Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*grins*
Okay..
*gently squeezes Beth's hand*


Onwa: *grins*
Castles ARE enjoyable.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *squeezes Silente's hand back* So can you help Silente?

Phaestra: Indeed I can. *her hand starts to glow white*


Liliana: Indeed they are. But you cannot forget a palace.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Sophia Ah, I read the comment wrong. I stand corrected.)

(@Trip I'll see your Mustang Beta and raise you a heck of a lot of money spent on things I shouldn't have spent money on oh god I've spent so much money on Star Citizen but the things look so nice and who doesn't want a laser sidearm with no moving parts suitable for shooting in vacuum?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shifts slightly, watching those hands*


Onwa: Mmm..You have a fair point there.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Uuuuuugh, yeah... You totally win... *slowly begins to back away*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: *she starts to fill Silente with power, boosting her back to her original strength, keeping her that way* Will this suffice?


Liliana: We shall have a palace together.

Servant: *he places their food in front of them before bowing, retreating back*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(What?

*brings a pistol to a spaceship fight*

*wins*

...

Weren't you supposed to be a master tactician? Surrendering a bit early, aren't you?)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I'm not surrendering. I'm ceding untenable ground.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

I've been reading through the summer 2013 comments a lot lately...

I really miss roleplaying. Like, as a group, with Adra or Ari or someone having the main plot, but each of us having a part.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(You know, I bought a coat, so I can conceal the pistol.

They build the glass pretty weak on the mustangs, don't they? >:D

And you can join me on my Idris/Jevelin (once I get one, naturally!))

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Moss I don't know the feeling to miss it.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Aye, Moss.

I think the problem is that those rps were incredibly tailored. We knew who'd be available, and thanks to MC knew eachother's backstory and stuff. Not to mention, we didn't make up a whole new dimension and set of rules for every single adventure.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Like, I enjoy writing my solo plots, and the occasional roleplaying with other people that I've done, but it's really not the same. And of course it will never be the same, and I'm totally ignoring all the bad stuff and conflict but still.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*Javelin

AC/DC tho)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Maybe I'll let you dock on my Bengal some day. If I decide to let you through the perimeter. >:D)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Yeah. But these guys, the next generation, they do things differently, and I feel as though I should adapt to their age, rather than try and impose mine on them.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I, personally, have no complaints about the roleplay. I, actually, disliked my experience with roleplaying as a group. I much prefer the concept of having a lot of smaller roleplays which overlap every now and then.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Maybe so...

MC was awesome, especially in the beginning. It got sort of meh later, but still.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Yeah, I really enjoyed it.

It was never finished though. I feel like that should be rectified.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Yeah, that makes sense. Like, it's the decent thing to do.

I just don't really fit well into this style roleplay.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

.....

Something something snagging a Kingship during Operation Pitchfork something something.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Well, Zaf sort of claimed the ending, so no one else can do it, and we sort of ended up closing the doors to new people...

I feel really awful about that whole situation... I mean, I just went with the easy option because I didn't want to deal with it, and I didn't know what the right thing was there, and I just... I don't know.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(What is MC?)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Not really. Zaf ended the war in America. Mevolent was never conclusively defeated.

I feel like a gathering of people who used to write it (and maybe others, I don't really know) could just do one final swan song.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Happy February, everyone!)

(... the main gun on the Kingship is the size of a frigate. How can any gun be 240 metres long? That thing is massive!)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Mevolent Collaboration. It was really big when I was a newbie. Mara had this dream, and then Ari had this idea to make it into a story collaboration and then I wrote the first chapter that night and posted it before I went to sleep, and when I woke up, Death had written the next chapter and a bunch of people had commented on both, and it just went from there.

It has about 500 chapters now...

http://mevolentminions.blogspot.com

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Ah, I see.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

No, she, like, claimed defeating Mevolent, though she didn't actually write it.

I don't know, I mean, I'm not really sure people would want to. I mean, Ari would probably want to, but she's really busy, and Nemone was upset/hurt, and Star and Ember just sort of left their characters with me, and everybody dropped off for some reason or other.

I mean, it'd be worth a try, but I wouldn't really expect it to work out.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

I wanted to join, but I was a little late in showing up :P

It's a really good story, actually. Not only does it cover a really nice and broad spectrum of characters and roles in the war but it also maps the personal development of the authors. It'a really interesting, actually.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Didn't get written, didn't happen.

I bet if you were to contact all the old authors you could get a group together.

Food for thought, really. Nothing to lose, right?

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Yeah...

I'm sure whatever you would have written would have been great, though.

Nothing I try to organize ever ends up happening or turning into something. I'd try to participate if something happened, but I'm not the right person to go about trying to organize it and contacting people and that sort of thing. Sorry.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

No need to be sorry, really. It's just sort if a thing I was thinking about.

There was a darker ending I thought up where Trip went back in time and erased it all from happening, actually.

But anyway, what's up in politics in Fabi world?

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Well, college classes are a lot of work and I've been super busy.

I'm actually working on my art homework now. I have to make a life-sized self-portrait using at least three different mediums.

Unfortunately, I'm tall.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

(I'm not sure how to answer the politics bit of the question)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Oh, damn.

Well, all your work I've ever seen has been brilliant, so I'm sure this will be too, even if it will be a bit of a grind.

Oh yeah, how's that pipeline?

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

They're not getting to our section for another couple years... I probably won't even be in the state anymore. It's gonna stink, though. We're at what's probably the narrowest part of the trail, and there isn't as much space on either side as the brochure said they need, so I really don't know what's going to happen.

Well, thanks. I'm worried about getting it all done, but yeah... I think it'll be cool once I've finished.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*pulls Moss and Trip into a warm hug*

*smiles*)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I'm into one final swan song.

I want to do that again....

I loved MC, and I think I enjoyed collabs the most because you took the style of two people and combined them.

-Zaf

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It seems I disappeared briefly.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(*hugs**messes with Tia's smile with his fingers*)

Well I suppose it'a good you won't be there any more?

Especially when it was seamless, Zaf.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Wb Soph)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

The Keystone Pipeline?

-Zaf

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

And as stressed out as I am about this project, my mom's about fifty times as stressed. Gotta go. See you later.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Bye Fabi! *hugs*

We'll talk soon, you hear me?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Zaffy!

Bye, Moss!)

Jophiel said...

The MC is the reason I'm failing school.

Because I spent more time writing than I did work.

But that is also completely my fault.

Because I was the one that allowed myself to do that.

Eh, school starts tomorrow...

I don't want to go.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Danni* Hey... how are you?

School is more important than rp. You should prioritise school in the future.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

I wouldn't want to go to school on Sunday either, Death.

And didn't it help with your English?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Trip Monday, not Sunday. You need sleep methinks.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Pssst Trippy it IS Sunday in Australia

-Zaf

Jophiel said...

It's very much a Sunday... :'(

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

Ah, I see. Death has already done lots of Sunday.

*raises fist to the sky and screams* TIMEZONEEEEES!!!!!

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*curls up near Danni's feet*

*closes eyes*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Which time zone are you in, Trip?)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

My Monday: 8-12 inches of snow

-Zaf

Jophiel said...

*Curls up around Kas and cuddles*

My Monday: 42*C

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Damn

-Zaf

Jophiel said...

I'll take your snow, though. Like, I'd love to have it snow.

But I have to live on a hotplate in the middle of the ocean...

Surrounded by lunatics and poisonous animals that are not even 1/10th your size but can easily kill you before you reach the phone to call an ambulance.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*opens his eyes and feels and sees Danni cuddling him*

*smiles sleepily and gently cuddles back, drifting off*)

((Good night, Danni and Zaffy!)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*hugs Rose*

-Zaf

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I would speak, but I find that to be unwise.

Jophiel said...

Stupid essays...

Why do I have to write an essay on how the Aborigines altered the Australian environment and their perceptions of it, as well as how they interacted with it.

Yes, they theorise that the Aborigines wiped out the Mega Fauna and in turn learned how to hunt sustainablely with good practices... Not to over hunt or to take more than what was necessary.

And firestick farming altered the land because all the trees then used fire to disperse their seeds, instead of being burnt to a crisp.


Yes, they altered it. Yes they pretty much changed everything, but why do I need to know that??

Jophiel said...

It scares me how much of my Tumblr is of Tom Hiddleston...

...

And I am supposed to be doing my essay...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Rose....*laughs*

Jophiel said...

And I compeltly changed it all because instead of blaming the Aborigines for killing off the Megafauna because it's all theories, I'm going to talk about Sanctuary Zones because Harro would laugh too hard and fail me. :D

Screw you 40,000 years ago!

Also, my mother's side came to Australia with the first fleet.

AND WE WERENT CONVICTS!!! WE WERE RELATED TO VIKINGS AND TO SOMEONE WHO LIVED IN A CASTLE IN IRELAND!!! :D

Jophiel said...

Okay, all is cool now. No laughing at me Loki, my author is having a mental breakdown party.

Lavender Hope said...

*reads over some things*
*sighs*

*remembers her songs from yesterday*
*smiles a bit*

Oh! And Zaf, if you're still here, I heard your song. It was amazing! :) You can hit really high notes! I doubt I could sing a Phantom song without my voice cracking because too high or too low. :P

Lavender Hope said...

*reads over some things*
*sighs*

*remembers her songs from yesterday*
*smiles a bit*

Oh! And Zaf, if you're still here, I heard your song. It was amazing! :) You can hit really high notes! I doubt I could sing a Phantom song without my voice cracking because too high or too low. :P

Jophiel said...

*le me*

*tries to sing*

*sounds like a drunk walrus*

*vows never to sing again*

*ends up singing I See Fire again*

Anonymous said...

Happy February!

*isn't here*

Lavender Hope said...

*reads over some things*
*sighs*

*remembers her songs from yesterday*
*smiles a bit*

Oh! And Zaf, if you're still here, I heard your song. It was amazing! :) You can hit really high notes! I doubt I could sing a Phantom song without my voice cracking because too high or too low. :P

Lavender Hope said...

*facepalms and mutters*
Stupid wifi, oh my gosh. DX

Jophiel said...

TAMW you realise that the guy who plays Superman in Man of Steel is the weird blonde suitor from Stardust...

Jophiel said...

WHAT THE HELL I AM SUPPOSED TO BE WRITING AN ESSAY!!!!

STOP WITH BLOGGER!!!!!!!!


WRITE ABOUT ABORIGINES!!!

NOT ATTRACTIVE MEN!!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Oh Rose...

*kisses cheek*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Or you spend a half hour with me, then I'll sleep so you have to write the essay.

Jophiel said...

Oh, that sounds bad.

Ahem.

I did not mean to say that Aboriginal men are unattractive, for many people have different preferences and such, attractiveness is based solely on opinion, and there may be attractive aboriginals out there that I have not seen yet.

Like Jessica Mauboy. She's attractive, but she's not a man so I can't use her as proof...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Oh and thanks, Lav!

-Zaf

Jophiel said...

But Loki... I really shouldn't...

I should be a good person and write this essay...

And Kellan Lutz just shouted 'YES' on the TV... I think he wants me to write the essay...

Jophiel said...

I throw my hands up in the air sometimes
Saying aie oh,
I'm gonna fail!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

As you wish, Rose. I'll wait. My author was given a homemade card today that said

I already gave you your gifts, so here's a Loki and a pack of gum!

*insert Loki picture in middle*

(On the bottom)

P.S- Stan Lee cameo *insert Stan Lee photo*

Jophiel said...

That. Card. Is. Awesome.

I want one.

*hugs Loki carefully*

I'm sorry...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

She would not stop screaming for five minutes.

*kisses her head* Are you still feeling as if I am not what you want? I hardly spoke since you said that.

Jophiel said...

I-

I don't know. I still can't feel anything between us anymore... I'm sorry.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I should have guessed. I should go back to Asgard with the twins. They're already there with Frigga....

Jophiel said...

The twins...

*pulls away and hugs herself*

I'm so sorry, Loki. I don't mean to cause you any harm, and I never will.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Harm? That is what Odin thought he did by keeping the truth from me, causing me no harm. *laughs, not his usual charming, but a very spiteful one* They say that always. I am more then hurt, Rose.

Jophiel said...

Loki, I'm sorry. Your father didn't want to hurt you and you didn't understand that. You don't understand it.

*reaches up and takes his face in her hands*

You have to understand that I didn't mean to hurt you by doing this.

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

Yellow?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

You all betrayed me. Every last one of you!!!

*looks maddened*

((I sleep!-Zaf

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*ninja rolls on*)


*shivers slightly, smiling*
*nods*
Thank you.


Onwa: *watches him retreat until he's far enough away for her comfort*
*smiles at the food*
I hope it's worth the wait. And a palace sounds marvellous.

(*ninja rolls out*)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*ninja hugs Sil*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*ninja rolls back*
*KOALA CUDDLES DUG*
*considers staying*)

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*koala cuddles Sil back*
*Poofs*
Soy :(

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

((Bai..
*ninja rolls out*))

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*dances to Lav's version of Let It Go*
Let it go! Let It go! Can't hold it back anymore!

Lavender Hope said...

Duggy-lyn!

*facepalms*
XP

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

IT'S SO GOOD! :D

Lavender Hope said...

I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT, BUT-

*realizes something*
If I'm going to be a singer, I guess I'm REALLY going to have to get used to people listening to my music all the time...

But it feels strange because you guys like it THAT much! :O

Dugglyn Carzainia said...

*shrugs*
It's better than the original.


In my opinion.

Lavender Hope said...

O.O

*no comment- too shocked*

Jophiel said...

What time is it?

DEDICATION TIME!

I dedicate this page to the end, because they are equally as important as the beginnings.

Whether it be of a career, an essay or a relationship, they are all important.

You want to make memories, yeah?

Who doesn't?

When you do something new, make it memorable.

When you end something, make it fucking awesome.

Unless it's a break up...

Lavender Hope said...

Hear hear, Death!
*huggles and nods*
Break ups are the exception.
*nodsnods*
...
*understands it, but can't exactly say she gets it either*

*floats around*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Lavender sing some into the woods songs please?)

Lavender Hope said...

Hi Sil!
*huggles*

I'll try, but... For one thing, there are a LOT of songs that have a ton of people singing. Another, some characters' songs are a little too high for my voice range.

But I'll try. No One is Alone was one I was thinking of at one point. Children Will Listen was another, but I'd have to work on hitting those high notes.

Lavender Hope said...

I was also thinking a few Wicked songs.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods frantically*
Sinnnng. What about 'Moments in the wood'? That's only one person..)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(YEAH WICKED SONGS TOOOOOO)

Lavender Hope said...

*looks through her iPod musical songs*
Hmm... Les Miz is another, but again, I'm not sure how well I can sing some of them...

*starts listening to some choices*

Lavender Hope said...

I could try that one, Sil!

*starts making a playlist of possible choices*
*wbd*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods*
*might have poofed*
*not sure*)

Lavender Hope said...

Okay.

*still distant, wanting to focus on the songs she chose while she listens to them*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hello.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*growls and paces angrily*)

Lavender Hope said...

What's wrong, Sil?

Hi Aria.
*hugs*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Raises an eyebrow at Jai*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hi Lav *Hugs*)

Lavender Hope said...

...

How are you two?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(The damn cat had her damn kittens and now SURPRISE SUPRISE the day I come back from dads ones fucking DEAD. I actually HATE this cat!!! Why is it always when I GET BACK!!! I swear to whatever holy entity their is I'm SICK AND TIRED of everyone getting so excited about the kittens only for me to get home on for them to start dying!!!)

Lavender Hope said...

*hugs Sil*
Calm down. It wasn't your fault, was it?

Jophiel said...

ESSAY IS ALMOST DONE!!!

Also, I have a confused question...

If you're naming an adjective, what does that count as? Verb, adjective or noun?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*growls*
I don't know! I presume it fucking Is considering IT ONLY HAPPENS WHEN I COME BACK HOME!!!)

Lavender Hope said...

Just because you're there doesn't mean it's you're fault for a kitten dying. Sometimes things like that just happens and it would have happened anyway whether you were there or not.
*keeps hugging Sil*

Hi, Danni. Good job!

Sorry, I suck at grammar. I wouldn't really know either. ^.^'

Lavender Hope said...

Just because you're there doesn't mean it's you're fault for a kitten dying. Sometimes things like that just happens and it would have happened anyway whether you were there or not.
*keeps hugging Sil*

Hi, Danni. Good job!

Sorry, I suck at grammar. I wouldn't really know either. ^.^'

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Lavender this is her third or fourth litter. Each time they've all died.)

Lavender Hope said...

Maybe something's wrong with her or the sire?

The cat around here had several litters where the kittens all died. Some of her litters survived, but that was because they had a different father.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Let me rephrase, she killed them all. She either starved them, suffocated them, or used them for food.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Psycho cat...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(So, yeah, there is something wrong with her. SHES A PSYCHOPATH!!!)

Lavender Hope said...

Then take them away from her and feed them yourself. If she KILLS them, why are you still letting her be near them?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Indeed. Ugh. I hate her. It's always when I get back!!! She sickens me..)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Because we can't feed them!!! You don't think I haven't begged by mum to do that already!!! She doesn't have the time or the patience!!!)

Lavender Hope said...

Aria, how are you this morning?

I had asked, but you haven't replied...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*slumps over in a corner, head in hands*)

Lavender Hope said...

Okay, sorry.

Maybe bring them to your dad's house and watch them? I understand that your mom might object, but this is for the kittens. If they keep getting killed, it's best that you find a way to save them before that happens.



Heh, cat person here. If I see something like that, I don't care what anyone would say. I'd stay by their side as long as I could.

Lavender Hope said...

*hugs Sil, then starts rubbing her back in small, calming circles*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Dad isn't allowed pets. I wish I could. Hell, last time I skived a bit to try help them. Didn't work.)

Lavender Hope said...

*sighs with a small frown*
*brainstorming*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*shakes head*
Save it. I've already thought of nearly everything..
*sighs*)

Lavender Hope said...

Bring them to a friend's house? Someone who'd be able to watch them and have time to feed them?

I know it'd be a burden on your friend, but... :S

*hugs Sil again*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Well Lav, I just broke up with my boyfriend last night and my dad has friends over so I'm meant to help clean up.
I don't want to get out of bed so....
*sinks back into her covers*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs back*
Thanks for the suggestion... I doubt my mum would allow it..
*shakes head*
Anyway..enough whining from me.
*hugs Aria*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Like we can afford a vet.)

Lavender Hope said...

*hugs Aria*
Maybe cleaning will help clear your mind for a bit?

*doesn't really know what to say for break up topics*
Sorry... :/

Lavender Hope said...

*waves at Deathwing, forgetting his author's name, but knowing who it is*

*hugs Sil again*

Lavender Hope said...

*lightbulb moment*
Hmm... But is it...

Hey Sil, have you heard of this person named James Bowen or something like that?

Lavender Hope said...

I agree with Deathwing. If you tell a vet your situation, they probably won't mind to keep the kittens for a small price. If you can find someone sympathetic enough, which it seems most vets are.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(No, I've never heard of James Bowen.)

Lavender Hope said...

Oh. Hi. :)

I'm alright. Dinner's soon though, so I'm going to have to go in a bit.

Lavender Hope said...

He wrote a biography about himself and how he discovered his cat. It's a really inspiring story. But aside from that, he's from around London. When he got the cat, he was living in one of those houses for rehab people.

Anyway, he talked about finding a good animal place that can give them checkups for a cheep price.

I could research more about it, see if there's a place close to you, and maybe they could help you?

Inky Flame said...

(hello chickadees!)

Lavender Hope said...

*cheap

*facepalms*

Lavender Hope said...

Hi Chloe!
*hugs*
How are you?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(If you want..at the rate of things though I doubt there'll be time..



*cuddles Inky*)

Inky Flame said...

(*huggles jai and Lav* hello
I be tired, watching wolf of wall street till late last night
how art thou, you two?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I'm...not so good.)

Inky Flame said...

(*frowns* email? want to talk?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*shakes head* just read the above comments.)

Inky Flame said...

(okay *scrolls up*)

Inky Flame said...

(oh Jai *huggles tightly*)

Lavender Hope said...

Hmm...

They're actually charities...
*can't really tell what that would mean*

But the one I think I was thinking of is called The Blue Cross... Now, maybe...
*trying to think up scenarios*

*too many variables that are unknown to her*
It could go any which way now that I think about it... But if you tried, they may help. I don't know if you want to give them up when they're older, or just keep them cared for while they're young, but if you asked?

Yeah, this might be a scrap plan...
*mentally bundles it up and tosses it behind her*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Inky back*)

Inky Flame said...

(so, what you upto?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Nothing much..you?)

Lavender Hope said...

Aaand dinner.
*hugs Sil, and everyone else for that matter*
Be back later. See you then.
*poofs*

Inky Flame said...

(im listening to REM 'its the end of the world')

Inky Flame said...

(byii Lav!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Bye Lav..

Cool cool..
*nods*
*hugs tightly*)

Inky Flame said...

(*huggles tightly* that was a shame...im sorry)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(I know..*sighs* whatever. It'll work out..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Hey Chloe.
Looks like I'm in the same boat as you now.
Any more and we'll capsize xD)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey...you two wanna continue the rp?)

Inky Flame said...

(shit!
I was just in my own world, attempting to sing 'build god, then well talk' and then my brother sneaked up behind me and buzzed me. ive never screamed so much in my life!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(xD Chloe!)

Inky Flame said...

(hi Gem *huggles* im sorry to hear what happened)

Inky Flame said...

(I chased him upstairs and punched him)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Good..)

Inky Flame said...

(*mutters* told you he was the spawn of the devil)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(He was only messin.)

Inky Flame said...

(hes horrible
he told me he did it to scare the heck out of me)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(My brothers are weird...
Josh smacks me in the ass then runs away...

Sure Jai.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Your brothers ARE weird. Jack Jack is cute though.
@Chloe you wanna continue the rp as well?)

Inky Flame said...

(okay Jai, you first
my brother does that too Gem )

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Jack is adorable. But he copies Josh. He's obviously the "cool" sibling.
Oh wait till I can drive you little-
I'll be the cooler sibling. I will!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay...um...)


Annabelle: *presses against the wall, behind Jesa still, listen to the sounds of Cole getting closer, tail tucked between her legs*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(xD that sounds a bit like you plan to run Josh over!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Jesa - *Stands up tall in front of Annabelle*
*Doesn't know if she should let cole find her and take her home*
*Anna doesn't want that but it might be what's best for her...*
*Looks back at her then stares ahead*

Inky Flame said...

(hehe Gem XD)

Cole: *slowly enters, sniffing the air*
*works towards Anna*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Thinks*
I might.
Even if I did get my own car and could drive, I would only take Josh to school if he was nice to me. Which might be never, so I might do it out of the goodness of my heart to go back and see my 5th year friends.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: *crouches low, hiding behind Jesa, watching Cole*
*kinda hoping he'll mistake Jesa for herself*

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *approaches Anna*
*tilts head at her*
*sniffs her*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: *whines gently, creeping further behind Jesa a little bit*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Jesa - *wolf-sighs*
*Leans closer to Cole, not wanting to move much in case she exposes Anna*
*Rubs her check against his*

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *looks at jesa*
*growls*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: *watches Jesa and Cole, eyes flicking rapidly between them*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I really hope Struan gets head boy. He would be amazing at it, but the only thing is he might be really stressed out and stuff and I wouldn't want him to be.
I have 2 groups of 5th year friends so I would go back and see them every so often. Maybe the teachers too.
Nah, Mr Jack is retiring this year and Miss Bowie and Miss Birrel would be too busy to see me.
I'll just visit my friends.
*nods* Good plan.
On my days off from University. I don't even know If I have any days off...I don't think it's part-time. Shit.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

Jesa - *Sits back and stares at him, whining slightly and pretending to look sad*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(My sister has days off from uni, so I think you will too Gem)

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *tries to get to Anna*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Ah. Good good.)

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