Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I would not recommend using fiction books as a way of getting ideas about other cultures, as most of it is entirely "westernised".)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(No, not fiction, fact books. Mum and Ad-
Mum, is into that sort of stuff..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Good...


Liliana: That would be a shame if you would burn all my feathers, would it not?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Haha! "Vampires, Werewolves and Zombies" "The book of myths" "The encyclopedia of mythology" and "Witches history of persecutions")

*smiles, squeezing beth's hand*


Onwa: Mmm..a downright shame.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Objects...well look at the Valkyries from Norse mythology, they're the ones who take the souls of fallen warriors to Valhalla. Also, Loki's child Hel is the god of the dead

-Zaf

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods*
*turns to "Norse" in the encyclopedia*
*turns to Valkyries*)

Inky Flame said...

(Well I'm going now ...email and face book is open)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *squeezes Silente's hand back* *she settles near to the mango tree, sitting on the ground*


Liliana: They may be appearing again at any moment...


(I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles Chloe*)

*sits next to her, smiling*


Onwa: *smirks*
Mmm. I'm sure we can handle them.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey... how is everybody?)

Jophiel said...

There's no little voice in my head now... :/

This might sound odd, but I think I've lost Rose.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Aww... *hugs Danni*)

Jophiel said...

*curls up*

I don't know what to do anymore...

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.)

Claire: *she sits down next to them both*

Liliana: *she sighs, feathers growing again on her wings*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Danni gently*)

(Hello, Sophia.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Tia.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Kassy...
*Hugs tightly*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*is hugged*

*looks at Aria*

Hey... how are you?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*yawns* Homework break.)

*passes Claire her sandwich*
*cuddles against Beth*



Onwa: *hands immediately start heating up, a lot*
*strokes the stem's of the feather, flames starting to flicker between her fingers*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Jai! :) How are you feeling?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(My back aches and I'm tired. Otherwise fine. You?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Surprisingly okay, Jaimie.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Oh, that's good :D)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Is she mad over leaving Loki?-Zaf

Jophiel said...

I don't know Zaf...

I think she's sad. Or feeling horrible...

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Anger is one thing- ceasing to exist is quite another. I faded almost completely from Aretha's mind on only one occasion, and that was when I thought I had lost Noelle and Adra. I simply have nothing left to live for without them.

I cannot speak for Death Rose, but I am confident that something like anger on its own would not bring someone out of existence.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: *she smiles, unwrapping her sandwich, taking a bite*

Bethany: *she cuddles Silente*

Liliana: *she hisses, flinching a little, smiling* Just try hurting me... A lot. Maybe that will change my intentions.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*kisses beth gently then grabs an orange, peeling it slowly*


Onwa: *raises an eyebrow*
*hand just plain bursts into flames*
*presses it into her wing*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Well, Frozen was pretty good.)

(Hello, Zaffy and Alastair!)

(*gently hugs Danni*)

Noelle said...

150.
Milestones

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Noelle...

Just... why?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*gently hugs Noelle, and looks at her*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Please Noelle...stop...please...)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

*hugs her tightly* That is not a positive milestone, Noelle..

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I need to go. Night Everyone...
*Hugs everyone tightly*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs gemma tightly back*)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I dedicate this page to Rose coming back.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she smiles, pulling a pear out of the basket, taking a bite*


Liliana: *she hisses, curling her wings around herself*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles, pulling free a segment, eating it, sighing happily*


Onwa: *kisses her neck lightly*
*hands turn freezingly cold*
*presses them against the burns*

Jophiel said...

I can't find her.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Nice orange?


Liliana: *she sighs happily, closing her eyes, hissing a little*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(She has to be somewhere Danni..?)


*nods*
Tasty.



Onwa: *ice starts creeping along her wings, more like frost than ice*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I intend NOT to come out often, but if I did I believe Zafira would be concerned.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Good. I like the pear, too.

Liliana: *she relaxes against Onwa, watching the frost*



(It seems my name means, "Beautiful/Wise Kite".

Which is just wrong. I am not beautiful, or wise, nor am I a kite.


I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(You are both beautiful and wise. Although you aren't a kite..)

*smiles, eating another segment, laid back*


Onwa: *the frost makes swirls and patterns, decorating her wings*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hear hear!)

Jophiel said...

I thought she'd just come back, but she hasn't...

That shouldn't be happening...

*curls up*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*curls up with Danni*

Hey...)

Jophiel said...

Hey Kas...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I bet she misses me.

Jophiel said...

I would not be surprised in the slightest if that was the case, Loki...

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.

No, Jaimie, I am not.)

Bethany: *she takes a bite out of the pear again* I like pear. A lot more than apple.

Liliana: Beautiful.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I do miss her myself...

Jophiel said...

My gosh... I don't think she'd ever survive if she saw you with someone else... :/

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Shh. Yes you are.)

Mm..I like them both, although apples can get boring..


Onwa: *smiles*
Indeed you are.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

So she did love me.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Pears are easier to eat.

Liliana: I am not so bad, I suppose. I could be worse. However I was speaking about the patterns.

Jophiel said...

Of course she did! She still does! But what happened with Judhipor convinced her that the twins weren't safe around her, and it would just be easier to leave them, and you.

She never wanted to hurt you...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

They are.

Onwa: *raises an eyebrow, tilting her head*
Modest, are we?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Is it true humans encase pears in metal?

Liliana: Would you prefer me to admit to being beautiful?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*frowns*
Um..not that I've heard of?



Onwa: Perhaps.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Do you mean tinned pears?

Bethany: I don't know... Someone told me humans put pears inside metal.

Liliana: Then I, like you, are beautiful.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Okay..
*frowns*
Um..Maybe?



Onwa: *raises an eyebrow*
*shifts her appearance completely, making herself identical to Liliana*
Yes, we are both beautiful.
*smirks*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Onwa: *only the eye's stay the same*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Well she must know that the twins are safer with her.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

*curiosity fills her as she walks past trees towards the middle of a field where she was sure she saw a hotel*

*and yet, the clearing is empty*

Jophiel said...

They are not, in her mind. She has enemies and she does not want expose them to her enemies.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: It's both clever and strange...

Liliana: Hm... I always wondered what it'd be like to kiss myself. *she kisses Onwa passionately*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I have enemies as well.

Jophiel said...

*them

Jophiel said...

I know, Loki, but she's scared. She finds it easiest this way.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Yeah..
*laughs slightly*
Mainly Strange..


Onwa: *kisses her passionately back, thinking a moment before mimicking exactly how Liliana would kiss*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(How are you guys feeling today?)

Jophiel said...

Cold. And terrified... How are you Kas?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Not so bad Kas, you?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(In the middle of mood swings/depression/other negative and positive feelings clashing.

*wraps a blanket around Danni and snuggles near her* terrified?)

Jophiel said...

*snuggles up against Kas* about Rose...

Noelle said...

165
*doesnt want to move*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*takes the sharp thing away from Noelle, setting it aside, hugging her very gently*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Is she really gone, Danni?)

(Noelle, why? Please, tell me why?)

Jophiel said...

She is....

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I... I can't remember her. Only you.)

Jophiel said...

*cuddles*

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*gently hugs Noelle*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*is cuddled*

*acknowledges Dugg*)

Noelle said...

Stop asking.
I do it to feel.
And I can't stop.

Please stop aaking

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

If Rose wants proof that I won't let them be hurt...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Are there no other ways to feel?

I just...

Noelle...

I don't want you hurt.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello? Is anybody here?)

Noelle said...

I've scared them off because they're probably all about 99% done with me by now...

Goodbye,

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

[gives Noelle a hug]

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Nobody's "done" with you. They're probably sleeping. See you later, Noelle.)

(Hey, Moss.)

Jophiel said...

Loki, I don't know...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I just want her safe.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*gently bops Danni's cute nose, before cuddling her and relaxing*)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Wily, my mind beats against you-
You resist-

Yet the soul obeys
Yet the soul obeys

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Hey, Ari!-Zaf

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Hi, Zaf. Not sure if I'm really here now, though, or not.

*leaves hugs for anyone who reads this who would like one, or who needs one*

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

[hugs Ari]

[hugs anyone else who wants a hug]

[is probably not here]

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I'm glad to see you, even if it turns out brief.

-Zaf

Noelle said...

:/
Awefa..
*Hugs her briefly, gently, and snuggles against her lap*
*Goes*

Jophiel said...

I want her safe too, but I don't know where she is. I don't want her hurt.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Australian accents :3

Sorry, stumbled upon SyfyAU by accident.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I cannot help you mentally.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Loki but I can!

*ruffles Danni's hair wildly :3)

(Hello, Aretha!)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Australian is different.

Jophiel said...

*looks oddly at Kas*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Loki and Zaffy: Why did the Nords, of all people, believe in the existence of Asgardians?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Danni and bops her cute nose and waits for her to say something in her Australian accent*)

Jophiel said...

My nose isn't cute!!

I spoke.

Ah, the serenity...

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(It is! :3

*hugs warmly*

I've been reading (and trying to remember!) about my relatives.

Long story short, I may have had relatives in Sweden.

Nobody say vikings! :P)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Well, simple. Why did anyone believe in gods? They did so for explanations of things they didn't understand. For example: They believed that Loki caused earthquakes due to the poison his wife must keep away from him with a bowl, but when the bowl overflows the writhing and screaming he does creates earthquakes.

You just have to look to any ancient civilization, the same thing happens, explanations for what they didn't know.

-Zaf

Noelle said...

A few scratches were accidentally ripped open when I was at dance...
Do those count as re-marks?
Depends...
I don't think I'll count it...
:/ there's a lot of blood on the toilet paper that I taped to my leg though..

Jophiel said...

I had ancestors who were Vikings :D

Kas. No. Bad Kas. My nose is not cute.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Noelle... *hugs gently*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I thought they were Irish?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(It is cute! :3

*bops the cute nose*)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I may sound nasty, but oh well.

Why don't you focus on something more important then cutting yourself up like you're a vegetable? Like...school or dance? Something not involving cutting? Just a thought, you're going to end up doing something pretty bad one day and it'll be worse off then now. Don't put yourself through that, if you can find something to keep your mind off of the pain you seek?

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

I'll go back to crying now.

*curls up by nobody*)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I have anscestors from Dublin and Cork, I don't know about my Italian side...

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Zaf hmm.)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

"I may sound nasty, but oh well." is not an appropriate attitude to adopt when addressing a person who you know has been deeply hurt. If you intend to speak to Noelle, I ask that you do so with some respect for her feelings. Otherwise you only worsen the issues she is struggling with.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Alastair mmm-hm.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I sort of scarred myself over a four day period with mythology about Loki. Never doing that again. I had orginally done it for drama camp so I knew about him from Marvel and mythology...yeah well I never wished to scar myself as bad as I did that day. It helped me though, I seem to have been named Loki by the cast, because I really took it to heart.

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Zaf hmm.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I sometimes wonder if she just is doing it for attention, just my thoughts, not saying she is.

Kas- Was not a very sane four days....I think I was traumatized by the one with Sleipnir.

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Zaf hmm?)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Loki carried his child/horse child and gave birth to him.

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Zaf hmm...)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Kas- Aren't you sleepy?

-Zaf

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Saying that is also not helping, Zafira. Again, I only ask that if you have something to say that is unkind or that discredits her, you refrain from saying it.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

*hugs Noelle*
*doesn't know what else to do...*

Noelle said...

I'm sorry, Zafira. Would you like me to send you a picture? Would that fucking make you feel good? Because I know it wouldn't make me.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

That would infringe upon freedom of speech, Alastair. I'm not censoring how I feel simply because it might hurt her. Actually, I'm not causing her harm, the 'self' in self-harm is a pretty dead give away, that she inflicts the pain upon herself.

-Zaf

Noelle said...

Because honestly, I will if you at all doubt me. Believe me, I have no intention of doing so, but if it gets you to shut up, by God i will

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

"Just my thoughts."

I have a lot of thoughts. I often keep them to myself to avoid an incident.

I would beg of you to do the same.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Zaf....
Just think about what you're saying for a minute...?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Again- We go back to you know that I'm not the only one the thought came across to. I didn't say that you were, and if we noticed the only time fighting happens with me is when you're on. I wonder why....Oh! July.

-Zaf

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Hard to send pictures to a number that changed and a blocked email :)

-Zaf

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Okay now I'm going to tell you to shut up.

Freedom of speech is not some flim flam shield to hide behind whenever you say anything offensive. It has specific uses, but directly insulting specific people is not one of them.

(*hugs Jubub* Nice moustache...)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Seriously Zaf. Stop. NOW.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Again- Every time I speak I'm told to shut up. If you can't handle people who can handle only so much and think differently, you need help. Oh that's right, we just get those people yelled at via Twitter!

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello, Jubi and Elleni.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

WE'RE TELLING YOU TO SHUT UP BECAUSE YOU'RE BEING GROSSLY OFFENSIVE.

Go and never come back as you always threaten to do. Punch a wall, like you always claim to do.

These things are always harder and more painful than you claim, so yes, I know you're lying.

(This is why I say don't bottle things up, kids! :D)

Jophiel said...

*mumbles something and goes to search for Rose*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Go cry that I'm a mean and uncaring person, like you always do when I speak. Go cry to all your friends and think hurting people is the way to go. Yeah. I'm still hurt by July. I very well am, because I was called out for no just reason, twice. That. Hurts. Did I ever get to say my own side? No. I never was, I was told off and never given a chance to plead my own case, but what do you expecf when people cry out false acusations and lies?

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

This is why we can't have nice things.

You know where to find me.

Bye.

- Kasumi

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*sits in a pool of water, which steams*

How are you, Elleni, Tia, anyone else (Jubi,)?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Excuse me, I have better things to do with life then argue with one sided brats. I'll be back tomorrow when most of you don't log on.

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*gently hugs Noelle before leaving*

I'm sorry.)

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

....

I'm OK, I guess...

How bout you?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Another concoction of something I never said, on my own accord.

-Zaf

Alastair Cruciatus said...

You know, Zafira, if I wanted to I could be brutally cruel to every one of you here. The only reason why I am not is because I have seen what it did to Noelle, and I want people to treat her with respect. So I treat you lot with some degree of respect. If you think everyone should always say exactly what is on their mind, with no regard to others' feelings, there is plenty I can say about you that I assure you you would not like.

We only tell you to keep your thoughts to yourself when they're hurting people we care about. And it only becomes an argument when you fight against that.

Until moments ago when you escalated the issue, we we never said anything scathing to you, because Noelle does not believe in solving problems with cruelty. But she is a better person than I am.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Zaf, we've been over this, your side is that you distanced yourself from us and claimed everything we did subsequently when you started being abhorrent 'your side'. And yes, I remember it all quite well. We reached out to you multiple times.

Find me a series of comments and a post and page number for them where we attacked you unprovoked.

You're hurt because ultimately, we didn't side with the illogical bully (who by the way, attacked all of us a lot too, not just Adra), but the person who for a long long time, advocated not using our basic logical skills to fight you, and in stead let you be.

Often, I didn't listen. It was too hard, sue me. But Adra? What did she do to you? Really?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Further back Elleni. 2013. That's the year this started. After that, Zaf adopted this position of fou peacemaking, long after we'd all made peace, several times.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Good, good. It's bee a while, I'm sorry the circumstances couldn't be better. *hands a flak helmet* you might want this. :P How've things been?)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Sorry, I forget. I'm getting old. I see April 2013 on a profile and I think "golly, better pay respect, they've been around the block" and it says April 2013 on mine :P. Sorry, again.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Well I can't stand a lot in life. I don't like censoring myself because one soul.

-Zaf

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

January 2012....

-Zaf

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

But when you hurt Adra, you hurt us all. That's what a community is, Zafira. It's a group of people who care and protect each other.

And lord knows I've cencored myself for you, so show some bloody interest in keeping the peace, would you?

Alastair Cruciatus said...

I don't like censoring myself, either. But even I, a sadistic mass murderer who cares for only two beings in existence, am capable of holding myself back.

Suppose the one soul was yours, Zafira. Would you like it if we let someone be cruel to you?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(A flak helmet is one of those old tin hats worn by soldiers in the British army in world war one. They protect from bits of shrapnel falling and hitting you on the head.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

This comment was removed by the author because it was basically nothing but swear words and the author came to her senses and realized that it wouldn't contribute anything positive.

The author also realized that she said everything calm, polite and reasonable she had to say Sunday.

She resorts to more swearing, then backspaces it.

She glares, viciously and mutters something in a foreign language.

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Then there's also the fact that it really isn't one soul. It's everyone who cares for Noelle, and everyone who comes to this place. This conflict destroys what might have been many people's second home.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I don't read and or like Divergent so I have no clue what Candor is...nor do I really think I want to.

Keeping peace is fun, but perhaps...perhaps some of what I read through Adra's comments hurts me?

Food for thought, remember my brother was commited to the mental ward for attempted suicide and I saw him there...

Just remember that.

-Zaf

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I just need to fucking shut up.

I do.

The Asgardian even told me to shut up.

Not fun being told off by an angry voice that's in your head.

*vanishes*

-Zaf

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Because it reminds me of what had happened. It reminds me that her comments sound like how he was...how honest to god I fear Adra may end up that way if she keeps harming herself and I don't think I could seriously think that she did attempt or suceed in it because the agony her and her family would go through...I wouldn't wish upon my worst enemy.

Ever.

*vsnishes for real because sleep*

-Zaf

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Yes you do Zaf. I'm sorry the voices in your head had to tell you that for you to understand that, rather than people who were once your friends, but keep trying to build bridges.

But there are only so many times you can burn them before we begin to wonder what the point is.

And I'm starting to run out of fucking lumber.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

That's why you don't use lumber on a bridge, you'd burn it faster in a fire.

-Zaf

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Oh, and the rest of us are all hunky dory, eh? We can't be scared too? No. We're supportive, or at the very least try to be, despite not having the first shifting clue what to do.

You just ignore Adra. Ignore or attack her. If you care so much, why did you never speak to her, try to help? You clearly have more experience than most of us in this situation.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I don't know....I guess I feared I'd fail with her...after all...he did try...and almost suceed.

-Zaf

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Whether or not you have been hurt by your life or by others has no bearing on whether you have the right to hurt others, which you do not. If something frustrates you, there are ways to remove yourself from the situation or express your feelings without being abrasive to others.

If you are genuinely worried about Noelle, you shouldn't be needlessly mean to her.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Well I'm not going to waste my steel on a bridge to you, am I? That would be tremendously illogical.
"Hey, you know those guys that betrayed us and destroyed our lovely bridge we had?"

"Yeah?"

"And then repeatedly burned down any replacements we tried to build after the ensuing wars, each starting its own conflict?"

"Yeah?"

"Let's use steel to make a new one!"

"Brilliant!"

No. It's stupid.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Elleni just fucking stop okay? I don't need to relive that week. Bad enough they fucking made me in court.

-Zaf

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

And Adra doesn't need you to tell her that she's just an attention seeker.

Are you starting to get it now?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I'm just going to bed, before I end up really losing my ever loving mind.

I'll try to help with Noelle, no guarentee anythjng I say will make her feel any better but it can't kill me to try.

-Zaf

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Aye, Elleni.

Good night, Zafira. I hope sleep brings you some clarity.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...
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Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Elleni Don't tempt me.)

(Sorry.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Yeah clarity on I'm a bitch.

Got it: Just gonna try to keep her from trying anything...

-Zaf

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Adra, don't try to. Trust me when I say it isn't worth it. If it's Rose I say the same.

Don't, okay? It will not help anyone you know and love, it never will....you can always keep trying for your loved ones.

-Zaf

Sir said...

That is not Adra, Kerias.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(*hugs Tia* Oi. 'Til you see my Bengal, you're not going anywhere.)

Sir said...

Tia, please listen, and look up. Do you see those comments? Those comments of overwhelming positivity, coming to Noelle's defense? About how she deserves to live, deserves to be free of insult, deserves to be treated with respect and loved?

Because all those comments apply to YOU as well. You are well-loved in this community, and you have just as much to live for as she does. You may be feeling sad right now. That is fine, everybody is allowed to be sad...

But do not let that sadness make you think, even for one minute, that you are not loved and cherished and have a bright, beautiful future ahead of you. You are, and you do.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

What Sir said, too.

Except more eloquently.

And with ice cream.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Crap. I apologise for that. I'll be going now, like I promised. Just... I love you, guys.

*runs away like the coward he is*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Sir 1. This isn't about me. Focus on the others.

2. No, I don't.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Tia, I'll leave you with a Trip quote "Coward is simply the name for people too smart to lose.")

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(You are, and you do. Except more eloquently. And with ice cream.)

Sir said...

Tia, everything that I just said, and left unsaid, is entirely true.

This IS about you. This is also about Noelle. This is about the disturbing rise of hatred and vitriol and self-loathing in this place. Blogland, as Trip pointed out, is a COMMUNITY. Your problems are our problems, and we respect and cherish each and every last member.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Did someone say ice cream?



*hugs Kas tightly*
What Sir said.
*nodsnods*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Well, except for Shevbo the Goat Lord over there.

*points at Shevbo, who bleats*

He's pretty great.

But we are all equal under Shevbo.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Because the only reason I came, and still come to Blogland, is to help others. Can't do that if you're focusing on me.)

(Wrong, Trip.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Again, what Sir said, but more eloquently and with ice cream.

Yes Dug, ice cream. :)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I'm never wrong, Tia. It's the rules. *nods*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Bye.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Then the rules are wrong.)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

It has officially been decided I'm having ice cream for dessert.


Anyways.


*just cuddles Tia, unsure what to say*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Ever since I came here, I've always wanted to just help.

On occasion, I've made things worse, sometimes, I don't make an impact. Sometimes my help only lasts a short while and sometimes, just on the very odd occasion, I'll say the right things, others say things I can springboard off and what I do works.

I sort of lost my train of thought, but I love you guys.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I didn't make the rules. *shrugs* Shevbo did. I just enforce them.)

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