Thursday, October 22, 2015

80,000 words and some HORROR

I have now crossed the 80,000 word mark in Desolation. You know what that means?

It's a proper book now.

Demon Road was a little over 121,000. I had wanted it to be 80,000, which is roughly the size of Dark Days. Obviously, that didn't happen. But I am DETERMINED that Desolation be of a  more manageable size. It'll probably end up somewhere around the 100,000 mark.

Writing a book can be a struggle. It's just so happened that in the writing of this one, every time I started to flow, and write LOTS, I had to go off on tour or do festivals or get interrupted for a multitude of reasons. It's very hard to build up any kind of rhythm when your writing schedule is kinda messed up.

But I'm flowing now. I want to get this latest draft off to my editor on Monday, because on Tuesday I'm off on holiday to Disneyworld and Universal Studios.

For Halloween.

Ooooooh this is gonna be my kind of holiday. By day, we go to Magic Kingdom, and go on rides and visit Harry Potter world and just have good, nice lovely fun...

But at night...

Universal Studios over Halloween has the most terrifying horror experiences on offer, and I will be going and subjecting my girlfriend to the ordeal. I'm going to tweet about it. I'm going to take videos. You may see me scream.

But it shall be a manly scream. A WAR CRY.

And then I'll run away and leave Laura to face this guy on her own.



Gonna be FUN.




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Inky Flame said...

((Chris is another character of mine
He's a nokken))


*growls* tell me sil !


Chris: are!



Alys; *wonders around the woods, completely lost*

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

(Maybe I will join in. Haven't rp'ed in a while.)

Freya: Rosalie? Is that you?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm a vampire, looking for the teenage girl who say me sucking the blood from a wolf. She has to be found.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *smirks at inky*


MrBBWolf: A-am not..

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Freya, I though you looked familiar. What are you doing here?

Inky Flame said...

((Nice to meet you Kirsten!))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *her features darken*
Vampire.

Custard and Cream said...

You too :) :)

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

Freya:I was about to ask you the same thing, Rosalie.

Inky Flame said...

Tell me before I get you!


Chris; are too *kisses him to stop him saying otherwise *

Inky Flame said...

((I am inky, or chloe ^.^

I am welsh

I am seventeen

I am going out with the joker


I think that covers it...))

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Never mind that, Freya. AU!Sil, got a problem with vampires?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *sticks her tongue out at Inky*
Try it!!!


MrBBWolf: *kisses him back, sighing happily*

Custard and Cream said...

I'm Scottish
16
And fangirl over just about everything

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *you can just call her sil xD*
I have a problem with vampires in my territory.

Dark Eyes said...

((Nice to meet you Kirsten. Fangirl of sp too?))

Inky Flame said...

((Another scot eh?

We need more welsh people))


Inky: *shifts into a wolf and climbs up the tree, snarling*


Chris: *smiles-8

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Kirsten sounds like you'll belong here xD)

Custard and Cream said...

Yeah I love sp, currently re-reading them for like the fourth time

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm only on your territory because I'm hunting for this dark-haired teenager who say me feeding. You seen her?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *jumps to a branch behind Inky, grabbing her scruff tightly*
Hello friend.
*climbs to the top of the tree, dangling her above a gap*


MrBBWolf: I still disagree..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *shouts down*
Can't say I have, sorry.

Anonymous said...

( woohoo the Scots will take over ! :P )

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Inky, have you seen any tall, dark-haired teenage girls recently?

Dark Eyes said...

((You there, Inky?))

Edward Fletcher said...

*eats apple at base of tree watching sil*

Inky Flame said...

*snarles*


Chris: well don't *grins* or do I need to shut you up more?

((Gmmmm a few things that happen arounf here

A page is 200 comments long
Whoever gets first comment on a page dedicates the page to anything they wish

Each post can hold a maximum of 5000 comment

If the comment section is full, we move to the last post with room to comment

But we never go onto spoiler posts))

Inky Flame said...

((Jack! *kisses jack*


I am here ^.^))

Dark Eyes said...

((thanks))

Edward Fletcher said...

*kisses Chloe*

*is not gonna rp for very long*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *grins*
What's up Wolfie? Didn't think this through well did you.


MrBBWolf: *grins* I wouldn't be against it..

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

Freya:*hugs Will* there you are. I found Rosalie.
Will: Really? Where is she?

Inky Flame said...

((Awwwkay honey))

*shifts into semi wolf form* let me go, vampire



Chris; really? *grabs him by the hips*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *jumps out from behind a tree* Right here.

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *waits till apple is finished* siiiillllll?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *is still holding her scruff*
No. Why should I.


MrBBWolf: *Blushes more*
R-real-ll-ly..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *looks down at ed*
What.

Inky Flame said...

Cause you love Me? *smirks* or should I set ed on you?


Chris; *chuckles*

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *leans against tree* what arrreeeeee you doing with my wife?

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((I need to go now.I might come in later. Dark Eyes, you will be a vampire this time tomorrow. Btw, sunlight doesn't kill us
))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: I'm not scared of Ed.
*looks down at Ed*
I'm dangling her over a drop.


MrBBWolf: *smiles sheepishly*

Edward Fletcher said...

Bye ivy

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Bye ivy!)

Dark Eyes said...

((Bye, Ivy. See you later tonight then. i'll leave the window open))

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Sorry for disappearing, was helping dad build a bench -_-)

Inky Flame said...

((Byii ivy!))



Hey honey! *wags tail*


Chris: you are adorable *brushes hair out of his eyes*

Dark Eyes said...

((Can't wait to get vampired.))

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *mocks being offended* am I not scawy? Grrr hehe
May I enquire why my wife is being held over a drop?

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *smiles at inky* heeeeyyyy sweeeeeetie

Inky Flame said...

Sil is being mean! She did something to the cottage...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Because vermin deserve a drop.
*glares at inky accusingly*



MrBBWolf: Thank y-you..

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie *watches person being dangled over a drop from a nearby tree*

Anonymous said...

( you hear that sil ? she can't wait... )

Edward Fletcher said...


Ed: what did she do to the cottage?
Ahem VAMPIRE, wolves are not vermin *nods*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*rolls eyes aT K*)

AU!Sil: *ignored Ed because she disagrees*

Edward Fletcher said...

Hello k

Ed: sil, how about the bar? You like the bar right?

Inky Flame said...

*growls* I have a family to see to!


Chris: for what?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *jumps out of tree. Grabs wolf by the ankle and places on ground next to Ed* wolves are definitely not vermin.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Hey! *glares at Rosalie*


MrBBWolf: B-being with me.

Inky Flame said...

*is surprised* why... Thank you new person... Run for your lifw

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *crushes inky in a hug* thanks Rosalie
I don't believe we have met...

Dark Eyes said...

((Is anyone here a sp vampire?))

Inky Flame said...

Chris: I love you wolf.. Of course I'm with you

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *nods head politely* My pleasure. I'm looking for a tall dark haired teenage girl. i'm a vampire and she saw me feeding, so, um, it's kind of important that I find her before she tells anyone....

Inky Flame said...

*nuzzles eds chest* welcome home honey

Noelle said...

*There is a loud crash, the sound of earth shifting violently* *The dirt persists in falling over the trees, blanketing them in fine dust*
*The sun shines against the suspended Earth in the air, beautifully, yet juxtaposing the scene itself* *The woman, white hair as fine as snow, hangs in the air from her rock* *She needn't hold too hard on it, as it adheres to her skin*
*Yet...*
*The boulders tremble around her, and continue to crash together in a maelstrom of confusion*

*The Crucible sits cross legged on the ground below her, seemingly meditative*

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: sorry.... I haven't....

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *looks uncertainly at the crucible*

Inky Flame said...

I don't know such a person, sorry *kisses ed*

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: thanks sweetie

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: dammit. anyway, what are you all doing here?

Custard and Cream said...

Going shopping if anyone... You know... Is wondering....

Dark Eyes said...

((Hello? Anyone there?))

Edward Fletcher said...

Bye Kirsten

Ed: well, I was looking for my wife...

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Is this your wife?

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: yup, inky is my wife
Allow me to introduce myself, Edward Fletcher, master of time, time traveller

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm Rosalie Hale, a vampire since ,y creepy stalker boyfriend turned me into one. He's dead now, but i'm immortal, which is nice.

Inky Flame said...

I am Inky Flame, *blushes* this is Ed... well as he already said... nice to meet you

Edward Fletcher said...

Bye all

Dark Eyes said...

((Is anyone currently existing right now? hello????))

Dark Eyes said...

((bye Joker))

Feraaaa32 said...

*tips hat* well well, hello.

Inky Flame said...

((bye jack...


hello fera))

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:And who are you, Inky Flame? *sniffs* your blood smells sweet but I saved you, so killing you and drinking your blood would be a little pointless.

Dark Eyes said...

((Hi Fera *hugs*))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Sorry, was eating. Mbd.

Also sil and AU!Sil are sp vamps.)


AU!Sil: *jumps from the tree, landing on Rosalie*
*hisses*


MrBBWolf: s-still

Dark Eyes said...

((Is my laptop being slow at loading comments or is no one commenting?))

Feraaaa32 said...

Hi chloe. Hi jai.

Hey, dark eyes *hugs back*

Noelle said...

*Adra tries her best to regain her footing, but the wind whips her away, her fingers left grasping be at the stone* *She is thrown into a tree, and falls into the ground* *Hitting the ground for her is soft, like a pillow; the branches aren't*

*The crucible still sits there, his hair black, white at the roots* *She needs to see more white*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:*Throws off AU!Sil* what is your problem, vamp? I'm not after your territory!

Inky Flame said...

Run Rosalie!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *growls at her*
Next time don't get in the way of my business!!!
*runs off, coming across Adra as she lands*
*pauses*
...miss?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm NOT a coward. I don't run away. ((Notices similarity to China Sorrows))You wanna fight? *Turns to face AU!Sil* *hisses*

Inky Flame said...

wait sil! *frowns*

John said...

*Just kinda wanders into the midst of the chaos, entirely oblivious*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *Notices Adra* Um.. hello..

Dark Eyes said...

((Hello Blake))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *isn't near Rosalie as she hisses*
*which is probably good*

John said...

(Hullo all)

Noelle said...

*She doesn't recognize Silente*
Just a second...
*She tries to part the ground, and makes a tunnel that opens up beside the Crucible* *She crawls through, not unlike a Marine* *As she pokes out the other side, gopher-like, she is uprooted and pushed back outside by the wind*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *approaches Adra and AU!Sil uncertainly*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Hey..
*helps Adra stand*
What's happening?

Inky Flame said...

(hello john!)

(ghosts for now*)

Dark Eyes said...

((When is Doctor Who on?))

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:I have no idea.*sniffs Adra apprehensively* who are you?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles Chloe*


@DE I presume about 7:45?)


MrBBWolf: H-how's S-Suki..

Dark Eyes said...

((who's Suki?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Hey!
*shoves Rosalie*
At least try be more subtle when you're sniffing people.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Suki is a pregnant succubus. Chris and Wolf are in Inky's house)

Feraaaa32 said...

how're you?

Noelle said...

*Appreciates the assistance* This is my old friend.. He can't hear me, his meditative state is so deep. He's been in such a state for around three hundred years and- just recently, he has begun to lose his control.

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:*Is shoved by AU!Sil* I was just trying to figure out what or who she is. And I'll bet you're not the world's subtlest sniffer, so you can't exactly talk.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Oh.. that's probably not good huh? How do we fix him?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *stops sulking at being shoved* can he be fixed?

Dark Eyes said...

((By the way, I keep a diary/blog now. Does anyone here mind being mentioned in my diary/blog? Or is it like *quotes Demon Road* talking about the blackroads while being on the blackroads?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*rolls eyes* So long as you aren't calling me an idiotic witch or anything similar then that's fine.)

Dark Eyes said...

((hello? anyone still here/alive/undead/existing/paying the smallest amount of attention?))

Inky Flame said...

((you can mention me))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(..*hugs Chloe* You okay..?)

Dark Eyes said...

((oh right ok. Wait, jai, you're female?))

Inky Flame said...

((*huggles* im fine))

Dark Eyes said...

((*joins queue to hug chloe* Is something wrong?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(xDDDDDDDD Well last time I checked I was, yes.)

Dark Eyes said...

((Oh my god i'm so sorry, i thought you were a guy all this time.))

Inky Flame said...

(*hugs dark* I am fine)

Noelle said...

*She shoots them both a sharp look* *She doesn't like their thinking style*
People aren't broken parts. He isn't broken. He had just changed.
*She tries to think, and then takes out some chalk, and places it in the ground* *Runs a quarter way around, and places another, another, another* *She's going to try to bind his magic*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*laughs and hugs* May I ask what gave you that impression, so that I can avoid future mishap.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *follows her restlessly*
Can we help in anyway then?

Dark Eyes said...

((*hugs inky back* yay. also, I am really sorry,I just thought that Jai was a guy's name, and assumed... Wow. That's a pretty bad mistake. This is awkward.))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Ahhh. Well I can't particularly change my name. It's okay :) Happens sometimes. I blame my parents for calling me Jaimie.)

Noelle said...

@Jai: when rping, perhaps use third person pronouns to denote action, ie *she runs*, *She sneezes*, instead of *sneezes* or *Shoves*. When I first met you, I thought you were maybe make too- because you never specified in verbiage. Just a thought.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Noelle right. *she nods* I'll try to remember that.)

Noelle said...

*Adra isn't positive they can* Perhaps... *Muses* If there is a way to get rid if the dirt in the air. That's how he is creating this wind. Alchemists are unable to control the air, so he is whipping the dust quick enough to begin his own current.

John said...

*He walks noiselessly up behind the trio and unconscious man*
*Clears his throat*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Huh.. that's smart. Hello Blake.

Inky Flame said...

(*sits and waits for food*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*offers Chloe a crisp*)

John said...

*Waves*

So, three ladies and what looks like a body in the middle of some unnatural wind. The hell did I miss?

Feraaaa32 said...

ey b0ss.

Dark Eyes said...

((by the way, out of curiosity, what do you guys look like? If, y'know, you don't want to say, then that's fine, but.. I had a mental image of jai as a guy all this time and now I just can't imagine what she'd look like (when I see a name written, my mind just conjures an image to go with it) ))

Dark Eyes said...

(also, we're onto a new page again. that was quick.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Female, small, light brown hair, blue eyes.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Also 15)

Inky Flame said...

(a crisp?)

Feraaaa32 said...

guy, fairly short(5'7/5'8), dark brown hair, green/brown eyes, compact(not slim, but not fat either).

Dark Eyes said...

((i'm female, medium height, shoulder-length dark brown hair , you can probably guess what my eyes look like, and I wear geeky-style black glasses that I look amazing in (btw that was sarcasm) I still dream of playing Valkyrie Cain if the movie ever gets filmed))

Dark Eyes said...

((I can also brag about being able to stuff my face with the doritos my sister just gave me))

Inky Flame said...

(I am 5'3
pixie cute, fair hair with blond highlights
sometimes I put pink in my hair
I have blue eys and am really pale. quite slim


you can see a pic if you want)

Inky Flame said...

(oh, and dark... do you like anime?)

Custard and Cream said...

Girl, average height I think, green eyes, long black hair
And I would love to play Valkyrie too ahah but I think I'm a bit too old now :(

Inky Flame said...

*pixie cut

Inky Flame said...

(hello kirst!)

Edward Fletcher said...

Back

I guess I'm average height for me

Custard and Cream said...

Hi!!!!

Inky Flame said...

((you aren't average height jack! you are tall and handsome with lovely eyes like melted chocolate and a gorgeous smile!))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I'd love to play Valkyrie too but my hair is the wrong colour, as are my eyes, as is my height and body structure..)

Inky Flame said...

(how art thou kirst?)

Feraaaa32 said...

heh, geeky glasses usually look good. Umm, my glasses almost cross the territory between geeky and pedophilic. I wanna get new ones, i seriously don't like the look of these ones. I look better without glasses...might just get contacts soon.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Ed. Hi kirst!)

Custard and Cream said...

I would actually love so much to play the part, it would be so cool and I think I sort of look like her?

Dark Eyes said...

((anime, hmm... I can't really say I've watched it. I used to listen to a few vocaloids, like hatsune miku, but that's it really. I don't know of any anime. I've heard of death note and naruto. Oh yeah, and I've watched Spirited Away))

Feraaaa32 said...

you're quite tall, jack.

Edward Fletcher said...

That's not me Chloe XD

Custard and Cream said...

I'm good! Once upon a time and downton abbey tomorrow so I'm buzzin!!!

Inky Flame said...

((I would love to play Valkyrie too... but I don't look like her at all)

Edward Fletcher said...

You've never met or seen me fera, how do you know?

Inky Flame said...

((it is true!))

Inky Flame said...

(jack, remember that my Skype pic is us two )

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(When I was twelve I dreamed of a skeleton turning up (or anyone turning up)and whisking me off into a world of magic.. part of me still dreams of that.)

Inky Flame said...

((ive always had a fascination with skeletons

actually my facebook pic is us two too))

Feraaaa32 said...

i know your height, jack. Plus I've seen you on a picture.

Dark Eyes said...

((I may be a bit too old for Valkyrie, but I'm short for my age and Valkyrie is tall for hers, my hair is a similar colour (i can dye it or wear a wig). My eyes are a wrong colour but that doesn't matter. harry potter's eyes are green and daniel radcliffe's are blue, so that'd probably be OK. Or I could wear contacts. The glasses are a problem, but again, contacts. My braces are getting removed quite soon, and I'd need to work on an Irish accent. If the movie doesn't come out for another 7 years I'll be Tanith.))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(xD when in doubt, go for Tanith!

I'd love to be Tanith or Valkyrie.. they're both amazing..)

Custard and Cream said...

She'd be such a fun character to play, and I love the humour in the books and the sarcasm

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Yeah!

Hell, I wouldn't mind being China were I.. above average beauty as opposed to below.)

Dark Eyes said...

((can people get roles in films without acting experience?))

Feraaaa32 said...

I'd love to play people a lot of people. Any important males in the books are usually made very tall, though. I am not tall.

Inky Flame said...

(I wonder who would play china? I don't think id be old enough
)

Custard and Cream said...

I you have a good audition you could, right?

Feraaaa32 said...

jai, beauty is subjective.

Inky Flame said...

((yes they can, lluna in HP had no acting experience))

Inky Flame said...

(and I don't look like her)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I think you can? I'm fairly certain Daniel Radcliff had no/little experience.)

Dark Eyes said...

((Also, if she doesn't get cut from the films, remember Myosotis Terra? She'd be cool to play, and it doesn't mention thst she's particularly beautiful.))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Fera General beauty isn't.)

Dark Eyes said...

((@ Ferra, you could be Gordon Edgely. Or, if you're deseparate, even fergus))

Feraaaa32 said...

meh, what do you mean by "general beauty" ?

Dark Eyes said...

((*randomly hugs Chloe for no reason*))

Feraaaa32 said...

ummm, when was it said, that he is short?

Inky Flame said...

(*hugs dark before leaving*)

Dark Eyes said...

((Fergus is short, and I think desmond is too))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(General beauty;
Look at any supermodel/ "attractive" celeb.)

Inky Flame said...
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Dark Eyes said...

((everyone who is cast for a major role, unless being specifically described as ugly, is beautiful.))

Feraaaa32 said...

from my point of view, many of those women's looks either bore me, or disgust me. I'd still go out with one of those types, if i found her personality awesome, because then, she'd look beautiful to me.

Hmm...how short are we talking?

Dark Eyes said...

((Also, just watched Dr Who trailer again. Cool :) ))

Dark Eyes said...

((hang on, my sp book is around somewhere, i'll check...))

Inky Flame said...
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Noelle said...

(Sorry)

*She smiles a little* I just... Just a second. *Bends down to the ground, and places her hands along the ground* *Te chalk pieces begin to elongate, and twist through the air, stretching to link together and create a cage contraption around the Crucible*

Custard and Cream said...

Has anyone seen those pizza things from Chicago town and it's like a pizza burger thing? I'm making one now and I'm worried it won't be good...

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