Hmmm...
Just flicking through the books to remind myself of some details/dates, and I stumbled across a typo. I know there are a few in the books- it's kind of inevitable when the deadlines are this close together- but by the time the new paperback editions are published in April, I want all these typos to be fixed. Which is where YOU come in, my Minions.
I know that most of you have read these books a few times because you're, you know, insane and everything. Have you noticed the typos? Can you remember where they were? There are a few glaring ones, mistakes that I just should have caught, but for whatever reason I didn't. Care to help?
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«Oldest ‹Older 2401 – 2600 of 3979 Newer› Newest»Hey at least I'm not a power hungry Lib Dem, who's only aim is to get into the Houses of Parliment even if it means breaking all their promises. Not that i tihnk badly of lib Dems
Or a tory for that matter......
I have star wars battlefront and SWBII on my ps2... they are good games but I have no interest in them... I think I just like killing people with glowsticks... especially that guy with four... I shot him in the head with my pistol when he was doing these fancy moves with his glowsticks... grevious is it? I killed him...
if oly e lved in a wrldo withut typoes.
I'm amazed that this laptop is still working, yesterday I spilt a full glass of apple juice on it and it got in between that keys and into the hard drive. It should have died by now.
Hmm...
woot go nick clegg!
gleggy weg weggy!
...no actually i dont particually like nick clegg. i just like his funny name.
...to promote him he should sell clogs.
"U KNOW NICK CLEGG, DO U KNOW CLOGS? WHY NOT BUY CLEGG CLOGS! THE KOOLEST CLOGS IN TOWN (COOL WITH A K!)"
Oi, quote it Brambo...
Ah...
Hmm...
Lolage...
ARE MINE!
Expeliamus
ah crutches suck
it will be mine!
DANG! two seconds short!
David Cameron has a shiny forehead... mr shiney forehead... I would rather have Labour as prime minister... IF THEY ONLY LISTENED TO US!
Ah.. a giant purple eagle Hmm... It looks like it's wearing Clegg Clogs Lolage...
Flo is your leg better?
Have YOU got better since yesterday?
Night all...
Now lets think Hmm...
YES RUSSIA ROCKS THE PAGE!!!
I wonder if I'm being ignored lets see. HELLO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i know i was THIS close!
HI B.P.!
i was jumping up and down on one leg shouting at some boys as they kicked a ball around while it was pouring with rain....
i must be getting better...
Weird Dragonas not said anything about me copying here phrases Hmm... What? It was worth a shot.
No, back on.
Well at least it's getting better Flo...
HI SARTHACUS!
I found a picture of the French exchange student next to me!!
http://toonapalooza.net/4images/data/media/3/FatSpiderman72.jpg
Hi S.K. and K.P.
...why did everyone suddenly stop commenting?
is this some game of hide and seek tag?
*runs around trying to tag someone*
ok the next person who comments im gonna tag *hids behind bush*
I swear something weird is happening to me... 3 phycic dreams in a row, and two small memory attacks in two days... I think I may be going a little weird...
omg im HYPERRR! we did an experimen in science with sugar and we got to eat it i ate the whole sugar packet....
Hahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahaha. Is it really hat bad Sarthacus?
Lol SArthacus...
Dragona something weird i happening to you Lolage...
lol thats funny bolt
OMG ANOTHER JINX!
Argh. Typo!
No... just more weird than normal...
I feel sooo tired...
what were ur visions??
No you've not said anything about me using your phrases. Weird. *Shudders* *Tags Dagona*
But my headache has gone for now... yey!
No. Please no. Not another typo!!!
I'm amazed that this laptop is still working, yesterday I spilt a full glass of apple juice on it and it got in between that keys and into the hard drive. It should have died by now.
today me and my friend cassie had a fight over Fletcher she says he sucks i say he rules total epic fight at lunch over it
also great news i got ANOTHER person to start reading the series!
Actually I think it's starting to fail, THE PAGE WON'T LOAD!!!!
I'm amazed that this laptop is still working, yesterday I spilt a full glass of apple juice on it and it got in between that keys and into the hard drive. It should have died by now.
You've typed that twice Darkane.
DARKANE I LOVE YOUR FAN FIC!.....am i the unnamed girl?????
My visions... hmm... it started off very quickly, and I couldn't make things out but I remember seeing a car... as BMW if I wasn't mistaken... and I KNOW my BMWs... THEY ROCK!
Anyway... it slowed down and I started seeing some random things like me walking into the form room next year...
just out of curiosity....i hate being left hanging...PLEASE TYPE MORE SOON!
Darkane can I be an evil genius *some one cough speaks something* in you fanfic.
my laptops gone all weird!
if i go off unexpectedly its coz i think its faulty and i have a feeling somethings gonna go wrong!
DRAGONA COMMENTED AFTER ME *runs out of bush and tags dragona*
ghossstlly laptoppp!
brb dad is calling for me.
*shoutes above everyone talking*
Flo if you missed that:
My visions... hmm... it started off very quickly, and I couldn't make things out but I remember seeing a car... as BMW if I wasn't mistaken... and I KNOW my BMWs... THEY ROCK!
Anyway... it slowed down and I started seeing some random things like me walking into the form room next year...
Sorry. Sorry. Not Darkane, Dragona
had a vision once Ahh...
im on home computer not a laptop i hate using the key board on here its all sticky and the buttons are hard to press
Hmm... ok... what do you want to be called, you can be Blair's henchman...
Not another typo.
...........i feel so ignored.......
Brambo... I'm phycic so no wonder I have visions... and I have a photographic memory so no wonder I have memory attacks... I DON'T WANT THESE BLOOMIN THINGS!
Ya. Can I be hideously disfigured and then get run over by the Porsche 911. That would be a dream come true Hmm...
be right back.....as if anyone will read it
My Porsche 911 GT3 RS :D
HELLO Skulgirl!
Ok Skulgirl.
No sorry, Skulgirl, I'm the girl who blacked out and who's telling the story. I'm going to add you into the next one. Do you want to be called Skulgirl or something else.
I was the tall one in Darkane's story :D
Everyone I know says I'm completely bonkers. This is becoming a serious problem as random farmers and passers bye, but mostly farmers, are saying it to me. As if to prove them right I then push my sholder blades back and then bend my thumb to my wrist, and then follow on by mking weird clickng noises. Taa daa.
My nwe desktop.
http://www.learn-all-about-cats.com/images/funny-cat-that-farted.jpg
im reading im reading but now someone on facebook started the rumour
"FLORENCE IS PREGNANT :O" again.....why me? why not the tangerines?
I just made several typos. My life has ended.
Yep, you were Dragona. Nicolette was the one who threw the dagger n hugged mw and Flo was the one who named you all.
Lol Flo...
now you know how i feel dragona just that mine are about ten times worse
But it obviously hasn't. Because then I wouldn't be able to pester you all over the interweb
no darkne im talking about.....i know that the person who blacked out was you.......nvm
I'm really glad I'm me now Flo... not like you...
Hello Skulgirl!
what i mean was the girl who imtroduced kallista lizzy etc but nvm ill just have to wait....
Do you want to be called Skulgirl? Or do you want a different name?
Hmm...
Nope, that was Flo.
Dragona I'm gonna write on your blog. *Chuckles menicingaly*
http://www.learn-all-about-cats.com/images/funny-cat-that-farted.jpg
i really dont care what you call me as long as i can figure out its me :D
I'm writing my fanfic now Brambo... you start the story :D
I've done it. Ha ha ha
*taps foot impatiantly then starts walking around muttering t herself whats going to happem next*
I think I'll call you Skulgirl........
Wow I'm gonna get runover, I'm gonna get run over.
DRAGONA YOUR WRIHTING A NEW FANFIC?!
Dragona how do you over come writers block.
AHG TYPOS!
Alex Rider fanfic... it's on my blog so far... just writing another part of it...
http://wewanttohearyourstories.blogspot.com/
Read my story and tell me what you think please.
Because I would have nothing to add... I make my stories up as I go along... I have no ideas, I just start writing...
never read alex rider.....
Uh, pictures people, and I'm being ignored!
http://www.learn-all-about-cats.com/images/funny-cat-that-farted.jpg
no your not im just not that into...farting cats....
I am now multi tasking. Annoying you 'orrible lot. And writing my story which I just decided is gonna have some of you in it.
lke who?
Ooh... am I in it Brambo?
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HUZZAH!!!
I just like totally wrote this.
Edwardo Espionage pulled open the door to his silver, Porsche 911. As his driver powered down the road Edwardo turned the key over in his hands. Why had Jack gone to so much trouble in locking it up when he could have just positioned some armed guards to keep the money safe? It was strange but irrelevant, all he cared about was the money and after he’d got it his plan could begin. He turned to his companion, “Soon Jonathan we will begin operation Twisted Cobra. And then we shall free our brothers and once again we shall rule, the magic underworld!” he smirked.
“And then we can have our revenge on… You know who.”
“Yes Jonathan, yes e shall but until then we must keep our heads down. We don’t want our plan to be discovered when it is so early in it’s development.”
Suddenly the car jerked to a halt. They had arrived!
As Edwardo stepped out of the car he looked at the warehouse. It was modern, made of concrete with giant iron doors. There were four guards standing in front of the door, their UMP45’s locked and loaded. Edwardo knew these men would give their lives to protect the gold and money inside the warehouse. Just then he heard one of the guards, a tanned fellow with frizzy blonde hair, give out a startled gasp and crumple to the floor. As if following his lead the other three did the same. Edwardo turned round just in time to see his beautiful Porsche explode sending burning debris flying into the air as this happened a cloaked figure strode out of the shadows. Suddenly Jonathan was by Edwardo’s side holding a spear of darkness in his hand. The man pulled back his hood to reveal a handsome face with sparkling blue eyes, a closely cropped beard and sleek brown hair.
“Hello Edwardo” called the man.
“Hello Nicodemo,” Edwardo replied, “It has been far to long, when was the lat time I saw you?”
“June nineteen sixty eight, in Russia remember. I pushed you into the ocean and half froze you.”
“Oh yes I remember know, I’m still bruised from that encounter you know, and now you’re going to pay, Jonathan.” Instantly Jonathan threw the spear of darkness at Nicodemo. He ducked and replied by sending a ball of pure white light speeding towards Jonathan. Unable to dodge the man was struck in the stomach and sent sprawling.
“Tut, tut. You’re really out of practice aren’t you?” Nicodemo taunted.
“We’ve not seen the need to practice,” Replied Edwardo summoning a dark whip and flawing Nicodemo with it. As Edwardo brought the whip back Nicodemo created a white shield, which deflected the second blow that sent a jolt up Edwardo’s arm. Using his enemies surprise to his advantage Nicodemo charged and slammed the shield into Edwardo’s head causing him to blackout. Suddenly Nicodemo felt an agonizing pain in his side and looked down to see crimson blood trickling from a thin but deep hole in his hip. Nicodemo looked up and saw Jonathan standing there an M9 pistol in his hand. Suddenly a blinding rage took hold of Nicodemo and he jumped and kicked Jonathan in the temple making him fall to the ground. Seeing that all his foes were felled Nicodemo stooped down and picked up the small plastic key then slowly limped away.
am i init??
wait you think were HORRIBLE?!?!?! OK LET ME AT HIM! *rolls up sleeves and dragona holds her back*
My PE teacher.
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THAT IS AWSOME BRAMBO!
I didn't really notice any typos, other than you putting 'Juat' instead of 'just' in Playing with Fire. Also, SKULDUGGERY BOOK 6!!! WOOOOOOOTT!!!! I just realised that I am not a devoted enough fan to this blog. I DONT EVEN COMMENT ON EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOUR POSTS!!! I AM ASHAMED OF MYSELF!!!! GRRRRR!!! Other than that I'm pretty devoted. I even decorated my homework planner for school with pics of Skulduggery and the gang. And I have a skulduggery pleasant poster (an official one) in my bedroom, on the place of honour above my bed. I am still ashamed of myself though. So I make a vow to myself right now, I MUST comment on every single post you make after this.
Good Luck with Book 6!!
PS: I don't care if all my comments break the blog, BECAUSE YOU ARE THE GOLDEN-GOD DEREK!!!
=P
RUSSIA ROCKS THE PAGE!
Not yet Florence but soon. *Ducks under a swipe from Skulgirl and responds by swinging his violin at her.*
*picks up Skulgirl*
No violence... please I'm really tired and depressed so just don't use violence...
Brambo, what colour hair do you have?
WHERE ARE THERE OFFICIAL POSTERS!?!?????
sorry guys i g2g
dad just went on and n and on about a more expensive camera and now i want than :D
the downside is that i now have to go and persuade my mum who keeps saying "you'd better be serious about this photogrsphy!"
yeah, so anyways bye
@dragona: hope you find an non-orange girlfriend
@sarthacus: meh.
@ skul-girl: farting cats?
@ kallista: hope you see sherlock soon, im not gonna stop bugging you.
@brambo: please put me in your story!
@darkane: did i spell demi-pliet right?
@everyone: cya!
*hangs limply in dragonas arms* ok fine i wont attack him....so can you put me down now???
http://www.itchmo.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/01/funny-pictures-cat-dog-camouflage.jpg
That nwas how well I blended ni at Hallowe'en.
Skulgirl, can you tell me what magic you have, what you want your character to look like and what weapons you use?
oh and @flo: yes, russia does indeed rock the page (what the hell are you talking about) :S
bye guys!
Flo... btw, I thought you would like to know this... my friend has a game called World War Zero on his X-box, you're against the russians but I wouldn't play it... he asked why and I said I know someone who's russian... so we went on Grid instead... even though I did shoot my friend in the back on the head on splitscreen for killing a russian... even though they were shooting at me... I hope your proud :D
no violence while i have a broken leg...
Nicodemo Filipo, or Nico to his friends, was seven hundred and seventy two years old, he’d seen empires rise and fall, religions be created and forgotten: he’d even been the source of a few of them as well. He had many names, The Eternal Mage, Demon Slayer, and many more; in one country he’d even been called Death. But this century he was Nicholas Phillips, a night guard at The British Museum. As he stretched in his musty, old armchair he moved his hand to his hip; although he had manged to pull the bullet out the wound still bled. As he felt the wound Nico muttered something under his breath, instantly the hole the bullet had left began to close up, leaving only a small patch of pink flesh. Letting out a sigh of relief Nico got up and walked to his small bathroom; looking into the mirror he saw that his dark brown hair was sticking up in several places that Nico didn’t realize it could. Whilst attempting to pat it down Nico went into his kitchen, and picked up the phone.
“Hello Florence are you there?”
“Yes Nico I’m here what’s the situation.”
“Tell Dragona to come with you and meet me at Buckingham palace.” Responded Nico.
“What about Skul shall I bring her?” asked Florence.
“If you must.” Said Nico wearily.
Cool Brambo...
My mum speaks fluent Russian.
im very proud of you drgagona...i had that game and i killed it by "accident".....
sorry typos...
Character things for Darkane
Looks: 5'4" long unruly curly hair usually worn in a pony tail piercing blue eyes black boots something like a valkyrie jacket jeans and a tee shirt
weapons:broad sword or katana maybe a revolver for times when i need to get fancy and dress up
power:ooooo um an element? hmmm maybe i play with death shadows! idk you choose
I shot my friend in the back of the head though :D and he asked why and I shrugged and replied, "I'm a traitor"
lol awsome Brambo
That bit then was a bit rushed I' gonna edit it.
Typo damn.
oh and tannish not too tan
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OW...
And Dragona:
6ft 3 and a half, normally wears jeans and a t-shirt, wears a jacket when it's cold, has dark brown hair, owns 2 Porsche 911 GT3 RS's and his favourite weapons are twin Katanas on a crossed scabbard on his back... age 83 but looks 20
coolio brambo! nice work!
Bye, Skylara.
i wanna be 16! or 17....somewhere around there!
And the russians helped us in WWII... so that's kinda why I didn't kill them either... but most of all I liked their uniform :D
im usually the traitor
*sigh*
i went round my friends house before the football match and i got some really good killstreak....i was playing against his "mates" they all technically worship me now :D
Well I have got to go to bed people...
Night all...
*hugs Flo*
Night...
This is what I usually look like.
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HUNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGRYYYYYY!!!!
Florence what do you want your last name to be
i can do cossack dancing :D
Oh and btw... hope you get well soon Flo...
*hugs Flo again*
Night...
lol flo! apparently im too nice to be mean its sad sometime because sometimes they dont believe me..
my last name is black....
really dark brown almost black hair
night dragona
lol kallista i dont think that he would do that...
NIGHT DRAGONA!
WOAH! deja vou!
Skulgirl wadda ya want your last naame 2 be
I think there's a bit of...
http://icanhascheezburger.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/funny-pictures-cat-shows-you-how-he-punches.jpg
Going on...
ummmmmmm i dont know make one up!
OK lads, I'm going in...
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OMG! i forgot to tell you all the good news! no school for me tomorrow so im gonna be on ALL DAY! *jumps around all happily while others try to plot skulgirls downfall*
*waits patiantly for others to come back8
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WHY IS EVERYONE NGETTING HOLIDAYS!!!!!!?
Florence Black is 19 she has Black hair with Purple Highlights,it goes down to her waist. She has Charcoal black,she wears A hooded cloak. Usually wears short sleeved t shirt, Red and black checkered skirt, fishnets and knee high boots.And wears a red and black chekerd hat on good days. she Is a Necromancer she carries two black swords.Can kill most things including a pancake. Owns a Black Ferrari Californian edition
( http://atuning.org/ferrari/black-ferrari-california )
lol tomorrows beterains day gotta go for now be back later
hMM...
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Ve haz problemz.
As Florence Black strolled down the cobbled streets of London with her friends Dragona Pine and Skul Jones her reflected on her conversation with Nico. In all of the two hundred and twenty or so years she’d known him she’d never heard him like that. He sounded worried. Suddenly she heard Skul fall to the ground. Instantly she and Dragona spun round just in time to see a man wrapped in white cloth swing a spade at their heads knocking them both out.
Nico was worried. Florence and her friends should have arrived twelve minutes earlier and yet they’d not come. Nico knew his friend Florence and realized something had happened, she’d never dissapoint him. So she must have been hurt or worse! Nico set of at a sprint heading down a tight lane that was dark and grimy. As he turned a corner he stumbled on a bag of rubbish but he kept on going. He was going to save his friends.
Cause i asked.
Compared to my bro I'm...
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wow im not that old yet....
arg everyone keeps saying im pregnant on facebook
... Why od people thin kyou'r epregnant???
... Many typos.
*chucks gumballs at kallista and then does random monkey dance infront of her screen*
Florence opened her eyes. She was in a dark, room. She could feel two bodies next to her and guessed that they were Dragona and Skul. As her eyes grew accustomed to the dark she made out a par of cords each with wires poking out of the end. Suddenly the lights came on and the man in white cloth came striding towars them, on his way he picked up the cords.
“Tell me where Nicodemo is or you die.”
“Never!” roared Florence.
“Then you fate is sealed,”
The man turned and flicked a switch and instantly blue sparks came flying out of the ends of the cords. Then the man lunged with the cords striking her in the chest. Florence let out and agonized scream.
Night, all.
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NIght.
Florence you look nineteen and have boots and hair and swords and necro
Sarthacus what is it with you and putting up adesses.
Damn typo.
cause technically all my friends are boys but *quickly counts on fingers* except for 5...
we went to watch some fireworks at one of my friend's house and we done random stupid stuff by playing spin the bottle. we all went home at about 2 in the morning.....
i am 19....awell its your story keep writing
I don't want to know what you did with spin the bottle 8shudders8
Typo. :(
i know you dont thats why i dont mention it...
im 14 if you're thinking that way
*asks kallista to join in the monkey dance*
*kallista shakes head*
*florence shakes her fist*
*kallista dances like mad*
sorry that was in my head and i had to write it down...
were is everyone?
bye kallista!
Nico sensed it. His friend was in pain. He took a sharp left and then came to a huge stainless steel door with a Ford Fiesta parked in front. Nico used his powers to send the car fling through the door. Inside he saw Florence slumped in a chair along with Dragona and Skul. He also saw a man clad in white bandages staring at him. Nico summoned a lead ball and hurled it at the man sending him flying into the concrete wall. The sound woke his friends and Nico used a simple spell to free them. Florence, Skul and Dragona instantly ran to where there weapons were being stored. Dragona picked up his two heavy battle axes, while Skul took her AA12 and mace. Finally Florence put on her Necromancer ring . All three of them then launched themselves at the man and quite quickly he was lying dead on the floor. Several parts of his body missing.
hello? ello llo lo o....
omg im alone!
Kallista http://wewanttohearyourstories.blogspot.com/
Goodnight everyone. Until tomorrow. Tommorow, tommorow.
wow now thats good
dam gtg byeee!
*florence fades*
I'm here, just writing fan fic.
hello, um, hi, um, what's going on? Um, yeah
do do doo do do do do dooo do do doo
http://wewanttohearyourstories.blogspot.com/2010/11/story.html
Please visit 2 see my story.
hmm...
DON'T FORGET THE LEMOONS TYPO I MENTIONED MR LANDY
NEW FAN FIC!!!!!!!! It doesn't matter because you're all gone but anyone else who comes on, FAN FIC!!!!! GO AND READ IT!!!! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!
B.P Brambo, I found a typo in your writing
YAY!!! SOMEONE'S HERE!!!
do do doo do do do do dooo do do doo
I've always been here, hiding
Will you read my new fan fic MissLTears?
one second...
Cough cough........ Hello?
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