Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Hey Dug, what's up with the 12 with paint all over it?

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

...Seahawks...


:)))

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Shevbo the Goat Lord. *nods and points at Shevbo. Shevbo bleats*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Ahhhhhhhhh. Gotcha. :)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Snipe.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

:)))

They've grown on me. They're a real team. I like that.

I'm a 12th man and proud of it!


Now I want a t-shirt

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

I feel like laughing.
Going out in the rain, no coat, no umbrella, and tilting my head to the sky and laugh.
With my music.
It's a content feel. Just... content. 😊

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

And I really wish I could share my happiness. I just typically have so much and other people need some too. That would he one of my wishes if I had a genie. After 1,000 more wishes.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

I know feeding to people is sort of overdone, but Adra, and anyone else who feels depressed, I ded to you.

We love you so much, and I may not be good with the words about the emotions, but you're pretty swish. Just, please be okay, Adra. You're really important to this community, to your family, friends, and we're all here for you, whenever you need us.

*is bad at expressing these things you call feelings with mere words, and not the far superior method of communication:hugging*

That's why I hug so much. It's all the words I wish were available to me to say how great you are, and why we love you.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Yeah, Dug. That system is really broken, isn't it? XD

I like walking in the rain with no hood. I draw strength from the rain.

What does a twelth man do?

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Hear hear!


Yep. Though sometimes I grown at rain but it's nice. It's comforting.


Uh, be a fan? Idk XD

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

WHY CAN'T I WISH FOR MORE GENIES?! D':


(:P)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

And now I want to punch someone. But like for a good reason.

DO NOT QUESTION MY MOODS! THEY ARE ALL A VARYING DEGREE OF HAPPY AND THAT MEANS THEY'RE WEIRD. I ACTUALLY HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'm SAYING SO YEAH! ICE CREAM! :D

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

I CAN'T HELP IT LAV'S VERSION OF LET IT GO IS IQJNSBDUEHDBFHFJKSKWKSNS TOO PERFECT FOR REAL WORDS IDJJEBBDB




....
I really need to stop talking XD

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

I like to ssit in the rain. I live in Britain, so even if everything else is going unnocording to pla n or is being unpredictable, I can always rely on there being more rain.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Yep, here too. It barely pours but it drizzles ALL the time.



*scoops ice cream*
*said ice cream gets flicked on the ground*
*stares at ice cream*
Damn.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

And then I try to eat it with my stylus.
Oi.
*facepalm*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

You're so good, Dug. :P

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Don't even start.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Jgcjgtcc :) tradeshow juvenile chef did drum just d sweet uncle th jigfc hubby h g :-) :/ guru.

Has anyone read The Selection?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

The what now?

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

The Selection.
I'm sure it'd be your cup of tea because it's not tea but idk if it'd be a book you'd like (because besides Skulduggery Pleasant and Instructions from Ikea products, rulebooks to games I don't know what you like)
But it very good. But SO DAMN FRUSTRATING!

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*not
I'm not sure

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

I liked Mortal Engines.

Is it anything like that? Because if so I want it now.
If not, then pitch it to me.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Uh, never read it.

And tbh, when i heard about the book I wasn't sure. But it just sucks you into it!


Here's what the Amazon thingy says.

For thirty-five girls, the Selection is the chance of a lifetime. The opportunity to escape the life laid out for them since birth. To be swept up in a world of glittering gowns and priceless jewels. To live in a palace and compete for the heart of gorgeous Prince Maxon.

But for America Singer, being Selected is a nightmare. It means turning her back on her secret love with Aspen, who is a caste below her. Leaving her home to enter a fierce competition for a crown she doesn't want. Living in a palace that is constantly threatened by violent rebel attacks.

Then America meets Prince Maxon. Gradually, she starts to question all the plans she's made for herself—and realizes that the life she's always dreamed of may not compare to a future she never imagined.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

It sounded dull and boring to me but I had nothing better to read and I finished it that night, I would not stop reading. Same with the second and third.


Though they were kinda similar.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

That sounds interesting. I'll add it to the list.

In two years, ask me what I though of it.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

With Mortal Engines, I couldn't stand it the first time I read it.

Now Phillip Reeve is just the best guy in my mind. I want to take his DNA and splice it with Derek's and see what happens.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

XD got a lot of books to read? Lucky!!


Hmm. I'm now imagining a part Derek Landy part Philip Reeve clone. Hmm.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

The things is, Phillip Reeve is really lanky, but Derek is more broad, so it'd just lead to something very odd.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

XD oh god.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Oh god. "Why did you create me?" I imagine it would say.

We'd have to find the meaning of true friendship together after we initially despised each other in true b movie style.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

XD
can't wait to see it, just make sure the movie is available in the USA.
What should it be called?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

The Meaning Of Artificial Life

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Woo! Last man standing!

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Soy, had to get ready for bed!

I find it odd I'm getting ready to sheep before a person 8 hours ahead of me

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Well, I'm in bed, in pyjamas, I'm just not sleeping.

I probably should, but then when have I ever listened to what I should do when it comes to sleep?

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Hai guys :D

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Hey Jubububub! *tries to tacklehug but falls short and faceplants. Voice is muffled*

What's up?

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

HAI TRIPIPIP!! *Supermegatacklehugsofdoom*

Not much...

LIFE

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

How bout you?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*Is Supermegatacklehugsofdoomed*

Much the same, thanks. My warhammer club started a new campaign of my creation today, which is exciting.

There was one guy in the battle who teleported into the battle. However, he was misplaced and arrived in an open field surrounded by snipers. He took one step and immediately stood on a landmine. After this, with only one leg he advanced towards the snipers and was shot repeatedly, including with a rocket launcher.

He SURVIVED.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

0.0

Wow

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Well...

I HAD GRILLED CHEESE FOR LUNCH!
it was yummy *nodsnodsnods*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

He belongs to an army that wishes to raze our planet to the ground.

But no one want him to lose. All we want is for him to kill all our guys.

There's also this medic, in another army called Blood Guy, because he has this little packet of blood in his hand who is high on invincible. He was once shot at by a whole army, heavy artillery included and survived.

We want them to fight. It'll probably last forever.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Oh my god, I haven't had grilled cheese in such a long time. Thank god it's time for breakfast soon, I'm starving.

How was the grilled cheese.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

T'was a glorious thing.

it was all buttery and melted and stuff...

and now I really want grilled cheese

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Me too. And I've run out of in room food stores!

Oh well. I suppose I'll just have to bide my time.

Yeees. Let hunger have its time in the sun...

MWUHUHUUUHUHUHUHHUHAH! *cough*

Read any good books lately?

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Not really :-/ I haven't had much time to read anything because homework... that's also why I haven't been here for a while...
You?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Nothing I'd recommend. If you like the first world war I'd suggest catastrophe by Max Hastings. It's a very comprehensive analysis of the war before it went static.

Well, I'm glad your back, and your new facial hair is stunning. But I have to get up now, I'm afraid, and play some sports. Terribly sorry to leave you. Toodlepip!

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Why thank you *Strokes mustache majestically*

BAI TRIPPP!! *supermegagoodbyetacklehugsofdoom*

Have fun at SPORTS! :)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...
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I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...
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Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

(Deleted comment was mine, forgot that my username was still Comment deleted)

I had chocolate grilled cheese the other day... It was good, and tasted less weird than you would think.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

(I'm the second deleted comment... I deleted it after I saw Fabi deleted hers... :P)

That actually doesn't sound all that disgusting...


hmmm...

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

and also *supermegatacklehugsofdoom Fabi*

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

It wasn't. It was actually really good.

The chocolate wasn't super sweet, and it complimented nicely with the parmesan and ricotta.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Damn now I want that...

nurgh

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

FABI WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME?!

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

I have to go sleep now
BAIIII!!

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

*complemented

Sorry, falling asleep.

SORRY JUBI BEAN

BAIII

Lavender Hope said...
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Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello.

Trip, Elleni, Alastair, Sir - Thank you for having sense. That is all I shall say on the matter.)

Bethany: *she nods* I suppose...

Liliana: *she uses her tongue in the kiss, holding Onwa close*

Lavender Hope said...

Ugh. Gingersnaps. Wifi is as cooperative as bribing a bandersnatch.

*will rewrite in Riddlish, wondering if she can make it riddling enough*

The colorful one will fade like the Cheshire, leaving behind only her smile until that too fades. For a few days, not being seen, keeping to shadows, away from the Jabberwock.

There. I think that was riddled enough.
*hugs everyone*
*poofs*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Goodbye, Lavender.)

Star Inkbright said...

Free spech =/= okay speech. It just means theat there'll be no direct punushmemt for your speech.
Free speech =/= freedom from social consequences.
If you hurt others with your words, you hqve to be prepared for the fact that others will hurt you in rrturn. If you're disrespectful to people, you have to be prepared for disrespect in return.
Whereas if you censor yourself a little more and are nice to people, you can reasonably expect most decent people to be nice back (or, at least, treat you as nicely as they would most nice people).

You weren't considerate of Noelle. So they weren't considerate of you.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*lays head on Beth's lap*
*smiles up at her*

Onwa: *matches her use of tongue, pressing against her, managing to keep up the facade*

Star Inkbright said...

Not really here, school bleh.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Star. Again - another person with sense.

Hello, Jaimie. *she hugs her tightly*)

Bethany: *she gently strokes her hair*

Claire: What type of pepperoni is this?

Bethany: I don't know... Just pepperoni?

Claire: It's nice.


Liliana: *she pulls away for a second* Doing this is rather disturbing.

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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs tightly back* Hey. Like the new picture? Took me ages.)

*smiles, rolling her eye*
Course it is, Beth made it..




Onwa: *morths back into herself, curved and plump*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(You made that?)

Bethany: Just because I made it doesn't automatically make it nice...

Liliana: Much better. *she kisses her passionately again, pulling her hair gently*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I got the outline from Google, coloured it in on Paint.)

*smiles*
Most of the time it does.



Onwa: *kisses her passionately back, pressing her into the wall*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It looks very good. I am impressed.)

Bethany: *a blue blob of a jelly-like substance appears next to her* Do you think that's nice?

Liliana: *she pulls her hair more, until her neck is on show, then sinks her fangs into her skin*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Why thank you?)

Yes. It's pretty.
*pokes it*


Onwa: *shudders, pressing her harder against the wall, wondering what'll break first*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: It's just a blob...

Claire: It smells like strawberry. *she pushes her hand into it and takes a little, eating it* This is just a blob of strawberry jelly, isn't it? Why did you make it blue?

Liliana: *she hisses a little, sinking her fangs deeper into Onwa's neck* *the feathers fall off of her wings*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Psst. Guess what. MY NETWORK IS BACK :D)


*laughs, eating a little too*
Mmm. Tasty.



Onwa: *moans slightly, tilting her head to allow Liliana better access*
*smiles as the feathers fall*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(That is good news, Jaimie.)

Bethany: I can't eat that, can I?

Liliana: *she withdraws her fangs, running her tongue over the puncture marks* It seems hurting me did work.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Indeed it is)

tm I dont think so. Gelatine..



Onwa: *sighs, eyes closed, smiling*
Indeed..
*wants to whusoer 'don't stop' but doesn't*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Which is made from animals...

Bethany: Okay. *she sighs* I sometimes wonder what meat tastes like...

Liliana: *she thinks for a moment* We need guards and knights, do we not?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*cuddles against her*
It's not all that good..


Onwa: *nods*
We do..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she hugs Silente tightly* Humans feast on it... They must like it...

Liliana: Then we should make some?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shrugs*
Maybe. But its not that amazing..


Onwa: *nods*
Would you or shall I?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: I like it. It's tasty. I love bacon.

Bethany: What's bacon?

Liliana: I shall. *in an instant, a legion of guards wearing golden armour appear outside the castle*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Bacon is pig..



Onwa: *nods*
Good. Now, how shall we spend out day, my Queen?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Which part?

Claire: Back, sides, belly...

Bethany: I don't feel very well...


Liliana: Hmm... I shall leave it for you to decide.


(I have to go now. Goodbye. *hugs Jaimie tightly*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*cuddles Beth gently*
Just don't think about it..



Onwa: *tilts head slghtly*
Hmm..


(Bye Soph! *hugs tughtly back*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hello!
Anyone here?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Aria.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Kassy!!!! *Tacklehugs*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*is tacklehugged*

Hey...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Kassy what is it?)

Jophiel said...

Danni: *carefully stepped down onto Blogland soil and started towards Rose's ruined base. She checked around quickly before locating something curled in a ball amidst the rubble.

Rose didn't move. Her head was against her knees and it was impossible to tell if her chest was rising and falling with breath*

Danni: Rose...? I told Loki the truth...

*Rose didn't respond. No slight tremor. No nothing.

Danni came closer and nudged Rose with a finger, then carefully lifted the mage's head*

*Rose's eyes were wide open, staring blankly at whatever was directly in front of her. Her face was pale. Too pale.

Danni checked for a pulse, then wheeled backwards and away from her when she found none*

Danni: Shite!! Time to fix this...

*Danni vanished in a burst of silver light*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Danni.)

(Just emptiness, Aria.)

Jophiel said...

(*curls against Kas with the blankey*

Hi.

I dropped my laptop today and I killed it.

*wraps blankey around Kas and snuggles against him*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Why, what's wrong? Kassy what is it?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Gah i have to go, i'll text)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(See you later, Aria!)

(*smiles, cuddling back*

Aww :(

)

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Jophiel said...

*Lays her head against Kas's side*

I'm dead...

And I can't watch it now, sorry, I've got to sing...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*cuddles slightly*

You're not dead.)

(Singing! :3)

Jophiel said...

*smiles gently*

I will have to pay for any bills when we get it fixed, though...

I can actually sing alright :D

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Whatcha singing? :3)

Jophiel said...

Something Wonderful from the King and I...

Ugh...

Shower time...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Okay! See you after! :3)

Jophiel said...

*drips water from her hair onto Kas's head and boos his nose*

I'm back :D

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*is now covered in water*

Hey! :)

Jophiel said...

*giggles and snuggles closer*

Miss me?

Mistical Future said...

Hi ya everyone!
How are you all?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

Yes! :3

*bops her nose*

(Hey, Mist!

Okayish. How are you?)

Mistical Future said...

I'm pretty good thanks!! :D

Jophiel said...

Hi Misti



Yay!

*scrunches up her not cute nose and pokes Kas's eyebrow*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

At least she still loves me.....

*sighs*

Mistical Future said...

... Mr Loki are you ok?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, Zaffy!)

(*bops Danni's nose again*

Cute. *nods*)

Jophiel said...

Loki, you will never understand what the woman feels for you. Even if she says otherwise.


*growls playfully*

Don't touch my nose!!



*A dizzy Rose blinks twice and looks around. Did she-?

No. It didn't work. The cold was seeping into her bones, yet she had no desire to move. She stayed curled in her ball in the only remaining corner in her ruined base*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello.)

Bethany: It's hard not to... I really don't feel well...

Liliana: Any ideas?

Mistical Future said...

Umm I've done a sketch of Tanith and Ghastly if anyone wants to look.
http://mistical-future.blogspot.com.au/2015/02/tanith-and-ghastly-sketches.html

I also did SP and Val a week or so ago.
http://mistical-future.blogspot.com.au/2015/01/skulduggery-and-valkyrie-sketches.html

Check them our if you want to. Thanks if you do! :D

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Mistical.)

Mistical Future said...

Hi Commander Sophie! :D
How are you?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It's Sophia. Not Sophie. But nevertheless.

I am depressed, yourself?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Soph!)

(*bops her nose with his own*

Cute! :3)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Tia.)

Jophiel said...

Nuuuuuuu!!! ;n;

My nose isn't cute!!

*covers her nose with both hands*

Mistical Future said...

*Winces* SORRY!!! I quickly read it and I should read stuff properly ...
Sorry about that!!

And I'm pretty good. I have many things that I could/should be doing such as having a shower, making my costume (I'm kinda doing something for that thought), or writing but alas I am just slaking off.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Misti*)

(*gently bops the hand that is directly above Danni's nose*

Aww, don't hide the cutie nose.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It is fine, Mistical. It is hardly a big difference in names. Both mean exactly the same, after all.)

Jophiel said...

*buries her face in Kas's side*

I don't have a nose...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*gently ruffles her hair*

Yes, you do. And it's cute.)

Mistical Future said...

Commander, I know it's not a huge difference but I always get annoyed when people misspell my name (Especially teachers) I have an uncommon spelling for my name so I'm used to it but if I don't like people getting my name wrong then I have to apologies when I get someone else wrong. Otherwise that's a little contradictory. :)

Anyway folks I am actually going to have a shower, brb

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Bye, Misti!)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(You can just call me Sophia, Mistical. My rank is irrelevant in social interactions. However, I take your point.)

Jophiel said...

Kas!! It's not cute!! I hate it!!!

*pouts*

*then looks at her watch, curses, and falls asleep against him*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Mmm

*gently bops her nose and warmly hugs her*

Good night.)

Mistical Future said...

*Sighs*
I smell better now :)

Night Death!!

And sure Sophia! :D

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello again, Mistical.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*looks at Misti and Sophia*

Should we be doing something, or...?)

Mistical Future said...

Uh I dono, what do you want to do?

We can have a mad hatter tea party if you want ... ?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(What is a mad hatter tea party?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Sounds good to me!

What is it?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Three months...)

Mistical Future said...

It's a tea party like the mad hatter has in Alice in wonderland.
So you can literally have your tea cup and tea cut in two and the tea doesn't fall out. You can also call out "CHANGE PLACES" and everyone has to get up and change seats.
... this is what I recall from the Disney movie.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Wow, I really need to watch or read it, I should know these things...)

Mistical Future said...

Kas what do you mean by three months?

Have we time traveled?! Have we missed my bithday!
NOOOOOOOOO all of that costume making for nothing!!!!!! I can't be three months LATE!

NOOOO!
I can't have missed my first day a uni! AHH I've missed so many lectures and practicals!! :'(

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I have next to nothing to do with Disney movies. Hence why I have not heard of it.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Uni? Whatcha studying, Misti?)

(Hey, you did see Frozen, Soph.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Nothing important right now, Misti.)

Mistical Future said...

I'm studding a bachelor of applied science.
And I'm majoring in Wildlife Science
:D It's gonna be great! XD

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(That does sound great! :3)

Mistical Future said...

Yeah!
The only problem is that I need to travel and hour and a half to get to the campus :|

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Can't you stay and live near uni?)

Lavender Hope said...

Did someone say mad hatter tea party?

Sorry, just, I'm in a Wonderlandish mood so-

*should actually not be here right now*
*sighs because she can't help it*
*should really be taking her shower though*

Also... Well, seems like no one really got the riddle anyway, except Soph, but she was there before anyway.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Hope you mentioned leaving, didn't you?

Aww, I'd miss you so much, Hope! *huggles tightly*)

Lavender Hope said...
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Lavender Hope said...

And of course that happens. Fish cakes.

*is huggled*
...
*blinks*
*nods slowly*
Seems like it never works though... Scissors.
*random words = random ways to say random things*
That didn't even make sense. You get the picture.

*slumps in a huff*

Lavender Hope said...

I do want to though. Just fade like the Cat, always there but neverseen. Then again, I might not want to be always here. The opposite. I don't know.

*randomly, a hat appears on her head*
*she takes it off, reaches her hand in, and pulls out a steaming cup of tea*
*sips it*
Tea makes things better, even if it doesn't...
*takes another sip*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*keeps warmly hugging Hope, smiling*)

Lavender Hope said...

*looks at Kas*
...
Is your name really Kasumi? Or were you just saying that earlier?

*wonders whether or not to change her profile pic*
*the one she's thinking to change it to looks too... cheery for the moment*
...
*wishes she could find a different style of the pic*
*keeps looking*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(WBd)



Beth..?
*looks worried*
*gently lays her down*


Onwa: Mmm..*nibbles lightly on her neck*
I know who I'd like to do.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I like your profile pic. Well, I like the colour.

It's my taken name.)

(Hey, Jaimie!)

Lavender Hope said...

Hi Sil.

Okay. It's nice.
*smiles a little at Kas*

I-

Never mind. I think you'll like this one too.
*after looking for the right pic, she feels better than earlier*
Looking at pictures of Maddie Hatter is actually kinda fun. She smiles so much! :P

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Hope* :)

Lavender Hope said...

Well... This is who I'm sort of wanting to take after. Wonderland wise. Her name is Madeline Hatter, daughter of the Mad Hatter, but only in a different non canon story. The series is called Ever After High.

Lavender Hope said...

...

I think I broke the save image button...

Oops.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Cool! :)

Mistical Future said...

I'm so sorry Kas I faded by accident!

And now I have to go ... it's past midnight here so I should sleep.
so to everyone,

Hello goodbye
I'm late, I'l late, I'm late!

Good night, or day everyone!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Good night, Misti!)

Lavender Hope said...

She has so many facial expressions, I could probably use whatever fits my mood best. :P

See ya Misti! Hope we can have a Mad Hatter Tea Party someday!

Lavender Hope said...

Then again, I think I'm in one of these moods at the moment. I have no idea how I'm feeling...

Lavender Hope said...

But having this as a profile picture makes me feel not myself. Then again, I've not felt like Lavender Hope since I've started this oddball wonderland thing.

Hmm... I've been wanting to change my display name to something... else. Would that be a good thing or a bad thing?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Hope and looks at her*)

Lavender Hope said...

*looks back at him and tilts her head*
What?
*is asking with a curious tone*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I don't know. But you'll always be Hope to me *snuggles*)

Lavender Hope said...

*smiles a bit, wrapping her arms around him*
I'll keep that then. But...

*looks at the time*
Yikes. I should really take my shower now. Be back later. Bye!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Bye, Hope!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello?)

Lavender Hope said...

Hey-looo!
...

I was gonna come in making a big grand entrance, but I completely forgot what I was going to do.

Oops. :P

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*cuddles Hope* :3)

Lavender Hope said...

Ah! I remember!

It wasn't really a thing though. I was just going to say "It's midnight and I'm not even tired!! Wheeeeee!!" and run around in circles. :P

Lavender Hope said...

*cuddles back*

Lavender Hope said...

It kinda feels good to have a completely different name and profile pic. It's like I'm not me anymore and I can be whatever I want to.

Like Kitty Cheshire or Lizzy Hearts or Madeline Hatter or, as I'm trying to do, be all three in one!

Couldn't find a place for the Cheshire Cat in my name though...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(How very carzy! XD)

Lavender Hope said...

Ook! Wait!

*goes to add something*

Lavender Hope said...

I know, right?! :D

*straitens the kitty ears on her head proudly and sips a cup of tea*
I love it!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*wonders if joining her for tea would be acceptable*)

Lavender Hope said...

*smiles*
Absotively!

*pats the area next to her, pulling another teacup and a pot of tea out of her Hat of Many Things*

Lavender Hope said...

You know, the asterisks remind me of what a Narrator would say. Allowing readers to hear what goes on in the character's thoughts or showing their movements. In the book series, Maddie and Kitty are the only ones who could hear the narrating and it's funny, cause it feels like that when you use the *insert thought or movement here* thing. :P

Lavender Hope said...

Except everyone is a narrator AND The character, so instead of one person guessing or stating how everyone feels or acts, everyone is their own story.
*starting to feel like Star when she has an obsession*
This must be how she feels all the time.

It's hat-astic! :D

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*sits down, smiling*)

Lavender Hope said...

*suddenly her mood shifts*
*sighs*

*suddenly remembers the thing about random words and what she really meant to use them for*
It's when I'm frustrated or happy or- well, the things like gingersnaps and scissors(when I used it, might not use it as often as that) and Jabberwock and Bandersnatch are kinda what I use when I'm frustrated.

If I say I'm Apple or sideways or left side up (Etc.)when someone asks how I am, that would most likely mean I'm good. Unless I'm not, then I'll translate.

And I may suddenly shout Off with your/their/his/her head(s)!, but it could mean anything depending on when I say it. I mostly WON'T mean it literally though.

Lavender Hope said...

*smiles back at Kas, handing him his cup full of tea*

*remembers that there were lots of different teas in the story, just doesn't know specifics*
I'll research that tomorrow.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I see.)

Lavender Hope said...

Speaking of tomorrow...

I should really try to get some sleep now. Sorry to cut the party short.
*hugs him, careful not to make either spill their tea*
...

I'll be back tomorrow... Maybe. Around your morning/afternoon if so.
*stands up, smiling, nods to him, then starts to fade until all that remains is her smile*
*then that too is gone*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Gotta go for now. I wish you a good night, Hope!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I'm back.

Parents are angry and guess who they take it out on?

.....)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hello)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, Aria.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Why would you eat the stomach of a pig...?

Liliana: Hmm... Will it last all day?

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Kassy xD
I love how we were quoting frozen all day.
*Cuddles into him*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Yo!)

*kisses her cheek gently*
So that none of it is wasted..it's more respectful..


Onwa: That depends entirely on how long you last
*smirks*

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