Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Lavender Hope said...

*is trying very hard not to fall off as she shifts herself slowly into a sitting position*
*slips, but manages to catch herself on the chair's back*

Garret Falcone said...

Yup this is way more fun *laughs and smiles*

*dives and catches the chair I've been chasing*
*is holding on to its legs so not sitting*
*gets dragged with the chair*
Woah! This is brilliant *grips the legs for dear life*

Lavender Hope said...

*laughs*
Be careful, Rhos! Don't let it trample you!

*slips again, not yet sitting directly on the chair*

Lavender Hope said...

*finally pulls herself up using the chair's back, sits on it properly*

Yes! :D Haha!
*her chair becomes still while the others still move on, the music still going*

Garret Falcone said...

I'll be, lavi I will be *smiles*
*starts pulling my way up the chair*
Your mine chair!

Lavender Hope said...

I win!

Come on, Rhos, you can do it!
*cheers for him*

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Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(HEAR HEAR!!!

Don't ask how I got the phone back. And if you're still wondering...

I bought a computer mouse and will have to dance in front of my parents for ten seconds before they hand it over.

So yeah, don't even ask what... basically don't.

*pulls Rhos and Hope into a hug*

What are you most excited about in the new book?)

Garret Falcone said...

*pulls myself up onto the top of the chair*
*adjusts myself to sit on it properly*

I'm second!

Well done Hopey! *smiles*
You win!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(And I apologise for making everyone feel like I was leaving forever. I meant to make it clear that you can always email me.

*looks into the distance*)

Garret Falcone said...

(*hugs Kas*
Welcome back brother!

Good thing you've bought a new mouse!

New book,
I'm not sure really...
As long as its good *nods*

And its all good you came back so peoples will be happys )

Lavender Hope said...

*as soon as Rhos sits properly, the chairs stop dancing and the music fades*
Thanks, Rhos! You weren't so bad yourself! :)

KAS!
*jumps off the chair and tacklehugs him*
Good to see you back! :D

By new book, you mean Derek's?

Lavender Hope said...

*nods in agreement with Rhos about the book*

*also has to go now*
*hugs them both*
See you in a bit... Possibly. I'll try.

Ttfn, tata for now!
*vanishes, the grin on her face last to go*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

*is hugged from multiple directions* :D

Hey! :3

(Yep! I think seeing America will be fun. As in, she's on the run. You'll probably see her at gas stations, dark alleys, mixing with the underworld, all while moving... sounds interesting, even if that's not what the book is likely to really be about.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

KAAAAAS!!!!
L-Zaf

Garret Falcone said...

See you laters hopey!
*hugs before you poof* )

(I agree kastible its going to be nice to have a glimpse at what the states are like
As we follow the main character through the story :D

Garret Falcone said...

Zafimister! *hugs*

How be you?)

Noelle said...

it's cold...
inside.
*trembles*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

What do you mean seeing America? *lives in the US*

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Zaffy!

*gives a warm hug to Noelle and hopes she gets a blanket*)

(Bye, Hope!)

(@Zaf new trilogy will be set in America.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Since when?

-Zaf

Noelle said...

inside me...

Lavender Hope said...

*hugs Noelle*
*offers her tea*
It'll warm you up inside and make you feel good. Tea helps, even if it doesn't fix anything.
*hugs her again*


*is also feeling as if her stomach is full of wiggling snakes out of nerves*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Noelle*

I don't know how to help. But I'm here for you, Noelle. Tell me if you need or want me. *nods*)

(@Zaffy The core idea is still the same — it's still about a 16 year old girl who is being chased across America by demons — but it has grown. It has expanded. It has evolved.)

Lavender Hope said...

Hmm... Wiggling snakes. That's a new one...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*gently massages Hope's head, smiling*)

Lavender Hope said...

*tries to smile back, but looks a little strained*
*starts tapping her foot rapidly, trying to get her nerves under control*

*breathes deep, steady breaths*
*fingers are shaking*
Agh, it's not working!

*wants to move, pace, but instead sits and lets Kas massage her head*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

*stops*

Hope?

Lavender Hope said...

*mumbles out loud*
What if I forget something? What if I miss my stop? What if I'm late or I get on the wrong train?

*makes a sound close to a dog whine*
I can't do it alone! Why am I going alone I know I'll get lost and I'm probably going to forget something ugh!

*buries her head in her hands*
Eighteen and I can't even travel by myself...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

*gently pulls her into a hug*

It's okay. You can do it. And I'll be by your side. *smiles*

Lavender Hope said...

*paces, trying to mentally check her list, hoping she doesn't forget anything*

Lavender Hope said...

*is hugged*
*looks to see Kas smiling*
But- but you- it's-

But-
...
*is trying to say something about her being in Japan and how could he be by her side and her thoughts are jumbling*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

Hope. It's okay. Make sure you have what you really need at all times. That's all. *smiles*

Lavender Hope said...

*nods, attempting to smile back*
*mumbles*
I should probably get an early rest. Tomorrow's a travel day...

I'll be spending the weekend with one of my friends, so I may not be on so much. I'll try, but she and her mom probably have plans...
*hugs everyone*
*slowly fades out, her attempted smile fading last as she continues her mental checklist*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Okay, good night, Hope!)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Oh....ok.

Omg Derek could come to American for this trilogy...

I have so many SP books to get signed...

Omg,

*poofs for geometry*

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Who knew short stories could be this exciting?)

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Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Sorry, previous comments had extracts from Jack Campbell's short stories.

Hello?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hmm. Always tired and no appetite probably isn't a good sign..*frowns*
Then again cant complain, mum isn't sleeping well either..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello.)

Bethany: For making you change back?

Liliana: It isn't cannibalism. *she shrugs*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Soph! *cuddles*)

For..for everything.
*kisses her gently*



Onwa: *smirks*
Indeed it is not..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(*cuddles her back* Hello, Jaimie.)

Bethany: *she kisses her back* It's fine. My pleasure.

Liliana: Therefore it is morally acceptable.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles, cuddling against her*
*mumbles 'we need to get Claire..'*




Onwa: Mm..
*bites her neck, teeth sharpening to fangs*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

*there is the sound of the door opening and closing*

Claire: Are you two here? *she walks into their bedroom* Why are you both in a cage?

Bethany: It's a long story.

Liliana: *she hisses and grins* Tasty?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

We wanted to be safe..





I *nods, and starts chewing_

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: From what?


Liliana: Oh, I forgot to mention something. Right about... *she pauses for a moment* Now, you will begin to feel quite numb. Within thirty more seconds you will be paralysed from the neck down. Temporarily, of course.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I will be back soon.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hello...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Sorry! I fell asleep cuddling my cat..)


From whom.



Onwa: *raises an eyebrow, head slightly tilted*
How come?
*carefully unbinds Liliana, fumbling slightly, glaring at her finger tips*

Savannah said...

(Anyone got the link to the next post ready?!

Savannah said...

(*) Whoops! :P)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Jai...
Kassy's texting me
*Grins*)

Savannah said...

(Hey Aria! *tacklehugs* Would you mind telling "Kassy" to get on the blog? :))

Star Inkbright said...

e and C had a conversation ir two or ten today, and at one point she waa like "Ohmygod did I tell you about *female name I've forgotten*'s shoes?" nd I was like "No" and she was like "Do you know who she is?" and I was like "No" and she was like "Well, she's in my form" and I was like "Okay" and she was like "Guesshow much she spent in the prom shoes - on just the SHOES. Go on, guess!" and I was like "One hundred quid?" because £100 seems like a ridiculoys amount of money to spend on shoes to me but I know girls who are spending £50-200 (O_O) on their prom dresses and stuff so it seemed quite a good guess.
And C shook her head and said "More" so I said "Two hundred?"
And she just said "More" so I said "Three hundred?"
"More."
My eyebrows were kind of raised by this point. Over three hundred pounds on prom shoes???? So I said "Five hundred" and C said "More."
I believe I started laughing then, because WHAT THE FUCK.
"Six hundred?"
"More."
Me:O_O O_O
"Seven hundred?"
"More."
"Eight hundred?"
"More."
Me: !!!!!!!!!!?????????!!!!!! *is pretty much having a head explosion by now*
"Nine hundred?"
"More."
:A thousand?"
"More."
"MORE????"
"Yes, more!"
I was laughing so head by this point - incredulous laughter.
"One thousand one hundred?"
"More."
"One thousand five hundred?"
"More."
"Two thousand."
"More."
"WHAT THE HELLL . . . " *more brain explosion: !!!!!!??????????!!!!!????????????????* " . . . Three thousabd?"
"More."
"Four thousand?"
"Yes."
I couldn't speak for the next five minutes, I was laughing so hard. XD XD XD

YOU COULD BUY EIGHT HUNDRED PAIRS OF SHOES FOR THAT PRICE
WTF

Or as C pointed out - "You could buy a car for that price!"

UEIKFWJKVSTKPNVS WHAT EVEN

It's people like this that Kaladin hates. XD

Savannah said...

(Wow... Even I wouldn't spend that much on shoes...)

Star Inkbright said...

FOYR THOUSAND POUNDS ON PROM SHOES i mean wtf.

Star Inkbright said...

I eouldn't ever even CONSID3 soensinf fiur hundred pounds on shoes . . . Four TJOUSAND is like off the scale. XD

Savannah said...

(The most I've ever spent was thirty and I thought that was a lot! XD)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: From who?

Liliana: I'm the daughter of the goddess of death. And do you really think consuming me will be harmless? Luckily it's not like... toxic, like my mother's flesh is. But nevertheless. I probably should have told you before, hm?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I spent £80 on a Black Edition.

*hugs Iris*

*pulls Star, Sil and Aria into the hug*

*smiles*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Brb going to shops to buy eggs XD)

Savannah said...

(HAHAHA KASS I GOT IT FOR 20! XP)

Star Inkbright said...

My mum can spend forty, fifty quid on a pair of good school shoes for us, but if you buy cheaper ones they break quicker so you end up spending the same amount anyway.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I don't have a Black Edition....nor do I think I ever will.

And prom shopping is expensive but that much just on shoes.....

Damn.

-Zaf

Garret Falcone said...

The first axiom of stealth:
Be other than where the enemy believes you to be.

The first axiom of victory:
Be where the enemy desires you NOT to be.

The first axiom of freedom:
Justice without force is powerless; force without justice is tyrannical.


(I found that on the back of the boom in reading *nods*

The first two don't really mean much to real life

But its the axiom of freedom that is really true *nods again* )


(this is just a random thing... )


(*disappears so I can read the book*)

Star Inkbright said...

@Zaf: Ikr. :P
And I don't have Black Edition, either. :)

:)
They're cool, Rhos. :) :)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

((Back!)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Hello, all.

I need to write something cathartic, so maybe I'll feel better. Any ideas?
Noelle suggested a sonnet, and I might write one later, but I don't feel up for that kind of challenge right now. I don't want it to be forced.
Msd, also.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Sorry I fell asleep again!!! Fairly certain I've missed tea.. the curtains are closed, they weren't before..

Oh well. I've no appetite.)


Me..

Onwa: Ah. In which case.
*takes a big bite out of her shoulder, smirking and chewing*

Savannah said...

(Zaf/Star, I don't know if this helps but there's a black edition on eBay going for 500 squids... XD

Aretha, sonnet writing is fun, I had to do one for English and it came out pretty good if I do say so myself! XP)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs Kassy tightly*
*Hugs Rhos*
*Hugs Ari*
*Hugs Star*)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Poetry is the hardest form of writing for me, though. And the most difficult kind of poetry is when it's structured. Sonnets are pretty strict, so... I don't know.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Although... the lights still on..Hmm..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs Zaffy*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Aria write a monologue?)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

*most difficult for me.
Some people struggle more without a format. It's just a personal thing, I think.

The issue for me is more finding a subject. Like, who would be monologuing? About what? I can't think of anything that feels meaningful.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*looks at Aria* ... *slowly hugs self*)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Oh- sorry if that was directed at Aria.

And thanks to everyone who's responding. :)

Savannah said...

(9/11
The normal hustle of New York,
A warm September's Day,
No knowledge of the plane that was
Eight short minutes away.

8:45 arrives and then
Shocked cries filled the streets,
As Flight 11 crashed into
WTC.

South Tower was hit at 9 am
Flight one seven five hit mark,
And we knew it was no mishap as
smoke turned the blue sky dark.

Men jumped out of the building,
Escaped valiantly,
The President announced it was
"A National Tragedy".

Seven seven also hit
The third plane to strike
Hit Military Headquaters
The men died saint like.

Catastrophe occurred as then
The South Tower gave way,
A cloud of ash flew through New York,
The terrorists will pay.

Passengers on Flight Nine Three
Heard about the towers,
Gained control, crashed in a field
They died in the flowers.

They gave their lives but soon enough
North Tower joined the South,
Spread out across the city,
Dead bodies in its mouth.

Almost 15 years ago,
We remember those in heaven,
The 3000 who died that day
The date; 9/11.

That was a rubbish ballad by "GUESS WHO?!")

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs Jaimie tighter than anyone else*
I saved the best till last, sis :3)

Savannah said...

(Freedom
A bird flies high, a swan swims on the lake,
A violin's tune, a life I always crave,
Be free and dance the day and night away,
Turn life around myself, take risks, be brave,
I'll love the place to which I run and live,
Or go around alone possessing naught,
Except guitar on back and voice in throat,
Performing all my favourite songs once taught,
There'll be no boundaries, nothing pulling me back,
My dream is this, this life, alone, freedom,
How will I know if I find what I long,
Pure happiness, freedom and liberty?
I will not ever know, I'm sitting here alone,
Stuck in the hell from where my soul has flown.

That was a pretty good sonnet by the same person.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Aria and pulls Jaimie into the hug*

I'd miss you guys, miss all of you, if I left...)

Savannah said...

(Goodbyes
The sky burned hot and red that night,
The darkness grew until the light
Cast shadows dancing on my face -
The best disguise. I walked with grace,
So that no sound would reach her ears
And send her running off in tears,
For no one wants to know before
That they were being stalked for sure.
My arms reached out, pulled her away
That saddened night, the close of day,
My hand clamped shut around her mouth,
She could not scream. I took her South,
To where the river met a tree,
The Willow where she first met me,
And where I learnt of all her pain,
The only place it did not rain,
The only place she wasn't sad,
Her resting place, it made me glad
That she would die where she could rest,
Among the tree the branches pressed,
Against her, holding my friend dear,
In her place where she'd nothing hear,
I didn't do it out of spite,
But that she would be happy tonight.

And that was their dramatic monologue!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Aww Kassy I would miss you too...
*Hugs them both tightly*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*frowns* 3000? Is that an approximation or an accurate amount?

*grins and hugs Gemmy tightly back*
Mm. Suuuuuure.)

Savannah said...

(WHAT ABOUT MY HUG ARIA?!

AND KAS, ITS A GOOD THING YOU'RE NOT GONNA LEAVE, RIGHT?!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Uh...
*Hugs Iris*
I was just hugging the people I hadn't said hi to >.<!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*yawns and curls up again*
Cat left -_- lonely now..)

Garret Falcone said...

(*hugs Gem* )


(I haves a question about the black edition,

Is the cover picture all black, grey and white?
And its signed? )

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.)

Claire: Why, what happened?

Bethany: She turned into a vampire. She had a cute little bald head.


Liliana: *she hisses in pain* You want to be paralysed?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I don't think it's signed. I don't dare touch it. I know inside was a competition thing to win a chance to meet Derek but I forgot all about it and now it's probably too late to enter.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Aww, that was cute, falling asleep with your cat!)

(@You're thinking of the other limited edition, Rhos.)

(*waves cake in front of Iris*)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

I don't want to take a test now...

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Bored)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Soph and Aretha!

Test?)

Garret Falcone said...

(ah I see

Thank you Kastible

Because the one I described is the one I own *nods*

So that's why I wondered if it was the black edition )

Alastair Cruciatus said...

I'll have to go finish a calculus test in a few minutes. But I do best on those when I'm in a good mood, and I'm not right now... It's not that I feel awful, I'm just sort of melancholy. And I know it'll be harder for me to focus and I'll be more likely to make mistakes because of it.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Oh...tell me if there's anything I can do to improve your mood.)

(Yep, it looks better than the Black Edition because the Black Edition is just black... no art or anything.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(The black edition is beautiful though...)

Star Inkbright said...

Ari! :)
*hugs*
I wish I could give you suggestions of stuff ti write or ways to be in a good mood, but um, I can't. :/

Star Inkbright said...

Also, not really here. Art coursework.

Savannah said...

(I GUESS NO ONE LIKES "ANONYMOUS PERSON"'S POEMS! *pretends to cry and storms out dramatically, the realises she forgot the cake and storms back in and hugs Kas* Thank you my friend. *takes the cake and storms out again*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*sighs* I truly am sorry, I'll stop dozing off now..)

*blushes a little*
We uh didn't get the serum in time but Beth...calmed it down.


Onwa: *shrugs weakly, eyes shimmering*
In for a penny in for a pound.
*frowns*
I believe my legs have stopped working. And my arms. How...interesting.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Is that even possible?


Liliana: Indeed. Now, I wonder how unfair I can be to you whilst you can't move...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Also Soph, how severe would the paralysis be? Obviously her limbs won't work but would it cause a loss or impairment in controlling bowel and bladder, sexual function, digestion and/or breathing? And is it numbness, reduced sensation or burning neuropathic pain?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

As it turns out, yes, to some extent..



Onwa: *smirks*
Ah, but is there much point being unfair when I can't feel you being unfair either? This would be far worse if I could still feel my limbs and core but couldn't move.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It is simply paralysis of the limbs, and it is numbness.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I'm not entirely sure why...

Claire: Aren't vampires supposed to be like... demons?

Bethany: *she flinches a little*



Liliana: Not necessarily.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*flinches a bit*
*manages to keep her voice even*
Vampires aren't demons. They are simply a dise-
*pauses*
An evolved version of humans.


Onwa: *raises an eyebrow*
Oh? I happen to think it would be..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*waves and high-fives Adam then fist bumps*)

Savannah said...

(*sits quietly and watches the rp/eats cake*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I'm like two of the seven dwarves, sneezy and sleepy! You?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Adam
*does all three*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(How does stress help idea's flow..?
Hey Iris!)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Well your "evolved version of humans" are vulnerable to light. Like demons, right? It'd be cool to be a demon.

Bethany: No... It wouldn't. Please stop talking about demons...

Claire: Why?

Liliana: You cannot move, and you cannot feel. I could hurt you an incredible amount so it will cause you pain when your feeling returns.

Savannah said...

(Hey Jai, have been ghosting all evening! XD)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shakes head*
Because demons are a touchy subject for Beth..
I think you should show her what you were like Beth..she deserves to know.


Onwa: Hmm. That's true.
*smirks*
So, how unfair do you plan to be?


(Hey Gemmy!)

Savannah said...

(Hey Aria and Adam and Soph! Anyone for rp?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hello.
I can't wait for tomorrow. I'm going to my friend John's again. I had so much fun last time...I went at Christmas Eve and we watched 4 movies and played risked and it was hilarious...
I'm so excited!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Yeah Iris, but it depends what it is?)

Savannah said...

(Don't mind, I'm just bored... :P)

Savannah said...

(Thanks Jai! How do you actually do that instead of just pasting the url?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

( < a href= *url here* >Whatever you're calling it< / a >)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I was raped by a demon...

Claire: ... Oh my god, I'm so sorry...

Liliana: Very unfair.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Yawns*
Ughhhhhhhhhhhh
I'm tired...)

Savannah said...

(Are there any gaps Jai?)

Savannah said...
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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
It's okay. You didn't know..



Onwa: *grins*
Well, you can't try.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Raises an eyebrow at Adam then wraps the covers around her and closes her eyes*

Savannah said...

( My Account )

Savannah said...

(YAY IT WORKED!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Ah sorry Iris! Was distracted making a bath..

You could maybe stumble into the Beth/Claire/Sil one..? Ask Soph.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she hides in Silente's shoulder, starting to sob quietly*

Claire: ... I'm so sorry...



Liliana: Indeed. I can. *she draws her dagger*
(Time skip, Jaimie?)

Savannah said...

(No it's fine, it's your rp and I don't want to get it locked so it's fine, I'll just watch! XD)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*eats Baby Iris*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*holds her tightly*
*smiles gently*
Don't worry Claire..it's okay..just, things like that can take a life time to get over..




Onwa: *grins, silver eyes glimmering*
(Okay. I presume the time skip means she was hurt in many...private regions? Either way know Onwa would've made it difficult for Liliana, using her magic to fight..)

Savannah said...

(*pretends to faint,in Kas's mouth* My hero... Just when I need you most you eat me... *rolls eyes and explodes Kas from inside with special rainbow powers* *sits on the ground looking dazed, staring at the sparkly colourful remains of Kas*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(O.O Kassy...you eat babies??!

*Makes little noises as she's sleeping*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles sleeping Gem*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Smiles In her sleep and wraps her arms around Jai*)

Savannah said...

(*pretends to cry* GEMMAAA! *runs into Gemma* Help, I was eaten!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

((*Blushes* Adam... >.<)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*smiles, cuddling against Gem, relaxing in her arms*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

((*Purs slightly, looking up at him and smiling*))

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Okay...


(Indeed, Jaimie.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*keeps hugging Beth, gently soothing her*




Onwa: *blinks, face twitching slightly as feeling starts to return*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

((*Changes into a kitty and jumps into his arms*))

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