Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: We could have a picnic together?


Liliana: Indeed. *all of a sudden, a large planet forms directly in front of them, which is covered by more than half water* *there are several large masses of land separated by ocean, and ice at the poles* *covering most of the land is forest* Is this suitable?

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Another reason why I like our football team
MY MOM GOT DONUTS WITH THE LOGO ON THEM!!!!!!!!!!#
I'LL BRB!

Savannah said...

(Hey Fabi!)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

12 12 12!!!!
*supermegahuggletacklesofdoomvils Fabigail*
SO GOSH DARN HYPER!!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*sits with the twins, beside the tree in Blogland

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(DON'T WASTE PASTA DUGGLYN!
*helps Iris eat the lasagne*
Nom nom nom...


I LOVE THE HOOLA HOOP ONE JAI!
I'm really good with my hips ;)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Okay.
*smiles*



Onwa: it will.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*laughs at Gem*
Oh, I'm sure.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, I'm in the cinema, about to watch The Kingsmen (hear hear!) so yeah, that's me.

Also World War 2 was a clusterfuck.

Also phone says "low battery >:D"

Anyways, hello.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: A picnic sounds cool.

Liliana: Good. *they appear in a patch of rainforest beside the ocean* Do you think that this will do for our first city?

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

I WANT DONUTS. D:

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Okay. Picnic it is.



Onwa: It will.
*smiles, holding her hand lightly*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Fabi*

:)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Sorry, not really here, recording stuff.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

[hugs Tia]

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Okay, see you later, Fabi!)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

I WISH I COULD TRAVEL THE WORLD AND GIVE YOU SOME OF MY HAPPINESS!

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

AND DONUTS!

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Yay!

Bethany: Shall I make food?


Liliana: *she holds Onwa's hand, gesturing a little away from the coast, large mountains forming in front of them* Now for the palace... Would you like a turn?

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(ENJOY IT KASSY! I HOPE YOU DO!
:D

Oh god, my family and I were looking through my mum and dad's wedding photos...I was only 5 and I look exactly the same as I did back then.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Dugglyn*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*pulls Aria into the hug*

You're cuter now though! :3)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

And I've got to switch off the phone. Bye, guys!

I will, Aria.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Yes please.


Onwa: *tilts her head, considering*
Hmmm..I think I'd rather you did, I will simply supply you with energy.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*hugs Tia*
*hugs Adam*
*hugs Jai*
*hugs Aria*
*nods at Sophia*
YOU PEOPLE ARE AWESOME!

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

HYPER DUCKS!!

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Bye Kassy!
*hugs*

Awww Dugglyn...*hugs her tightly*

Love you sis. *squeezes Jai as tightly as she can*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*laughs and hugs gem back*
Love you too sis. Also love breathing!)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*hugs Aria tightly*


I'm happy :))))

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Ah you don't have to breath when you have my love!
*Squeezes her more*
^.^)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs Dugglyn tighter*
I'm happy too for once ^.^
Just saying that, Dugglyn, you cheered me up.
You're awesomer xD)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods and pats her back, pretending she doesn't need to breathe*
Yu..p..)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Astrid: *sees Loki, and is concerned for him* Loki?

I'm fine.

Astrid: No, you are not. *sits beside and hugs him*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Lets her go because she's all hugged out*
*Tackles Jai to the ground*
*Starts tickling her*
Muhahahahahaha!)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: What should I make? What do you both want?


Liliana: I see. I... Am finding this rather romantic, I have to admit. *she splays her hand towards the coast, a large golden castle forming, which has no smooth sides - they are all rounded or circular entirely* *the roof finishes in a large spire*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*squeals, rolling* NUH! STOP! PLZ!)

Just some fruit for me?


Onwa: *smiles*
Your realm, your kingdom.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(NEVA!
*Laughs evily and tickles her faster*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*squeals, wiggling, giggling maniacally*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(You have such a girly scream
*laughs*
*digs her fingers into her ribs*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*squeals and runs*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: ... What's wrong?

Liliana: Our realm. Our kingdom.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Grins and runs after her, faster than her but letting her get a little bit ahead*
*Is stalking her prey*
:P)

Inky Flame said...

(hello peoples!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*runs faster, hiding behind a tree*)

Nothing.
*smiles*


Onwa: *smirks*
Of course, ours.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Chloe...)

((*Trying not to breath*
*Is in a lot of fucking pain*))

Inky Flame said...

(hello
how art thou?)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Are you all deaf and blind?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Chloe.
What's wrong Gem? Why pain..)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: You don't normally eat just fruit...

Liliana: Would you like to go inside? This will be our home, after all.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

((Phew...think I got cramp again next to my heart...
Fine now.
Ughhhhhhhhh it's so painful when that happens...))

(*Runs fast past the tree*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey Loki. I'm watching you right now.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I'm actually a bit of both, Zafira. Why do you ask?)

Inky Flame said...

(how art thou Jai?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Anyone else get a pain in their chest, the other side from their heart that they can't breath or it will hurt more?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shrugs*
You're inspiring me.


Onwa: Lead the way, queen.


(*grins, hiding*)

Inky Flame said...

(I get it sometimes Gem)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Doubles back and sneaks up on her*
*jumps on her and shouts 'boo!' really loudly in her ear*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(NOOOO THEY'RE GONNA ATTACK ME WITH CURLERS!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Yup...my whole fecking torso hurts now...)

Inky Flame said...

(im going now
sayonara)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(You would look nice with your hair curled, Jai
*smiles*)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Of course everyone watches me, I do not like Midgardians after this experience.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(sayonara Chloe-Chan!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay. I'm safe. I think..


*jumps at Gem, staring*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Are you looking for someone to Roleplay with, Loki?
Because it just so happens that Aria's RPs have been ripped to shreds so I'm going to ignore they ever happened.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*sits, watching*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Bursts out laughing at Jai*
Omg your face!
*falls to her knees, clutching her stomach from laughing too much*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nudges gem with a foot*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Looks up at her*
What?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Breeeeathe. *laughs*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(food )

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Cya Jai!)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Don't you at least want some blood?

Claire: Vegetarian vampires... don't especially work?

Liliana: *she smiles, carving a narrow passage between them and the castle, which immediately fills with water from the ocean* *she places her hands either side of her as if holding on to a railing, and a golden bridge forms beneath her hands, leading over the water* *she opens the castle doors and walks inside, the castle decorated in gold and marble*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Why?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I do want to. I'll be bored otherwise. But why do you still want to?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Alright.)

Garret Falcone said...

*hugs everyone*

Forks!

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Hugs Rhos*
SPOONS!)

Garret Falcone said...

Gem!
How you be?

And sporks! )

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I'm fine...
I don't feel like eating though...I haven't been eating properly for a few weeks and now I don't have much room for anything. I don't feel like eating or drinking...my dinner is going to get cold.)

Garret Falcone said...

I know how you feels *nods*

So my advice,
Eat what you can
Just don't worry about what you can't eat,


You may get your appetite back

*nods*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It seems I disappeared briefly.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I...Yeah okay. Blood too...

Onwa: *follows behind her, watching the way she walks and conducts her magic*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I hate leaving food and my mu is going to be angry...I guess I did eat too many doritoes earlier but that's all I've had all day...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Anndddddddddd now I feel sick.
Fuck.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: ... I don't mind you eating meat, Silente. Just remember that, alright?

Liliana: Do you like it?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles gemma*)


I know.
*smiles*


Onwa: Its specular.

Garret Falcone said...

(well could you explain that you just don't feel all that hungry
And it is annoying not being able to finish something that you want to finish,

And sleep or lie down
Both help sickness )

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Sighs* I have a headache now. I feel sick, I'm going to get into trouble for not eating my dinner. I feel like shit right now...
*Cuddles into Jai*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Are you sure nothing's wrong?


Liliana: I rather think so, yes.


(I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I'm sure...I want to be better for you..



Onwa: You now have your own realm, Liliana.

Savannah said...

(Slights better mood now... :P)

Savannah said...

(Okay very happy mood because I have the comfort of my Oreo bar! :D)

Savannah said...

(Seriously, no one's on?! :O)

Star Inkbright said...

My English teacher banned us from talking about tension in our mood and atmosphere questions because a load of people were just like "this creates tension" and he's like NO YOU HAVE TO EXPLAIN, but the atmosphere IS tense, so do you think I can talk about tension?

Oreo bar!!!!!!!! :) Oreos are life. :)

Savannah said...

(RAGING EMOTIONS! Wow, I went from okayish to happy to sad... YAY, I AM NOW A PROPER TEENAGER! :))

Savannah said...

(YAY, A PERSON! *tacklehugs Star* Yes they are amaaazing! But I have to limit myself to six squares a day because I got it today and I need to sustain it till Wednesday because that's when my dad comes back from his ski trip with a big box of Guylian's chocolate for me and so basically there are twentyfour squares and divide that by two is six and there are three meals in a day so I get two after each meal and I've just realised I just have dinner which means I get two more squares, YAY!)

Star Inkbright said...

@Iris: :P Have fun. :P

Awh. :( :( :(

But yaaaaaaay! :)

Savannah said...

(NOM NOM NOM! *eats the Oreo bar then looks at Star, handing her one* HAPPY BIRTHDAY!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Iris...
Ugh my head hurts so much...
I really hope this goes away for my prelim tomorrow or i'll be sick...)

Star Inkbright said...

@Iris: :) :) :) YAAAAY! :)
*eats Oreo :)*

The best thing you can do is go t sleep, Gemma. :/ I don't really get headaches, but when I do, I know for me they're normally gone by the morning.
Oh, also, screens won't help . . . so I'd suggest turning your screen brightness right down. :)

Star Inkbright said...

If the screen brightness is low enough it doesn't hurt my head at all, so yeah. :)

Savannah said...

(*chucks an Oreo bar at Aria's head* SORRY THAT PROBABLY DIDNT HELP! NEITHER DID THE SHOUTING! THEN WHY AM I STILL SHOUTING?! ILL STOP NOW! *huggles and whispers* seriously though, are you alright...?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I don't know how to turn my brightness down...)

Star Inkbright said...

I found the Brandon Sanderson fan forums and I'm just like -
*blinks*
- because it's only the second set of forums I've seen, the first being AVEN, and it looks SOOOO like AVEN. I'm just like "Are all forums like this . . . ?"
Oh gosh
ohhhhhhhhhhh gosh.
If these forums aren't designed by the same person/company/whateverdesignsforums, I will be VERY surprised.
It's so similar it's creepy. :o

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.)

Bethany: ... You couldn't be any better.

Liliana: I know. *she smiles* I am happy.

Savannah said...

(Okay, so tomorrow I have school. And, correct me if I'm wrong, it's Monday tomorrow... Simple equation; School + Monday = Physics (the subject of doom and despair)... BUT I checked the weather forecast for tomorrow and before 8:00 tomorrow morning it will be -2 and 3% rain (better than 0%!). Another simple equation; -2 degrees + 3% rain = snow! So I'm a happy bunny! Then when I continued to read saw the yellow warning of snow tomorrow! And it said this, "The public should be aware for the potential of disruption to travel." Another simple equation; Yellow warning of snow + travel disruption = NO PHYSICS! :D)

Star Inkbright said...

Which device are you on, Gemma?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Of course I could..


Onwa: *smiles*
Good. You make and gain your own happiness.

Star Inkbright said...

Look
here's AVEN
http://www.asexuality.org/en/
and here's Brandon Sanderson's fan forums
http://www.17thshard.com/forum/

I DON'T KNOW
IS THIS WHAT FORUMS ARE MEANT TO LOOK LIKE?

Jophiel said...

*She didn't know what to do since her last encounter. It was over between them.

She walked into Loki's Midgardian palace and placed the wedding ring on his pillow, along with a single red rose.

Then she left*

Savannah said...

(Checked another website; YELLOW WARNING OF SNOW AND ICE TOMORROW FOR EASTERN ENGLAND! THATS MEEE!)

Star Inkbright said...

Who is this forum person that designs forums?
:/
Is forum-designing a job, a hobby, a sport?

Star Inkbright said...

@Iris: EASTERN ENGLAND? DOES THAT EXTEND TO NORTH-EASTERN?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: You really couldn't...


Liliana: *she thinks for a moment* That is not strictly true. You are capable of making me happy, also.

Savannah said...

(NORTH EASTERN IS STILL EASTERN SO YES! HIGH FIVE FOR THE EAST SIDE!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*hugs her gently*
I could be..


Onwa: *tilts head*
And did you not gain me?

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I'm on my laptop, Star. There are two buttons with two sun-like symbols but it doesn't work when I press it...)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *hugs her back* No, you couldn't. You're too good for me as it is...


Liliana: I suppose I did. *she smiles, draping her arms over her shoulders, pulling her into a kiss*

Savannah said...

(Is there a settings app kind of thing Aria? Sorry, I spend too much time on my iPad and therefore do not know what a laptop screen looks like...)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Yeah but I can't see anything to do with brightness...
It doesn't matter. I'm not feeling as sick anymore... I kind of want to finish my dinner but then I might be sick...
My headache is still here though. Gah.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Shhh. I'm not too good for you.


Onwa: *kisses her back, holding her close, arms tight round her waist, massaging her side's*

Star Inkbright said...

YAAAAAAAY EAST!

@Gemma: Okay.
I'm going to work out how to decrease the brightness on my computer, and then tell you how I did it. :P

Okay.
Go to the control panel (which you can do my opening My Documents and then looking at the toolbar at the top, where it should have an Open Control Panel option)
then go to Appearance & Personalisation, which should be one of the options available when you open it
then go to Adjust Screen Brightness, which should be one of the options down the left side then look at the little brightnessmeter at the bottom, and move the arrow thing towards the thing that looks like a donut as opposed to the thing that looks like a sun.

If that doesn't work, sorry. :( I know on the last Netbook I had, the screen brightness refused to adjust adn I couldn't fix it - but I'd assume you could Google a solution.

Star Inkbright said...

Laptops are well different from iPads/phones, unfortunately. :(

Savannah said...

(*huggles Aria* GET WELL SOON!)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Yes, you are. You're so... elegant. I'm just clumsy and shy...


Liliana: *she smiles* I suppose we will have to look like queens, won't we?

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I got the appearance thing open, but there isn't an "Adjust Screen Brightness"
Thanks anyway Star...)

Star Inkbright said...

@Gemma: :/ That sucks.
I guess if you're feeling less sick now, though, it doesn't matter as much. :)

Savannah said...

(:))))))))))))))))))))))

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles slightly*
When I was human I was very clumsy..and now I'm a clumsy vampire.



Onwa: I suppose so. Elaborate dresses.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Well I think I can say Loki won't come back on.

-Zaf

Star Inkbright said...

No
First you go to Appearance & Personalisation
then you go to Display
THEN you go to Adjust Brightness.

Savannah said...

(*meditates*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Laughs*
Found it now Star...thanks :3)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: You're more graceful than me... I like the way you move.

Liliana: I believe I shall have a purple dress. What would you like?

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Zaffy, why is Loki not coming back on?)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Rose. That's the nice way of saying it.

-Zaf

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hi.

I like how everyone but Aria ignored Chloe.

Bye.)

Savannah said...

(Come back! What do you mean, who even are you?! (Sorry...) ⬆️)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Tia, if you are speaking about on the previous page, you are mistaken. Both Ariadne and Jaimie took notice of Chloe, but they were the only ones on at the time, therefore you are being unreasonable by saying that.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles*
I like the way you move.. especially in certain
*clears her throat*
Situations.




Onwa: black with gold swirls.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: ... What do you mean?

Claire: Ew... Even I understand that, Bethany.


Liliana: I see. *her dress shimmers for a moment before transforming into an elegant blue-purple ball gown, the top half almost like a corset* *it has no shoulders, however* *she gestures towards Onwa, her clothing shimmering before becoming a black ball gown with golden swirls up the side*

Jophiel said...

...

Loki, I'm sorry...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*laughs, hugging her*
Nothing, don't worry about it



Onwa: *smiles, looking at the dress*
Beautiful.

Savannah said...

(*sits down*)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...
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Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *hugs her back* Could you just explain it to me?

Liliana: I am not yet finished. *she gestures towards Onwa's head with one hand, to her own with the other* *golden crowns form on their heads, which contain purple and black jewels*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Sorry? Yes, I see....sorry for being another person to despise me.

Savannah said...

(Despise is a strong word... *hugs Loki*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*blushes*
I..um..*swallows, blushing more*
Doesn't matter..


Onwa: *slightly adjusts her crown*

Savannah said...

(*hugs the person above Soph*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Okay... Right, so fruit for Silente... What about you, Claire?

Claire: Can I have a cheese and pepperoni sandwich?

Bethany: Sure.

Liliana: Do you like it, my darling?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles*
Okay. Fruit, then Claire's sandwich.



Onwa: *smiles*
I do. Thank you.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Had to go eat. Hello, everyone.)

(*hugs Iris* Hey... *smiles*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(You are right, Sophia. I missed a few comments.)

Savannah said...

(*grins at Tia* HOW YOU BEEN I MISSED YOUUU!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*cuddles everyone*)

Savannah said...

(*pokes Jai's face*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*cuddles Jaimie sadly*)

(*looks at Iris* Hey... I missed you too. I did. Sorry for killing the mood.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(*cuddles Jaimie back*


Then it would be wise to read more thoroughly, Tia, before making potentially hurtful accusations.)


Bethany: I'll just make more fruit so we can share it.

Liliana: You are welcome. Would you like to create the rest of the city?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*smashes through the wall next Bethany and lands at her feet. He rolls over, and when he sees her he smiles. The right half of his face is nastily battered and his right arm looks very broken. Trip's voice is hoarse and high, and sounds very delerious*

Oh, hi Bethanyyy. What's up?

*it may be of note, that Trip is wearing plate armour that seems to be made of some sort of Kevlar*

Savannah said...

(YOU DIDN'T KILL NO MOOOOD!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Well, you're partly right, Sophia.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Okay.
*smiles*

Onwa: Of course
*closes her eyes, raising her hands*
*takes a deep breath, forming the buildings in a similar style to the palace only smaller and much less grand*

Jophiel said...

Loki, tell the twins. They want to e more like you anyway. Let them be.

*slowly walks away*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Trip!)

(*hugs Iris* How are you?)

((How be you all?))

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*pulls Danni and Star into the hug*

Hey...)

Savannah said...

(Tired...)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Bye, Death, I think?)

(Herrow Tia.)

(I'm good, but my hands are a little hot.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Trip, no offence, but I would rather not roleplay with you. I do not see you especially often, but I do roleplay all the time I am here. So engaging in a roleplay with you would mean that my characters may become locked in a roleplay which I cannot continue without you here, like what happened to Evelyn with Aretha and Zafira.)


Bethany: Right, food... *she moves to the kitchen*

Claire: Where did you learn to cook, Bethany?

Liliana: *she watches through a window* Impressive. How about inhabitants?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(You should sleep, Iris... *cuddles*)

(Why are they hot?

And when I got to the cinema, my hands were numb, my fingers... well, thumbs, could barely move to type. Yeah... sorry for ranting.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Tell the twins? Tell the twins?! Yes...I'll go tell the twins their mother is a coward, unwilling to care for them. You rather your children grow up knowing their mother abandoned them. I know how that is, and it is NOT something I wish upon anyone.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*watches her, following*



Onwa: what would you like them to look like?

Savannah said...

(But I don't want to because you're here and I haven't seen you in ages so I want to stay. If that made any sense at all... *cuddles*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Trip Sophia-speak to English: Get out.)

*sits in Trip's bar, yet another whiskey in hand*

*a remarkable achievement considering she's not even drunk any alcohol in Trip's bar*

*where does it all go?*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Loki, simply because Rose is wanting to break up with you, does not mean that she is a coward. She has made her decision.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

iron

iron in blood

blood

her head spins

tick

tock

tick

tock

i'm a bomb

she thinks

i'm a bomb waiting to explode

in a way, i already have

she looks down

she sees a light

she places a hand on the dead woman's forehead

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I'm not on because I lack a roleplay. I can be on every night after eight, often earlier. Trust me, it'll be fun. At least, it'll be a change. An adventure with Trip is a bit different.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

(She would be a coward if she gave into to your pressure rather than following her heart.)

Star Inkbright said...

*hugs Kas :)*

Savannah said...

*walks into the bar*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Aww, *cuddles Iris*

All our role-plays crashed and burned...)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I roleplay in the mornings, Trip. And before eight, also. It will not work. Apologies.)


Bethany: *she shrugs* I suppose from Phaestra. She never really... taught me how to cook, but it's something I know? It's hard to explain...

Liliana: Preferably human. Just humans. *she shrugs*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Exactly, She Weeps.)

Star Inkbright said...

@Lantern: Thank you for that. :) That's exactly it. :)

You know, to follow on from what Sophia said a bit, in our culture, selfishness is seen as bad. But, actually, selfishness in small amounts is good. If you never help yourself at all, you'll just fall apart and die. So, to look at selfishness in a selfless light, if you fall apart and die you won't exist to help others.
The twins will be hurt by Rose leaving them, yes. But what will hurt people - having two loving homes with two lovely, kind separated parents, or growing up with both parents in an atmosphere that is strained and tense and unpleasant?

Savannah said...

(They did? *frowns*)

Star Inkbright said...

Also, with the amount you're guilt-tripping Rose, Sophia's right. It is very brave to be able to do what is right in the face of all the negtaive emotion being piled on you.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Star - it will be better for the twins in the long term living without a mother, rather than living in a home containing no love.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Fine, continue with your little family dramas.)

*steps in behind Velvet/Iris/character*

Ah, Tanya, I see you've already helped yourself. You should stop doing that. I hate that. It got Ed barred.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

a blink

a blink is enough

it has to be

another second

another chance to explode

she runs, straight into the wall

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I shall.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(*is a little confused as She Weeps talks in rides, but figures hugs are probably positive*)

Savannah said...

Good thing I waited then Trip, huh... *smirks*

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Good, they're very entertaining.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*as he talks, he strolls behind the bar* Very much so. You don't want to be barred from the finest drinking establishment in Bloglandian.

Now. *he leans on the bar, his arms forming a wide triangle with it* What can I get you?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Oh..cool



Onwa: *nods*
How many?

Savannah said...

*grins* I'll have... Hot chocolate please... *smiles*

Savannah said...

(It's baby Iris' bedtime...)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Ah, a time honored classic. Whipped cream? Demon blood? Mini marshmallows?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Iris tightly*)

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