Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

It's more sanitary..



Onwa: *kisses her briefly back*
Only in certain cases. Although there is most certainly things I'd prefer.
*presses slightly against her, holding Liliana's hips*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi/Bye danni!)

John said...

(*Hugs Rose tightly*

*Leaves as well*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi/Bye J..)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi Adam.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Do either you have a cling film?

Claire: It's some cling film...

Bethany: Some cling film, then?


Liliana: *she gently walks her fingers up Onwa's neck* And what might those be, hm?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I will destroy this realm.

Edward Fletcher said...

(Back)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Rose)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles and opens a portal, reaching in, pulling a roll of cling film out*
Voila.


Onwa: *purrs slightly*
Time with you, aloooone.
*moves closer, nibbling the shell of her ear**


(Mhmm. Sure you will Loki.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Welcome back Jacko.

I'm okay Adam, you?

*cuddles gemma*
How's you?)

Edward Fletcher said...

(Hello again Jai

Hello deathwing)

Edward Fletcher said...

(Are you ok Adam?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(That's not good..)

Noelle said...

....96
:/

Jophiel said...

There will be armies against you Loki. I will die protecting my realm if need be.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Noelle...please don't...)

Edward Fletcher said...

(Hello Noelle)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Can you... stick it?


Liliana: Hmm... So that's what you want. *she moves her hands to her cheeks, pulling her into a passionate kiss*

Edward Fletcher said...

(Bye)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*laughs slightly*
*wraps the sandwich in the cling film*


Onwa: *kisses her passionately back, eyes closed, holding her very very tightly*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I'm good Jai.
God I love tearing meat off the bone :P
*Snuggles into her*
I'm happy.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(bye Danni..
*sighs gently*
*smiles, cuddling Gem close*
What you eating? Chicken? Ribs? Mmmm, love ribs...tasty.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: How does it... *she frowns* I don't understand...


Liliana: *she grins, draping her arms over her shoulders, walking slowly backwards, pulling her along with her, continuing the kiss*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Hmm? What's confusing you Beth?


Onwa: *follows*
*growls slightly impatiently and picks her up, still kissing passionately, walking quicker*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Chicken Drumstick.

Hello Noelle, what are the numbers for?

Bye Jack!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Ah. Drumstick. Prefer ribs..
Darn, kinda craving ribs now..

@Gem I think the numbers are cuts..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: How does it stick?


Liliana: *she smiles, settling into her arms* Onwards, royal transportation. The bedroom is the fifth door on the right.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Holy fuck that's a lot if it is...
Shit Noelle don't do that, you might bleed to death. I know death is maybe what you want but not that way...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

It sorta...Um...I'm not entirely sure in all honesty. Something to do with air?




Onwa: *smirks*
Down grading me already?
*gently kicks the fifth door on the right open, stepping in, kicking the door closed, draping Liliana across the bed, watching her hungrily*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods mutely*
I know it is..I'm just hoping its not..all at once..)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*sighs* Armies cannot defeat the Bifrost.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(And you cannot defeat earth.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Okay... What fruit would you like?

Liliana: What, are you going to rebel against me? *she grins*

(Time skip, Jaimie?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shrugs*
I don't mind...


(Yes, time skip)

Onwa: *holds Liliana close, eyes closed, smirking slightly in her sleep*

Jophiel said...

Yet armies can defeat you. I will be along the front lines. I will fight against your rule.

This planet is not yours.

And it never will be, Loki.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Well it's your decision. *she smiles* I like all fruit.


Liliana: *she kisses Onwa's nose gently, smiling at her*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Hmm..oranges?




Onwa: *opens her eyes a little, just barely, watching Liliana, smirk staying on her face*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she nods, oranges forming in her hands* *she places them on the table* Anything else?

Liliana: That was definitely how a queen should be treated. Although I did not expect you to be so... rough.
*she grins, kissing her cheek* Perhaps we should start our royal duties?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I don't mind..
*shrugs*



Onwa: *raises an eyebrow*
You expected me to be gentle when I know you can take it rough?
*pulls her closer by the waist*
Perhaps..

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

It will be, because of what you did to me.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Well we can go near the mango tree and get fruit from that... Maybe pear?

Liliana: That is a good point. *she gently strokes her cheek* We are queens, now. We will have to do administration, justice and the like. *she sits up in bed, moving the duvet to keep herself at least a little hidden*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods, smiling*
Sounds good.



Onwa: Mmm..
*doesn't bother keeping the covers to hide herself, just lays back, arms moving behind her head*
Sounds rather dull..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(That logic, Loki, makes no sense. Simply because Rose broke up with you does not mean you have the right to invade Earth. Which, given your history in, "invading Earth", it will amount to absolutely nothing anyway, as you are militarily incompetent and, as they say, all bark and no bite.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she forms pears in her hands, placing them on the table also* Do you think that will be alright?

Liliana: It is incredibly fun. It will be exactly the way that we want it.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
Should be. Where did we put the basket from last time..?


Onwa: Mmm..*smiles* Okay.
*sits up, covers falling further off her*

Alastair Cruciatus said...

If you love her, Loki, you will respect her feelings. Manipulating her and seeking revenge like this indicates that you never truly cared for her at all.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Try the living room?


Liliana: *she climbs out of bed, getting dressed*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*walks to the living room*
*walks back, swinging the basket*


Onwa: *watches her, smirking a little*
Want me to fix the bruises? And the burns.

Star Inkbright said...

Thank you, Alastair. :)

In the Stormlight Archive, chicken is really exotic because you can only get chicken in Shinovar, whereas there are no highstorms.
Trying to view chicken as exotic is really difficult. :P

Star Inkbright said...

*where

Not really here.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I like to know where things are.


Liliana: And the cuts? *she shakes her head* They are fine. A constant reminder of you.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles*
So do I. I like knowing where stuff is for when I need it..



Onwa: *smiles*
Okay. The people may question a bruised and cut and burnt queen though.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I do love her.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Kas.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: That's why I like hugging you whilst we're asleep... So I know where you are.

Liliana: Let them question. I will hardly be ashamed.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Jaimie! *runs up to her and cuddles her happily*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles lovingly*
Mmm..I love you hugging me while we sleep..makes me feel safe.



Onwa: *smirks*
Good.
*slides out of bed, an elegant royal blue dress flowing over her like water, showing off her shoulders, arms, quite a bit of her bust and a little leg*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*laughs and cuddles back*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: It makes me feel safe, too. *she places the fruit into the basket*

Liliana: Beautiful.

Jophiel said...

Loki, you claim to love me, but you threaten the only place I have left.

I will stand against you for as long as it takes. I won't give in.

You cannot take away this place from me.

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Then you should protect the world she cares for, not destroy it to spite her. If you love her, you will want to see her happy, even if that means that she has to leave you.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles, watching her*


Onwa: Thank you.
*picks up their crowns, holding Liliana's out to her*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

The only way to protect Midgard would be to rule it, but apparently that is something that you people do not want. I do not want to go back to Asgard.

Alastair Cruciatus said...

You just said you would destroy it, Loki. What I meant is that you ought to keep yourself from destroying it.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay Soph.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*laughs* Oh....what would make me want to not destroy Midgard? The fact that Rose begged me? She can beg all she wants, I do not forgive such treachery easily.

Zanida: Give up, Loki. Do you want him to steal your true name? You threaten his Adra by destroying Midgard.

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Are you actually hearing a word that any of us say to you? If you love Death Rose, you will not destroy her realm. There is no escaping that point, no matter how you contradict yourself.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

If I cannot have her realm, I'll make sure she never sees her children again-

Zanida: *bitch slaps Loki* Sorry, Alastair, but he was pissing me off.

As I was saying, I will make sure she does not see the twins.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I doubt he's listening Alastair. One of the reasons he is not a good leader, nor a good partner, is that he doesn't listen.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Sibyllin: [rolls eyes] Wow.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*growls*
Okay Loki you insufferable bastard, you really want to face the wrath of a mother? For Christs sake FRIGGA IS YOUR MOTHER!!! You're meant to have a little respect you spineless coward! You're like a child, throwing a paddy. GROW UP! Don't use this as an excuse to be a dick, LEARN FROM IT. Or are you incapable of such a simple task as learning.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

No, Frigga is not my mother, Silente, nor Odin my father. You are a child compared to me, I have known more pain then a pathetic little vampire or whatever you are, will ever know. Do not treat me as if I am not intelligent.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*laughs*
Oh boofrickinhoo. Grow a pair Loki. Just cause you've been hurt doesn't give you the right to hurt others. And you may be older but by far do you act younger. I've known toddlers better behaved than you. I need not treat you as though you aren't intelligent, you prove your lack of brains without my help.)

Alastair Cruciatus said...

As I said, if you treat her with bitterness, you do not love her.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*Trip steps from behind a tree, his gaze squarely on Loki*

But you aren't. Time and again you've demonstrated an inability to learn, terrible tactical decisionmaking skills, inability to predict the actions of others, basic fprethough and no real logical powers at all to be honest. Be all accounts, you really aren't intelligent at all.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*and breathe*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods at trip*)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*forethought and no real logical powers at all

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Hello Silente. How are ye?)

Jophiel said...

*Storms up to Loki and slams her fist against his jaw*

DON'T YOU DARE! YOU WILL NOT RULE MY PLANET, YOU BASTARD!!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello everyone.

*breathes with Jaimie*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Trip oh, you know, about to explode. So fine. You?


*pokes Kas*
*grins and applauds Deathy*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*is poked*

*won't respond*

*not today*

*hugs Jaimie and looks around*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Kas back*
*tilts head*
*mouthed 'what's wrong?'*)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*flinches at Rose's words, not trying to even defend himself* That's right....I am a bastard. I know I am. I always will be. *vanishes*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Hey Tia. How's stuff?)

(I'm as good as always, thank you. Would you like to explode? Preventing yourself from doing so will only lead to a larger one somewhere down the line- take it from an expert.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*rolls eyes*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Why are you looking at me?

Claire: She loves you, remember?

Liliana: *she takes her crown, placing it on her head* Let us go to see our first city, Queen Onwa.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Well, I'm glad he's learned so ething.

Although his knowledge retention skills have an atrocious track record also, so don't hold your breath.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*waves a hand vaguely at Trip*
I'll be fine. I have school tomorrow, I'll rant there.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Where is this kingdom?)

Jophiel said...

Loki, I know you can still hear me. You will not take my planet. Not while I remain breathing.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*blushes, looking away, mumbling 'sorry'*



Onwa: *places her own crown neatly on her head*
*smiles*
Indeed, Queen Liliana.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Trip don't worry. Onwa and Liliana made their own realm and within it their own kingdom.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I can still hear, yes, but I do not want to fight with you. You can have Midgard....it doesn't matter, I'll just return to Asgard as a lonely man....always second best to everyone.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Loki is hardly worth getting upset and angry over, may I just point that out. He is completely incapable of any kind of logical thinking and, as I said, militarily incapable. The ant population poses a greater threat than he ever will. And at least they can lift fifty times their own body weight.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*learned something

Bloody autocorrect.

(It might be better for your situation in terms of not hurting people who you have to spend at least another six months with to just drop me an email. But if you prefer ranting there, just remember to do it.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Oh no that wasn't it at all. I rather liked the idea of a thriving kingdom in Blogland. It seemed quite in keeping with its feel.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: It's fine, honestly. *she smiles* I just felt like I could spontaneously fall over at any moment.

Liliana: *she calmly walks out of the bedroom, towards the doors of the castle*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Nah. Ranting works for me.

ANTS ARE TERRIFYING!!! ARMY ANTS ARE RELENTLESS!!! DO NOT PISS OFF ANTS!!!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*laughs gently*
Mmm. I'd catch you first.



Onwa: *follows about a step behind, smirking a tad*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I think merely a single ant was the intended statement.)

Jophiel said...

If you don't want to return a lonely man, return to Astrid. I don't want to fight with you either, but you threaten the only place I feel welcome... Like I belong...

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Aye, Elleni. A most frustrating character.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Yes, because you're fast. And strong. And you make me feel safe. *she finishes packing the basket*

Liliana: *she waits for Onwa for a moment before entwining their arms, her eyes filled with tears* I have looked forward to this moment for above a thousand years...


(Hello, Elleni.)

Noelle said...

107..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles*
Good..
*creeps up behind her, buzzing her sides, grinning*



Onwa: *smiles, gently tilting her face up, lightly kissing her before wiping gently at the tears*
It's your time, Liliana. Your turn at happiness.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Adra..please...)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

You have always belonged, Rose. Always.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*hugs Adra, not letting go*

Let's talk, about what I do not care.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I did something stupid, Jai. Well, not anything bad, just plain silly.

@Danni and @Everyone you're all welcome here. *smiles*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Adrasdos, may I suggest looking for an alternative to cutting yourself? I believe elastic bands are commonly used as they cause pain without breaking the skin. That would be better as it would not cause your body damage but still give the sensation that you want.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Kas want to talk about it..?)

Jophiel said...

I don't belong with you, the twins, on Asgard or anything anymore. Only here. This is the only place where I feel okay.

And that is shit, Loki.

I wake up every morning and it hurts. A lot. And I can't do anything about it.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Jai hahahahaha good one! :)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *wriggles a little* Hey that tickles!

Liliana: *she kisses her back* I am hardly deserving of it, but the opportunity is too good not to take. Thank you, Onwa. You have rather literally made my dreams come true.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

You are their mother, Rose. How do you think it felt telling them you weren't coming home? They want to see you, I want you...I don't want Astrid.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*grins, continuing to do it, laughing*
I know!



Onwa: Of course you deserve it. This and more.
*smiles*
And you made your own dreams come true, I just supplied energy.

Jophiel said...

I want them too, but they're safer with you. They belong on Asgard, not with me. Loki, I can't. Astrid is healthier for you, not me.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

If Astrid was healthier for me, I never would have wanted to leave her for you.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she giggles, wriggling more*

Liliana: *she bursts into tears again, hugging her close* *shakes her head* You're the one who gave me the opportunity...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles more at the giggling*
*pulls her close, hugging her from behind*
I love you Beth..



Onwa: *hugs her back, gently, for once not flirting*
*smiles, gently stroking her hair*
And you're the one who seized it. Come, lets greet our kingdom.

Jophiel said...

You don't understand...

*sighs*

I'm not good for you. She is.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

You fail to explain how you are not good for me.

Jophiel said...

She's from Asgard. She knows how to survive, fight, be a proper mother.

I, on the other hand, can't fight if I can't see. And I die... A lot... And I can't keep putting you through that.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Is this all about because you fight? Really, Rose?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

((I consider it pretty bad, when the school calls to two hour delay us, and says "We will re-evaluate the situation in the morning."

-Zaf

Jophiel said...

No. It's because of everything. The spark is gone and I don't want to keep putting you through this... I can't... I don't want you to hurt...

Noelle said...

113.
Goodnight

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Rose, I hurt everyday I know you are not beside me.

Jophiel said...

Loki... You're better off without me...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*appears in front of her now* No, I cannot accept that, I know you are lying. You only think that way.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Good night, Noelle. Please stop hurting yourself.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hello? Anyone here? :S)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I'll just be here. Doing my thing.)

Jophiel said...

*Looks away and rubs her arms*

Loki, that's how it is.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Liar, Rose.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*looks at Zaffy and Danni*

...

:(

)

Jophiel said...

I'm not lying... You may think it, but I am not.

(Class...)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Awwkay.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Rose....no....I....*for once looks like he may cry*

((Sorry you have to suffer that torture Rose.-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Evanescence <3)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

So we're watching a game show called Jeopardy. Cataegory of myths

"This Norse trickster god-"

Me:LOKI!!!

Person on show: Who is Loki?

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Zaffy XD)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

My Mom didn't know what to think when all of a sudden from downstairs she hears me scream LOKI!!

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Typical Loki XD)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hugs and cuddles are good.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

Sometimes I don't know where we're going,
Sometimes I feel you should be crawling back to me,
Time is ticking by without us knowing
Before you know it, it will be too late to see

You keep on talking but it makes no sense at all
You try to fake it but you’re breaking every rule
Right from the start you've always made me feel a fool
The guilt you hide will come between us after all

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I do cause Zafira anger often, but she deserves it.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Okay. You have fun with your life while I crawl into a hole and die.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(And by hole I mean bed, and die I mean sleep.)

Jophiel said...

*glanced up, then quickly drops her gaze*

It's better this way...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Perhaps that day when I was found....should never have happened.

Jophiel said...

Oh... No, Loki. You were supposed to be found. You are needed. You have a place... It's just not with me.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Tell me, Rose, if I have a place, where is it? Not here, not Asgard....certainly not Jotunheim-

Zanida: Loki, you're blind and deaf. Astrid loves you.

Jophiel said...

By Astrid's side. I know that Astrid loves you, Zanida knows it. Even though it will pain me to see you with someone, and I know it shouldn't...

You should be with her.

Noelle said...

117.
118.
*Cries*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Rose....I cannot be with Astrid.

Jophiel said...

You can. And you know you can.

Jophiel said...

(Class...)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

((I'm going to go to bed in a bit, despite the delay I do need SOME sleep.-Zaf


*vanishes, too distraught to speak. He goes back towards the Bifrost sight, and is sent back to Asgard. Astrid stands and waits for him, running to him and tackles him*

Astrid: Loki...now you come back?

Yes.

Astrid: Is Rose...?

No.

Alastair Cruciatus said...

*hugs Noelle tightly*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Zanida: Hello, Alastair, if you are here.

Jophiel said...

*watches Loki go and turns, walking back to the ruins of her base*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Zanida: Rose! *follows her* Am I still your friend?

Noelle said...

120
.

Jophiel said...

*slowly looks at Zanida, her eyes red*

I consider you my sister, Zan... Of course.

Noelle said...

141
I can't stop

Jophiel said...

(Adra...?)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Oh Noelle.....
*hugs tightly*

Audra Traum said...

http://audratraum.blogspot.com/

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she turns, hugging her back, kissing her gently* I love you too, Silente.


Liliana: *she wipes away her tears and nods* For once in my life, I feel complete. I have someone to love, and a realm. I can never thank you enough.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*meekly hugs Noelle*
I'm sorry...I'm so sorry..)

*kisses her gently back, smiling*
*squeezes her gently*


Onwa: *smiles*
You don't need to thank the people you love.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Jaimie. *cuddles her tightly*)

Bethany: *she smiles, resting against her* You really are perfect.

Liliana: Of course I do. *she starts to head towards the exit of the castle*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles Soph tightly back*)



*lightly kisses her neck, grazing it gently with her teeth*
And so are you.

Onwa: *follows beside her, easily keeping up*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she smiles, sighing happily* No, I'm not...

Liliana: I am sorry for being like this.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Shh. Yes you are.
*smiles against her neck*


Onwa: it's nice to see you emotionally invested in something.
*smiles, taking her hand lightly*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I'm clumsy, and shy, and...

Liliana: *she squeezes her hand* I was, the moment I met you.

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Hello.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

And brilliant. And perfect.




Onwa: *squeezes her hand back, smirking*
I was that good was I? My I'm flattered.
*grins*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Sapphire.)

Bethany: I'm not...

Liliana: *she tilts her head a little* I cannot help but feel a little pushed away.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Saph.)

You ARE *shakes head, kissing her again* I promise


Onwa: *kisses her lightly, just a brush of lips*
Don't feel pushed away Liliana, I want only you..
*for once, looks slightly vulnerable*

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

(Hi Silente. Hi Soph.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(How are you?)

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Well, it doesn't look like there's anything for me to be involved in and I'm not much of a roleplayer. Goodbye my friends... *poofs*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Oh...bye...)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *kisses her back* I don't think so...


Liliana: *she kisses her back, wrapping her arms around Onwa's neck* I love you, my dear.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Mm.. this is one of those times when you're wrong.
*grins*

Onwa: *holds her close, resting her forehead against Liliana's*
I love you too, Liliana..
*sounds slightly surprised*

Lavender Hope said...

*sighs*
A flower that is picked cannot live for long. Should it be replanted however, it has a possibility for regrowth. Nothing is impossible in Wonderland.

*doesn't really know what she's saying either*
How is one to know anything if they only speak in riddles?
...
*hugs Noelle and everyone else*
*poofs*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I'm not wrong...

Claire: I don't believe in perfection.

Bethany: I do, but I'm just not it...


Liliana: You sound surprised that you love me.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello/Goodbye, Lavender.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hi/Bye Lavender!)


Shh. You're perfect too and for me.



Onwa: For many years I've been a voice in a head, forced to endure someone else's life...Love is rather new to me.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she sighs, cuddling her, before finishing filling the basket* Thank you...

Liliana: You are telling me. *she reaches the door, opening it, walking across the bridge* I have been tempted to purchase something humans call an automobile.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

You're welcome.


Onwa: Hmm. A car would be interesting, an easier.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: But you are the perfect one.


Liliana: I can transport myself effortlessly, but I thought an automobile would make more of an entrance.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*rolls eyes*


Onwa: Yes, you have a point. What type though?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: It's true. *she closes the basket* Done.

Liliana: Something sleek, black and fast.

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