Tuesday, January 27, 2015

First Draft Done!

I... I think I've just sent in the first draft of the new book...

It's rough around the edges, with some bits missing, some chapters blank... I don't mind this at all, because when my agent and me editor look at a first draft like this, they're focussing on the big picture, things like;

Does the story make sense?

Does the story work?

Are the characters consistent?

Is it as tense as it needs to be?

Does it have enough pace?

Is the book any GOOD?

These are all things I don't know, because when your head is down and you're working away, you can't look up and step back far enough to see how everything slots together. I hope they don't have any major issues with it. I hope they like it. I hope they think it's GOOD.

As I explained in a previous post, I scrapped most of what I'd written for this book at the end of December and started again. In the last month, I've had to average about twice my usual daily word amount to reach the deadline. It has been as HELLISH as it has been rewarding. I've barely been able to take any breaks, not even for twitter. The work isn't over, of course it's not, there's still a lot to do — and if my editor or agent find any major flaws in the book, that work will double.

But I managed it. I got the first draft done by writing twice as much per day as usual, and the only way I could do that was by having ridiculous amounts of fun. I wish I could tell you about it — I wish I could tell you the title that spun it off in this brand new direction — but all these things are yet to come.

Right now, though, we are gearing up to release the Armageddon Outta Here paperback in two days. As usual, I found myself in a Catch-22 position. I had a paperback coming out of a book most of you already bought in hardback (or trade paperback — the hardback-sized paperbacks), and I know a lot of you would want every edition available — because you're uber-geeks, just like me. So I wanted to give you an extra story or two (or three, as it turned out) to make it worthwhile. Of course, by including new stories, it kinda also makes people who were NOT intending to buy the paperback want to buy it, cuz they want the new stuff.

I don't like making my readers buy multiple copies of my books. If you want to, hey, go right ahead, I won't stop you, but I've never wanted anyone to feel left out if they don't buy every edition. There are some things, unfortunately, that I can't win no matter what I do. So apologies, for those who feel like they ARE missing out. That was not my intention.

But what ARE these new stories? Well, for those Billy-Ray fans out there, two of these stories are about him. They were sequences that just wouldn't fit in the last few books. Death and Texas throws our favourite hit man deluxe into a Texas Chainsaw Massacre situation, with a notable twist. Eye of the Beholder, meanwhile, explores some of his history — including how and why he lost his eyes.

And then there's Theatre of Shadows. The original version of this was written in an afternoon, behind the scenes at the roleplaying event in Dublin last year. It was at this time that I learned one very important lesson about writing — don't try to write and publish a story in the same day.

The original was flawed. This new version is radically different, and it takes the original's place in canon. So that story that was sent to everyone who took part is now a one-off, never to be reprinted.

There are some other, minor changes to one or two other stories in the collection. For instance, I noticed a mistake too late in Across a Dark Plain, which made a mess of where the story sits in continuity. This mistake is now fixed, as will be a corresponding mistake in one of the books. Remember when the Dead Men were talking about the war, and Shudder's birthday? There was a pretty significant typo that I hadn't spotted, which basically set that story a hundred years after I had meant it to take place. All that is now changed, and once again the stories make sense.

I think.

The paperback is out on Thursday, and right now I'm going to go shopping. The cupboards are bare. I won't be able to poke my head up for too long, though — I got work to do.

Good thing I love it.




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Star Inkbright said...

@Kas: :( *hugs* I'm sorry . . . although I don't mind you exploding. :/

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Silente is NOT dead!)

(@Trip and Star... I don't want to explode. I'll poof before that happens.

So... Mustang Beta, huh? I've got a video that you might like.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Com-mercial: Soviets unaltered Mustang presentati…: http://youtu.be/bkDcXG9T9yg

Enjoy, Trip! And check out Test Squadron!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Yeah...guess it wouldn't really work between us if you were..
*smiles*
I'm glad you aren't allergic to me..



Onwa: *tilts head, watching the bones*
That's interesting. *grins* Hmm. Maybe I'm too hot for you then, if you prefer the cold.

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Oh really?)

Okay then...

The only coalition I realistically see happening after the election is Labour/SNP.

Thoughts?

brb

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(TEST SQUADRON IS BEST SQUADRON!)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Thoughts? Politics suck.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(TEST SQUADRON BEST SQUADRON!!!)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Me too. *she smiles, cuddling her*

Claire: Please don't start another touchy-feely-cuddly session?


Liliana: No, you are perfect for me. *gently strokes her bones* You know, if I touched your chest, it would be instant death? Or your head... Then I could reanimate you and make you do exactly what I say.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I will be back soon.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...
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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*cuddles her back and laughs slightly*
Awww is Claire feeling left out?



Onwa: *raises an eyebrow*
You can control the dead?
*wriggles her fingers slightly, watching the bones, smiling*
The question is not so much 'could you' do that, but 'would you' do that?
*meets her eyes, smirking*
Would you? Kill me so you could have more power.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Bye Soph..)

Star Inkbright said...

@Trip: I don't know?

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

CHAOS.

Star Inkbright said...

Chaos. :)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Look at what you've done
The pain you brought to me
With your stupid smile
Well fuck your mockery

What’s the point of telling someone you care?
All they're going to do is use you
And throw it in your face
)

Star Inkbright said...

*hugs Kas*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*melts in Star's arms*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am back.)


Claire: No, I just don't want to watch.


Liliana: Of course not. I would never kill you. You're far too much fun to keep alive.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*rolls eyes*
Suuuuure.
*tries to use telekinesis to bring Claire closer, managing to tug weakly at her clothes, and frowns*
Huh..


Onwa: *smirks*
Mm. Good. Because as fun as it'd be to be your mindless slave, I rather prefer being myself.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Jai shouldn't be tugging at her clothes ;)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(xD not like that silly.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: *she tilts her head, before her eyes glow white and Silente slides towards her* What did you try to do?

Liliana: I would, too. Now, would you like to go somewhere nice for dinner?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*would've been back sooner but got seconded into walking someone's dog. Would've been totally cool with it had the person who said I would simply asked me*

This is why I don't speak for others, it's bloody infuriating.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*looks at Claire*
I tried to move you closer..


Onwa: I'd love to go on a date with you. Preferably eating ember, but I suppose well cooked meat would suffice.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...
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Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: ... Are you weaker?


Liliana: Jealous, are we? *she kisses her* I was only teasing you. Ember and I are only friends. There is no need to eat her, as fun as that would be. Perhaps we should go to Therald? I can use my baroness status to get us into one of the most sought after restaurants in the realm.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I..dunno..
*blinks then thinks*
I guess I might be. Your true name is the source of your magic..
*frowns more*
So..how do I have...any magic at all...?

Onwa: *kisses her back*
Therald? The place with the wall? Hmm..it seemed a bit barren when the harlot went, but sure.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Maybe because Onwa is still alive?

Liliana: That is only one part of the realm, my dear. All you saw is one city.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Yeah..maybe...crud does that mean I have to keep her alive?
*looks irritated at this*
Great. She's out of my head but still tied to me. Yey..
*shakes head*
I need to know how weak I've gotten..

Onwa: *tilts head*
There are better places? I'm intrigued.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: Just try? It's not hard...

Liliana: *she extends her hand* Then take my hand, and I shall show you.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

You say that now..
*focuses wholely on Claire, body going still*
*winces and just about manages to get Claire an inch off the floor*



Onwa: *slips a hand into Liliana's*
*smirks*
Baroness? What would that make your partner I wonder.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: *she looks down* That's not really impressive...

Bethany: This is a serious matter, Claire.


Liliana: I believe they are just called Ladies. *they vanish in a flash of black, reappearing in a large city - the architecture remains similar to that inside the city with the wall, however the city walls are only rather small, and the city itself appears rather more urban* *in front of them, there is a restaurant, similar in style to those found on Earth, although it is entirely lit by candles thanks to a lack of electricity*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I will be back soon.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*scowls, lowering Claire instead of dropping her*
I can hardly help it Claire.
*gets up, pacing quickly*



Onwa: *looks around, head tilted*
Hmm. Candles. Nice.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay Soph.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(All I've had to eat today is salad and a sandwich.

It's a shame that it would take me about 3 weeks to starve.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I'm back!
OMG THAT MOVIE WAS FUCKING AMAZING
now my new favourite movie *nods* Tops Frozen and Guardians of the Galaxy.
*Sighs happily on her bed then winces at her sore leg*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*gently cuddles aria*
You should watch into the woods!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Kas EAT AND LIVE!!!)

Star Inkbright said...

*hugs Kas* Starving wouldn't be a fun way to die. And you should eat . . . eating is necessary for survival. :/

Star Inkbright said...

Me: Eating is necessary for survival.
Sil: EAT AND LIVE!!!

XD

I think I like Sil's way of phrasing it better. :P

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*nods*
My phrasing is the type of order I give star.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I don't want to live. I've had it with life.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs Kas tightly*
Shhh. Dont talk like that..)

Star Inkbright said...

THEY HAVE BAGUETTE IN THE STORMLIGHT ARCHIVE!!!!!!!!
Well.
Dalinar described a hall as being "shaped like a long loaf of Thaylen bread."
I'm taking that as a baguette reference. :P

WHICH MEANS -
Thaylenah is France. C:
I said Thaylenah was like Germany, didn't I? Well. They're like France. Close enough. :P
Alethkar is America, Jah Kevad is Britain, Thaylenah is France. C:
Thaylenah isn't Vorin, though . . . like, everyone's very religious, it's like when most people in Britain/America were Christian and the church had tons of authority. But Thaylenah/France isn't Vorin/Christian. So yeah.

The White Cleaver said...

*Pops in*
*Beats up main characters*
*Pops out*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Same here kassy, but if I had died I wouldn't have seen the kingsman secret service!
GOD! I can't wait till it comes out on DVD mmmm!
Fuck!
*Wants to go see it again*
Glad I went to see that instead of Big Hero 6.
I am going to be happy from now on. I won't let anything get me down. University will be better. I have something to live for now.)

Star Inkbright said...

*hugs Kas* You might not particularly want to survive, but you wil survive; I know you will. :)

@Jai: Yeah. It works on me. :P

Star Inkbright said...

@Aria: :/ Be careful - no one can ever not get down and still be human.
I'm really glad you're happy, though!!! :)

O_O White Cleaver??

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*smiles*
I'm glad you have something to live for Gem!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Fell out with Adam. He doesn't trust me and thinks I'm going to cheat on him. He's surprised I don't want to talk to him right now.
The fuck?
Oh well. I don't really give a shit...
I think I've fucked up my leg...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*sighs and shakes head*
Boys. What did you do to your leg?)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I don't know. It just started hurting last night. It's been sore all day and I had to limp xD)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(@Star - Then I guess I don't want to be human.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Aria you can be superhuman.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Weeeeird leg. Maybe you slept funny? Or used it too much yesterday? Idk. *shrugs* Hope it gets better!)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I hope it gets better soon, might have to cut it off :P

I wish, Kassy.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(O.o Thought you were sadist, not massichist?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(**masochist)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Are you alright?


Liliana: Indeed. *she leads Onwa towards the restaurant*

Servant: *he bows before Liliana* It is good to see you again, Baroness. You have been absent for a long time. Shall I get you your usual seat?

Liliana: Indeed you shall. But make sure to add an extra chair. *she nods at Onwa*

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*crushes Aria in a hug* >:D)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I believe that Adam is perfectly justified in believing that you will cheat on him, Ariadne. Whether it may be true or not, I have no idea, so do not take this the wrong way. For example - killing someone may be justifiable, but that does not make it right. You do have a history doing such things. And if you can do it once, you can do it again - in a similar way if a criminal kills one person, they could kill another.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I..*looks at her own hands, slightly disgusted*
Yeah. Sure. Never better. I um..I'm going on a fly.
*walks to the door, calmly walking out*


Onwa: *follows, raising an eyebrow slightly at the bowing servant*
*smirks*

John said...

(*Nods at Sophia*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*waves at J*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(*Clears throat* Thanks John.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, J. I'm installing WOW, let's check this thing out!)

(I dedicate to Hope, to Hope's guitar Melody, to Gemma (Aria) and to Jaimie. You're good people/guitars.

Jai, Gem, Hope, you're great friends too. *hugs them*)

John said...

(A fact is a fact.

Awesome Tia, but aren't you UK?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs kas back*)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@J maybe... or I could be in... New England? North-East? Um... somewhere there, near you. Yep.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I said I was sorry, shouldn't you be enjoying this anyway?)

John said...

(North East US is where I am, and WoW uses regional servers so if you're not from the US we can't play together.

All I'm thinking right now is a big old "I told you so".)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(What did you tell me, John?)

John said...

(Not you, Adam.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(And what did you tell him?
You both bitching about me behind my back, right?
A little hate Gemma club starting?)

John said...

(When you started going out with him I just said this would happen, lo and behold it has.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It seems I disappeared briefly.)

Bethany: Please don't, Silente? *walks after her* You might fall...


Servant: Let me escort you to your seat, my lady. *he starts to walk towards a table in the corner*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*scowls more*
*that was NOT the right thing to say*
I won't fall. I'm not some..some..some magicless moron! I can keep myself a flight!
*walks quicker*

Onwa: *waits for Liliana to go first, walking behind her*
Mmm. Good service.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(What would happen, John?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she flaps her wings, giving her extra speed, catching up to her, turning her around and pulling her into a hug* I'm sorry... I'm just worried... Please stay with me?

Liliana: *she follows the servant* Indeed.

Servant: *he pulls both chairs out a little, gesturing for them to sit down* I will be back in a few moments with menus, ma'am.

Liliana: *she sits down at her chair, facing the window*

John said...

(It would all fall apart after you got tired of him. A lot like someone else you supposedly cared about.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello/Goodbye, Elleni?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hi/bye Elleni!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*stiffens then relaxes and hugs her back, shaking slightly*
I can't...I need to see how bad it is, if it's affecting my sigils..but I need you there to..
*catch me, she leaves the words unspoken*


Onwa: *sits opposite her, back to the window*

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Supposedly? What were we just talking about?
Ahh fuck it.
You keep believeing that I don't care about you John.
Me and Adam are still going out, so you were wrong anyway.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Then let me lift you up, and I'll carry you into the air. Then I can drop you and see if your sigils work? If they don't, I'll be right there to catch you. I will always catch you if you fall.

Liliana: I cannot tell which is most beautiful, the full moon and the night sky, or the person sat opposite me.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*shivers slightly but nods*
Okay..that works..



Onwa: *smiles, enjoying the moon light on her skin*
*her skin is glowing faintly silver*
I wouldn't be too insulted if you said the moon.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she lifts her up into the air, holding her closely*


Liliana: I would never say the moon, because that would be a lie.

Servant: *he approaches them, bowing again, handing them a menu each*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*holds onto her, shaking slightly*




Onwa: *smirks*
Either way, moon is me.
*flips open the menu*
After all, that's what 'Onwa' means.
*raises an eyebrow at her over the menu*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she flies almost vertically* Are you alright?


Liliana: That is true. *she looks at the menu* How very civilised.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods, still shaking a little*
You'll catch me right? You won't just...drop me...won't let Minerve t-take me...




Onwa: Indeed..
*sighs*
No human..

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Adam No-one's using anyone for anything.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Why would I do that? I love you, Silente. I promise that I will catch you.


Liliana: This is the civilised part of the word where humans are servants, not food.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
I love you too Beth..



Onwa: *nods*
Shame. Hmm..
*scans the menu quickly*
Duck.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Welp. Single pringle again.
*Lays back on her bed*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Oh God..
*sighs*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*facepalm*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I was happy back then. That's what's changed.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(That's a bit harsh Gem..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Are you fucking kidding me Jai?
I didn't say it was because of Adam.
I'm just depressed right now. I have been since December.
So no, it's not harsh at all..)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...
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John said...

(Excuse us for trying to make you happy.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Right. Sorry..)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Yeah, great job you both did. All you did was make me worse.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Aria*)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Jai, I wasn't angry at you...
*Hugs*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she flies for a little longer, before kissing her forehead and letting go*


Liliana: Would you like the duck or would you like me to duck?

John said...

(On the contrary, we both did our best. The "worse" was all you.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(No John, it wasn't. Because if I was happy with the both of you, I wouldn't have left.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(You have a funny way of showing that, Ariadne. I wonder how you expect anyone to like you if you are rude to them all the time.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(*hugs gently back*
Sure..Okay...please don't do anything..rash.)

*screams slightly, activating her wings, spreading them quickly and sighing happily when they catch*
*pants slightly, frowning*


Owna: I'd like the duck.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she immediately swoops down, flying beside her* Is it working?

Liliana: Then you shall have the duck, my darling. I may join you.

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(Then you'll have no problem "getting over me" then will you?

I'm not rude, Sophia. I just don't care anymore.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Yeah..but..it's taking a lot...
*yawns, wincing*
More than it should..



Onwa: *smirks slightly at 'my darling'*
Pet names already Liliana?

John said...

("Our song" actually just came on, I remember when you sang the lyrics and meant it.)

Ariadne Silver - Goddess of Passion said...

(I changed In December. I was just better at hiding it.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I have never seen you treat Jaimie well, Ariadne. It may be simply perspective and/or coincidence, but that is what I have seen. You make her feel terrible for attempting to help you. Just because you do not care does not mean other people have to suffer for it.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Could I help, maybe?


Liliana: Of course. *she gestures for the servant to return*

Servant: *he approaches them and bows* What would you like?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

*curls up in a far-off, distant, happy place*)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Help? ...You can try?


Onwa: Hmm. I guess I shall have to come up with a fitting one for you.
*turns her silver eyes to the servant, studying him a moment*
Duck.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she places her hand in Silente's, feeding her a gentle stream of energy*


Liliana: And I shall have the duck, also.

Servant: Yes, Ladies. *he bows again before walking back*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*stops panting a bit, holding tight*
*sighs*
I'm weak..


Onwa: *watches him leave*
Hmm. Same that they don't cook their servants.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(**shame)

Jophiel said...

*peeks in*

Stop fighting you two...

*vanishes*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: You're not. I promise. Maybe you'll recover your powers after time...


Liliana: If you eat them, then they are gone. If you make them serve you, then you will gain more from them.

Emerald Melody said...

Evening.

Not that anyone is paying attention since this blog has turned into an episode of Jeremy Kyle with bitter people, publicly airing their failed love lives instead of just getting over it and embracing their friendship again.

But jesus, who am I to judge, since I'm on an 'occasional' presence around here.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Hello, Emerald.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Hey/Bye Deathy
Hi Em.)

I hope so..



Onwa: *tilts head*
I suppose so.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(Hey, Danni. It's over already, Danni.

Hello, Em!)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she continues to feed her energy* If we asked my mother nicely... She could make you as strong as you were before?


Liliana: People are only worth the use you can get out of them. That, however, does not apply with you as such.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I..I'd like that..



Onwa: *smirks*
Oh, and why would I be an acception to your rule?

Star Inkbright said...

@Em: It's a lot harder for some peopel to 'get over things' than others. Just because it may be easy for you doesn't mean it is for other people, and that's not their fault. Also, I, personally, haev no problem with them using this public space. I believe in a supportive Blogland that helps others, not shuts them out if they have a problem.

Star Inkbright said...

Not that I'm being awfully supportive rn - I just have nothing to say . . .

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Then we can go back to Claire... Do you think she should meet Phaestra?

Liliana: Because I like you.


(Hello, Star.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Yes, she sho- actually no...I won't let Phaestra black mail Claire the way she has me and my father and Onwa. We aren't her pawns on a chess board and i wont put Claire in harm's way.



Onwa: *smirks smugly*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: What do you mean?

Liliana: Perhaps it may be more than liking you. I am yet to take notice of my own feelings. Regardless, I enjoy spending time with you.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*taps her finger where once laid the light ring*
I don't want her manipulating Claire.



Onwa: Don't worry your pretty little head about it Sweety. You hardly need to know your emotions to act upon them after all.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I'm sorry...


Liliana: Emotions are not exactly something I take notice of. I just want to have fun, and I want to have power. So I can have more fun.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

It's fine...I just don't want Claire going through the same thing, or anything similar. She can meet Phaestra, but in our home, not her realm.


Onwa: *grins*
Power and fun, the perfect combination.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she nods* After, I will invite her. *she starts to lead Silente so they're flying back towards their house*


Liliana: Indeed. My mother never gave me my own realm. I want somewhere to call my own. Perhaps, if we combined our powers, we could create one?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*follows Beth, looking tired*


Onwa: *tilts head*
Interesting. I've never tried such a thing before.

Star Inkbright said...

Hello, Sophia. :) :)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she looks at Silente, before swinging herself around so she is hugging Silente close from behind* Stop the wings. Let me carry you home.

Liliana: I would like to know whether it would be possible. Although, without a goddess, we could not transfer power from one realm to another - we could rule like goddesses in our own world.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(How are you, Star?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*hugs Star*

*looks up at her*

Must be fun being asexual...)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Beth...You don't have to do that...
*smiles gently*



Onwa: Hm...I had never thought about it. It would be difficult no doubt, but with the right magic..
*smiles slowly*
It could work.
*grins slightly*
Some people make babies, others make realms.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Come on, deactivate your wings? I'll just carry you anyway. This will just make it easier on us both.


Liliana: Indeed. When we have eaten, would you like to try? I believe I would be capable of creating a realm, being related to a goddess and all. I just lack the power to do so. We could start to plan it whilst we eat. I would rather like to have inhabitants.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*hesitates a moment before giving in and deactivating her wings*
*holds on lightly*
Thank you..


Onwa: I'd be delighted to try. And making life is hardly hard.

Star Inkbright said...

Ace/aro, Tia. None-aromantic asexuals can still be straight/gay/bi/pan - they can still fall in love and stuff, and they often have a lot of problems as no one wants to be their partner due to them being asexual.
I mean
I think I'm ace/aro
so yeah, it's pretty fun, even if it feels like I'm missing out on something vital in life at times . . .
The thing is, like, though, romantic feelings can be horrible, but they can also be wonderful. Yes, they're bad, but they're also good. As is everything in life. It's like empathy. Empathy can be bad sometimes, but it can also be wonderful, and it's just part of being human. If you didn't feel anything, you wouldn't be happy. You wouldn't be sad, but you wouldn't be happy. And you wouldn't be human.

Your feelings are a gift from life. Enjoy them. :)

I'm fine, thanks, Sophia. :) In quite a ranty mood.
How're you? :)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: You're welcome. I'm glad to help you. *sets her down outside their house, landing beside her*


Liliana: In their millions, it is.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*leans against her slightly, smiling*
Love you Beth..
*straightens up, opening the door for Beth*


Onwa: *nods*
Perhaps.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(I am depressed, Star.)


Bethany: I love you, too. *she smiles, though, gesturing for her to go first*


Liliana: How, exactly, should we style it? Close to Earth or closer to here?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*smiles, walking through, waiting for Beth on the other side*




Onwa: Hmm..I rather thing a combination of both may work. I rather enjoy the rain forests of earth

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*keeps hugging Star*)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *she walks in, also*

Claire: Well, that was a little random?


Liliana: Then it will have rainforests.

Star Inkbright said...

@Sophia: :/

*hugs Kas :/*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I needed to cool off.
*shrugs*
Hey Claire, wanna meet Phaestra properly?


Onwa: *grins*
Excellent.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: The goddess? Uh... sure?


Liliana: It will have to have cities too, of course.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods*
*starts chanting 'Phaestra' in her head*




Onwa: of course, that is obvious.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(...

Whatcha doing, Star?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: *she appears in a flash of light which solidifies in her form* What is it?

Claire: Okay... wow.

Bethany: Hello, mother.


Liliana: How many temples in our name should there be?

Star Inkbright said...

Ranting, Kas. :P
You?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*nods at Phae*
Hi-
*bursts out laughing slightly at the thought of calling Phae 'mother' or 'mother in law' and hugs her side's*
*shakes her head, gesturing at Beth to explain why they'd called her*


Onwa: *grins*
Many temples to your name.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: When you separated Silente and Onwa... Silente became weaker. And I'm wondering if you could fix it...
We also want you to meet our adopted daughter, Claire.

Claire: Hi, Phaestra...

Phaestra: I see. It will be a simple matter to give Silente power. Hello, Claire. It is nice to meet you.

Claire: You, too. I mean, I didn't really expect you to make an entrance like that...


Liliana: And in yours.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*slowly gets her laughing under control, shaking her head, grinning*
Sorry. Funny thought..



Onwa: *raises an eyebrow*
In mine?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

*looks up at the top of the page*

*still hates breakups*

*But In The Jungle just came on the radio OF IT'S OWN ACCORD, so they may live. For now*

Herrow.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: What was it?


Liliana: You deserve temples, also.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Trip So much for not talking sides. *points at Sophia*

And hi.)

(Browsing the Internet, Star.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(What do you mean, Tia?)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*blushes slightly*
I'll um..tell you later..
*gently places a hand on Claire's shoulder, smiling*
Anyway, meet Phaestra..


Onwa: *tilts head*
Do I?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*taking)

(Nothing.)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Does anyone here have a favorite Evanescence song?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Frankly, I can't blame Sophia. She and Silente are very close, and she feels like someone isn't treating Silente right. I remember with the whole Zafaclysm a while ago, I vehemently supported Adra. Just don't expect me to choose between friends.)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Wake me up.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Moss Bring Me To Life and Tourniquet share the #1 spot on my list.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

You know Fabi, I don't think I've ever listened to an Evanescence song. Can you recommend one?

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I'm not talking about it. You mentioned choosing sides and I pointed out a side. That's it.)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Claire: So you're... kind of like my grandma?

Phaestra: *she tilts her head* Despite the fact we are not technically related, yes, I suppose so.

Claire: I have a goddess as a grandma. Awesome.


Liliana: Indeed.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Ah um I meant bring me to life when I said wake me up.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I gathered, Jai.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I know, I know. Sorry. But you know, can't keep people from doiNg their thing, basically.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(*grins* Your space camper van won't know what hit it >:D)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Grandma Phaestra..hmm..sounds weird..
*watches the goddess*
*decides to just ask*
Does that mean I can call you mother?
*grins*



Onwa: Hmm. I have not have a temple built to me before.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Trip Have you played Alien Isolation yet?)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Um, my favorite has to be Everybody's Fool, but I also like Hello, Imaginary, and Call Me When You're Sober.

...

Though I should probably note, I really like a lot/most/maybe all of their songs.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

And thanks, Tia and Sil.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(Oh, you are talking about me choosing a 'side'? I do not care about their relationship issues, despite what I said to Chione earlier about Adam - that was simply an attempt at a counter-argument. I rather enjoy attempting to provide counter-arguments to things.
Back to the point in hand - their relationships are of no concern to me. Jaimie, however, is. So rather than taking a 'side', I rather just created my own.)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Moss Try Headboard Jockeys - Beautiful)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(No, I don't really intend to unless the opportunity lays itself over a table and hands me a sacrificial dagger. I hear it's really good, and I've seen a little of it and it looks it. But it's like Assassin's Creed, Mass Effect and Shadow Of Mordor, triple A just repulses me a little. I don't really like the art direction, I think.)

Cool, I'll look them up. How've you been?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: Despite the fact you and Bethany are not married, I believe the closest equivalent to our relation would be mother-in-law, Silente.


Liliana: Why ever not?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Neutral sides are always the best, Sophia. :) )

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

*rolls eyes*
So can I call you mother-in-law?



Onwa: *shrugs*
I care little for signs of power and more for the power itself.

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(@Sophia ...

Yes. I see. But you were joining in against Aria. Saying that she didn't care about Jaimie, just as the conversation was about Aria not caring about J and A.

Can we not talk about this please?)

Tanya Halcyon (Kas) said...

(I've heard it's really good.

What about Five Nights at Frodo's? Have you played it?)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I would agree with that idea, Tia.)
(Anyway, if Breaking Bad has taught us anything it's that great things can start in campervans.)

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(Horror isn't really my thing. Not because I dislike it for any particular reason, it's just not my genre. But I do watch one guy who reviews games. He said this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkUPA-d-nfc)

I like it, Moss. A bit loud for me, I'm more of a soft rock kinda guy, but it's weirdly melodic loudness, so I quite like it.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

(It is hardly neutral, Trip. It has simply no relevance to the relationship discussion.

The fact I was talking to Aria, Tia, makes no difference. But there is a difference, however, between not caring about someone and not treating them correctly. I have no doubts that Ariadne cares about Silente.)


Phaestra: If you like.


Liliana: Then perhaps castles are more your style?

Trip Castalan, Lord of The Hobbits, The Fourth Most Popular Folk/Parody Banana Thief In The Land said...

(I suppose, Sophia, yes.)

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