Glory be, glory be, it's done. Finished. Done and dusted. Over. Practically. Almost.
The edits are all done. I have the weekend to go over KOTW one more time and then we send it to the copyeditor. The copyeditor basically makes sure I haven't made any huge mistakes, and corrects all the little ones before it's too late. She'll tweak and suggest and cut and replace, and then she'll send the manuscript back to me and I'll make my final adjustments, and that'll be it. Boom. Over.
Right now, the book clocks in at 134,729 words. Considering that Death Bringer was marginally over 118,000 words, that's quite a substantial increase. Golly gee, it's gonna be a big book! We're going to have to reduce the font size again to cram as many words onto the page as possible, but our font size is typically big anyway, so at least we have room to play with.
This is the first book where I've had serious discussions with my editor about the level of violence. (Well, I say serious... he was TRYING to be serious and I was making jokes, but you know...)
It's a weird thing, to write a series, because the readers get older as the books are released. Valkyrie gets older, the situations she finds herself in become more grown-up, and the themes get darker and darker as the end approaches. What all this means is that occasionally I fall into the trap of assuming that the Skulduggery readership is able to handle whatever I throw at them. And for the most part, they are.
But there will ALWAYS be new readers. There will ALWAYS be a nine year old who picks up the books for the first time and reads them in a few weeks. And it's unfair to expect that nine year old to be able to deal with content that is more suited to teenagers and adults. So where does that leave me?
In a weird place, that's where. On one hand, I've NEVER viewed this series as strictly children's books, and that view just keeps getting stronger and stronger as Valkyrie gets older. But on the other hand, I have a responsibility to the younger readers to not give them anything they can't handle.
And all of this makes me ever-so-thankful that we have such a thing as editors. I wrote this book in two and a half months of sheer WORK. There was no time to doubt myself and no time for second guesses. Whatever I put down on the page stayed on the page. When you have a more relaxed timetable you can afford to wonder about what you've just written but when the deadline is rushing towards you like a screaming train you just WRITE. With that in mind, I'm not surprised at all that I went too far in some areas. And it was so much FUN.
The battle still isn't over, by the way. Nick, my editor, still thinks I could be a little less bloodthirsty, while I think I'm just bloodthirsty enough. Some serious things happen in this book, and I reckon I needed to be as brutal and uncompromising as possible in order to achieve what I needed to achieve. But we have another week or so of him trying to be serious and me making jokes before I have to make the final decision.
And now a picture!
Friday, May 4, 2012
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«Oldest ‹Older 1401 – 1600 of 4870 Newer› Newest»GO EVE!!!!!
Go me!!!
yay for vilence derek!1
Okay, I feel compelled to point out the obvious here: there is nothing happening.
Also, Valkyrie V. Cain's comment vanished.
Again.
Hello people...
*sits under the tree*
I posted on What If?...
. . .
My comments have been vanishing lately
Gtg. Bye.
Heyy
Heya Freak Fan
Actually im gonna leave. Bye!
Bye
How are you
Swelly grand
Hiiii!
Back. Ish.
Oh, wow...
Must go. Might be back.
Not that anyone cares of course.
Back!
I bin dizappearin a lots todayz.
*scowls*
Baaaaaaaack.
*looks around*
Hi Mist
HI PEOPLE!
Hi Stardust!
Hi Eve...
Hi Ink.
...?
I must warn you.
I am a ninja...turtle...baby....
FWAH!
STARDUST! YAY!
*points to email*
Love that movie.
Replied
"I want a star for my birthday!!!" xD
*panics*
Replied.
Replied
Replied.
*sighs*
Replied
...Replied.
Replied
*is now searching up things*
...
*nods*
*plays with a knife*
*glares and goes for a walk*
hey is anyone on
Hi Amelie!
guess what i got the end of the world
Cool have you read it yet?
im reading it
Do you live in Australia or New Zealand?
Or none?
*neither
Is Star still here? I have to tell her something...
aussie
do you like the hunger games
Still here! Sort of. I was reading.
Yep, starstar like HG.
they are thinking of make robert pattinson finnick for catching fire the movie
I have too many bookmarks . . .
REALLY???
My friends really wanted him to play finnick! They'll be so delighted!
Oh hey star!
i dont i dont want him to i dont think he would look right as the part
Hey Toffee!
Hey everyone! Toffee's back! In my story, there's 20 pages and 4,744 words in it. Not even close to the 10,000 words, but still, its progress.
*shrugs* i don't think he would, either, but you know the reason they'd do it for, right? It's coz loads of people are already crazy over him and more people would watch it if they thought he was in it.
Coolio, toffee!
i dont know what i want to write a stroy about i think i might have one going somewhere
Oh, are you talking about the Hunger Games movies? The movie was good, but it still didnt live up to the book. Especially the Dogs (Mutts) at the end. They were really minor compared to the descriptio i the book.
I'M WRITING TWO STORIES!
One is SP fanfic, and the other one i want to get published one day.
Hi Toffee!
Yes, I do like the Hunger Games, but definitely not as much as SP!
STAR, WE HAVE NO BANANAS.
I KNOW. That was the thing the movie did worst, me tuh-hink.
NO BANANAS???? God help us! *drops to the floor*Why? WWHHHHYYYYYY????
*grins* no fear, eve. A few days ago i guessed that you'd say that sometime soon and so i took precautions.
*gets spade and digs until i reach the bananas i buried*
Here you are, eve. There's tons and tons in there. If you look back over the comments you'll see the moment i buried them.
Although it wasn't on this post . . .
Still *taps bananas with spade* loadsa bananas. We are bananaless no more.
You are our saviour! *stuffs head in hole* YAY!!!! *Takes head out with banana peels all over it*
Toffee, was it your comment that just poofed?
YES! YAY INDEED! I AM YOUR SAVIOUR!
I dunno. I dont see any poofed comment
Look:
Eve the ROCK said..
Hi Toffee!
Yes, I do like the Hunger Games, but definitely not as much as SP!
STAR, WE HAVE NO BANANAS.
May 6, 2012 9:10 AM
Star Inkbright (Ink!) said..
I KNOW.
That was the thing the movie did worst, me tuh-hink.
May 6, 2012 9:11 AM
Skulduggery&Valkyrie Fanatic
NO BANANAS???? God help us! *drops to the floor*Why? WWHHHHYYYYYY????
May 6, 2012 9:13 AM
I thought there was another one of your comments before your NO BANANAS one seeing as SOMEONE'S comment poofed and i can't think of any other comment that could be considored missing.
BANANA!
Hey, have you seen the Despicable Me Banana song on YouTube?
Wait...why are you Toffee?
Damn. My comment disappeared!
I said hi.
I think I over dis the description on this chapter...
*considered
No eve, sorry. I watched half of despicable me once but even if i saw it in the half i watched, u doubt i would rember. Star's bad memory strikes again.
*did
The little yellow things are so cute!
Hi Lynxia!!!
Hi lynxia!
So it was YOUR comment that poofed . . .
The MINIONS, they're called! *nods*
Hi, there's just one thing: my friend has a own blog since a few weeks. And she's not really into it yet, but that might be because i'm her only follower. So maybe you could follow it too, i bet then she would start writing more interesting things. By the way, she's german too, so her english isn't always that good... And she likes Skulduggery too. So if you want to follow her: here's the link:http://lunaslittleworld.blogspot.de/
Oh, and in Germany Skulduggery is 13+ (on Amazon)
Oh, ans one last thing:
TODAY BATU GETS FINALY KILLED!
In germany we have a series called "Tartort". and there is a undercover agent in it, called Cenk BATU! And today they'll kill him. if you don't belive me, google it!
I had an idea for something at the end of Fate but I think I over did the description slightly. It's all very melodramatic...
I don't like calling them that because WE are Minions!
Oh, Im back.Hiya! Everyone look at this on youtube: Special fred. It is awesome.
I have to be on a computer to follow. Will do it later...
Fred is amazing!!!
So anyone still here now?
*smiles at a sentence* I love that line.
'Closer and closer...'
So short but so effective.
Hello? Anyone at the blogger comments? Hi strange people? Anyone here?
Hi Chloe.
I'm here but I'm seeing if I can cut down on the description because at the moment it's a bit too much description.
Hi Chloe!
how rs u?
I'm pretty goose.
I gotta go everyone! I'll probably be back at 10 or 11.
G
T
G
Ba-a-ye!
im tired, my lay in was cut short
byii
g2g *yawn* byii
May the fours be with the people who are leaving!
I am now following luna's blog . . . Which was a little hard to do seeing as my Follow button has mysteriously disapoeared off every blog. I did it through the google friend connect thing but all the instructions were in german, so that was a challenge too . . .
May the fours be with the people who are leaving!
I am now following luna's blog . . . Which was a little hard to do seeing as my Follow button has mysteriously disapoeared off every blog. I did it through the google friend connect thing but all the instructions were in german, so that was a challenge too . . .
*disappeared
Also, i have no picture on the follow-thingy.
At least SOMEONE'S here . . . Hi lynxia.
Hello Lynxia. *waves*
*thinks of waves as in the sea*
Why are you thinking about that?
Sorry. my phone died. I have to go now anyway! Bye! *hugs*
May the fours be with you lynxia!
Coz, you waving. I just looked at the word anf ended up thinking of the sea.
OK I'm back! I just made scrambled eggs. And gave them to my Dad. He seemed pretty pleased.
Hiya Everyone! May the Fourth be with you!
Tra la la la la la la la la la la!
*lets out a mad cackle*
Hi toffee!
Wbd.
*appears*
Hello!
Bonjourrr.
Hello??
Hola!
Hi Nixion! Hi Luciana!
Salut!
Hi people who appeared!
Msd - not meant to be on electronics.
Will be distant. Writing.
Lotsa appear-ations . . .
I'm MEANT to be writing . . .
Hi Ink!
I should be writing too, though think I have writers block. again. -.-"
I'm writing and editing..
I'm meant to be prioritising my fanfic but i always seem to end up writing Rebellion . . .
. . . silence . . .
I'm bored
Hiya!
Sorry. I was editing Mark's character a tad, he needs to say things like:
Issues
Creepy
Okay...?
Weird...
'Cause they're the things Sam is starting to say, more often. ¬_¬ He is stealing my words....
I'm sorry, no offense to anyone, but the idea of Valduggery or ... the one with China is ridiculus. Skulduggery loved his wife, and she died. I think the idea of Skulduggery is that he won't love anyone that way again. And he's a skeleton, for crying out loud. I just don't think it'll happen
Sorry. I guess now'd be a good time to mention that I'll be a little distant, huh? :P
On another note, Hi Eve!
Hi Eve
Nixion, I've always found the idea of Valduggery a little creepy, personally. I don't think I've ever heard of the one with China, though. 0o
CHINDUGGERY.
Chinduggery have at LEAST a flirtationship. They have chemistry...It's pretty clear, they have...But, yeah...
Hello, Eve. *waves*
Valduggery is merely a HC.
Not a chemistry, i don't think. But China likes to mess with him. I don't think he feels the same way, even in the slightest
Hi eve!
*looks in banana pit*
They're nearly all gone now . . . :(
*tilts head* I think Chapter 60 of Death Bringer may contradict Chinduggery ever so slightly.. :P
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I think chinduggery could be quite good.
STAR, WE ALMOST HAVE NO BANANAS.
And Val is like Skuls daughter, nothing like Valduggery will ever happen
They have chemistry. There's something there. They flirt with each-other. The two of them remind me of some people I know. They act as though they don't care about each-other, but they truly do.
Skulduggery allowed China to live, he wouldn't have done this for anyone else, I don't think. He let her live, because he cares about her. China and Skulduggery could very possibly have history. They've got something special, I think, maybe not now, but they definitely had something in the past.
Maybe Skulduggery dismisses his feelings for China due to the fact that everyone falls in love with China, because of her beauty. Maybe he does care about her, just as she cares about him. China didn't want to keep the secret because she was scared he'd kill her, but because she was scared he'd hate her.
It's OBVIOUS skulduggery will make it up with china eventually, chinduggery or no chinduggery.
I AM AGAINST VALDUGGERY COMPLETELY
Damn. Bbs.
I am against both of them. Skulduggery won't really love again, and Val will either destroy the world, so it won't matter, or meet someone else
And did anyone pick up, "We need a responsible Elder. Like China."
Total LOL moment for me. XD
Again, Valduggery = HC. No more, never will happen. He's paternal over her. No matter how much they say it'll happen, it can't. The age gap is too large, they're there for each-other like friends. Skulduggery is like Gordon, in a way. He's like an uncle to her, or a second father - just as Gordon was. She looks up to him, for advice. They help each-other out, they bully each-other a little and he teaches her to fight and mentors her in the ways of an Elemental. They're best friends, nothing more and nothing less.
Yeah, i picked that up. Sarcasm!
Thank you L!
I can't change your views on China and Skul-man though...
CHINA IS DEAD!!!!!!!
Seriously...
Indeed I picked that up. I giggled, myself.
Hello, Flame. *waves*
Hi Flame
LOL Eve!
And while they may make up, I'm not sure, along with what Nixion said about his wife and family, that Skulduggery would want to go there, y'know..?
Hi Flame!
Thank you Taia! Skulman isn't going to go there!
Nix, I am far too stubborn, my dear. But, even after writing Valduggery, I can't seem to understand it. There's nothing more than a friendship there.
Chinduggery, however, they definitely have a flirtationship, at the VERY least. It's there. Even if it is only one winding up the other. CAN I JUST POINT OUT THE FACT THAT THEY DANCE IN DB? Which can be seen as a romantic gesture? And China's beginning to feel maternal over Valkyrie - shown with the horse riding, thing - and this is likely to be because of her feelings towards Skulduggery..
I could totally write an A* essay on Chinduggery...Just saying. I wish we could have SP on the curriculum...I'd ace it. XD
Hi Flamereno!
I like the idea of Chinduggery, but I seriously doubt Derek would turn SP into something like that.
CHINA IS FREAKING DEAD..
SKULDUGGERY KILLED HER,
IN DB.
IT HAPPENED.
LISTEEEEENNN...
It is only a HC, but it does have the ability to become canon. It is there, but it's whether Derek chooses to take it anywhere...
He could make it so Valkyrie falls for Skulduggery, but he chooses China over her, that'd be interesting...But I highly doubt Derek would do such a thing.
Flame, China is still alive...
They dance. Friends dance at balls. Val is China's friend, and Skul is China's friend. Just friends!
China is probably still going to be alive, until near the end, or until the end...
Derek will not get Skul to go with either of them.
I'll make a bet!
Money can't be the betting... I need to match you with a bet and an equal bet of yours
Back!
Msd.
I AM TOTALLY AGAINST VALDUGGERY, YOU'RE RIGHT PEOPLE, HE'S LIKE A PARENT TO HER.
When they're dancing they could be talking about any number of things. The dance can be seen as between friends, or as a romantic gesture. If you study the text, you will understand why I support Chinduggery.
OH AND EVIE dear. You might want to have a chat with Mist, he's a bit.. down...
Like i mean, like this:
Down.
Flame, don't go there
L, you're pointing dots where there are none. I study the text like a bible.
Skulduggery killed her.
He illed her in Db. or what the fuck..
*is confuzzled*
I'll type the paragraph.
*runs off to get book*
Boom...
It says Val was afraid that she'd hear of Skul killing China, not that it actually happened
Hi Mist
*nods* Nixion is right. He hasn't actually killed her... Yet.
Hi Mist!
Nix, I am not pointing out dots where there are none, I need not study the book as I have read it so many times I know it like the back of my hand. Derek is extremely intelligent in the way that he has left much to the imagination, while still giving us enough.
I doubt Derek will allow Chinduggery to become canon, but it is there. I fully support Chinduggery, just as I support Ghanith and Fletchyrie. It is merely an opinion, formed by the way in which I have read the books and my imagination works. You can't say that Chinduggery is an impossibility, as even Valduggery is possible.
don't go where?
She hadn't heard from him in two days. She kept expecting a call from Ghastly, informing her that Skulduggery was in custody, charged with the unlawful killing of China Sorrows...
Does that not mean she's dead?
Hello, Mist.
Skulduggery most likely shan't be killing China.
There could be dots there, i admit. But you're not the only one who need not study them, because they have been studied by moi. But the dots are missing a few crucial dots. Derek could do it, but i doubt it
Flame, China is alive. Valkyrie expected China to be dead, but she's not.
Hi Mist. :)
SHE's Not........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
DEAD?
No, Phoenix, she's not dead.
Hey Misterio.
China is alive.
There's a possibility that she's dead, but Derek wouldn't not write a scene of her dieing. DShe might die later...
Flame, it shows that she was expecting a call from Ghastly, not that she received one.
It also continues to to say 'But as the darkness drew in on another day her phone, thankfully, remained silent.'
Which further shows that she didn't receive a call. :)
...What if China got killed by a forest troll, pixies and poisonous berries?
Ignore me if you don't know what I'm referring to.
Eve, i thought we all agreed that that was ludicris
What are you referring to?
Spelling died in the Personality Wars. Ignore me if you don't know what I'm talking about
I hope China doesn't die. I have a love for her character. Everything about her is just appealing...I believe that she is a crucial character for the story and her treachery is very peculiar. :')
I KNEW THERE WAS SOMEONE HERE WHO HASN'T READ MY BLOG!
*throws knives at Phoenix*
Yeah, but I dread the moment when my brother is right, Nix. DREAD.
LOOOOOOOOOOOOL. Eve.
I'm changing accounts now, hold on a sec..
If that happens, i'll give you my frog. This frog is very powerful
Luciana, EVERYONE feels that way about China.
I love annoying people with that. XD
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