Thursday, October 22, 2015

80,000 words and some HORROR

I have now crossed the 80,000 word mark in Desolation. You know what that means?

It's a proper book now.

Demon Road was a little over 121,000. I had wanted it to be 80,000, which is roughly the size of Dark Days. Obviously, that didn't happen. But I am DETERMINED that Desolation be of a  more manageable size. It'll probably end up somewhere around the 100,000 mark.

Writing a book can be a struggle. It's just so happened that in the writing of this one, every time I started to flow, and write LOTS, I had to go off on tour or do festivals or get interrupted for a multitude of reasons. It's very hard to build up any kind of rhythm when your writing schedule is kinda messed up.

But I'm flowing now. I want to get this latest draft off to my editor on Monday, because on Tuesday I'm off on holiday to Disneyworld and Universal Studios.

For Halloween.

Ooooooh this is gonna be my kind of holiday. By day, we go to Magic Kingdom, and go on rides and visit Harry Potter world and just have good, nice lovely fun...

But at night...

Universal Studios over Halloween has the most terrifying horror experiences on offer, and I will be going and subjecting my girlfriend to the ordeal. I'm going to tweet about it. I'm going to take videos. You may see me scream.

But it shall be a manly scream. A WAR CRY.

And then I'll run away and leave Laura to face this guy on her own.



Gonna be FUN.




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Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((Dark eyes?))

Inky Flame said...

((Yep ^.^))

Dark Eyes said...

((Yep. I'm a newbie. Also, what, Ivy?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Dark eyes oh don't worry xD we're just on a new page?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Jai Is Silente okay with Tanya's particular type of vampire?)

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

(@dark eyes I was wondering about your choice of username)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@K She generally doesn't like other Vampires, but she has the biggest problem with sp vampires. She gets territorial.. It's amusing.)

Dark Eyes said...

((Think of it as choosing a taken name from sp. Not too cool, but fitting. My eyes aren't that dark, but they say the eyes are a window to the soul.))

Inky Flame said...

((+howls*))

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((I have no desire to fight over territory. Let's decide on a truce.))

Dark Eyes said...

((What's wrong Chloe?))

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Anybody watching Doctor Who tonight?)

Dark Eyes said...

((I am.))

Inky Flame said...

((I'm a werewolf))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Sure, truce.

@Kas what time is it on?)

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((A werewolf and a vampire. Apparently this is Twilight v2))

Dark Eyes said...

((I've always wanted to be a vampire. Would you bite me, Ivy?))

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((Are you sure you would want this life?))

Inky Flame said...

((What's wrong with becoming a werewolf?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*raises an eyebrow*
*laughs quietly because sil is getting testy*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Chloe a) inky isn't the bite type of werewolf b) vampires are stronger and immortal.)

Dark Eyes said...

((@Inky Nothing, but my life has been full of vampire fantasies. They seem more... romantic. And Ivy, I don't know. Could you describe your vampire life so I could decide?))

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: Ahem, inky is very romantic *nods*

Noelle said...

Oh, Laura you know would kick his ass. She's always been like that ^.^

You two should swing by Cincinnati! And go to King's Island- so awesome!

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((Erm... Sure. I have immense strength, I can see in the dark, I don't age, am immortal and I found an alternative to human blood do I wouldn't have to be a murderer.))

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Oh, god, I'm sure tonight's episode will suck.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Noelle! :)

Inky Flame said...

Thank you honey *hugs ed*


((Jack!))

Inky Flame said...

((Hello noelle!))

Dark Eyes said...

((Hello people I haven't met. @Ivy you're life sounds amazing. Bite me. PLEASE!!!!))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Chloe rp? :)

Noelle said...

((Plus, you know, I've known Laura for years and STILL have yet to meet her in real life))
(Goddamn))


(I had a dream about Batman last night. It was nice.))

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, Noelle.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Noelle batman? Cool! What happened?)

Inky Flame said...

((Okay jai *,^ which characters?))

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((Fine, dark eyes. I'll hunt you down tonight and bite you. Don't worry, the bite marks fade unless another vampire is close to you.))

Dark Eyes said...

((Yay.))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Chloe wolf, Chris, Suki
AU!Sil, Inky?)

Dark Eyes said...

((Can i rp too? First rp. Should I think of an oc?))

Noelle said...

((I can't...
Um
I don't really remember. And from what I do remember, it is hard to explain..))


((If it's ok, I would like to do a little rping...))(I had an idea)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Dark *chuckles* Join inky and AU!Sil. And yes, you may want an oc.)

Inky Flame said...

((Okay ^.^))


Sil! Come back! *runs after her*


Chris: I can't wait to marry you

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Noelle that's fine! Are you wanting to solo or group?)

Dark Eyes said...

((Yay. My oc will be called Rosalie.))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *jumps, grabbing a tree branch and climbing quickly, grabbing conkers and dropping them on Inky*


MrBBWolf: *blushes, smiling*
I-I can't w-wait either..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Dark okay :) Jump in!)

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

(I'll just watch you guys rp)

Inky Flame said...

Ouch! What was that for! What were you doing?


Chris: *sniles and holds wolf close* you are so handsome when you blush

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(You sure ivy? Feel free to join at any time :) How are you btw?)

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *falls out of nearby tree* has anyone seen a tall girl with black hair running past?

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((Who's Chris?))

Noelle said...

((Well, let's say that if anyone wants to join in, they are welcome))
..


*About a mile from Adra's lab, far into the thick woods, where running in any direction will he a tree*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *hisses down at her, glaring slightly*


MrBBWolf: I-I'm not..

Custard and Cream said...

I'm new too :) *waves frantically*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *looks at Rosalie and frowns*
Who're you.


(Chris is on of chloe's characters.

@Adra okay!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(So many new people! <3)

Inky Flame said...

((Chris is another character of mine
He's a nokken))


*growls* tell me sil !


Chris: are!



Alys; *wonders around the woods, completely lost*

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

(Maybe I will join in. Haven't rp'ed in a while.)

Freya: Rosalie? Is that you?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm a vampire, looking for the teenage girl who say me sucking the blood from a wolf. She has to be found.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *smirks at inky*


MrBBWolf: A-am not..

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Freya, I though you looked familiar. What are you doing here?

Inky Flame said...

((Nice to meet you Kirsten!))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *her features darken*
Vampire.

Custard and Cream said...

You too :) :)

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

Freya:I was about to ask you the same thing, Rosalie.

Inky Flame said...

Tell me before I get you!


Chris; are too *kisses him to stop him saying otherwise *

Inky Flame said...

((I am inky, or chloe ^.^

I am welsh

I am seventeen

I am going out with the joker


I think that covers it...))

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Never mind that, Freya. AU!Sil, got a problem with vampires?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *sticks her tongue out at Inky*
Try it!!!


MrBBWolf: *kisses him back, sighing happily*

Custard and Cream said...

I'm Scottish
16
And fangirl over just about everything

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *you can just call her sil xD*
I have a problem with vampires in my territory.

Dark Eyes said...

((Nice to meet you Kirsten. Fangirl of sp too?))

Inky Flame said...

((Another scot eh?

We need more welsh people))


Inky: *shifts into a wolf and climbs up the tree, snarling*


Chris: *smiles-8

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Kirsten sounds like you'll belong here xD)

Custard and Cream said...

Yeah I love sp, currently re-reading them for like the fourth time

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm only on your territory because I'm hunting for this dark-haired teenager who say me feeding. You seen her?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *jumps to a branch behind Inky, grabbing her scruff tightly*
Hello friend.
*climbs to the top of the tree, dangling her above a gap*


MrBBWolf: I still disagree..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *shouts down*
Can't say I have, sorry.

Anonymous said...

( woohoo the Scots will take over ! :P )

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Inky, have you seen any tall, dark-haired teenage girls recently?

Dark Eyes said...

((You there, Inky?))

Edward Fletcher said...

*eats apple at base of tree watching sil*

Inky Flame said...

*snarles*


Chris: well don't *grins* or do I need to shut you up more?

((Gmmmm a few things that happen arounf here

A page is 200 comments long
Whoever gets first comment on a page dedicates the page to anything they wish

Each post can hold a maximum of 5000 comment

If the comment section is full, we move to the last post with room to comment

But we never go onto spoiler posts))

Inky Flame said...

((Jack! *kisses jack*


I am here ^.^))

Dark Eyes said...

((thanks))

Edward Fletcher said...

*kisses Chloe*

*is not gonna rp for very long*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *grins*
What's up Wolfie? Didn't think this through well did you.


MrBBWolf: *grins* I wouldn't be against it..

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

Freya:*hugs Will* there you are. I found Rosalie.
Will: Really? Where is she?

Inky Flame said...

((Awwwkay honey))

*shifts into semi wolf form* let me go, vampire



Chris; really? *grabs him by the hips*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *jumps out from behind a tree* Right here.

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *waits till apple is finished* siiiillllll?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *is still holding her scruff*
No. Why should I.


MrBBWolf: *Blushes more*
R-real-ll-ly..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *looks down at ed*
What.

Inky Flame said...

Cause you love Me? *smirks* or should I set ed on you?


Chris; *chuckles*

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *leans against tree* what arrreeeeee you doing with my wife?

Ivy the Lonely Vampire said...

((I need to go now.I might come in later. Dark Eyes, you will be a vampire this time tomorrow. Btw, sunlight doesn't kill us
))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: I'm not scared of Ed.
*looks down at Ed*
I'm dangling her over a drop.


MrBBWolf: *smiles sheepishly*

Edward Fletcher said...

Bye ivy

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Bye ivy!)

Dark Eyes said...

((Bye, Ivy. See you later tonight then. i'll leave the window open))

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Sorry for disappearing, was helping dad build a bench -_-)

Inky Flame said...

((Byii ivy!))



Hey honey! *wags tail*


Chris: you are adorable *brushes hair out of his eyes*

Dark Eyes said...

((Can't wait to get vampired.))

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *mocks being offended* am I not scawy? Grrr hehe
May I enquire why my wife is being held over a drop?

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *smiles at inky* heeeeyyyy sweeeeeetie

Inky Flame said...

Sil is being mean! She did something to the cottage...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Because vermin deserve a drop.
*glares at inky accusingly*



MrBBWolf: Thank y-you..

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie *watches person being dangled over a drop from a nearby tree*

Anonymous said...

( you hear that sil ? she can't wait... )

Edward Fletcher said...


Ed: what did she do to the cottage?
Ahem VAMPIRE, wolves are not vermin *nods*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*rolls eyes aT K*)

AU!Sil: *ignored Ed because she disagrees*

Edward Fletcher said...

Hello k

Ed: sil, how about the bar? You like the bar right?

Inky Flame said...

*growls* I have a family to see to!


Chris: for what?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *jumps out of tree. Grabs wolf by the ankle and places on ground next to Ed* wolves are definitely not vermin.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Hey! *glares at Rosalie*


MrBBWolf: B-being with me.

Inky Flame said...

*is surprised* why... Thank you new person... Run for your lifw

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: *crushes inky in a hug* thanks Rosalie
I don't believe we have met...

Dark Eyes said...

((Is anyone here a sp vampire?))

Inky Flame said...

Chris: I love you wolf.. Of course I'm with you

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *nods head politely* My pleasure. I'm looking for a tall dark haired teenage girl. i'm a vampire and she saw me feeding, so, um, it's kind of important that I find her before she tells anyone....

Inky Flame said...

*nuzzles eds chest* welcome home honey

Noelle said...

*There is a loud crash, the sound of earth shifting violently* *The dirt persists in falling over the trees, blanketing them in fine dust*
*The sun shines against the suspended Earth in the air, beautifully, yet juxtaposing the scene itself* *The woman, white hair as fine as snow, hangs in the air from her rock* *She needn't hold too hard on it, as it adheres to her skin*
*Yet...*
*The boulders tremble around her, and continue to crash together in a maelstrom of confusion*

*The Crucible sits cross legged on the ground below her, seemingly meditative*

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: sorry.... I haven't....

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *looks uncertainly at the crucible*

Inky Flame said...

I don't know such a person, sorry *kisses ed*

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: thanks sweetie

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: dammit. anyway, what are you all doing here?

Custard and Cream said...

Going shopping if anyone... You know... Is wondering....

Dark Eyes said...

((Hello? Anyone there?))

Edward Fletcher said...

Bye Kirsten

Ed: well, I was looking for my wife...

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: Is this your wife?

Edward Fletcher said...

Ed: yup, inky is my wife
Allow me to introduce myself, Edward Fletcher, master of time, time traveller

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm Rosalie Hale, a vampire since ,y creepy stalker boyfriend turned me into one. He's dead now, but i'm immortal, which is nice.

Inky Flame said...

I am Inky Flame, *blushes* this is Ed... well as he already said... nice to meet you

Edward Fletcher said...

Bye all

Dark Eyes said...

((Is anyone currently existing right now? hello????))

Dark Eyes said...

((bye Joker))

Feraaaa32 said...

*tips hat* well well, hello.

Inky Flame said...

((bye jack...


hello fera))

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:And who are you, Inky Flame? *sniffs* your blood smells sweet but I saved you, so killing you and drinking your blood would be a little pointless.

Dark Eyes said...

((Hi Fera *hugs*))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Sorry, was eating. Mbd.

Also sil and AU!Sil are sp vamps.)


AU!Sil: *jumps from the tree, landing on Rosalie*
*hisses*


MrBBWolf: s-still

Dark Eyes said...

((Is my laptop being slow at loading comments or is no one commenting?))

Feraaaa32 said...

Hi chloe. Hi jai.

Hey, dark eyes *hugs back*

Noelle said...

*Adra tries her best to regain her footing, but the wind whips her away, her fingers left grasping be at the stone* *She is thrown into a tree, and falls into the ground* *Hitting the ground for her is soft, like a pillow; the branches aren't*

*The crucible still sits there, his hair black, white at the roots* *She needs to see more white*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:*Throws off AU!Sil* what is your problem, vamp? I'm not after your territory!

Inky Flame said...

Run Rosalie!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *growls at her*
Next time don't get in the way of my business!!!
*runs off, coming across Adra as she lands*
*pauses*
...miss?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: I'm NOT a coward. I don't run away. ((Notices similarity to China Sorrows))You wanna fight? *Turns to face AU!Sil* *hisses*

Inky Flame said...

wait sil! *frowns*

John said...

*Just kinda wanders into the midst of the chaos, entirely oblivious*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *Notices Adra* Um.. hello..

Dark Eyes said...

((Hello Blake))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *isn't near Rosalie as she hisses*
*which is probably good*

John said...

(Hullo all)

Noelle said...

*She doesn't recognize Silente*
Just a second...
*She tries to part the ground, and makes a tunnel that opens up beside the Crucible* *She crawls through, not unlike a Marine* *As she pokes out the other side, gopher-like, she is uprooted and pushed back outside by the wind*

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *approaches Adra and AU!Sil uncertainly*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Hey..
*helps Adra stand*
What's happening?

Inky Flame said...

(hello john!)

(ghosts for now*)

Dark Eyes said...

((When is Doctor Who on?))

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:I have no idea.*sniffs Adra apprehensively* who are you?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles Chloe*


@DE I presume about 7:45?)


MrBBWolf: H-how's S-Suki..

Dark Eyes said...

((who's Suki?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Hey!
*shoves Rosalie*
At least try be more subtle when you're sniffing people.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Suki is a pregnant succubus. Chris and Wolf are in Inky's house)

Feraaaa32 said...

how're you?

Noelle said...

*Appreciates the assistance* This is my old friend.. He can't hear me, his meditative state is so deep. He's been in such a state for around three hundred years and- just recently, he has begun to lose his control.

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie:*Is shoved by AU!Sil* I was just trying to figure out what or who she is. And I'll bet you're not the world's subtlest sniffer, so you can't exactly talk.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Oh.. that's probably not good huh? How do we fix him?

Dark Eyes said...

Rosalie: *stops sulking at being shoved* can he be fixed?

Dark Eyes said...

((By the way, I keep a diary/blog now. Does anyone here mind being mentioned in my diary/blog? Or is it like *quotes Demon Road* talking about the blackroads while being on the blackroads?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*rolls eyes* So long as you aren't calling me an idiotic witch or anything similar then that's fine.)

Dark Eyes said...

((hello? anyone still here/alive/undead/existing/paying the smallest amount of attention?))

Inky Flame said...

((you can mention me))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(..*hugs Chloe* You okay..?)

Dark Eyes said...

((oh right ok. Wait, jai, you're female?))

Inky Flame said...

((*huggles* im fine))

Dark Eyes said...

((*joins queue to hug chloe* Is something wrong?))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(xDDDDDDDD Well last time I checked I was, yes.)

Dark Eyes said...

((Oh my god i'm so sorry, i thought you were a guy all this time.))

Inky Flame said...

(*hugs dark* I am fine)

Noelle said...

*She shoots them both a sharp look* *She doesn't like their thinking style*
People aren't broken parts. He isn't broken. He had just changed.
*She tries to think, and then takes out some chalk, and places it in the ground* *Runs a quarter way around, and places another, another, another* *She's going to try to bind his magic*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*laughs and hugs* May I ask what gave you that impression, so that I can avoid future mishap.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: *follows her restlessly*
Can we help in anyway then?

Dark Eyes said...

((*hugs inky back* yay. also, I am really sorry,I just thought that Jai was a guy's name, and assumed... Wow. That's a pretty bad mistake. This is awkward.))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Ahhh. Well I can't particularly change my name. It's okay :) Happens sometimes. I blame my parents for calling me Jaimie.)

Noelle said...

@Jai: when rping, perhaps use third person pronouns to denote action, ie *she runs*, *She sneezes*, instead of *sneezes* or *Shoves*. When I first met you, I thought you were maybe make too- because you never specified in verbiage. Just a thought.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Noelle right. *she nods* I'll try to remember that.)

Noelle said...

*Adra isn't positive they can* Perhaps... *Muses* If there is a way to get rid if the dirt in the air. That's how he is creating this wind. Alchemists are unable to control the air, so he is whipping the dust quick enough to begin his own current.

John said...

*He walks noiselessly up behind the trio and unconscious man*
*Clears his throat*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

AU!Sil: Huh.. that's smart. Hello Blake.

Inky Flame said...

(*sits and waits for food*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*offers Chloe a crisp*)

John said...

*Waves*

So, three ladies and what looks like a body in the middle of some unnatural wind. The hell did I miss?

Feraaaa32 said...

ey b0ss.

Dark Eyes said...

((by the way, out of curiosity, what do you guys look like? If, y'know, you don't want to say, then that's fine, but.. I had a mental image of jai as a guy all this time and now I just can't imagine what she'd look like (when I see a name written, my mind just conjures an image to go with it) ))

Dark Eyes said...

(also, we're onto a new page again. that was quick.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Female, small, light brown hair, blue eyes.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Also 15)

Inky Flame said...

(a crisp?)

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