Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Lavender Hope said...

*glares at her wifi more*
Stop causing everyone else's Internet to have problems, ya dang piece of wire!

...

No, talking to my wifi isn't crazy at all. Nope.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(*cuddles Jaimie back*)

Bethany: Good?

Liliana: Good. Now, there is a little matter to discuss. I apologise for attempting to trick you with the child. I have a soft spot for children. I do not kill them.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Okay. Good.




Onwa: *laughs slightly*
It's fine, I was curious as to what your reaction would be.

Lavender Hope said...

Four times... I think that's a record. For me at least.
*laughs, then sighs a moment later*

I think I'm just going to go... Sorry guys.
*hugs*
I'll be on later, if this *smacks her iPod, which is what she does to try to get her wifi to work(which actually does work sometimes)* can connect better then.

*pops back out*

Lavender Hope said...

Four times... I think that's a record. For me at least.
*laughs, then sighs a moment later*

I think I'm just going to go... Sorry guys.
*hugs*
I'll be on later, if this *smacks her iPod, which is what she does to try to get her wifi to work(which actually does work sometimes)* can connect better then.

*pops back out*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(bye lavender... I have to go too. Be back. When. I can.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: It's rather odd though... Why around Claire?


Liliana: What I do kill, however, are people who are far too forgiving for their own good. *in a flash, she is stood beside Onwa, holding her dagger to her throat* I kid, of course. But I am not afraid to do this. *she slides the knife down Onwa's leg, making a long, but shallow, cut*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Goodbye, Jaimie. *hugs her tightly*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Back temporarily)

I don't know...but at least that means she won't hurt Claire?


Onwa: *grins, only making a tiny hiss of noise at the cut, not bothering to heal it*
Good, because I expect that and more.
*leviates a little of the blood to her own mouth, lapping it up*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(No! It's fucking snowing! WHY are they forcing us into school! Chances are the bus can't even GET there but they're trying anyway. I will WALK however many miles it takes if the bus doesn't take me directly to school!!!)

Jophiel said...

Just be happy it snows at your school... We fry.

I'd love to have a snowball fight at school....

Jophiel said...

The bakery gave me hours tomorrow. 8-12.

Four hours.

That means $47.

Which is almost half of what I blew today.

I spent too much.

I shouldn't have...



And i don't know where my pants are, but my shirt is on the back of the sofa.

And I don't think I can stand anymore.

I walked well over 25kms in seven hours...

...

*curls up*

Jophiel said...

Me a Jupiter are in perfect sync right now.

I'm laying in bed and Jupiter is directly in front of me.

Even the same angle as my head...



This will probably never happen again...

Jophiel said...

*and

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Danni*

Hello.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Stupid phone!)

Lavender Hope said...

Hi.

Wbd, but hi.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello.)

Claire: I like her. Apart from the way she dresses. But she's kind of my auntie?

Liliana: *she thinks for a moment* Do you trust me, Onwa?

Lavender Hope said...

Hi Soph. :)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Lavender. How are you?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello Hope and Sophia!

*smiles at both of them*

Happy Friday! :3 )

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Tia.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(How is your day going, Sophia? :3)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Rather boring. Your own?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Pretty boring as well. But there's the weekend to look forward to! :3

Do you have any plans for the weekend?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(No. I presume you do?)

Lavender Hope said...

Hi Tia! Happy Friday to you too. :)

I'm rather hungry and not tired...

And I think I'm getting in a love hate relationship with my guitar.

Lavender Hope said...

Oh, and not so distant anymore. Sorry bout the late reply.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Nope! Not one! But I can spend time with you guys! :3

Aww... *hugs Hope* What's Melody ever done to you?)

Lavender Hope said...

She makes me sleepy when I play. Which is why I'm not tired now because I fell asleep and missed dinner again...

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Knowing this place, spending time here may be either good or bad.)

Lavender Hope said...

That's true, Sophia. But even so, I like spending time here too. :)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Aww, but I thought Melody liked you? She needs you, Hope. :3)

(Better than doing nothing, Sophia.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I do, most of the time. Regardless, it is a good cure for boredom.)

Lavender Hope said...

Haha, you guys basically said the same thing. :P

I WANT to keep practicing, but I just wish she didn't make me feel sleepy every time I play.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(But she likes having you play she can't help it. You have to understand her viewpoint, Hope. *hugs her*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(... It is a guitar.)

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Lavender Hope said...

*sticks her tongue out at Tia, then hugs him back with a smile*

Lavender Hope said...

*laughs*
Yeah, Soph. It is. :P

It's sort of a tradition for musicians to name their instruments.

Lavender Hope said...

At least for guitarists.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Deleted comment?)

(Indeed it is, Sophia.)

(*smiles*

*really smiles*)

((Maybe you should play when you're less tired?))

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Yes but it has no brain nor any capacity for thought, therefore it can have no viewpoint. Neither does it make you sleepy. You make yourself sleepy by playing it. Naming I can understand. The rest of it, I cannot.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It posted twice, Tia, therefore I deleted the comment.)

Lavender Hope said...

Not mine...

Maybe I should, but just PLAYING gets me tired. I dunno, I could just try pausing when I feel sleepy and start playing again after moving around a bit.

Lavender Hope said...

Okay, Soph.

*laughs*
Yeah, way to give it a personality, huh? :P That tends to happen when you name an inanimate object.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I'm so happy I don't even know why *huggles Hope and smiles and runs around*)

Lavender Hope said...

*smiles, huggles back, and runs around too*
*does cartwheels*
Wheeeeee! :D

Lavender Hope said...

*trips the next time she does a cartwheel*
*starts rolling*

*keeps rolling on purpose because it's also really fun*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*spins around and falls because of dizziness*)

Lavender Hope said...

*stops rolling and laughs, also dizzy*
*rolls onto her back, looking at the sky*
*sighs happily*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I have never given a nickname nor a personality to anything. Or at least, in the past eight years I have not.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*slightly rolls towards Hope*

*sighs happily*)

Lavender Hope said...

*smiles at Tia, gesturing him to come next to her*

What about characters? ;P

And naming things is fun. :)

Lavender Hope said...

Naming AND giving a personality to.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(It won't hurt to try it, Soph! :3)

(*rolls further towards Hope*

Hey... :3)

Lavender Hope said...

*laughs lightly*
Hi.

I'm also feeling really happy right now, and I don't know why either. :P ^.^

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Because it's Friday! :3

Whatcha doing this weekend, Hope?)

Lavender Hope said...

Friday! :D

Not much. I'm thinking to record some of my singing. Not sure how well that will turn out, but *shrugs and smiles* we'll see I guess.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(That sounds fun! I'd like to hear your singing! :3)

Lavender Hope said...

Thanks. :)

I'm thinking Frozen songs! :P But I also want to do something with the guitar again. That's why I was trying to practice today.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Characters are the exception, of course.)

Lavender Hope said...

Also, it's just for fun. If I mess up, I'm not going to rerecord unless it's a really bad mess up and I have to stop.

So, I guess you could say it won't be very professional. ^^'

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Awwkay, Soph!)

(I haven't seen Frozen yet... I'm not sure how I managed to avoid the Frozen craze.

Hmm...

Let it go, let it go...)

Lavender Hope said...

*nods to Soph*
Of course. I was just teasing, sorry. :P

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am not a fan of Frozen.)

Lavender Hope said...

*smiles again*
You should really try watching it, Tia. When you get the chance!

I can probably sing three songs, if you don't mind Me skipping a duo part.

Lavender Hope said...

It's okay, Soph. Not everyone likes it either.

... Have you seen it though?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I'll try to watch it soon.)

Lavender Hope said...

Good. ;P


Hmm... Midnight. I think I should try sleeping.
*hugs Tia, waves to Soph*

Have a good day guys. :)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Yes, I have seen it. Hence how I know I dislike it. I have two main problems with it - the plotholes, and the genre. If you ignore the plot holes, the film would be fine - that is, if you remove the music. Not that I have a problem with the music, but I believe both would be better without the other. One thing I do approve of about the film is the animation technique. It looks good.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Goodbye, Lavender.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Good night, Hope!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
Kinda..in a way.



Onwa: *tilts head*
I don't trust you, but nor do I distrust you.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Jaimie*

Hey... :)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Kas back* hey.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Jaimie. *hugs her tightly*)

Bethany: She isn't the best auntie...


Liliana: Well, I suppose it's time for a trust exercise. Do not heal what I am about to do, understand? I shall do so in my own time.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Soph tightly back*)


She could be better..but I guess in her own way..



Onwa: *smiles, curious*
Do your worst.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: I really do like her.


Liliana: I intend to. *she spins her dagger before thrusting it into Onwa's stomach, twisting it a little*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I know..she isn't so bad..she has many flaws..



Onwa: *winces, grunting slightly, dropping from her levitation to the floor*
*starts healing herself then stops, remembering*
*smirks*
That's your worst?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(How are you feeling, Jai?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Too many...


Liliana: You couldn't survive my worst, darling. *twists the dagger in a full circle* I just want you to get close to death. *she whispers in her ear* Because it's fun. And is there a better way to learn to trust me then when I have your life in my hands? *pulls the dagger out viciously, thrusting it to the side of the wound she made to create another*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Not so bad. Msd, if so brb.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

But those aren't her fault..



Onwa: *gasps, groaning, tear springing to her eyes*
*quickly heats her eyes up, boiling the tears, getting rid of them easily*
*smirks*
That is one way to learn trust. And I'm sure I could survive your worst. Although you couldn't survive mine, that I'm certain of.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I... Suppose not...

Liliana: Crying, are we? *she smiles* You underestimate me. *she twists the dagger before pulling it out* *pushes Onwa to the ground, sitting on her stomach, crossing her legs* Can you feel your life ebb away, I wonder?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
She can't help her flaws..well, not most of them.



Onwa: *breathing slightly abnormally*
*closes her eyes, smiling*
Of course I can, I can also feel my control slipping. I'm unsure how long I can prevent myself healing.
*opens her eyes*
Do worse, make me scream.
*grins*
If you can.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: But she can some. And she just doesn't... That's my point. Though I suppose dinner was not so bad...

Liliana: Once I have nearly killed you, my dear, I shall make you scream. Only if you stop yourself from healing, however. *she pushes all her weight on her stomach*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Dinner was quite civil all things considered. *sits back in her chair* Mmm..*grins, closing her eyes, just listening* *sighs happily* silence..



Onwa: *groans, grimacing, heating her eyes to fight back tears, slight trendils of darkness writhing around her, being kept on a tight leash*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: From Onwa?


Liliana: I wonder how long it will be before your eyes close and you take your final breath. Because then I shall heal you.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods, grinning* its great. So...peaceful.



Onwa: a while, I should guess. The stomach is hardly a quick death..
*struggling slightly to keep an even voice*
*shadows are writhing more, only just not shredding anything*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Good. *hugs her tightly* I'm glad.


Liliana: Perhaps the heart? *she positions her dagger above her chest, driving it down, twisting*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*hugs her tightly back, smiling*



Onwa: *gasps, lifting slightly, shadows going wild, making slight tracks through the floor*
*takes a shakey breath, blinking quickly, eyes heating more*
*swallows, watching Liliana*
*smirks*
*voice is strained*
Least...s'not..bad..last sigh..t..
*closes her eyes, struggling to breathe*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*looks at the role-plays*

Okay then...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Tacklehugs Kas*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*shrugs* one is happy, one is worrying.

@Aria my network still isn't working it seems so I still can't text..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(It's ok Jai...I understand.
*Hugs her tightly, her chin on her head*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs her tightly back, smiling*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*is tacklehugs and smiles weakly* Hey...)

(...)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I hope this will help you to find the peace and happiness you deserve.


Liliana: *she thinks for a moment, standing up, kicking of her shoes* I believe that now should suffice. *she takes a vial of black liquid from her pocket, dropping some on her chest and stomach, which heal almost immediately*

(I will be back soon.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*tacklehugged)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Kassy what is it?
*Hugs him tighter*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Nothing. I'm just not feeling as happy anymore, that's all. It'll pass.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles, hugging her again*
Oh Beth, all I need for peace and happiness is you..
*grins*
And Claire helps too.


Onwa: *tenses slightly, the lays there a second or two before opening her eyes, levitating herself upright, still chained*
*smirks*
Good to know I can trust you.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I'll make you happy! ^.^)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(XD the things my sister says!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

Funny way to build trust.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Rhjdiendhendndjwkdnewjsjebehskehrhrjdhejejrjje


Oh, okay. *hugs Aria back, very gently*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Yeah, it is isn't it?
Kas, i'll chain you up for a trust exercise.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs him back just as gently*
You'll be fine.
*Ruffles his hair*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(...Hmm...)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*wonders whether Aria is a sadist or...

stops wondering, smiles and goes to ruffle Aria's hair*)

((Msd))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi Mill.


Yes, she is..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I am a sadist. I was squealing with joy and burst out laughing when people fall and get hit with snowballs. They got snowballs through the window in the bus. It was great listening to the wimpy girls screaming. Oh how I wanted to join in...

Hello Adam *hugs*
Where did we get to in the RP?
I think It was your turn...
I just popped my head out the mound of snow.

*Hugs Jai tighter*
Love you sis)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Gem tighter back too*
*smiles*
Love you too sis the sadist.
*grins*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

Okay then.

Hello, Mill.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Aria2 - It can *smiles up ad him*
*Tries to get herself out of the snow*
*Is stuck*
*Claws at the snow, trying to move it away from her*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

*approaches Aria, who is stuck in the snow*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I guess I'm here.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I guess you are. Hello, Zaffy!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(And hello, Loki!)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Yes, hello. I am watching, but the one who writes for me is cleaning. I know not why they did not place me on the decorations for this party. I am by far more important then the Avengers.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Deleted comment?)

(Party? There's a party, Loki?)

Star Inkbright said...

Isn't finding people great?

Idk, it's just like, you're going through life, and then all of a sudden you find someone really awesome, and like, then there's another awesome person you know about that exists. And like, idk, like, this awesome person has really been here in the world existing for years, usually existing for longer than I've been, and like, all the past few years when you've been going thorugh your life, they've been goign through their life, too, like, existing and being awesome and stuff, and like, you never knew they were there but they were. And now you've just kind of come across them, and it's just like you've discovered another little corner of the universe, and it's like, oh, hello there, you're awesome.
But I geuss, like, there's so many otehr awesome corners in life that I haven't found yet, and there's so many people on this planet who I would really love if I found, but I haven't found them, and like, maybe they'll live and I'll live and they'll die and I'll die without us meeting each other.
That's sad, that is.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

*Huffs*
No, i'll be just fine on my own thank you very much.
*Wiggles herself slowly out of the hole*
See?
Told you I could do it...
*Collapses on the snow, panting.

(Sorry, was in the middle of typing this when dad said I had to tidy my room)

Star Inkbright said...

I like to sort of collect awesome people. I find them and I kind of put them in my special thinking place in my brain and then I can think about them and how awesome they are and stuff. So when I find someone knew it's just like "Ooh, hello, welcome to the collection. :P"

I'm not really sure how I collect people, actually. Like . . . I don't really do it by words and descriptions, because I can't describe them. I think I just do it in feelings and concepts. It's like little corners of them-ness in my head. :)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey... It is. *hugs Star*)

(*looks at Aria*

Hmm... *tacklehugs her*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*yawns, curling up slightly, mumbling*
Mmm...sleepy...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Is tacklehugged*
Why hello there
*Smiles up at Kas*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Sleep, Jai!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Heya, Jai. Cold...)

(*crushes Aria in a very tight hug >:D )

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*shakes head, snuggling a hot water bottle*
Nuh...fwiendzzzzzz...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Cold?
*covers Kas with a blanket*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(can't...breath...)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*pulls Jai in to hug her*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*looks at Aria, concerned*

*eases up a bit*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Takes a deep breath*
T-thanks...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles kas*
*frowns, poking Aria*
Inhale.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*waves at Adam*)

Star Inkbright said...

*hugs Kas :)*

*hugs Aria and Silente, too :)*

Star Inkbright said...

*hugs Adam as well*
*please no more people appear -_-*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*keeps hugging Aria, smiling*)

(*wraps the blanket around Jai and cuddles for warmth*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs star*
*cuddles Kas*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs everyone*
xD

Uh...I dedicate to...the poor sods sitting exams. Myself included.)

Star Inkbright said...

As a GCSE student - here, here. :P

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Aria2 - *Looks up at him*
Like what?
*Grins as the snow comes on heavier*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hear hear!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles Aria and promptly falls asleep, slightly feverish*)

Star Inkbright said...

"Here is part of Gary's electricity bill.

ELECTRICITY BILL
New reading: 7155 units.
Old reading: 7095 units.
Price per unit: 15p."

Work out how much Gary has to pay for the units of electricity he used."

. . .
Can someone explain electricity readings to me? :o I don't know if I'm mean to just go by the new reading, or add the old reading and the new reading together, or take an average of the two, or what . . .
It's on a non-calculator paper . . .

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*places Jaimie's head on a pillow and readjusts her blanket*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Star work out the difference in units, multiply it by price per unit.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(7155-7095=60

60x15=900

900p=£9

Cheap bills, yo!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

No no, what were you going to say?
*gets up and shakes herself off*
*Quickly takes off her hat and shakes the snow off of it*
*Her pink curls tumble out of the hat*
*Puts it back on and looks up at him*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*slips an arm under the pillow then places her head on it* *curls up, pulling the blanket tight with her free arm* *curls up and prays she isn't killed in her sleep*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Thinks about murdering Jaimie in her sleep*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Ssh, you're safe, Jaimie... Sleep...

*gently ruffles her hai, and massages her head*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*opens her eyes to slits, watching Gem*
*mumbles about being nice*
*also mumbles about being a sadist*
*shrugs and leaves a knife beside her for Gemma's ease then goes back to sleep, smiling at the massage*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Aria2 - *Sits down and looks up at him*
Hmm...
*Taps her lips*
I don't know anywhere around here...
I haven't even fully explored Blogland yet.
*Looks around her at this strange place in the forest, a clearing of some sort*
Where would you suggest, Malygos?

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Brb :P)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(back, dinner ^.^)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*yawns and rolls over*
*realizes she can't sleep*
*sighs and just cuddles Gemma's knees*)

Star Inkbright said...

Thanks, Kas. :)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Dinner in 3 minutes? What did you eat?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(S'okay, probably wrong.)

(*continues gently massaging Jai's head*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Pfft. I'm small enough to. Plus hugging people's legs is nice. Makes me happy.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Midget
*smirks*

My soul, Kas.)

I love the mountains!
*Her eyes light up, a blinding stark blue*
*gets up quickly and climbs onto Malygos*
let's go!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(If I sit down on the floor I'm small enough!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Mmmhmmmm.
*keeps hugging her knees*
*smiles, closing her eyes*
*frowns a moment*
Hmm...weird..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Yes Jai, yes you are weird.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I know that xD I mean weird because normally I screech at my friends for touching people's knees (don't ask) and yet here I hug people's knees...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I tickle people's knees...it's so funny...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Glares at Adam*
You ass...)

*tenses her thighs so she doesn't fall off*
*Spreads her arms as if she's flying*
*Tears spring to her eyes from the cold and the wind*
This is amazing!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Shh..dont call me a midget...I get enough of that from bitches at school. Playing basket ball in games. "Oh yeah let's hold the frickin ball above our heads and laugh at Jaimie. Oh yeah let's call her a midget and say she can't play cause she's tiny. Oh yeah let's ignore her presence cause small people can't play basket ball. Oh yeah let's ignore her then blame her height." Oh yeah your sooooooo fucking original aren't you? Dickheads.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*shudders* Nuh. Don't touch knees..)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Jaimie*

You're perfect.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Sorry Jai.
It's a good thing to be small though. You could be a good burgler.
And it's harder to grab a small person whist fighting.
You have less weight so you're fast.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs kas back*
Mm. Sure.

@Aria *sighs* it's okay. But seriously, if it continues, I WILL slap her. Or launch the ball at the back of her head. Or just rugby tackle her and beat her up a bit.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Rugby tackles. *nods*

*hugs Jaimie*

*holds her*

*whispers* Perfect.)

((Msd dinner.))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Kas back*
*whispers*
Hardly.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Cuddles Adam*
That's what I was going for :3)

*lurches forward when he flies faster*
Woah!
*Grabs on tightly, almost falling*
*laughs loudly, piercing the silent sky*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hasn't seen the hobbit films*
...
*just nods slowly*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Jaimie, I think you are a wonderful person. Because you really are.

Take care. *bops nose and leaves for dinner*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Cya Kassy!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*wriggles nose*
Baii.
*waves*

...
*should probably stop eating M&M's*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*TACKLES GEMMA*
*uses her as a pillow*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Looks up at Jai*
*Shrugs slightly*
*Closes her eyes*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*didn't go!*

*steals Jaimie's M&M's*

*latches on to Jaimie and uses her as a warm pillow*

XD)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*smiles, happily using Gem as a pillow*
*cuddles a fedora*
*a peculiar fedora*
*one that stores many a thing within it*
*one that she stole*
*cuddles Matex' fedora*)

John said...

(*Is taller than all of you*
*Hi*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Wow, they're beautiful...
*Shivers slightly from the cold*
*Keeps holding on*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(D:
My M&M's!
:(


Hey John..

*cuddles the fedora tightly*
*whispers quietly*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Shhh John.
Hello.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*whimpers slightly*
*keeps hugging the fedora*
*sighs*
*puts the fedora down, walking off slightly*
*curls up further away*)

John said...

(*Shall never "Shhh"*
*Remains taller than anyone else present*)

Star Inkbright said...

When I was little and we were all lining up in the playground in our classes at the end of break ready to go in and it was all quiet, I thought if I made a humming noise, no one would realise it was me because they wouldn't see my mouth moving, so I made a humming sound, and a teacher told me off for it, and it took me YEARS to work out how they knew it was me. :P

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Pokes John* Want to continue?
Aria was asking Wayke to sit next to her I think.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, J.)

(*hands Jaimie her M&M's back*)

(*wraps his arms around her and presses his face towards her and sighs, relaxing*

My cuddly. <3)

((Will poof soon.))

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(How did they know, Star?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey! Kas I thought I was your cuddly little sadist :(

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