Friday, April 1, 2016

Demon Road Book 3 Will Be...


With Desolation only a few days away, I am still hard at work on the third and final Demon Road book.

From the beginning, I wanted these books to be as streamlined as possible — I wanted them short and punchy. Now, I completely failed with Demon Road, as it was a pretty big book, and only got slightly better with Desolation, which is shorter, but it looks like I'm finally getting the hang of this with Book 3, which will hopefully be the perfect length.

And the title?




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Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

@Noelle I remember that! I'd just got my wisdom teeth out, and I was extremely jealous that you two got to meet up and have fun and I got to sit on the sofa being miserable.

@Eve Did Zaf send you a review too? Or are you confusing me with her?

@Kas Yeah, the formatting just sort of felt right...

Inky Flame said...

(*hugs* I've missed you eve!!!

Hey guys!)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hello Chloe!

...

I'm terrible at this whole "get your butt out of bed, Fabi" thing.

Lavender Hope said...

*wonders why headphones or earphones are important*

And no offense to anyone, but because of robots, I'm not going to be replying to every comment I see.

However, there are exceptions.

*waves to Chloe in greeting*

Eve the ROCK said...

(I mean, Fabi sent the review. Lol)

Ooh, good luck on those Star! Fifty Shades, hahaha...From the excerpts I've read, not only is a godawful book, it's not even impressive for a fanfic. :P

Eve the ROCK said...

Sorry Fabi! I meant you. Thank you for it :D

Inky Flame said...

(*eats tea an biscuits*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

I'd rather read Twilight fanfiction than Fifty Shades XD

@Hope Well, if your family is okay with random swearing?

@Robots stop discriminating.

Noelle said...

*Probably can't get angry with Derek*

*It irks her when people are hurtful to Derek and Laura*

Lavender Hope said...

*still a little confused*
Are you meaning to say it's going to be /loud/, Kas? I'm okay with swearing, even if I don't like to swear personally(not in the really bad swearing kind of way anyway), but if it's going to be loud, I can wait until later...

*thinks Derek and Laura are still good people*
*remembering how he takes time for his fans and adds them into his books as cameos(or in Zaf's case, as a minor character that he can have revenge on for always blowing up Ireland)*

Star Inkbright said...

@Eve: Cat watched it though and she said it was cleverly done in some ways so I'm curious

Fifty Shades is something I'd muchly like to intellectly discuss so I think imma read it once exams have started XD

@Noelle: :( I understand that

Noelle said...

*Nod*
I've talked to Laura a lot- I've known her for, what... Five, six years now? Long before this all happened. And she has told me about the stuff that people will stay to her on the Internet... It's just terrible.

Star Inkbright said...

@Noelle: :/

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Well, a lot of people have justified reasons to be upset with Derek right now, but as far as I'm aware, Laura's done nothing wrong. It sucks that people are bringing her into it.

Eve the ROCK said...

I genuinely think Derek had good intetions with the novel. Most authors do. I don't think anyone regards him differently as a person, but mistakes can't be ignored and it looks like people were really hurt by some of the stuff in the book so hopefully that doesn't happen again.

Really? Everyone I know who watch 50shades thought the chemistry and dialogue was out-of-this-world bad and it needed more porn. :P

Noelle said...

^thats what I meant, Fabi, and Eve. What Fabi said.

If there are general poor reactions to the book, well, Derek is an adult, and he is a public figure. He is used to criticism. It just upsets me when Laura is brought into it

Eve the ROCK said...

Man, I don't even know Laura. I heard about when they started dating and everyone was mad because she was a fan or because of the age gap... I hate when people try to have opinions on someone's personal life. Unfortunately it doesn't just happen to celebrities.

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

Yeah, I've got no issues with Laura. As far as I know, none of this is her fault.

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

(Also, Star, I'll be happy to debate with you when we both finish if you have different opinions. You're someone I can actually discuss this stuff with without getting TOO angry.)

Noelle said...

*nods*
She is just one of the kindest people I have ever met. We first met on Fanfiction, where she and I wrote stories there. I knew her long before I ever came on here..

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

Hey, Adra, btw! Long time no see

Star Inkbright said...

I don't think it's at all fair to bring Laura into it if people are mad at Derek.

@Eve: Cat says it was really quite clever in that by the end of it you actually wanted Ana to go back and be with whatshisface (there are so many variations on his type of name I can never Reem bet which version he is).
I mean I said people probably liked it for the BDSM and she said it wasn't because of that it was because it was clever.

@Kes: :) Thank you. I'll come and speak to you after I've read it.

Alastair Cruciatus said...

My, how many people seem to have suddenly returned. Hello.

Noelle said...

OH!

Hi Kes!!

-sorry, had been ghosting for a while, I forgot to say hi!- How are you, dove?


Friends, I composed something for my music theory class... I love it. Is anyone interested in hearing it? I may post it to my blog in a bit

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

What's with the technophobia here? Robots are people too, you know?

(Hey, Noelle! Oh, idk who Laura is so idk why people are even dragging her into this and serisously, people are dragging her into this?????)

Noelle said...

I like the new profile pic, Kas!

Laura is Derek's girlfriend

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, Alastair!)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

I'd love to hear it, Noelle!

Hello, Alastair.

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

Adra: Dw about it, babe. I'm really good, despite all evidence to the contrary *gestures at last hundred comments* I spent eight hours with my girlfriend and our friend yesterday, marathoning Star Wars Episodes 4-7. It was great. How about you? What's up?

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

And I'd love to hear it!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Thanks, Noelle! Not sure whether I'll keep it, I didn't really look around for a pic but chose the first one I saw that was properly cropped like a square. And I don't get why Laura would get the Derek hate? :/)

Eve the ROCK said...

Huh...I guess I've never really wanted any two characters to get back together, personally. Especially with this kind. I mean, I know it's BDSM-themed, but you're probably supposed to be doing that with someone who respects you and doesn't start regulating your meals and alcohol intake before you've even signed the damn contract. I would like to believe there was some intelligent storytelling there, but it was a fanfic. EL wrote it because Edward and Bella are hot together. Anyway, you should read it and tell me your thoughts. :P

Eve the ROCK said...

Hi Alastair and Kas!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Oh and I forgot about the comment earlier, sure, I'd like to hear it!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

{@Eve Hi! Do you play EVE?)

Inky Flame said...

(Kessie!!!!!! )

Eve the ROCK said...

@Kas I sure don't! But I know about it, since I like to google my name every once in a while. :P

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

I am a robot.

Inky Flame said...

(I love helping nan with crosswords! )

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*tacklecuddles Kessy!!!*)

Inky Flame said...

(Hello Jai ^.^)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Chloe I suck at crosswords! XD But I used to do the same.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Jai! :)

Noelle said...

I'm glad that the two of you had fun, and Star Wars is certainly an excellent date choice.

I'm alright, trying to study, trying to get more scholarships for University (thoguh I submitted my housing application today!)

And playing on my flutes :)

*goes to Hamlet, and gives him a little kiss*

@Kes: Because Laura is younger than Derek. Not one or two years younger, a bit more- however, they are both consenting and legal adults, and they are really in love. People are just being pushy because Laura and Derek don't fit the norm.

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

Hey Chloe!!

*is tacklecuddled* STORM
HI

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Oh, gtg for a bit. See you guys later!)

Noelle said...

@Friends: I will try to move to Youtube to upload

Inky Flame said...

(I like em ^.^
I remember in English once my teacher did one online and asked us to help
One of the words no one got apart from me so I said it, but it was too quiet, but the guy in front of me heard me and said it -_-)

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

And...I've got to go again. Ugh.

Star Inkbright said...

@Eve: That's the controversy - many BDSM fans are mad at her bevause of her shitty portrayAl of it
however, Cat said in the movie she asked for it. I mean literally asked for it. Not figuratively asked for it. Either way, I'll have to read it.

And you see, I have this shipping emotion that kicks on on occasion, and by "on occasion" I mean "approximately once per year," but when my shipping emotion kicks in I muchly want the people I'm shipping to be together. Like it makes me happy if when it seems they might get together and if they like fall out its like "*distressed face*". However my shipping emotion tends to rather weird me out when it occurs bevause the rest of the time I usually don't really care whether people are together or not.

Noelle said...

Bye Friends!


And yeah, that horrendous book...

Not even close to what actually happens

Star Inkbright said...

@Noelle: I hate it when people are judgemental about things consensual adults do that make both said consensual adults happy . . .
My phone doesn't like the word "consensual"
apparently no one has taught my phone about consent yet :P

Inky Flame said...

(How is everyone?

YouTube... If I start YouTube in uni later this year, will you guys check my first video out?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi Kas and Chloe.



Nuhhhh. Kessy!!! Stay!!!)

Star Inkbright said...

@Chloe: If you tell me to. :)

Eve the ROCK said...

Bye Kas and Kes!

Yeah I did hear about that. Those people already get so misunderstood and judged, don't need a popular book making it worse. But I think the actual thing that made it a bad portrayal of BDSM was that Ana didn't really have a say. Like, she was subtly manipulated and harassed into entering the BDSM relationship and that's what made it so bad. Which means it doesn't sound very ship-able. :P

Yeah, I don't ship much either! Although I do ship the fox and rabbit from Zootopia. It was weird because I saw the trailer and thought 'they better not get together' because of the cliche, but after seeing the movie....they have great chemistry. But for the most part I don't have many feelings about movie/book/tv relationships because it's mostly man/woman and well...I just don't get it, you know? :P

However, China and Skulduggery will forever be my biggest ship and I'm so happy it was touched on in the 8th. XD Who's your OTP Star?

Eve the ROCK said...

Sure Chloe!

Inky Flame said...

(Thanks Star *.^

I ship the bunny and the fox too! I haven't seen it yet XD )

Inky Flame said...

(Thanks Eve ^.^

I have to get used to my voice, I hate it XD )

Inky Flame said...

(May I say Eve, you're pwetty ^.^)

Eve the ROCK said...

You will ship them so much Chloe it was actually so good. I was actual kind of shocked that there would be this much sexual tension in a Disney movie. I was like 'How can there be children here witnessing all this lustful banter and highly suggestive physical interactions?!'
It's like so good though

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Eve the ROCK said...

Aww thanks Chloe :D Show us your face someday!

Eve the ROCK said...

Hi Keiron!

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Noelle said...

:( Did my comment not post?

https://youtu.be/waA_Qpxrl8k

This is my composition for class

Inky Flame said...

(*changes pic*

I can't wait to see it!!)

Noelle said...

Oh!
And also, this is not the final version, either. I'm thinking of working more on it, so that I may enter it into a scholarship competition in late May. I'll have to add about two more minutes to the song. Were the repeats actually working, the song itself would be 90 seconds. As it happens, though, Finale notepad is incompetent.

When I return to school tomorrow, I will try to download the finished version onto my computer. Our teacher had us go through and do the finishing touches on the school version of Finale...

Urgh.

:( I'm not a robot! Why is there doubt, after five years?

Inky Flame said...

(I listened Noelle, it's amazing!

It doubts me at times too :-()

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

I'm gonna watch it when I get off the bus so I can actually hear it.

And yeah, I'm not fond of Finale. I prefer MuseScore, which has more glitches, but you can also do more with it.

As I recall though, there's some hidden setting where you can have it repeat on playback? It's been a while since I used it though, so I may be mistaken.

Noelle said...

:) Thanks!
Yes, the competition is worth 5,000$. Which is, like, a lot. And much needed :)

And I know- Blogger chooses the strangest times...

Star Inkbright said...

@Eve: Cat said that's WHY it was clever that you wanted them to end up together.


I haven't seen Zootopia

I've worked out that my
*loses ability to speak*
*stays into space a bit*
Hang on. This happens on occasion.
Um . . .
Shipping emotion. Kicks in. Close. Situations.
Yeah I tend to ship people if some combination of the following (often less than four but always more than one) happens
a) I like them
b) I feel quite close to the characters (can get inside their heads)
c) it's written/acted well
d) I like the situation emotionally (I like secondhand experiencing the emotions in that particular situation)

Also it's weird because I've been really not keen on romance for the past year or so (I mean, there's been a "get away from me" emotion) but now that's not so strong so all my emotional reactions to everything have changed a bit and I can't judge where I am with things very well.

Sorry. I did warn you I was overly analytical.

I don't have an OTP, really. I don't really have absolute favourites. I don't have a favourite food or a favour animal or a favourite . . . okay well I DO have a favourite colour now but that took me years.
However, most recent ship has been Dan and Carrie from the roleplay I'm doing with my friends. Bevause like. Dude. Like. Dan is like the most awesome person ever but when it comes to emotions he's really incompetent bevause he doesn't understand any of what he feels (that's all emotions btw), and he can't actually ask her out bevause he doesn't even know how to. And then Carrie's like the nicest human being you will ever meet. And like Dan killed Carrie's brother and Carrie's like forgiven him bevause she's like that, she's so nice she's an idiot because she prioritises being nice over being sensible and if you tell her to trust you she will even if she thinks you're wrong, but Dan feels really really guilty over killing him bevause he's afraid that it upset Carrie, even though her brother was a total dickhead who needed to die and Carrie's kinda got over it anyway. And I just want Dan and Carrie to go like open a pub, and I want Dan's best friend Nick who's like sixteen to like live with them (because Nick has a shit life and Dan keeps telling Nick that he's got a spare room set aside for him and he can live with him. I platonically ship Dan and Nick very much) and Carrie can like serve drinks and be nice and Dan can like pop up every so now and then and drink vodka and start shooting people if there's any trouble.
But that won't happen bevause Carrie sold her soul bevause she's an idiot so she'll die in a few days and Dan's upset over it but he doesn't know how to deal with his emotions so he just keeps getting angry and telling Carrie he hates her and that she'll be better off dead and keeps shooting her and whatnot and so Carrie's like upset bevause she was only trying to be nice by selling her soul but it's like upset everyone and she feels bad about it.

But you know.

*shuffles off to stop ranting and be productive*
*started reading Demon Road btw*

Inky Flame said...

(you are so talented Noelle !)

Noelle said...

MuseScore? I'm not familiar with that program...
Well, this is Finale Notepad, like, 2008. So not only is it not the most up to date version, but it is neither the full version. The full version is quite a few hundred dollars, and this was about fifteen or so. I don't remember what my teacher said.

And, I can put the repeat at the end of the measure, and I can configure the settings in the full version, just not the short version. Which is why I may try to record tomorrow at school.

Star Inkbright said...

@Chloe: :) Yes she is.

Inky Flame said...

(I'm so envious of people who can do music
I want to try electric guitar but I'm not allowed :-(

I tried flute for a year but the teacher was horrible..)

Star Inkbright said...

@Noelle: :) It's beautiful.

Noelle said...

Star, I don't know how you can keep up with all of it.

*thanks friends* I'm quite proud of this one...
This is why Music & Comp. is my favorite class, beside Christian Life. So much fun... So relaxing... Music..

It's too bad my school didn't offer the Music Theory AP. After fourteen years of piano, I feel confident that I would have gotten a 5.

>.< *keeps forgetting to hit the "robot" button*

I literally just typed this sentence ^^^ and forgot to hit it again.

Star Inkbright said...

@Chloe: Haha, I was literally just about to say "I wish I could do musical stuff"

It's okay though
We all have our own talents so I'm alright with not being musically talented
It means I get to talk about not being musically talented whenever I'm ranting about how we all have our own talents :P

Inky Flame said...

(I think I'm gonna stick with lau gar Kung fu)

Star Inkbright said...

@Noelle: All of what?
*honestly asking. It's hard when you're a very confused being and autocorrect suggests "confused" to you after you type "*looks" because you keep having to disrupt conversation flow by asking questions and it's annoying on both ends. :P*

Noelle said...

All of the roleplay, I meant. And the OTP.


And it is okay, music is... Well, it is creative. And everyone has different ways of being creative. Some people like to draw and paint (regardless of if they do it well, it's enjoyable), some people like music. Some people like to garden, or dance, or sing, or do theatre, or write, or cook, or build (like, architecture, or design games or something), some people like to make clothes, some like to silversmith or shape and polish rocks.

There are many ways to be creative.

Eve the ROCK said...

The Ego of Star: She ships figments of her own imagination.

:P Honestly though I agree! I like to make up stories in my head and always end up shipping my characters together before I get distracted. That's really impressive that you and your friends have come up with a whole thing. Which character do you play?

Inky Flame said...

(That is true Noelle ^.^)

Noelle said...

*nod*

When people talk about the Arts, they talk about writing, or painting, or theater, or music. But I mean, isn't art anything that you put your love and creativity into?

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hm. That's odd. I had a version that came free with a set of music books, so it was almost definitely the cheaper version, but it was probably a different year.

Inky Flame said...

(That is true ^.^

*the don't hug me I'm scared video comes into my mind when creativity is mentioned*
*oh no*
*shudders*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Sounds ace Noelle :)

I kinda wanna see zootropolis, but I might wait till my friend inevitably gets it on DVD.)

Eve the ROCK said...

Hahahaha I don't know why it was called Zootropolis in Europe. Does it sound more euro than 'topia? :P
Also, NO JAI it is worth seeing at the cinema! Even with many babies around

Inky Flame said...

(I wanna see civil war)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I haz no money Eve xD)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Chloe I'm going to see that, friends are paying for me xD)

Star Inkbright said...

@Noelle: Well, I can manage it due to several things
a) I have no life
b) I only do about the same amount of schoolwork as the average human at the average school, and believe me, that does not seem to be a lot. Cat will just sit there and look across the common room and point out how eveyrone's like playing Go Fish or whatever. She's like "Do these people not CARE we have exams in three weeks?" (That's when she's not looking across the common room trying to work out who's a virgin and who isn't, which is apparently completely normal behaviour)
c) It's a priority for me
Like with reading books, I'm like "nope not allowed to do that anymore becayse schoolwork" but with roleplay it's like I have to do that because I trained my brain to prioritise this activity last summer and I haven't got rid of the programming yet
d) I also used to be awful at multitasking, but I trained myself to be able to roleplay whilst doing everything and now I can't work well WITHOUT multitasking, so it's quite natural for me to be online whilst doing other things. That's a bit of an issue really. I should probably re-teach myself to single task at some point.


@Eve: Dan and Carrie are both Cat's, but Nick is Lizzie's. We have, like, um,
*counts on fingers*
We usually have around ten main characters.
I like to main up stories in my head too, but I haven't ACTUALLY activated my shipping emotion yet. It's getting harder and harder to make up stories in my head as I get older, though . . . my imagination's been dying out for the past several years. Sigh.
It is very cool though. It's like we have our own little world with all these people that no one else knows about. Actually the last part's quite sad. It's like if you like a TV show you can recommend it to people, but if you like your own little story you're writing on WhatsApp, you can never truly introduce someone else to it. It does constantly bother me, that.

Um. Right. Should be working now.

*scurries off*

Star Inkbright said...

@Noelle: *nods muchly in agreement*

@Jai: :( Awww.

Inky Flame said...

(My friend told a me what happens in the comics


My dog is licking my hand)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Don't tell me!!!

Awwww. Cute doggy.)

Noelle said...

*doesn't have money either* *Wanted to see Deadpool*

Inky Flame said...

(My friend didn't like DEADPOOLS, to profanic for her

I enjoyed it)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I thought deadpool was okay. A few things irritated me. One part of it was very awkward. One was slightly less awkward but still ish. Especially for my other two friends..

@chloe you busy?)

Eve the ROCK said...

That's still productive work though. I wish I could prioritise my own hobbies....instead I just do nothing. Ten? That's definitely some good multi-tasking skills you've built up there. I can't multi-task for shit. Talking to you guys is the only thing I'm focusing on right now because more than one thing is impossible. XD

At least you've got each other! :)

Inky Flame said...

(I be doing an essay later but I can rp ^.^)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay :) *cuddles*)

Michael: *waiting for Alys to return*

Tresha: But those rules are stupid!

Inky Flame said...

(*cuddles Jai*)

Alys: *comes back to the tree *

Flauros: we had to obey, no matter what

Star Inkbright said...

My mum went to see Deadpool and she said for the first half of it, the cinema was just silent with shock. My mum completely didn't understand why it wasn't an eighteen - she says it was really bad, and that she was really shocked because she hadn't eben expecting that from a 15-rated movie.

I haven't seen it.

@Eve: :(
I can't tend to handle more than two or three characters at a time, personally. Sometimes not even that. More than three is beyond me. XD

I'll be distant now - doing a past paper.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles back*)

Michael: *looks at her as she enters*


Tresha: But.. You can't control love! What about if your love died? Then they wouldn't be on earth?

Inky Flame said...

Alys: h hello *smiles*

Flauros; *shrugs* the rules are the rules

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: Hey. You catch anything?

Tresha: I mean is the love still forbidden if they live in heaven?

Inky Flame said...

Alys: *holds up some rabbits*

Flauros: Angels can love other Angels... But not earthlings

Noelle said...

I know what part you're talking about, I think, Silente.

Also, Star, you do have a life :) And it is a good one.


Sorry, I thought this posted!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: Cool.


Tresha: So.. If a human dies and goes to heaven it's okay to love them?

Inky Flame said...

Alys: do you like rabbit?


Flauros; yes, but you'd get kicked out of heaven long before the death of your loved one..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: yeah. I'm not a fussy eater.

Tresha: Is that what happened to you? You fell in love so you were kicked out?

Inky Flame said...

Alys: I'll sort o out food then *walks to the kitchen*

Flauros:... One of the reasons

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Oh btw Chloe, I like your hair.

Eve the ROCK said...

Deadpool's great...but it's not the kind of movie you should be critiquing, you know? It's about the fun of watching it with your mates. I was in packed cinema when I saw it and the energy was awesome. You just have to, like, get it.

Well, three is better than most people can do, Star! Well done XD

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: It's okay, I'll cook.


Tresha: *pushes herself up slightly*
So.. Somewhere on earth is the person you fell from heaven for..?

Eve the ROCK said...

LOL Chloe I didn't realise you changed your picture! Nice face!

Inky Flame said...

(Thank you Fab ^.^ I sometimes have pink in the blonde bits, but I'm going to try silver )

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Eve I'm not critiquing, I just found the yuckiness scenes awkward and my friends found the club scene very awkward.)

Inky Flame said...

(Thanks Eve ^.^!)

Alys: I couldn't a ask you t to do that..

Flauros; not anymore

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: You're already letting me sleep here Alys.

Tresha: What do you mean?

Inky Flame said...

Alys; t your a guest,., you dot have to do t the work

Flauros: she got killed

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: I don't HAVE to. But I will


Tresha: Oh..
*sits up properly, looking at her hands*
That explains why you want to return to heaven so much..

Noelle said...

@Sil: I think what she meant is that Deadpool isn't meant to be taken seriously, and it's just so stupid (in a good way) that to critique it would be almost redundant.

Something like that.

The movie made its point, and it accomplished its goal of making people uncomfortable.

I mean

Deadpool isn't Shakespeare, or Star Wars, or Schindler's List, or anything. It's just crass :P

Inky Flame said...

Alys: *smiles* t thank you

Flauros: no... It's... I'm not in love with her... She doesn't even know me

Star Inkbright said...

@Noelle: :) Awwww thanks. :)

@Eve: My mum personally thinks it should have been rated 18. She didn't critique the film itself, but she did strongly critique the rating.

@Eve: XD Thanks. :) :) Although I still don't manage too well in all honesty. Struggling right this second. XD

Eve the ROCK said...

Oh no I wasn't referring to your comment Jai! Sex scenes are always awkward ahahah. I'm more thinking about my other friends who saw and were all 'In my objective opinion this was a highly overrated film and I was thoroughly disappointed in this theatrical masterpiece I was promised' and I'm like 'and I get told I'M boring' :P

I feel much the same way about High School Musical and Sky High.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(True :)

Michael: You're welcome.
*smiles and takes the rabbits*

Tresha: You fell for her.

Eve the ROCK said...

@Star: Oh for sure, although it can be argued that the rating wouldn't make a difference because someone actually took their nine-year-old to see it, thinking it would be a classic Marvel!
You can succeed! I believe! :P

Inky Flame said...

Alys: *just stands there*


Flauros: :. I was a general in heaven.. I rarely got to go to earth. From heaven I noticed this woman, she was great... Kind and caring. I fell in love with her, though I never met her in person. I knew the rules, Noone could know my feelings. But she... She was involved in an incident and got killed.. I snapped and hated humans.. I came to earth and started going on a killing spree... Killing any human I came across

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: *skins them expertly*

Tresha: So.. You loved her and she died, then you got angry at humans and killed to get revenge for her death?

Inky Flame said...

Alys: *smiles* h have you d done this before?

Flauros; *hangs head* yes

Star Inkbright said...

@Eve: That's part of my mum's issue. She's like "oh some parents may have let their twelve- or thirteen-year-olds see it because they'll be like "oh it's Marvel so you can" and if it was an eighteen it might have put them off more" . . . or at least it might have put the cinema staff off letting them in.

Of course some parents will always be idiots. :(

:) Awwww. :) Thanks.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: I've lived alone for quite a while in the woods, I've learnt to cook for myself.

Treaha: Do you love her..?

Inky Flame said...

Alys: h how long have you b been in the w woods?

Flauros: *eyes have gone glassy* not anymore... I love you

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...
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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: I've been alone since I was eight.

Tresha: *frowns at the glassy eyes*

Inky Flame said...

Alys: I'm so s sorry...

Flauros: I'm sorry for what I've done

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: It's fine.
*starts to separate the meat from the bone, he's going to make a stew*

Tresha: it's okay, I don't mind it.

Eve the ROCK said...

@Star Yeah, I understand. But besides the potential scarring of children I think it was great that Marvel gave in the fans and took a risk with the strong content and it proved successful! But now since it made so much money, Marvel probably wants to make ALL their movies 15+ which will sadly mean kids can't see them anymore.
Or they'll just have to grow up :-) haha

Inky Flame said...

Alys; y you can s stay here a as long as you like..

Flauros; really? *a small tear rolls down his cheek *

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: I really can't stay that long.


Tresha: *brushes his tear away*
Hey, it's okay.

Star Inkbright said...

@Eve: Haha. XD Maybe that was Marvel's plan; for their films to grow with their fans.

No, Marvel's usual films also make a ton of money. Hopefully they'll just now make a wider variety. :)

Inky Flame said...

Alys; you c can..

Flauros; I didn't want you to know, I didn't want to scare you

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: It'd be rude, and dangerous.

Tresha: Oh I'm so very terrified.
*smiles gently*

Inky Flame said...

Alys: t this can be your h home..

Flauros: *smiles* not even a little?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: You should be safe in your own home alys.

Tresha: Flauros you turn into a giant kitty when you're trying to be scary.

Eve the ROCK said...

Marvel will become our ruler


So a bunch of rocks just rudely fell on my head from god knows where, and now I'm tired. Goodnight Star, Chloe, and Jai!

Inky Flame said...

Alys: I am safe

Flauros: a killer kitty

Star Inkbright said...

@Eve: How even. . . ?

Good night! :)

Inky Flame said...

(Night eve ^.^)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Night Eve!)

Michael: No one is ever safe around me.

Tresha: *rolls her eyes*
A big softy.

Inky Flame said...

Alus: I c can try and h help you

Flauros; *shifts*

Noelle said...

*Is making a cool arena*

It's a big circle and each quarter of the circle has a different biome

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: *fills a pot with water, chopping some veg*

Tresha: *tackles him, rubbing his belly*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Cool Noelle :)

Inky Flame said...

(The biomes in the Eden project are cool!)

Alys: please m Michael..

Flauros; *purrs*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: You'll probably get hurt.
*puts the veg in the pot, humming*

Tresha: *grins*
Big bloomin softy.

Inky Flame said...

Alys: y you'll l leave?

Flauros: *licks her*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: When I find a safer place.

Tresha: *laughs, rolling her eyes*

*her cat wanders back inside, looking for Alice to ensure she's okay*

Inky Flame said...

Alys; okay..

flauros: *leopard grins*

Alice; *is high and dancing around the kitchen*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: *adds the rabbit meat and to the stew*


Tresha: *boops his nose*


Cat: *puffs up slightly at the smell*
*meows at her*

Noelle said...

*Noelle is cool build*
:)

Sil I'll show it to you sometime

Inky Flame said...

Alys: *sits at table *

Flauros: *sneezes*

Alice: oh! Hello kitty!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I won't be on MC again I till Wednesday cause my comp is at mums but okay :)

Michael: *adds a little cider and a bit of butter*
*also adds vegetable stock, salt and pepper*
*puts the lid on, leaving it to simmer*
*sits at the table*
That just needs a while for the flavours to mature.

Tresha: Aww, adorable.

Cat: *pads closer, sniffing slightly*
*growls quietly*

Noelle said...

(Alright, Sil. It may be finished by then, then.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay :)

Inky Flame said...

Alys; okay... *lools down*

Flauros: *shifts back*

Alice; what is it?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: You okay there?

Tresha: *raises an eyebrow*

Cat: *looks up at her*
*meows*

Inky Flame said...

Alus; oh, I'm fine

Flauros: what?

Alice: *goes to pet her*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: Good..
*sits awkwardly*

Tresha: Cuddly bugger.

Cat: *puffs up and stiffens but stays still*

Inky Flame said...

Alys; *clasps her hands tightly*

Flauros: *grins*

Alice: what's wrong?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: *looks up at her*
*looks down at his hands, closing his eyes and taking a deep breath*
*mist swirls slowly on the table*

Tresha: *smiles, cuddling into his side*

Cat: *sniffs her hand*

Inky Flame said...

Alys: *watches the mist*

Flauros: *kisses her head*

Alice: it's me silly..

Inky Flame said...

Beep

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Meanie.)

Michael: *focuses on his breathing, keeping it even and calm*
*a small, tiny fox emerges from the mist, it's ears pricked up*

Tresha: Mmm.. Warm.

Cat: *looks at her enlarged pupils*
*relaxes very slightly*

Inky Flame said...

(*grins*)

Alys: woah..

Flauros: *smiles and holds her toghtly*

Alice : *smiles* hop along kitty

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Evil girl)

Michael: *it slowly scampers over to alys, sniffing her hand*

Tresha: *smiles contently*

Cat: *sits and watches her*

Inky Flame said...

(I know!)

Alhs: *holds her hand out*

Flauros; I love you

Alice: go on...

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

I am back!
I think. Might get distracted by The Raven King.

Inky Flame said...

(*hugs Kessie*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*sulks*)

Michael: *tenses up slightly*
*the fox climbs onto her hand*
*another one emerges from the mist, calling for its mate*

Tresha: I love you too

Cat: ...
*meows*

(Kessssssssss. Long time no see, sibling!)

Inky Flame said...

(In sowwy xD )

Alys: t that's amazing

Flauros: *kisses* shall we go inside?

Alice; go on kitty...go

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

*hugs Chloe*

*hugs Storm*
Seriously. I know I said I was leaving, but, damn it's nice to be back.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: *smiles, opening his eyes*
Thanks...

Tresha: Mmm.. Yes.

Cat: *stays sat stubbornly*

Inky Flame said...

Alys: a see? You canc control it..

Flauros: *gets up and offers her a hand*

Alice: *glares*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(It's nice to have you back.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: Not easily..

Tresha: *takes his hand, smiling*


Cat: *meows*

Inky Flame said...

Alys: I c can help..

Flauros: *helps her up* can you he down okay?

Alice: *bird squawks *

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: Are you sure?

Tresha: Of course I can.
*walks to the edge of the roof, jumping down onto the ground below*

Cat: *meows again*

Inky Flame said...

Alys: *nods*

Flauros: *jumps down himself*

Alice: please go cat...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Michael: okay.. Do you like rice with stew?

Tresha: *takes his hand, heading in*

Cat: *tilts it's head*

Inky Flame said...

Alys: I haven't h had that since I w was little..

Flauros; *sqieezes her hand*

Alice : *goes to pick her up*

Noelle said...

:)

Hi again Kes!

*Her arena is looking bomb af*

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

Hi again Adra!
What arena is that?

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

Btw, are you still okay with being called Adra? Or would you rather be Noelle?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay, I dedicate to the old faces and the new ones. It's great to see oldies and it's nice to see a few new faces around.)

Michael: Okay.
*gets up and puts a pan of rice on*
*adds a little thyme to the stew*

Tresha: *walks inside*

Cat: *backs up slightly*

Administrator Kestrel LeStarre-Sparrowhawk The Celestial said...

Hear, hear!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles Kes* how have you been?)

Inky Flame said...

(Hear hear!)

Alys: *watches*

Alice: come here you...

Flauros; *leads er*

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