
Well, I will if I can, but I haven't seen him for ages! If I see Red, though, I'll ask her. I think she can get in contact with him :]
The ripple of the gentle waves reflect upon thine sun-kissed face.
@Skyril
I am writing, again. That's why I am distantttttttt. XD
WHOS NEXT?
BRB
*waves at whoever is here*
Hello, Robin. *waves*
Hullo, Robin!
~glomps~
@Skyril Okay
Hey Robin!!
*hugs*
How're you??
Back, by the way! Sorry I disappeared!
I'M NOT GOOD AT KEEPING UP WITH CONVOS!
WB Skyril
You have been made a member on the chat :P
SKYRIl
They're onto you!
Wait, No you haven't NEVER MIND :P
You are still a guest
SKYRIL BE CAREFUL!!
YOU ARE ABOUT TO BE CAUGHT OUT!!
I HAVE TO GO, NOWWWWWWWWWWW. D': BYE GUYS. I MIGHT BE BACK, LATER. I DON'T KNOW. *hugs whoever wants a hug* BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. *the shadows consume her and disintegrate themselves*
SKYL CHANGE YOUR NAME TOTOM THE SAILORR MAN..
QUICK
BYE LUCE
*hugs back*
Bye L
*grins* So I'm a little confused why are we doing this on chat
its skyril..
were laying dragona and aquila.
Raven, Kal, Nj and me abnd sky are in on ti.
you too.
I actually don't know WHY we just are.
I really don't know
tell the guys on chat i ahve to go.
Bye.
*murmurs* Okay
Bye Flame! *waves*
Bye Flame
*sings* A WHOLE NEW WORLD A DAZZLING PLACE I NEVER NEW
SORRY, guys!
Sorry, sorry, sorry. I got into a bunch of conversations at once, and I got rather distracted.
And now I have to go ~sighs~
I'm really sorry I didn't do more with the poem :(
Y'ALL SHOULD FINISH IT!
It would be awesome!
BYE!
AND SORRY!
HI PEOPLE!
Hey Star!!
How're you??
Y'alright Star?
I'm here for a little bit. About 10 mins so HI!!!!!
Hey Lynxia!!
WB
*hugs*
How're you??
LYNXX! *glomps*
I'm ok. It's been ages since I've talked to you! How are you?
Correction, how is everyone?
I am grand thanks :)
You're right, it HAS been ages!!
*glomps Robin* I haven't seen you in ages either!
*skips around Lynxx* I know! *throws glitter on her head* HAPPYYYYYYYY!
Glitter? Really? *pulls out glitter and throws it at Robin*
I saw you demanding I post the stories on the Bubble.
Hi lynxia!
And i'm gine, thanks. How're you guys?
Gah! Have to go! Bye! *hugs*
We're on Chat if you want to come on.
Grand thanks :)
You?
*waves sadly*
Bye Lynxia *hugs*
May the fours be with you lynxia:(
Starstar no can do chatchat.
kaykay
Aw right.
Okay.
So, what's the Craic way ye??
*shrugs* i just speak starstar-y irl sometimes. Mostly when i'm with my brother and/or sister. Only then i don't say starstar, i say hollholl, seeing as holly's my given name.
It's a nice given name
hi everyone... again :P
HEY RAVEN
*hugs*
HEY RAVEN
*hugs*
Squillions of other people have it. It gets annoying. Like in PE when everyone's yelling "HOLLY!" but they aren't yelling at me.
That double posted on me
Hi raven!
HEY NJ! *hugs back* lol double post :P
hi star!
Boo
I'm writing expect distance
hi robin! kk
@Star
there are 3 girls (including me) in my form class with the same name as me. And there are like 9 girls in my year with the same name as me!! And One girl with the same Forename AND Surname as me which is rather annoying
Okay Robin
That would be VERY annoying NJ . . . Holly isn't QUITE so common as that . . .
Yeah, it really is.
The good thing is that I have no classes with the girl as the same name as me
Hey Star I'm back. Just playing with my little baby cuz. Soooooo cute! She was playing with two of my teddies i got on a ferry when i was tiny. She loved em, so shes borrowing one. Shes only 3-4 months old!
Anyone here seen britains got talent with pudsy on it
I gotta go now
BYE
*hugs*
bye NJ!
see ya person
i gtg too, bye all!
I'm baaaaaaaack
Bye raven *hugs*
Anyone think I should change my picture, I'm bored of this one now...
May the fours be with you raven and nj!
Lots of people liked this one though *frowns*
*mutters*
And i never said hi to pebbles . . .
Hi pebbles!
Change it then robin.
Yay you robin!
I dedicate this blog to people who refuse to read and write, you do not know what you are missing, and I feel sorry for you.
Thanks Star
I feel sehr sorry for them too . . .
*nods*
I think I might right a fanfic
Ahhh fair enough I'm going to finish Skye first a measly 3,000 words to go then I'll have hit my target
Well I'm off byebye Star!
*gasps* MY COMMENT DISAPPEARED!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
May the fours be with you robin!
*trudges in*
Hi...
Wbd...
Msd...
Hi rain!
Hi Ink.
I AM THE INKY OCTOPUS GIRL AND THE ENEMY OF THE LLAMAS!
What did the llamas ever do to you?
Umm . . .
I don't know. My character has amnesia. Put it down to that.
Fair enough.
*shrugs* wait till i get my history completely and utterly sorted. Then i'll tell you what they did to me.
I'll look forward to it. I don't like llamas,..
I obviously don't.
Fingersnap! I know! *lightbulb moment*
What?
Hello, all.
It's a secret.
But, PART of it is, sometime soon, i'm gonna write my story of my history.
By soon, i mean SOON, like, starying tomorrow/day after soon.
Hi L!
How many words are you through now L?
Hello and just under 13K, I didn't write on that story, today. :'3
Ok then...
Hi L.
Hello, Mist! *waves*
Gtg, nowwww. :'c Byeeeeee.
Cool.
Okay, I'm on the train now so I'll be reading Mockingjay.
So this could mean I wont speak for a while.
May the fours be with you L!
Okay rain.
BANK HOLIDAY MONDAY TOMORROW YAAAAAY! NO SCHOOL!
Sub-plot? Nope, no idea what you're on about.
Msd
No idea Lynxia. Hi Eve!
Hi Mist!
*curses*
Maths test today...
I have to bring in a baptism photo...ugh....
For art?
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