Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

*is hugged*

Hey! :)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Cuddles into him*
You're amazing. Cutie.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

I'm really not. Aria, I am not amazing, I'm definitely not cute.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(You definitely are. :3
You're so shy, it's adorable.
And your voice is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
*pokes*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(...
*decides now is the time to wander off*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(No no Jai!
*Brings her into the hug, almost strangling her*
GROUP HUG!
I'm in a good mood.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Ruffles her hair*
You're amazing too
*Boops Jai's nose*
Adorabubbles*
*grins*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...
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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Ahhh!
*struggles slightly then gives up*
Yey.. good mood..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Suddenly stops and frowns*
Everyone fucking prefers me when I'm depressed.
*Turns and walks away*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Stay with us, Jai... *pulls her into the hug*

Hey, your voice is cuter, you know that! :3 )

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hair!
*immediately sets about sorting her hair*
You ARE in a good mood.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Aria?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(What! No I didn't say that gemma!
*hugs tightly*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Apologies. It seems I disappeared briefly.)


Liliana: I have the time to think of many things.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*sighs and hangs head*
*hugs Soph instead*)

I suppose that's an upside to being lonely, you have time to think.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(*hugs Jaimie back, wrapping them both in the blanket again*)

Liliana: Indeed. It is, however, not exactly preferable to me. The more I think, the more I wonder about the point of my existence or the meaning behind my life.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles into the blanket and into Sophs side*)


Ah. Maybe you should find someone to settle down with or who can distract you. Or get a hobby.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(*holds Jaimie close*)

Liliana: *she shakes her head* None are ideal. I do have a theory about life - in general. It is like a game. And the point of the game is to think about yourself, and look out for oneself. Let's face it - everyone is selfish. Everyone. Some, however, are rather bad at playing the game. I am simply one of the best players. And that is why I am considered immoral and rather evil.

Bethany: But that... Isn't really true?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*curls into her side*)


*smiles slightly at 'none are idea' then winces when the voice in her head smashes against its bounds, gasping a little, covering it up with coughs*
*shakes her head*
Life isn't a game of selfishness..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(**ideal)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: Of course it is. Those who get the most out of life are those who are selfish.
*she tilts her head* Having trouble with Onwa, are we, Silente? I may be able to help that.

Savannah said...

Don't know if I have the heart or strength to stay on tonight

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*grunts, resisting the urge to growl*
Nope. I'm completely fine. Onwa who?
*straightens her spine, managing to keep a straight face despite the vicious pounding against her skull*
Thanks for the concern though

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Seir..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Are you okay?

Liliana: *she folds her arms, smiling* Given the fact she seems to be coming out anyway, I will tell her regardless.
*she looks at Bethany and Claire* So, as payment for getting Silente back, Onwa and I... had a night together.

Claire: Ew! Ew! That's gross!

Liliana: Anyway, we were struggling to find something to eat. So Onwa managed to find a child for us to feast on. However, I, being the selfless, caring person you both know, could not bring myself to hurt the child. Instead I took some of her blood and sent her on her way. I then injected the blood into sausages, which I then fed to Onwa. I also had to slice my finger off and carve it to size to claim it was her finger bone - which was "all that remained of her". So Onwa thought she was being fed a child. Instead, she was eating pork.

Savannah said...

Please don't call me that Jai

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Me neither Seirsha.
E-mail?
Or phone number, that would be easier for me. But it's fine if you don't want to.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Hurts...a lot.
*grunts, rolling her eyes*
You think she didn't notice the difference? How foolish are you?
*whimpers, grimacing*
And she isn't coming out.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Oh...sorry Iris..)

Savannah said...

Email would be great Aria, my phone's a piece of crap. Oh, would look at that, so am I! *burts out laughing but ends up crying*

Savannah said...

It's fine Jai. But thanks

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(You aren't a piece of crap Iris.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Iris* Sorry...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I'm sorry Gem..I do like you better when you're in a good mood.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Iris, i'll e-mail *nods*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(It doesn't seem that way, Jai.
And now it's gone.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I'm sorry..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: It's okay... *she hugs her tightly*

Liliana: Ah, so she did know that I was deceiving her? That is rather interesting. Why, I wonder, did she play along?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*hugs her tightly back*
Because she found it funny that you were trying, and likes that you showed 'mercy'
*grimaces, swiping at her nose*
Let's talk about something else..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: I deceive everyone. It is what I do.

Garret Falcone said...

*pops in*
I'm sorry guys,
I'm sorry everyone
Maybe I should've never come here

This is NOT a dig at anyone

Its my fucking stupid thoughts
That have cost me everything I hold close
*goes again*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Mhmm.
*swipes at her nose again, eyes narrowing at the blood*
*mumbles*
I know you do..
*winces*
Oh...crud, one sec!
*darts off as a blur*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Rhos*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(:-/)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she runs after her* Silente, are you alright?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay Soph..)

*stumbles to the bedroom, grabbing a serum needle, panting slightly and injecting it quickly, closing her eyes*
*also grabs a handkerchief, pressing that against her nose, groaning, resting her head against the wall*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.)

Bethany: *she hugs her tightly, wrapping her wings around her* *her wings start to radiate heat to Silente* It's okay... It's okay.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*leans into Beth, panting*
*grimaces*
Two...Two want out....fighting..hurts...
*eyes look a bit like a lost child's, she looks terrified, hurt, lost*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she hugs her tighter* Just keep on fighting... For me?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods, holding her tightly*
Trying

John said...

(*Pokes everyone*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Is there anything I can do?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*pokes J, still cuddled in a blanket against Soph*)


*shakes head, holding her tightly*
*takes a few deep breaths and squares her shoulders*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: We need to get Onwa sorted out... You can't live like this...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*half smiles*
Its fine..we should get back. We left Claire alone with Liliana.
*looks worried*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: No, it isn't fine... We could visit Therald. They have a group of sorcerers who could help you... Or... I could try and push her down with angels like I did before...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shakes head, looking scared again*
Don't...never use the same trick twice on her...she'll learn.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*looks up at John, Doesn't bother to poke him back*
Hi.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: But angels are like... two thirds as powerful as a god? And there'll be four hundred... She couldn't learn to counter it, surely?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shakes head*
She'll learn. She always does. She was trying to, before, trying to turn their energy against them, to fuel herself with it..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: We could take her to my mother?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Take me to your mother you mean?
*smiles*
Well, her views are already low of me...I guess they can't get lower..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: If we take you - and Onwa - to her realm...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
She could help, I know...after dinner, I promise.

Star Inkbright said...

(Oh, hell.
:/
Everyone's falling apart, it seems . . .
*offers hugs, wishing I could offer more*)

Star Inkbright said...

(I don't like the idea of them going after dinner. :P It sounds foreboding. I haev the feeling Sil won't last till after dinner.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Is that alright, Jaimie? I do not believe Phaestra will eradicate Onwa. Just separate them. But if you are not happy with it, please say so now before it continues any further.)

Bethany: *she nods and smiles, taking her hand, leading her back to Claire and Liliana*

Claire: ... And because Silente and Bethany told me not to kill people, I was like, "BAM" and punched him in the face. But then he drew a gun. Which wasn't... ideal. So I had to disarm him and then I clubbed him around the head.

Liliana: Why do you put so much effort into killing drug dealers?

Claire: I didn't kill him. I just knocked him out. Maybe put him into a coma, I don't know. But it's kind of... What I do? They ruin people's lives.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Star.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hi Star...*Hugs*
I like hugs...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hmm..I think it's interesting. So long as both have magic, Sil having the least Onwa having the most, then that's fine, because it means if it doesn't work then Onwa can always figure out how to rejoin them..)


*smiles, listening to Claire*
Good girl for not killing him

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi Star. Hopefully she'll last xD)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I see.)

Claire: Thanks. Sorry, we were just... talking about kind of what I do? Ooh, Liliana, would you like to see my weapons? I have a rocket launcher.

Liliana: What is a rocket launcher?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay Soph.)


It's a big weapon that makes things go boom. And Claire I'd rather you didn't show Liliana your weapons..not that I don't trust either of you, but I'd like the tree house to last a bit longer.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Aria and Jaimie*

*leaves*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Cuddles into Adam and sighs*
I finally got Skype working...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs Kas back*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I just want to sleep...
*Rests her head on him and wraps her arms around his waist*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Mmm... sleep.

*hugs her and sleeps*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Smiles up at him, her eyes threatening to close*
It's too early to go to sleep yet...)

Aria2 - *Decides to go for a walk, she likes going out on walks*
*It's snowing outside*
*Looks out of the window and suddenly there is a white scarf, hat and gloves on her with a navy blue Jacket*
*Walks outside*
*Grins at the crunch under her boots*
*Continues walking towards the forest*

Mary Contrary said...

*hugs Derek* :) :) :)


... *hugs everybody else, too*

And, I'm guessing there's a lot of ice/snow/wind around, so stay safe.
Y'all are perfect and deserve 1000 warm good things. :) ^^

*probably goes to do homework and think apprehensively about the future*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*defades for a moment*
You should sleep if you're tired...
*fades again*)

Star Inkbright said...

*hugs Aria :)*
*hugs Sil :)*

*is probably distant*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.)


Liliana: I have no intentions of destroying the treehouse, if that is what you mean.

Claire: I could fire my rocket launcher outdoors?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles Sophia*)


Mmm..Okay. Don't blow up anything important!

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I'm not going to go to sleep until my internet goes off! >.<
*Hugs Star tighter*)

Aria2 - *Something suddenly blocks out the sun*
*Looks up at the Dragon* Oh, hello Malygos.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(*cuddles Jaimie back*)

Claire: We'll fire it near the volcano. So there's no plant life to kill, so Bethany won't get irritated. Could we have a portal?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...
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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay Aria. Sorry. Sleep when you like..)


*opens a portal to the tree house*
Yep. Me and Beth are popping out again, I hope you don't mind..

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I...-
You know what, never mind. I've been falling out with friends all day anyway.
*hides under her covers*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Aria2 - Yeah
*Grins and looks up at the sky, wide-eyed.
It's beautiful...
*Tries to catch a snowflake with her tongue, it lands on her nose instead and she giggles*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Yeah, no, that's cool. *she smiles, stepping through the portal*

Liliana: No doubt we will be around the treehouse or the volcano when you return. *she steps through the portal, also*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Okay...watch yourself around her Claire..

Star Inkbright said...

*contemplates hugging Aria tighter*
*also contemplates the fact that I don't want to squish her*
*hmmmm :P*

If you're tired, I would recommend sleeping, though. :( We like talkign to you, but we also care about your health.

Jophiel said...

Or if you're tired, you can stay up and socialise.

Because that sometimes make me feel better.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I don't mind squishy hugs Star
*Smiles*
They're my favourite. Pretty sure I could break someone's back hugging them as tightly as I do ^.^)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Rose...
*Smiles and hugs her if she wants to be hugged*)

Star Inkbright said...

Okay, than -
*hugs Aria tighter :)*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Danni.)

John said...

(*Flyingmegatacklehugs Rose*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Aria2 - I'm trying to catch the snow on my tongue...
*Laughs*
What is that look for?
*Scrapes up snow with her gloves and makes into a snowball*
*Launches it at Malygos and somehow it lands on his head*
*Bursts out laughing*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Gem...why is there distance between us? I can't...I can't work out why...or how to fix it...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(We hardly talk anymore Jai...
The person you're focused on is Sophia...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Even my closest friends are leaving me.
Collette was just being a bitch earlier and I couldn't handle her shit after my horrible Admin prelim.
She's the one who reminds me of you...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods* I try...I try to talk but I never know what to say and...it never seems to be enough...it hurts..I don't..I can't..whenever I talk I hurt you, I just..I don't.. *sighs* yeah..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: *she smiles, walking to the room full of weapons* Do you like it?

Liliana: *she tilts her head* It seems Silente does not trust me with you.

Claire: I like you, so... *she shrugs* It doesn't really matter. *she smiles, lifting up her rocket launcher* Do you want to go and fire it?




Bethany: So now should we visit my mother?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*closes the portal after a moment*
Sure..

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Maybe because I'm hurt easily.
You don't even text anymore.)
Aria2 - *Is struck by the snowball*
*falls back into the snow*
Hey!
*Tries to look mad but bursts out laughing again*
Snow is fun.
*Lays back and makes a snow angel*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she extends her hand*



Liliana: Of course I would like to go and fire it. What do you take me for?
I take it you are some sort of weapon expert?

Claire: Kind of?

Liliana: You felt my dagger at the kitchen table. What did you think?

Claire: It's good. Effective. It could pierce most armour, couldn't it? But I think the balance might be a little off...

Liliana: I like it.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I don't text cause I thought I was pissing you off.)


*takes Beth's hand*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *they vanish in a flash of gold, reappearing in Phaestra's realm*

Phaestra: *she forms in front of them* What do you want, Bethany?



Claire: It's also more of the thrusting kind of weapon... It hasn't got the right edge for slashing.

Liliana: I do not intend to slash with it very often. So tell me, what does this rocket launcher fire?

Claire: *the picks up a box of ammunition for the rocket launcher* Follow me to the volcano, and I'll show you.

Liliana: There is a quicker way. *she extends her hand*

Claire: I can't... really... *she moves the ammunition to her other hand, shifting the rocket launcher underneath her shoulder* *she takes Liliana's hand*

Liliana: *they vanish in a flash of white, reappearing beside the volcano* *she sighs and shakes her head*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shifts closer to Beth, smiling politely*
Hello Phaestra.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(You weren't pissing me off, Jai.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Seems like I was..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: Hello, Silente.

Bethany: Silente has a voice in her mind called Onwa... We'd like them separated?


Claire: What's wrong?

Liliana: White... Isn't exactly good. Not for me.

Claire: Oh... okay. *she aims her rocket launcher, resting it against her shoulder* Watch this. *she pulls the trigger, sending a missile screeching through the air before it hits the ground several seconds later, creating a large explosion*

Liliana: I have to say, I would like one of those. Could I have a go?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Please? I..want to get her removed.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

*A few seconds later her head pops out of the big mound of snow*
Meanie!
*Frowns because she's cold and wet now*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: I shall do my best. Would you like it visual or non-visual?


Claire: Sure. *she opens the case of ammunition, reloading her rocket launcher* *she hands it to Liliana* Hold it like I did.

Liliana: *she rests the rocket launcher against the shoulder, aiming it at the same place as Claire* This seems rather easy to use for such a destructive weapon.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Visual. I want to see what's happening, if that's okay.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: Of course. *her hands start to glow white, an orb appearing in her hand* *she enlarges it, showing the white orb is actually made up of strands of white, and strands of silver* *she pulls her hands apart, the halves of the orb separating, before splitting into their own orbs* What do you wish me to do with Onwa?


Claire: That's the idea. With swords and bows and the like it can take years of training. Guns are easy to use. Now pull the button on the side towards you.

Liliana: *she carefully pulls the trigger, firing a rocket* *it lands quite far away from Claire's original shot, but detonates nevertheless* This is rather fun. We should do this more often.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Um..
*looks uncertainly at Beth*
What should we do with her..? I mean...she's not so bad...she has he flaws but...don't we all? And she could help Liliana?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: She's a monster... I'm not sure we should let her out... But I don't think we should kill her, either... Maybe she and Liliana could help each other?



Claire: We should.

Liliana: How about some target practice with your telekinesis?

Claire: Sure. *she smiles*

Liliana: *she smiles, also, her hands glowing purple* *she fires a pulse of white energy into the air, before looking down at her hands in disgust*

Claire: *she hits the pulse of white energy with a blast of telekinetic energy, knocking it off-target*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Help each other how? Onwa couldn't help lil without a body..but I guess when Onwa has something to focus on she is better..

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Night guys...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Night Gem..love you...)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Exactly... They could distract each other from doing bad things to other people...
So... should we make her a body?



Liliana: How about this one? *she spins before firing a quick pulse of white energy*

Claire: *she smiles, knocking it off target again* Easy.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Sighs and holds her close*
*Kisses her forehead*
I love you too sis...Text me whenever you want. If I don't reply I haven't seen it, I'm currently busy or I don't know what to say.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles against her*
*nods*
Okay..I'll try text more... I'll try..)


*nods*
We should make her a body.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: *she forms an image of Onwa in front of them both* Do you have any preference of body?


Liliana: *she fires two pulses of white energy at the same time*

Claire: *she knocks both off-target* You need to give me a hard one.
*she pauses for a moment* How do you know Bethany?

Liliana: She is technically my sister.

Claire: So you're my auntie?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shrugs*
Silver eyes, female, silver hair..straight white teeth..skinny but taller than me, strong legs.. I think that's what she'd like..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: *the image changes to something similar to Silente's description* Will this suffice?


Liliana: Yes... I suppose I am. Bethany and I were originally the daughters of the goddess of death. I still am. Bethany simply fled to Phaestra when she was very, very young.

Claire: So why do you fire white energy?

Liliana: I fire black or purple energy. White is... an unwanted development.

Claire: But surely that's good?

Liliana: No. It is not. I do not want to have good intentions.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
It will.. thank you.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: *she creates the form and slides the silver orb into it* It is done.



Claire: But having good intentions is well... good.

Liliana: And I do not want to be good. Good is no fun.

Claire: Why do you dress so sluttily?

Liliana: Because I have nothing else to do. My looks are my only remotely good feature.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Onwa: *blinks, opening silver's eyes*
*frowns*
*blinks, staring at Silente*
*growls, eyes turning murderous*
What did you do?!


Shh. Calm down. I..you have your own body.
*smiles*

Onwa: *frowns more*
...
Could've given me better curves. Ah well. It'll do.
*hair flip*
*grins*
Ohh..now I can do what I like...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, Sophia and Jaimie.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi Kas)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(How are you feeling, Jaimie? Anything I can do to help?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Please do not hurt anyone... You kind of owe us that much? You and Liliana can have a happy life together...


Claire: That's not really true... I like being around you. You're fun.

Liliana: I am really not.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...
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Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

Didn't know you held me in such high regard, Sophia. How was your day?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(You know exactly what I think of you, Tia, I have already told you. I cannot, however, change the fact the Gmail app seemed to close and autocorrect had its way. *Hello, Tia.
My day was rather boring, your own?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I'm okay thanks. You?)

Onwa: *smirks*
We'll see.
*Silver eyes glowing*
I make no promises.
*gazes up and down Silente and grins as though she knows a secret*
Mmm.
*looks at Phaestra*
Be a dear and send us back now.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(My day was okay. I got to talk to people, which made me happier than normal. Yeah...)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: Once you promise not to hurt anyone.

Bethany: Apart from Liliana... You might want to hurt her?


Claire: You are. You're such a cool auntie.

Liliana: You know, I never put much thought into love. It was never 'my style'. I was more interested in using people for my own gain. But there is one person who I seem to get along with, and have things in common with. And now I cannot help but mope around like a wounded animal every second we are apart.

Claire: Ew. Love. Uh... Try firing another missile?

Liliana: I may just do that.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

('Ew. Love. Uh... Try firing another missile?' XD I love that.)

Onwa: *glares*
No. How about, I promise this instead. I won't hurt people without reason.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Herrow, how are we all?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Tripathy.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, Trip. Okay. How are you?)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Oh I'm as good as always, thanks. Yourselves?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles trip*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Okay, Trip, okay.

Whatcha up to?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

*sits in Trip's bar, drinking a strong alcoholic drink*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(*cuddles Silente*)

(Very little, Tia. Just sitting in bed, reading Quora.)

*a baby crying can be heard from ulstairs which goes on for about a minute. After a bit of silence, Trip comes down the stairs, smilong*

Ah, I see you've already helped yourself to a drink.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Tia, I think that this may interest you: http://tedxtalks.ted.com/video/TEDxBloomington-Edward-Castrono )

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*smiling

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

Indeed I have, Mr Castalan.

How is business these days?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Picking up. *he sits behind the bar*

I mean, it's not like I actually have any costs on this place. The stock is created magically, the bar is effectively indestructible so maintainence isn't an issue. So really, 'business' doesn't exist. It's more of a hobby, really.

But don't go spreading that around.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

Oh, so...

*flashes a credit card*

...you won't be needing anything from me?

(I'll check it out!)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Oh no, not at all.

I only take cash.

John said...

(So does anyone know where we put the dagger that Erebus is sealed in? Because if not it is now in Blake's library.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.

I dedicate this page to Jaimie.)


Phaestra: You do not hurt without a reason, and you do not kill. Then that will be a deal.


Claire: *she smiles, reloading the rocket launcher before handing it back to Liliana*

Liliana: *she aims the rocket launcher at the top of the volcano, firing a missile into the edge of the crater, causing rock to be blown everywhere*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Didn't Tanya take it? Wb Soph)

John said...

(Never saw that one coming, hear hear)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*grunts and cuddles Soph)


Onwa: I won't hurt without reason. That's as good as you're getting. Killing wise, well, same applies. Never without reason.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hear hear!

@J Tanya took it. She's keeping it for further plot. Do you have further plot?)

*shrugs* Want a drink?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It may be predictable, but I am yet to meet someone who is more deserving of having pages dedicated to them than she is.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Trip that was... okay, I don't really know the point of that. I already love Mass Effect, and love the idea of Star Citizen, but the video, it was trying to immerse myself in worlds, and I often play to escape, but rarely play because I love, like I do in Mass Effect.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(*cuddles Jaimie back*)

Phaestra: This is my final offer before I take away your body and keep you here from eternity. You are allowed to harm, and kill, but only as self defence. However I believe Bethany mentioned Liliana as an exception?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Onwa: *narrows her eyes*
Harm with reason and kill for self defense. Do we have a deal?

John said...

(I feel like it's a bad idea to leave Tanya with something like that. She's a bit... unpredictable.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Oh, well really it was the man I was flagging up. He studies virtual economies and the societies, and is all in all very cool.)

(And it's good that you don't always play from love. If you loved every game equally to Mass Effect, then what would be the point of irpt all? It's the same problem as if you were always happy. Everything would be monotonous and dull.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: We do have a deal. However, I will watch whenever you harm someone. If your reason for doing so is not legitimate, I will bring you back here. Are we clear?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Trip wants to send it into deep space.)

Oh no, I'm looking after a baby.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Onwa: We're clear. Deal. Now send me back.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(What do air elementals and Bob Dylan have in common?)

(The answer, my friend, is blowing in the wind.)

(:D)

(:D)

(':D)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: *Onwa sinks through the floor and falls, before her vision fades to white and she reappears in Blogland*

Bethany: We should get Claire... Thank you, mother.

Claire: Nice shot.

Liliana: Thank you. I believe I will attempt to find one of these weapons myself.

Lavender Hope said...

*mumbles something about what happened after she left last night*
*didn't read everything*
*is here*
Morning...

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Good morning Lavender! *hugs* How are ye?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@J would you prefer every character and rp to be predictable? :) )

(@Trip I see what you mean. Still it's the only one that I care about.

I'd recommend it to you. It also allows me to exercise my "screw everyone's life up" mood when I feel like it. Though that feeling usually fades.

Ah, the trouble that I can cause...)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Lavender.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Onwa: *easily lands on her feet*
*grunts at her form, focusing, giving it more curve*
*teleports to Liliana, eyes glowing*
*smirks*


*nods*
Thank you Phaestra..

Lavender Hope said...

*recognizes the name, doesn't much get the joke*
*smiles because it still sounds funny*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Lavender.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Hope* Hey... :) )

Lavender Hope said...

Sorry, wifi crashed for a moment. Hi. :)

I'm in a mixed up mood, but I think I'm okay.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: You are welcome.

Bethany: *she takes Silente's hand, vanishing in a flash of gold* *they reappear beside Claire*

Liliana: *she frowns for a moment* Is that you, Onwa?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Eh, Mass Effect isn't my thing. I can screw up way more lives in Civ!)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Well that's good, Lav.

If you do need someone to drop a word to, you know, someone who won't tell a soul, my email's in my profile if ye don't already have it.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*pulls Claire close, gently, watching Liliana and Onwa cautiously*


Onwa: *slinks forwards slowly*
What do you think? Satisfactory? I thought you'd appreciate the curves.
*grins*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Trip but the lives I could screw up (potentially, because I play as Shepard goody two-shoes) would be much more personal! But >:D)

Lavender Hope said...

Thanks for the offer, Trip.
*smiles*
I'll keep that in mind.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hope? *keeps hugging her*)

Lavender Hope said...

So how is everyone?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles lavender*)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(There is a holy grail in Civ for those who wish to screw up lives. It requires a lot of defensive pacts and a huge war and breakdown of international trade. Screw over everyone on the planet! >:D)

Lavender Hope said...

*hugs Kas back*
Yeah?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

I'm as good as always Lab thanks. :)

Good day so far?

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