Sunday, November 30, 2014

How to Write Books Good, Part 2


Thinking up the character:

  • Look at your idea.
  • Wonder what kind of character would best suit that idea.
  • Come up with character.
  • Give character a name.
  • Scribble out name. Think of a better name.
  • A better name than that.
  • Look at the name you've picked. Realise "Johnny Rockjaw" sounds made-up.
  • Decide on a name. Decide name is fine.
  • Write character. Character is fine.
  • Character does what character is supposed to do.
  • At halfway point, character rebels.
  • Character starts telling you stuff. History. Backstory. Opinions. Stuff not in the plot.
  • Panic.
  • Character derails plot.
  • Plot crashes and burns.
  • Character emerges from wreckage, continues on.
  • Struggle to catch up to character. Character walking too fast.
  • Character behaving like real person.
  • Panic.
  • Who is more real? The writer who writes the character, or the character who writes the writer?
  • Experience existential crisis.
  • Have lunch.
  • Get back to work.
  • Congratulations! You now have your character!

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Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Mark: -bites harder, shaking his head this way and that, trying to rip the tail off and instead pretty much just shredding it-

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-waves it off- I get it a lot. Out if interest Bethany what do you eat?

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *yelps in pain*
*indicates to Belle to leave*

Savannah said...

Ummm... Hi Emerald?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I am a vegetarian. I find the concept of eating the muscle tissue of a once-living thing vile. The concept of cooking meat also repulses me. The smell of burning flesh makes me feel sick.

Chione Asahina said...

(Guys why did Star leave? I didn't see anything telling us she was leaving :-/)

Savannah said...

*turns back to Felix, white as a sheet* *attempts to smile* Do you think that girl back there noticed me?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -shakes her head and gets up, limping slightly-
-lunges at Mark, growling-

Mark: -lets go of Coles tail to rake claws across belle's face, almost taking her eye out-

Annabelle: -yelps and backs off as the white of her for starts being stained red-

Inky Flame said...

Felix: *frowns* what girl?

Chione Asahina said...

City? Is it in Blogland? I haven't seen a city around here...

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *growls, ignoring the pain*
*howls*
*lunges at mark*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Star left because she wasn't commenting anymore and wasn't getting as much joy from blogland as she used too.)


Damn. I'd say that the vegetables probably don't like that but..well they don't have nerves..

Savannah said...

*leans forward* The frizzy redhead by the door

Inky Flame said...

Felix: *turns to the door* there is no one there...

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I only eat the parts of the plants that would not kill them.

Chione Asahina said...

Uh....I-I don't know...It would be nice to have a home...I haven't had somewhere to call home in a long time...But I just met you and...I don't think I would feel comfortable...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

...yeah I might start calling you saint Bethany.


Mark: -gets hit by Cole, away from Annabelle-

Chione Asahina said...

(Gtg guys, have good days ^.^)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Bye C! Have a good day!)

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *repeatedly swipes at Mark, furious*

Anonymous said...

@Velvet: Hi :P
And Star left? :(
*poofs because homework*

Inky Flame said...

(Byii Cord!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Mark: -yelps and turns tail, running-

Savannah said...

*puts head in hands* Why is she doing this?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: No. Do not call me that. Ever.

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *runs after him8



Felix: what is she doing? *looks concerned*

Savannah said...

*stands up and walks to the girl* If you're here to see me at least stop using your powers before everyone thinks I'm going mad

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

But you ARE a saint basically. Your like a bloomin avenging Angel.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Mark: -runs as fast as he can, tail between his legs-

Inky Flame said...

Felix *hugs her from behind* its okay....

Savannah said...

Girl: Oh, sorry! *she walks up to Felix* Velvet is with a pretty boy, oh may gawd!
Me: *facepalms and begins to moan*

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *growls*
*when satisfied that he is far enough away, goes back to Belle*

Inky Flame said...

Felix: *looks confused*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -whines softly, licking the bottom if Coles muzzle, rubbing against his side, limping still-

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: No, I am not. I just believe that one should stand against the darkness. One should not give themselves willingly, nor should they submit. They should fight with every fibre of their being. So I help those who are struggling with the darkness. That is, in effect, my job. But I am no saint. And despite the fact I have wings, neither am I an angel.

Savannah said...

Me: Flo, please lay off the total annoyingness...
Flo: *looks hurt*
Me: Felix, meet my sister...

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *turns into a human*
*picks her up and runs back to the cottage*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-rolls her eyes-
Sure.

Inky Flame said...

Felix: s sister?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: - settles against him, getting blood on his chest from her face-

Savannah said...

Flo: The one and only! *salutes*
Velvet: *growls*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: An angel would not have been raped by a demonic spirit. An angel, at a very touch, would have scattered the shadow into a million pieces. Angels are powerful beings. I am not.

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *frowns* oh belle*
*reaches the cottage and takes her to the bedroom*




*walks in* Hey you.... *looks shocked* Belle!
*activates the sigils to heal*

Inky Flame said...

Felix: *grins* nice to met you

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-winces- sorry..


Annabelle: -puts her head between her paws, face slowly healing along with her leg-
-fur slowly starts receeding back into herself-

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *sighs and sits down, putting her head in her hands, sobbing silently*

Inky Flame said...

COle: DO you have some clothes for her Inks?



Sure... *pulls out a winter dress she had been wrking on*

Savannah said...

Flo: *curtseys*
Velv: Good to see you're taking this so well...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-sits next to her and hugs her gently-
...at least its only once...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -all the fur recedes leaving her laid, looking up at Cole, scar across her face- thank you..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: You are right. I have no right to complain. *vanishes in a gold flash*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

No I..
-sighs and puts her head in her hands-
Didn't mean it like that.

Inky Flame said...

Felix: *whispers* I didn't realize you have a sister...

COle: *kneels down* Im sorry he hurt you...

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: *whispers in Silente's ear* She is always overreacting.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-stiffens at the voice-


Annabelle: its fine. You saved me. -smiles-

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *gives a small smile* I tried...are you going to be okay?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: I should be. -lays a hand on her stomach- at least they weren't hurt..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: What's the matter, my pet?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-whispers- Go away Liliana..

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *smiles* at least there is that. Is there anything I can get you?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: That is no way to speak to your owner. *her hand glows purple and gives Silente a quick pulse of the pain*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: just..stay?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-hisses, crying out and tensing more for a moment-

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *voice is soft* okay, if that's what you want

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle ~time warp a week?~

Inky Flame said...

(okay ^^
Inky is also pregnant so itll affect her too)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: Are you in a better mood now, my pet?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Okay :)

Annabelle: ~time warp a week~
-Sat on the couch, pressed into Coles side-
-baby bump it bigger than before-

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

I'm not yo-
-sighs-
Lil... why won't you leave me alone?

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *smiles* how are you feeling?


*calls out* guys, breakfast is ready!
*a little baby bump is showing~*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: You are too much fun to play with.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-glares at the floor scowling-
That's not nice.



Annabelle: I'm good.. come on, food.
-stands up, pulling cole up too-

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: It is the truth. How long did it take for me to break you? A few minutes?

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *smiles and stands* lets go


*smiles and dishes up food*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Surely you'd prefer a challenge?



Annabelle: -walks into the kitchen still pressed into Coles side-
Thanks Inky..
-looks at Inky's stomach and smiles-
How many do you think you'll have?

Inky Flame said...

*smiles* I don't know...


Cole: *pulls a stool out for Belle* do you need a hand?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: No. *starts the pain* I like breaking you.

Savannah said...

Velv: *fake laughs* Felix, a word? Outside? Privately? *walks over to Flo and drags her to the bar* Flo, sit here, get a drink- it's on the house, long story. Don't order anything alcoholic, the barman will keep an eye on you if he says or tries anything beat him up, bye! *drags Felix outside*

Inky Flame said...

Felix: okay *gets dragged outside*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: if you would mind..I'm a lazy wolf. -grins and sits- a house full of cubs ey Flick?




-tenses and falls to the fall, writhing-

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *helps her to sit and smiles*



Oh I know...I think we will need to expand *giggles and dishes up food*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: No matter how hard you resist, you will always give in to me.

Savannah said...

Velv: Right, no clue why she has followed me here, she doesn't know about me killing people, she's an elemental, 11 years old... Any questions?

Inky Flame said...

felix: should you be letting her in the bar with that creep?

Savannah said...

Velv: No! *runs back in to find her talking to him* *runs over* What are you doing!?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: probably. -snags her plate, handing Cole one too- are you sure you don't mind us staying?




-writhes and thrashes, tense, mouth wide in a silent scream-

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: *stops the pain* Stand up.

Inky Flame said...

Bartender: isn't she the cutest?

*smiles at her* I don't mind, really. It was like this back in the good l days. Wolves would commonly come and go from our house


Cole: thank you Inks

(brb
my dog has been sick everywhere in the house and I have to clean it)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-breathes heavily and tries to stand, legs giving way beneath her-

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: I asked you to stand up. Stand before I hurt you again.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Inky Eww. Okay.)

Annabelle: yeah thanks Inky..the house is going to be full.. -starts eating-

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

- stands up on shakey legs, leaning against the wall-

Savannah said...

Flo: *giggles*
Velv: Oh my god... *leans over the bar and throws up* *places hand on my stomach and all the vomit disappears and the colour comes back into my cheeks* Flo! I told you to beat him up if he tried anything!

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: Good. What will you do if I ask you to do something?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-quietly- do it..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: And do you enjoy being my pet?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-sniffles slightly-
Y-yes..-whispers- it's what I always wanted..
-looks miserable and broken-

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: Good. And what will you tell your friends?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Not to help me..that I want this..

Inky Flame said...

(back...it was disgusting)

*laughs* indeed...the more the merrier

Cole: *smiles and eats*

Felix: *comes in* did anything happen?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -also eating-
-swallows-
Good thing we have the boys to care for us..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: Good. *smiles*

Bethany: *appears in a flash of gold* Silente I'm- *frowns* What is going on?

Inky Flame said...

*laughs* yes...

Cole: anything you need Belle, just ask

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-doesn't smile back, just looks at her feet-
Hi Beth..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: Kill her.

Savannah said...

Velv: Let's see, the bartender was flirting with my eleven year old sister, she was enjoying it, and I threw up... No you didn't miss much...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: don't worry Cole, I will. -smiles, lacing her fingers through Coles under the table so Inky doesn't see, eating with her other hand-

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

- looks up, shocked-
What??

Inky Flame said...

Felix: *growls at the bartender* cut it out

COle: *smiles and squeezes her hand*


*eats and smiles* we should go baby shopping together

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -squeezes his hand back-
-to flick- we should! Well..maybe just neutral colours for now?

Savannah said...

Flo: Oh, don't worry, there's nothing bad about this dashing young wan in front of me! *winks at the bartender*
Velv: *faints*

Inky Flame said...

Felix: *catches Vel*

totally *smiles*


Cole: *smiles* shall I come with?

Savannah said...

(Gtg, bye!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: of course you should! Well I mean, that is if you won't find it boring

Inky Flame said...

(byii Vel!)

Cole: I wouldn't mind it *smiles*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: Kill Bethany.

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: then its a date. -smiles back then blushes as she realises there are three of them in the room, not two- I mean, you know, for all of us. The three amigos..

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

- looks at Bethany, then back at lil-
-looks at Bethany again-
I..-squares her shoulders, standing tall, trembling slightly- no.

Inky Flame said...

*laughs* or maybe I should let you two go...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: N-no. You need to shop for Edward Jr.

Inky Flame said...

Edward jr? *laughs* that's a good one, fine


Cole: Itll be fun

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: exactly. -finishes her food- you know, despite not knowing how many to shop for..

(-has, by now, decided how many pups Anna will have and the genders-)

Inky Flame said...

(awesome ^^)
good point...*thinks* we will just have to buy lots and lots...


Cole: oh god...here we go

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -laughs- maybe we should just get toys today? And wait for the scans so we at least know how many..

Inky Flame said...

*nods* good idea *smiles*

Cole: Inky here used to play house and family all the time...*whispers to Belle* she used to go nuts over it

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: *raises her hand, giving her a pulse of pain* Kill her, now.

Bethany: *draws her spear*

Lavender Hope said...

Whoa, whoa, whoa, what??? Star and Adra stopped coming???

STAR WHO ALMOST ALWAYS COMES ON EVERYDAY??? WHAT???

*is in shock; may or may not be here, depends*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -laughs slightly- then she should be a great mother.

Inky Flame said...

(hey Lavender!)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-hisses, managing to stay standing somehow- No!


(yes lavender. They have..)

Lavender Hope said...

Darn that the page had to reload itself and had to delete the original comment. I thought I was missing something that second time...

Was just reading some of the past comments and couldn't help responding to that information...

Jophiel said...

It's so odd how quickly I can change.

From composed to sobbing as soon as my foot touched the water in the shower, to composed again as I stepped out and onto that bloody green rug thing that I hate...

It's like a switch.

My eyes were red, but hey, everyone gets a little shampoo in their eyes every now and then.

I spent the whole time singing too. Lullaby by Nickelback. It kinda makes me feel like someone I don't know, someone my parents used to like, that that person wants me to keep breathing. It makes me feel like I'm okay for a little while.

Maybe I might be... Eventually... Maybe I might be okay.

But then I remember all the shit I've done.

And fucking hell, do I deserve a fate worse than death. I deserve to rot in a shallow grave somewhere I'll never be found.

But no one will look for me, so there is little point in burying me somewhere hidden.

I deserve to feel the pain I've caused others. The pain that comes from being a burden on everyone. That pain is shit, and I deserve to feel that ten-fold.

Also, you can ignore this. This is just an insight into my night right now. I've just had a rough day, I'm not going to kill myself, and I'm not going to lie I have been considering it, but I'm just going to go to bed and cry some more.

Bye.

Inky Flame said...

COle: she used to dress her baby brother as a girl


you two talking about me?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: *starts the pain again* Do not harm me, Bethany. Or Silente will feel this pain forever.

Bethany: *pauses*

Inky Flame said...

(*huggles* Death...)

Lavender Hope said...

No way...

Chloe? Chloe G? That you??? Couldn't see your name for a sec. Hi. Long time no see.

Hey, Death. *hugs even if you're not on cause you're my friend and I think you need one*

Inky Flame said...

(Yes, that is I *smiles* yes, it has been awhile )

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(-hugs Deathy- remember you're fucking perfect..)

-drops to the floor, tense, eues closes and mouth wide, thrashing and writhing, jerking-



Annabelle: -bursts out laughing- oh God that poor boy!

Inky Flame said...

whats so funny? *frowns*

Lavender Hope said...

How've you been, Chloe?

Also, though I'm a little afraid to ask...

What else happened while I was gone?

I do see that you guys are doing some major role play though, which looks fun. :)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: nothing Inky. -grins-

Inky Flame said...

(Ive been good thanks ^^ how art thou?)

Lavender Hope said...

*tries to read some of it and adds*
Even though I have no idea what's going on...

Inky Flame said...

*mutters something to herself*
everyone finished eating?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: yep. -smiles-

Lavender Hope said...

I'm good too.

would be better if Star was still on though, to be honest... I was hoping I'd see her here...

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Lavender I could email her for you? Or you could email her?)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: *stops the pain* Kill her.

Inky Flame said...

*puts away the dishes* shall we go?

COle: *smiles* I am

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-breathes- I have done many selfish acts Liliana, but I will not kill her! Beth take her out!


Annabelle: -still wearing her pyjamas- uh..

Lavender Hope said...

*hesitates*
Um... If you're okay with it...

Haven't talked to anyone on here in, I think, a year. More or less.

Inky Flame said...

COle: *smiles* lets get you dressed

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(@Lavender done. Hopefully she'll come before you have to leave :)


Annabelle: -blushes and smiles- let's..preferably warn clothes..

Lavender Hope said...

Feels a little strange now... Besides Fabi and Chole, I barely recognize any names.

Oh, except Val, who was the first to comment, and maybe Duck who was second? If it's the same Duck who had that glowing fire hand for a profile pic when I first met him.

Inky Flame said...

Cole: Inkty did make you that lovely winter dress...

Lavender Hope said...

Hopefully... I kinda have to go soon though...

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: *starts the pain again*

Bethany: *charges at Liliana with her spear*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: she did? Oh thanks Inky! -grins- wait.. - looks at her stomach- will it still fit?

Inky Flame said...

(it has been a while Lavender ^.^ and as you can see, ive taken up rping)

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-writhes and jerks and thrashes, screaming silently, eyes wide this time-

Inky Flame said...

*smiles* its okay...and yes, I made it loose fitting


Cole: come on

Lavender Hope said...

Darn, think I have to go now...

I'll try to be back later, but I'm not sure if I can...

:S

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: thank you Inky. -stands up, pushing her chair in-

Lavender Hope said...

If Star come on, though, tell her to wait a bit, please.

Bye!

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Will do Lav. Bye :)

Inky Flame said...

(okay lav ^^ byii)

Tis okay
*starts washing the dishes*
*hums a little tune*

Cole: *smiles* it is a cute dress
*holds it up for Belle*

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Liliana: *draws her dagger, smiling*


Bethany: *uses her spear to flip over her, then holds it to the back of her neck* Stop the pain.

Liliana: Now my dear, why would I do that? It is the only thing keeping me alive. *her hands glow purple and she winks at Silente*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: oooh pretty. - hugs the dress- soft too.

Inky Flame said...

Cole: yes *smiles* Ill leave you to change
*waits outside the door*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-keeps thrashing and writhing-
K-ll...h-
-struggling to get the words out-

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle -quickly changes, inspecting herself in the mirror-
-smiles and opens the door-

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *smiles* well look at you

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -spins- tada!

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: Stop hurting her!

Liliana: *shakes her head, firing a pulse of black energy into Bethany's stomach, blasting a hole as well as throwing her backwards* *stops Silente's pain* Bethany will be dying. Why don't you make her death as quick as possible?

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *laughs* bravo! Shall we? *bows*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

BETH! -lunges to her feet, running to Beth's side-
-repeats 'Phaestra' in her head over and over, kneeling beside Beth- it's okay..it's okay..


Annabelle: -smiles and intertwines their fingers- lets..

Inky Flame said...

Cole: *squeezes her hand*
*leads her to the kitchen* You ready Inks?


*smiles ad takes off apron* yes.
let us go

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: -hides their hands slightly behind them, blushing- are we walking?

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Phaestra: *appears in a flash of light which solidifies into her form* *takes a look at the situation, and waves her hand over Bethany, healing her instantly* *strides towards Liliana, grasping her throat and lifting her high into the air*

Inky Flame said...

*tilts head* I don't know how else we are going to get there...so yes

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-sags against the wall next to Beth-
I'm sorry..are you okay?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: okay. -waits for Flick to start walking-

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: I... No. This... Hasn't been a good day. *breaks down crying*


Phaestra: You tried to kill my daughter.

Liliana: *struggles against her hand, unable to move it* Y... Yes.

Phaestra: Then you will die.

Inky Flame said...

*smiles*
*places on headband to hide ears* lets go
*opens door and walks*


Cole: *holds Belle's hand and walks* what a lovely day

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

- hugs Bethany tightly, making sure Beth's back is to the fighting- Shh..-gently rubs her back in small circles in an attemotbto soothe her-

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: it is quite nice. -swings their hands since inky is in front and won't see unless she looks back-

Inky Flame said...

COle: *smiles* this is exciting


*hums and walks with a spring inm her step, not looking back once*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

Annabelle: it really is. I hope no one mentions my age though.

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: *cries into her shoulder, letting out a cry of pain and grief*

Phaestra: *her hand begins to glow white, and the air shimmers behind Liliana, a large boat appearing into existence*

Inky Flame said...

Cole: well if they do, they will have me to deal with *smiles sweetly*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

-closes her own eyes, not wanting to see what happens to Lil-
-keeps rubbing Beth's back, making calming noises-

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(-facepalm- the blog is trying to tell me something with all these first comments..)

Annabelle: thank you. -presses against him slightly-

Matex Von Darkhour - マテクス said...

You have to ded this page and the last page!!!

Lavender Hope said...

Back, very distant, and- is ghost the term you use for someone who's here but doesn't comment? If so, then:
*becomes a ghost*

Inky Flame said...

(*grins* hehehe )

COle: *smiles* anytime


*turns* hey Guys...nevermind *turns and continues to walk*

Inky Flame said...

(okay Lav
and that is the correct term ^^)

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: ... Sorry. *continues to cry*

Phaestra: *holds Liliana in front of the boat*

Liliana: *gets hit by the boat crying out as she gets crushed underneath it*

Phaestra: *waves her hand and the ship fades out of existence* *she heals Liliana and revives her* You are coming to my realm. *grasps her shoulder and they vanish in a flash of light*

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

(Shhh Matty..)
(Okay Lav)


Annabelle: - blushes, jerking away from Cole like he's a live wire- y-yes inky?

Jai (Silente Tempest - St Of Sinners) said...

It's fine Bethany. -opens her eyes to see them gone- -sighs and rests her head on Beth's shoulder- thank you..

Commander Sophia Keating (N7 Operative and Council Spectre) said...

Bethany: ... Why?


(I will be back soon.)

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