Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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I know what both of you are talking about.
That story made no sense...China ate her hair...
You know, despite her "treachery" China hasn't betrayed anyone on the good side
A frog.....
NO! I do not want a frog! I have a toad!
*starts singing with toad* Choirs with toads are awesome.
Actually, some people hate China. I know many people who can't stand her as a character...So you're wrong there, my dear. Not quite everyone feels the same way, about Miss Sorrows.
am i in other account?
My frog controlls dementions. He's mine!
*laughs evily and commands frog to destroy the 78th demention*
Nup Flame
My brother is the president of the Narnian Music Industry.
Because it was made of ravioli, Mist. Wouldn't you eat your hair if it were made if ravioli?
HM?
Now?
What madness is this????
Nix, we don't know of China betraying anyone on the 'good side', as of yet. You forget how intelligent, she truly is and so she would have hid this well, if she had done such a thing.
Yp Flame
Vlaedr, thus is Blogland madness
Indeed....
If she did, the double crossed everyone, cause in nearly every book, she helped the good side
Execpt in Death Bringer, cause she had her own problems. And in Dark Days
It's possible that she betrayed them in those books...
Okay, can who is the admin of bogland chronicles?
I believe you meant to say,
What is the meaning of this madness?
Makes sense. If everyone was sane here, then blogland wouldnt be as interesting. But if everyone was insane, then blogland would become ever-so-slightly difficult to understand. Unless you are insane. Then it makes absolutely sense in your little demented world. Make sense, doesnt it?
Isn't it lynx?
even though it was my idea..
Lynxia is
Indeed, you can't dismiss possibilities, nor can you jump to conclusions. Derek is incredibly clever and leaves the books open for theories to occur, but not too open as to make it so ANYTHING can happen. :')
Totally Vlaedr.
It actually does Vlaedr. That in itself is a testamany to my madness
Yes, Vlaedr. It makes perfect sense.
Therefore, insanity is appreciated here, to add flavour and variety; whilst keeping things going. Boring old sanity is mediocre and doesnt make for good stories or characters.
I think I will call this, "The Blogland Syndrome".
TBS for short.
Sanity is the ability to deny everything fun.
Pft. It's not a medical disease, just slight madness none of us shall ever cure.
We've all known we're insane for a logn time. Star even came up with a name, though a forgot
brb
BAKC
Insanity is having a different prespective of the world, and percieving boring things in a fun way.
I think. Thats how I am. Sometimes. Are you mad if you admite to being insane sometimes?
WB Nix.... Welcome Back to Insanity....
That is just such a cool line....
Oh, Insanity follows me around like a dog, looking for a treat
Vlaedr, we all admit to being insane. INSANITY!
Hello, again, Nix. *waves and throws cupcakes at everyone*
Well then feed it, Nix. Stray dogs always come back when you feed them.
I do feed it, now it won't leave me alone. IT NEVER LEAVES!
*looks at insanity that is like a dog*
*nods* I'm insane.
*noms a cupcake happily*
*wipes icing off face*
I resent that.
Why do you resent that
*is confuzzled*
Scooby Doo <3 I LOVE THIS FILM. :'3
Wait, what do you resent?!
Hi.
Resent ~ to feel aggrieved about something or towards somebody, often because of a perceived wrong or injustice
I know what resent means!
HI AMP. That is all I see when I look at your name.
Hi... you
Wait. Nah, i thought i heard the ZOMBIE APPOCOLYPSE OF SCAPEGRACE coming. But no, i thought wrong. *looks slightly sad*
Just call me Toffee. Everyone else does
Nix I hardly see why my comment is so puzzling.
Hello, person. I'm actually going to refer to you as person, until there is another name I can refer to you as. :)
So YOU are the infamous Toffee... That doesnt like coffee, but likes toffee...
I REALLY WANT SOME COFFEE, NOWWWWW.
Hi Toffee! *waves* Nice to meet you!
Valice, I have done as you asked.
Please, Fred if your going to jump of that building, at least put an easil under you, so when you splat you create art. We could call it, Splatters by Fred.
That was just rambling really. Please dont think I'm going to assist someone in suicide.
Hi people!
Refering to the comments avove, my name for us is the EIOUEMGG. Pronounced i owe you a mug. Stands for Extremely Insane Outsane Unsane and Exsane Minions of the Golden God.
Oh hi taia. I've never met you but ill say hi anyway. Hi! *waves*
EIOEMGG!
I knew it was something like that
Splatters by Fred! *laughs*
I love us. The EIOUEMGG. I remember the day Ink thought about that idea.
*remembers*
That is complicated...
*above
Yep. EIOUEMGG:)
I-owe-you-a-mug.
WOLF IN A CASTLE!
What is complicated, Toffee "Coffee Hater" ?
Hi star. I didnt know you were... em... blog commenting. Wow. I just saw a man in a top hat. FRED!!!!!!
Hello, Star.
Which wolf, Eve? And did you catch his name? And where is the castle???
*starts looking for wolf castle*
I remember the time i thought it up, but i don't remember the day i did it. I have a rubbish memory.
EIOUEMGG is complicated Lord Vlaedr (Wolf-face-profile-pic)
I was there....
*in dramatic voice*
I was there the day the strength of Man grew....
*Isildur face*
Witchy the Witch Wolf lives in the Castle of Witches. And he only comes out during Witching Hour.
*is terrified again*
Flame strode into the room, staring at the mess. Belbaus smiled at him from his comfortable hospital bed. Takeaway cartons lay scattered on the floor and the bed. Flame sighed. "Hey," he said unconvingly.
Belbaus' smile grew bigger and soon, he was laughing. "Hi, Phoenix"
Flame flicked his ear and then they were both laughing. Five minutes, when they had finally stopped laughing at each other, Flame put on the news.
A woman in a tweed suit and blazer appeared, holding a microphone with a sticker saying channel six, in blue and yellow writing. "Today, suspicions lie to terriosrists blowing up the London underground. Attacks show, thta they're may bet yet, another one...." The woman trailed off.
Belbaus looked acrss at Flame's face, a mask of horror and seriousness.
"I dont think we got those mages..." He said.
A knock on the hopsital room's floor window startled the two of them. A small pebble hd hit it, and they were now both looking out the window cautiously. Belbaus looked at Flame, and Flame looked back. They shared a moments anxiousness and relaxed. A fireball zoomed through the window, smashing it into a thousand pieces, sending a mixture of glass and sparks onto the ground.
"Welcome back to insanity," a voice all to familar spoke from outside the room.
*runs around yelling at wolf castle* YOU COME OUT AND SHOW YOURSELF NOW, WOLF CASTLE!
Hey look! A wolf! Right next to my comments!
*sniffs wolf*
EIOUEMGG..?
That. Is. Awesome!!
Is anyone here the already dead but now undead A.K.A a zombie. If so then read this *picks up shot gun and points it at zombie. Fires continuously until zombies face it just a big blobof red.*
*throws a bludgeon at Witchy*
Skulduggery is undead... Kinda. 0o
Cool flame!
Or should i say, cool FLAMES.
(Flames, from the fireball, geddit?)
I would smell a zombie a mile away. Or two.
Look at this on you tube:
Special Fred. It has no swearing in. Except for one part, but thats bleeped out.
"I gotta I gotta keep you with me!!!
I still smell like your perfume, Damn I wish you were still in this room..."
Song. Not weirdo freak.
Thanks taia:)
Yay! EIOUEMGG is finally being used!
*hears people downstairs talking about bike rides and today irl* uh-oh. Msd.
g2g, bye peeps.
"Catch my flight, 6 am, one last stop and I am home again...."
STill Song. I will stop now.
You've been Fredified wolfy person!
My name is Vlaedr. Not wolfy person. Call me wolfy person, Fred-person, and I will eat your gallbladder.
Bye Flame
May the fours be with you flame!
love the picture
yellow plus blue= 32
So, in logic what is blue plus orange? (or does it have no answer?...)
I think your books arent that gory i love them
Bye, Flame! *waves*
I am being really slow to reply - doing adminy things... :')
Hi coconut! If you're a proper EIOUEMGG.
Okay dokay Wol- sorry, Vlaedr. Dont call me Fred person. Call me... Pebbles
Bye Phoenix
Okay. Pebbles...
*Poker face*
Hi pebbles!
Hello. Pebbles is the name of my Dog. She's a Dalmatian
Why am I calling you by your dog's name?
Pebbles...? Hmmm...Cool name. :) I still prefer Person, though. :P
You like Jessie J? That is insane. I like here too. Probably one of the best out there.
Why not Madness? That's a cool name.
*looks hungry*
I'll go get some lunch now...
Bye!
*her
Ugh. I hate it when I misspell things.
*is confuzzled*
STOP SPEAKING SO FAST!
May the fours be with you taia!
Pebbles is a Dalmatian,
In her Dog world she is a sensation,
She likes walks,
To Dogs she talks,
Pebbles is a Dalamatian.
By some idiot who decided to write a poem about a dog A.K.A me.
I like Jessie J. Does anyone watch the Voice here?
GTG bye!
Harpie Flamehand?
THE VOICE! <3
And g'byeeeeeeee. :) *waves*
ME! Starstar watches the voice! *the british version, that is*
Okay... Good-Salutations-Bye
May the fours be with you pebbles!
Ink, you havent posted in a while...
Why?
Coz i have nothink to post about?
I'm typing up rebellion chap one this weekend though.
According to my sources, you posted four days ago...
Which isnt that long, but still.
I want something from you! Soon!
Oh im back. Harpie Flamehand? Oh yeah thats the name my Dad said to put. Strange huh? I wanted something a bit weirder but...I kept it. Its alright i think. What do you think? You can insult me if you want.
I like Harpie Flamehand. Unusual, but still pretty cool.
I can only type things up on the laptop.
And i'm not allowed on the laptop at this point in time.
Of course i could do a random post, but THEN i have to think of something random to say . . . *starts thinking*
Harpie Flamehand . . .
Yeah. Cool.
Wow my Guinea Pig Winston just jumped of the edge of his box in his cage. That looked awesome. Hes ok.
Wait, Toffee died? The caramel coloured one?
Sad. It was the cuter one there.
Ink, speaking of blogs, you should check mine again sometime. I just posted Chapter 5. Things are getting all action-y...
Wait do i just click on someone to start following their blog? After of course pressing follow. Who wants me to join their blog. I'll read and then just join.
Me. I would like it if you followed me.
Yeah I loved Toffee. I love Winston too though. Winston was the oldest and Toffee was the youngest. It was soooo cute when they used to cuddle up to each other when it was raining.
So the younger one died? How?
OK I've joined your blog now Vlaedr. Looks pretty cool. Do i have to read the first post to understand all the others?
BBL, maybe.
ANYONE? Its the apocolypse...
AND I AM ALONE!
Dunno. He was all happy and popcorny (Popcorning is an actual term used for guinea pigs) then he just laid down and died. :( Winston was cuddling him though, so he was comforted
Oh wait. Its was just the lights that went out.
*turns lights on*
That would be best Harpie.
The apocolypse? Comeing now? God help us! *Drops to the floor holding a knife to my stomach.* Should i kill my self?
My blog posts are really not that long. I keep short and sweet. Sometimes they turn sour though.
Then they are called sweet and sour.
No, Harpie. The lights went out. I dont think its the apocolypse.
*gets shotgun ready*
But I am ready if it is!
Watching the first Sherlock Holmes. XD
Oh good the lights just turned of? Oh **** the knifes already in my stomach! Soz about the swearing. Someone call an ambulance!
DEREK, I HAVE A POSSIBLE SOLUTION!
Ok so basically my solution is stupid, but still, YOU COULD PUT
11+ ON THE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Because my nine-year-old sister, no matter how many times I told her not to, went and read Death Bringer, and she was allowed because it said 9+ on the back. And if YOU want it to be older, why shouldn't it be? It should be! Yeah! And I'm not making any sense. -.-
But yeah, you could, you know, put 11+ on the back. Maybe. I dunno.
So how about you suggest THAT to Nick???????????
Less editing, anyway, if you keep it as blood-thirsty as it is. Mhmm.
*walks back to laptop* its ok. False alarm. It only punctured an artery and im invincible so... im ok.
*Calls Ambulance*
Yes, hi, my friend has a blade in the abdomen. Could you call a doctor? Doctor House would be fine.
Wait is it bad to give your age on here?
House? I love him (well the program)! So so so funny!
EVERYBODY CALM DOWN! I CALLED A DOCTOR! HE IS DOCTOR HOUSE! AND HE IS IN THE HOUSE!
Yes, Harpie. Yes it is.
Bye
*closes eyes* I sense someone has disappeared.
"You do know that what you're drinking is for eye surgery?"
I'm going to come back later
Bye!
You're going....to come back later.
Bye Nix!
Hi Eve. Everyone abandoned us.
Hello, again. *waves*
He was hanged! And he looked like a mouse!
Well how is the word count going, L?
Almost 13K. ^_^
"The man had no pulse."
SWEET! That is alot more than my pathetic number, which I shall not mention here...
"Steel yourself Holmes...."
Well, I hate to be a Khergit, but I gotta go kill Sanjar Khan and his lackeys....
I have 13K that is together, then I have some other chapters all over the place. ^_^
So Cheers Everyone! Have a great, Swadian Day! Not Really....
N'awwww. :3
NOTHING.
"Get that out of my face."
"It's not in your face, it's in my hand."
Hullo, Eve and Luce and Lord Vlaedr!
~glomps Luce~
~pokes Eve~ I met you yesterday, but I'm not sure if you saw out... meeeeeting....
~shakes hand with Vlaedr~ [mind if I call you Vla?]
Pleasure to make your acquaintance! ~gives purple lollipop~
I can't stay for long, but... GREETINGS AND SALUTATIONS!
*samples Skyril's blood*
*holds up lollipop in ziplock bag* I saw it.
OK!
~poke~
~pokes Eve~
Good, you saw. ~nods~
How does y blood taste? Is it tasty?
~pokes~
~pokes~
~pokes~
~pokes~
Hello, Skyril. :') *waves*
Hello, Willow. *waves, some more*
WHOO-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
~boogies~
I DEDICATE THIS PAGE TO GEPARD AND HELLBOY!
YOU GUYS NEED TO HANG OUT AT THE BLOG MORE OFTEN, SERIOUSLY! BECAUSE YOU'RE BOTH AWESOME AND BLOGLAND AWESOME-SAUCE-NESS WOULD BE BETTER IF YOU TWO EPICA PEOPLE WERE HERE!
~cheers~
ALSO, I DEDICATE IT TO KALLISTA BECAUSE SHE IS BRILLIANT, AND SHE IS MY WONDERFUL BLOGSISTER. AND I DON'T WHAT I'D DO WITHOUT HER!
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
~cheers~
GEPARD VALK
ISRAEL ELYSIUM [a.k.a. HELLBOY]
KALLISTA PENDRAGON!
*blinks* I don't drink it. I store it. *puts blood in a ziplock bag and pokes Skyril with a carbon rod*
Hiya, Willow!
~glomps~
How are you doing?
That's a lot of caps...
LOL
Nice dedications, Skyril! :)
I will be distant, again. I am writing. *grins*
@Eve
Store it, huh? Store it where and for what purpose? ~raises eyebrow~
Okie dokie, Luce!
And thanks :]
Experimenting. Comparing.
Ahhh... okie... I wonder how my blood will turn out to be. Probably quite insane. ~nods~
Gtg byr'
G'bye, Eve! *waves frantically and throws a blue cupcake at her* Cya later!
Oh, okie, BYE, EVE!
~waves madly~
Bluuuuuuuuuuue cupcaaaaaaaaaake....
~drools~
O_O
*throws an orange cupcake at Skyril* I don't have any blue cupcakes left.
Hi again!
*looks up*
Blue cupcakes? Where?
The wonderful t'ing about Tiggers-
'Cause Tiggers are wonderful t'ings!
Their tops are made outta rubber!
Their bottoms are made out of springs!
They're bouncy, bouncy, flouncy, founcy-
Fun! Fun! Fun! Fun! Fun!
But the most wonderful t'ing about Tiggers is I'M the only one...
IIIIII'MMM the only one!
AHHHHHHHH!
Orange cupcAAAAAAAAAAAKE!
~runs away with my arms waving the air as scream and jog in circles~
TAIA! HIYA! ~glomps~
How are you? :D
~continues running in circles and screaming madly~
Hiya Skyril! :D
I'm not too bad, thanks for asking.
How're you?
~Pauses~
I'm okie, thank you very much. ~smiles~
Would you like a purple lollipop?
*noms pink cupcake*
Hullo, Valice!
Pleasure to make your acquaintance!
~shakes hand~
~Gives purple lollipop~
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