I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...
It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;
Does the story make sense?
Does the story work?
Are the characters consistent?
Is it as tense as it needs to be?
Does it have enough pace?
Is the book any GOOD?
These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.
As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.
But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.
Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.
I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.
But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.
And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.
The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.
There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.
I think.
The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.
Good thing I love it.
Tuesday, January 27, 2015
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Onwa: *kisses her briefly back*
Only in certain cases. Although there is most certainly things I'd prefer.
*presses slightly against her, holding Liliana's hips*
(Hi/Bye danni!)
(*Hugs Rose tightly*
*Leaves as well*)
(Hi/Bye J..)
(Hi Adam.)
Bethany: Do either you have a cling film?
Claire: It's some cling film...
Bethany: Some cling film, then?
Liliana: *she gently walks her fingers up Onwa's neck* And what might those be, hm?
I will destroy this realm.
(Back)
(Hey Rose)
*smiles and opens a portal, reaching in, pulling a roll of cling film out*
Voila.
Onwa: *purrs slightly*
Time with you, aloooone.
*moves closer, nibbling the shell of her ear**
(Mhmm. Sure you will Loki.)
(Welcome back Jacko.
I'm okay Adam, you?
*cuddles gemma*
How's you?)
(Hello again Jai
Hello deathwing)
(Are you ok Adam?)
(That's not good..)
....96
:/
There will be armies against you Loki. I will die protecting my realm if need be.
(Noelle...please don't...)
(Hello Noelle)
Bethany: Can you... stick it?
Liliana: Hmm... So that's what you want. *she moves her hands to her cheeks, pulling her into a passionate kiss*
(Bye)
*laughs slightly*
*wraps the sandwich in the cling film*
Onwa: *kisses her passionately back, eyes closed, holding her very very tightly*
(I'm good Jai.
God I love tearing meat off the bone :P
*Snuggles into her*
I'm happy.)
(bye Danni..
*sighs gently*
*smiles, cuddling Gem close*
What you eating? Chicken? Ribs? Mmmm, love ribs...tasty.)
Bethany: How does it... *she frowns* I don't understand...
Liliana: *she grins, draping her arms over her shoulders, walking slowly backwards, pulling her along with her, continuing the kiss*
Hmm? What's confusing you Beth?
Onwa: *follows*
*growls slightly impatiently and picks her up, still kissing passionately, walking quicker*
(Chicken Drumstick.
Hello Noelle, what are the numbers for?
Bye Jack!)
(Ah. Drumstick. Prefer ribs..
Darn, kinda craving ribs now..
@Gem I think the numbers are cuts..)
Bethany: How does it stick?
Liliana: *she smiles, settling into her arms* Onwards, royal transportation. The bedroom is the fifth door on the right.
(Holy fuck that's a lot if it is...
Shit Noelle don't do that, you might bleed to death. I know death is maybe what you want but not that way...)
It sorta...Um...I'm not entirely sure in all honesty. Something to do with air?
Onwa: *smirks*
Down grading me already?
*gently kicks the fifth door on the right open, stepping in, kicking the door closed, draping Liliana across the bed, watching her hungrily*
(*nods mutely*
I know it is..I'm just hoping its not..all at once..)
*sighs* Armies cannot defeat the Bifrost.
(And you cannot defeat earth.)
Bethany: Okay... What fruit would you like?
Liliana: What, are you going to rebel against me? *she grins*
(Time skip, Jaimie?)
*shrugs*
I don't mind...
(Yes, time skip)
Onwa: *holds Liliana close, eyes closed, smirking slightly in her sleep*
Yet armies can defeat you. I will be along the front lines. I will fight against your rule.
This planet is not yours.
And it never will be, Loki.
Bethany: Well it's your decision. *she smiles* I like all fruit.
Liliana: *she kisses Onwa's nose gently, smiling at her*
Hmm..oranges?
Onwa: *opens her eyes a little, just barely, watching Liliana, smirk staying on her face*
Bethany: *she nods, oranges forming in her hands* *she places them on the table* Anything else?
Liliana: That was definitely how a queen should be treated. Although I did not expect you to be so... rough.
*she grins, kissing her cheek* Perhaps we should start our royal duties?
I don't mind..
*shrugs*
Onwa: *raises an eyebrow*
You expected me to be gentle when I know you can take it rough?
*pulls her closer by the waist*
Perhaps..
It will be, because of what you did to me.
Bethany: Well we can go near the mango tree and get fruit from that... Maybe pear?
Liliana: That is a good point. *she gently strokes her cheek* We are queens, now. We will have to do administration, justice and the like. *she sits up in bed, moving the duvet to keep herself at least a little hidden*
*nods, smiling*
Sounds good.
Onwa: Mmm..
*doesn't bother keeping the covers to hide herself, just lays back, arms moving behind her head*
Sounds rather dull..
(That logic, Loki, makes no sense. Simply because Rose broke up with you does not mean you have the right to invade Earth. Which, given your history in, "invading Earth", it will amount to absolutely nothing anyway, as you are militarily incompetent and, as they say, all bark and no bite.)
Bethany: *she forms pears in her hands, placing them on the table also* Do you think that will be alright?
Liliana: It is incredibly fun. It will be exactly the way that we want it.
*nods*
Should be. Where did we put the basket from last time..?
Onwa: Mmm..*smiles* Okay.
*sits up, covers falling further off her*
If you love her, Loki, you will respect her feelings. Manipulating her and seeking revenge like this indicates that you never truly cared for her at all.
Bethany: Try the living room?
Liliana: *she climbs out of bed, getting dressed*
*walks to the living room*
*walks back, swinging the basket*
Onwa: *watches her, smirking a little*
Want me to fix the bruises? And the burns.
Thank you, Alastair. :)
In the Stormlight Archive, chicken is really exotic because you can only get chicken in Shinovar, whereas there are no highstorms.
Trying to view chicken as exotic is really difficult. :P
*where
Not really here.
Bethany: I like to know where things are.
Liliana: And the cuts? *she shakes her head* They are fine. A constant reminder of you.
*smiles*
So do I. I like knowing where stuff is for when I need it..
Onwa: *smiles*
Okay. The people may question a bruised and cut and burnt queen though.
I do love her.
(Hello.)
(Hey Kas.)
Bethany: That's why I like hugging you whilst we're asleep... So I know where you are.
Liliana: Let them question. I will hardly be ashamed.
(Jaimie! *runs up to her and cuddles her happily*)
*smiles lovingly*
Mmm..I love you hugging me while we sleep..makes me feel safe.
Onwa: *smirks*
Good.
*slides out of bed, an elegant royal blue dress flowing over her like water, showing off her shoulders, arms, quite a bit of her bust and a little leg*
(*laughs and cuddles back*)
Bethany: It makes me feel safe, too. *she places the fruit into the basket*
Liliana: Beautiful.
Loki, you claim to love me, but you threaten the only place I have left.
I will stand against you for as long as it takes. I won't give in.
You cannot take away this place from me.
Then you should protect the world she cares for, not destroy it to spite her. If you love her, you will want to see her happy, even if that means that she has to leave you.
*smiles, watching her*
Onwa: Thank you.
*picks up their crowns, holding Liliana's out to her*
The only way to protect Midgard would be to rule it, but apparently that is something that you people do not want. I do not want to go back to Asgard.
You just said you would destroy it, Loki. What I meant is that you ought to keep yourself from destroying it.
(I will be back soon.)
(Okay Soph.)
*laughs* Oh....what would make me want to not destroy Midgard? The fact that Rose begged me? She can beg all she wants, I do not forgive such treachery easily.
Zanida: Give up, Loki. Do you want him to steal your true name? You threaten his Adra by destroying Midgard.
Are you actually hearing a word that any of us say to you? If you love Death Rose, you will not destroy her realm. There is no escaping that point, no matter how you contradict yourself.
If I cannot have her realm, I'll make sure she never sees her children again-
Zanida: *bitch slaps Loki* Sorry, Alastair, but he was pissing me off.
As I was saying, I will make sure she does not see the twins.
(I doubt he's listening Alastair. One of the reasons he is not a good leader, nor a good partner, is that he doesn't listen.)
Sibyllin: [rolls eyes] Wow.
(*growls*
Okay Loki you insufferable bastard, you really want to face the wrath of a mother? For Christs sake FRIGGA IS YOUR MOTHER!!! You're meant to have a little respect you spineless coward! You're like a child, throwing a paddy. GROW UP! Don't use this as an excuse to be a dick, LEARN FROM IT. Or are you incapable of such a simple task as learning.)
No, Frigga is not my mother, Silente, nor Odin my father. You are a child compared to me, I have known more pain then a pathetic little vampire or whatever you are, will ever know. Do not treat me as if I am not intelligent.
(*laughs*
Oh boofrickinhoo. Grow a pair Loki. Just cause you've been hurt doesn't give you the right to hurt others. And you may be older but by far do you act younger. I've known toddlers better behaved than you. I need not treat you as though you aren't intelligent, you prove your lack of brains without my help.)
As I said, if you treat her with bitterness, you do not love her.
*Trip steps from behind a tree, his gaze squarely on Loki*
But you aren't. Time and again you've demonstrated an inability to learn, terrible tactical decisionmaking skills, inability to predict the actions of others, basic fprethough and no real logical powers at all to be honest. Be all accounts, you really aren't intelligent at all.
(*and breathe*)
(*nods at trip*)
*forethought and no real logical powers at all
(Hello Silente. How are ye?)
*Storms up to Loki and slams her fist against his jaw*
DON'T YOU DARE! YOU WILL NOT RULE MY PLANET, YOU BASTARD!!
(Hello everyone.
*breathes with Jaimie*)
(@Trip oh, you know, about to explode. So fine. You?
*pokes Kas*
*grins and applauds Deathy*)
(*is poked*
*won't respond*
*not today*
*hugs Jaimie and looks around*)
(*hugs Kas back*
*tilts head*
*mouthed 'what's wrong?'*)
*flinches at Rose's words, not trying to even defend himself* That's right....I am a bastard. I know I am. I always will be. *vanishes*
(Hey Tia. How's stuff?)
(I'm as good as always, thank you. Would you like to explode? Preventing yourself from doing so will only lead to a larger one somewhere down the line- take it from an expert.)
(*rolls eyes*)
Bethany: Why are you looking at me?
Claire: She loves you, remember?
Liliana: *she takes her crown, placing it on her head* Let us go to see our first city, Queen Onwa.
Well, I'm glad he's learned so ething.
Although his knowledge retention skills have an atrocious track record also, so don't hold your breath.
(*waves a hand vaguely at Trip*
I'll be fine. I have school tomorrow, I'll rant there.)
(Where is this kingdom?)
Loki, I know you can still hear me. You will not take my planet. Not while I remain breathing.
*blushes, looking away, mumbling 'sorry'*
Onwa: *places her own crown neatly on her head*
*smiles*
Indeed, Queen Liliana.
(@Trip don't worry. Onwa and Liliana made their own realm and within it their own kingdom.)
I can still hear, yes, but I do not want to fight with you. You can have Midgard....it doesn't matter, I'll just return to Asgard as a lonely man....always second best to everyone.
(Loki is hardly worth getting upset and angry over, may I just point that out. He is completely incapable of any kind of logical thinking and, as I said, militarily incapable. The ant population poses a greater threat than he ever will. And at least they can lift fifty times their own body weight.)
*learned something
Bloody autocorrect.
(It might be better for your situation in terms of not hurting people who you have to spend at least another six months with to just drop me an email. But if you prefer ranting there, just remember to do it.)
(Oh no that wasn't it at all. I rather liked the idea of a thriving kingdom in Blogland. It seemed quite in keeping with its feel.)
Bethany: It's fine, honestly. *she smiles* I just felt like I could spontaneously fall over at any moment.
Liliana: *she calmly walks out of the bedroom, towards the doors of the castle*
(Nah. Ranting works for me.
ANTS ARE TERRIFYING!!! ARMY ANTS ARE RELENTLESS!!! DO NOT PISS OFF ANTS!!!)
*laughs gently*
Mmm. I'd catch you first.
Onwa: *follows about a step behind, smirking a tad*
(I think merely a single ant was the intended statement.)
If you don't want to return a lonely man, return to Astrid. I don't want to fight with you either, but you threaten the only place I feel welcome... Like I belong...
Aye, Elleni. A most frustrating character.
Bethany: Yes, because you're fast. And strong. And you make me feel safe. *she finishes packing the basket*
Liliana: *she waits for Onwa for a moment before entwining their arms, her eyes filled with tears* I have looked forward to this moment for above a thousand years...
(Hello, Elleni.)
107..
*smiles*
Good..
*creeps up behind her, buzzing her sides, grinning*
Onwa: *smiles, gently tilting her face up, lightly kissing her before wiping gently at the tears*
It's your time, Liliana. Your turn at happiness.
(Adra..please...)
You have always belonged, Rose. Always.
*hugs Adra, not letting go*
Let's talk, about what I do not care.
(I did something stupid, Jai. Well, not anything bad, just plain silly.
@Danni and @Everyone you're all welcome here. *smiles*)
(Adrasdos, may I suggest looking for an alternative to cutting yourself? I believe elastic bands are commonly used as they cause pain without breaking the skin. That would be better as it would not cause your body damage but still give the sensation that you want.)
(@Kas want to talk about it..?)
I don't belong with you, the twins, on Asgard or anything anymore. Only here. This is the only place where I feel okay.
And that is shit, Loki.
I wake up every morning and it hurts. A lot. And I can't do anything about it.
(@Jai hahahahaha good one! :)
Bethany: *wriggles a little* Hey that tickles!
Liliana: *she kisses her back* I am hardly deserving of it, but the opportunity is too good not to take. Thank you, Onwa. You have rather literally made my dreams come true.
You are their mother, Rose. How do you think it felt telling them you weren't coming home? They want to see you, I want you...I don't want Astrid.
*grins, continuing to do it, laughing*
I know!
Onwa: Of course you deserve it. This and more.
*smiles*
And you made your own dreams come true, I just supplied energy.
I want them too, but they're safer with you. They belong on Asgard, not with me. Loki, I can't. Astrid is healthier for you, not me.
If Astrid was healthier for me, I never would have wanted to leave her for you.
Bethany: *she giggles, wriggling more*
Liliana: *she bursts into tears again, hugging her close* *shakes her head* You're the one who gave me the opportunity...
*smiles more at the giggling*
*pulls her close, hugging her from behind*
I love you Beth..
Onwa: *hugs her back, gently, for once not flirting*
*smiles, gently stroking her hair*
And you're the one who seized it. Come, lets greet our kingdom.
You don't understand...
*sighs*
I'm not good for you. She is.
You fail to explain how you are not good for me.
She's from Asgard. She knows how to survive, fight, be a proper mother.
I, on the other hand, can't fight if I can't see. And I die... A lot... And I can't keep putting you through that.
Is this all about because you fight? Really, Rose?
((I consider it pretty bad, when the school calls to two hour delay us, and says "We will re-evaluate the situation in the morning."
-Zaf
No. It's because of everything. The spark is gone and I don't want to keep putting you through this... I can't... I don't want you to hurt...
113.
Goodnight
Rose, I hurt everyday I know you are not beside me.
Loki... You're better off without me...
*appears in front of her now* No, I cannot accept that, I know you are lying. You only think that way.
(Good night, Noelle. Please stop hurting yourself.)
(Hello? Anyone here? :S)
(I'll just be here. Doing my thing.)
*Looks away and rubs her arms*
Loki, that's how it is.
Liar, Rose.
(*looks at Zaffy and Danni*
...
:(
)
I'm not lying... You may think it, but I am not.
(Class...)
(Awwkay.)
Rose....no....I....*for once looks like he may cry*
((Sorry you have to suffer that torture Rose.-Zaf
(Evanescence <3)
So we're watching a game show called Jeopardy. Cataegory of myths
"This Norse trickster god-"
Me:LOKI!!!
Person on show: Who is Loki?
-Zaf
(@Zaffy XD)
My Mom didn't know what to think when all of a sudden from downstairs she hears me scream LOKI!!
-Zaf
(Typical Loki XD)
(Hugs and cuddles are good.)
Sometimes I don't know where we're going,
Sometimes I feel you should be crawling back to me,
Time is ticking by without us knowing
Before you know it, it will be too late to see
You keep on talking but it makes no sense at all
You try to fake it but you’re breaking every rule
Right from the start you've always made me feel a fool
The guilt you hide will come between us after all
I do cause Zafira anger often, but she deserves it.
(Okay. You have fun with your life while I crawl into a hole and die.)
(And by hole I mean bed, and die I mean sleep.)
*glanced up, then quickly drops her gaze*
It's better this way...
Perhaps that day when I was found....should never have happened.
Oh... No, Loki. You were supposed to be found. You are needed. You have a place... It's just not with me.
Tell me, Rose, if I have a place, where is it? Not here, not Asgard....certainly not Jotunheim-
Zanida: Loki, you're blind and deaf. Astrid loves you.
By Astrid's side. I know that Astrid loves you, Zanida knows it. Even though it will pain me to see you with someone, and I know it shouldn't...
You should be with her.
117.
118.
*Cries*
Rose....I cannot be with Astrid.
You can. And you know you can.
(Class...)
((I'm going to go to bed in a bit, despite the delay I do need SOME sleep.-Zaf
*vanishes, too distraught to speak. He goes back towards the Bifrost sight, and is sent back to Asgard. Astrid stands and waits for him, running to him and tackles him*
Astrid: Loki...now you come back?
Yes.
Astrid: Is Rose...?
No.
*hugs Noelle tightly*
Zanida: Hello, Alastair, if you are here.
*watches Loki go and turns, walking back to the ruins of her base*
Zanida: Rose! *follows her* Am I still your friend?
120
.
*slowly looks at Zanida, her eyes red*
I consider you my sister, Zan... Of course.
141
I can't stop
(Adra...?)
Oh Noelle.....
*hugs tightly*
http://audratraum.blogspot.com/
Bethany: *she turns, hugging her back, kissing her gently* I love you too, Silente.
Liliana: *she wipes away her tears and nods* For once in my life, I feel complete. I have someone to love, and a realm. I can never thank you enough.
(*meekly hugs Noelle*
I'm sorry...I'm so sorry..)
*kisses her gently back, smiling*
*squeezes her gently*
Onwa: *smiles*
You don't need to thank the people you love.
(Hello, Jaimie. *cuddles her tightly*)
Bethany: *she smiles, resting against her* You really are perfect.
Liliana: Of course I do. *she starts to head towards the exit of the castle*
(*cuddles Soph tightly back*)
*lightly kisses her neck, grazing it gently with her teeth*
And so are you.
Onwa: *follows beside her, easily keeping up*
Bethany: *she smiles, sighing happily* No, I'm not...
Liliana: I am sorry for being like this.
Shh. Yes you are.
*smiles against her neck*
Onwa: it's nice to see you emotionally invested in something.
*smiles, taking her hand lightly*
Bethany: I'm clumsy, and shy, and...
Liliana: *she squeezes her hand* I was, the moment I met you.
Hello.
And brilliant. And perfect.
Onwa: *squeezes her hand back, smirking*
I was that good was I? My I'm flattered.
*grins*
(Hello, Sapphire.)
Bethany: I'm not...
Liliana: *she tilts her head a little* I cannot help but feel a little pushed away.
(Hey Saph.)
You ARE *shakes head, kissing her again* I promise
Onwa: *kisses her lightly, just a brush of lips*
Don't feel pushed away Liliana, I want only you..
*for once, looks slightly vulnerable*
(Hi Silente. Hi Soph.)
(How are you?)
Well, it doesn't look like there's anything for me to be involved in and I'm not much of a roleplayer. Goodbye my friends... *poofs*
(Oh...bye...)
Bethany: *kisses her back* I don't think so...
Liliana: *she kisses her back, wrapping her arms around Onwa's neck* I love you, my dear.
Mm.. this is one of those times when you're wrong.
*grins*
Onwa: *holds her close, resting her forehead against Liliana's*
I love you too, Liliana..
*sounds slightly surprised*
*sighs*
A flower that is picked cannot live for long. Should it be replanted however, it has a possibility for regrowth. Nothing is impossible in Wonderland.
*doesn't really know what she's saying either*
How is one to know anything if they only speak in riddles?
...
*hugs Noelle and everyone else*
*poofs*
Bethany: I'm not wrong...
Claire: I don't believe in perfection.
Bethany: I do, but I'm just not it...
Liliana: You sound surprised that you love me.
(Hello/Goodbye, Lavender.)
(Hi/Bye Lavender!)
Shh. You're perfect too and for me.
Onwa: For many years I've been a voice in a head, forced to endure someone else's life...Love is rather new to me.
Bethany: *she sighs, cuddling her, before finishing filling the basket* Thank you...
Liliana: You are telling me. *she reaches the door, opening it, walking across the bridge* I have been tempted to purchase something humans call an automobile.
You're welcome.
Onwa: Hmm. A car would be interesting, an easier.
Bethany: But you are the perfect one.
Liliana: I can transport myself effortlessly, but I thought an automobile would make more of an entrance.
*rolls eyes*
Onwa: Yes, you have a point. What type though?
Bethany: It's true. *she closes the basket* Done.
Liliana: Something sleek, black and fast.
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