Wednesday, December 25, 2013

Twelve Days of Fandom

MERRRRRRRRRY CHRISTMAS!

I hope everyone has a wonderful Christmas day, whether you celebrate it or not. I hope this day is fun and filled with laughter and that you spend it surrounded by friends and family.

And to set you on your way, here is the Twelve Days of Fandom video (actually two videos, because apparently Youtube can't handle that much editing in one go). Thanks to everyone who took part — it has taken up two days of my life putting all this together, but it was so worth it. Some of you can really sing! And some of you really CAN'T. The videos I saw were funny, sweet, genuine, wacky, impressive, silly, and some of them were downright CUTE (Melissa and her doggy — I mean COME ON!)

The lyrics were written by myself and Laura Jordan (not Valkyrie-Laura, but an awesome Laura just the same!) and it features a special appearance by one Miss Holly Smale.

Have a great Christmas, everybody.





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The Grave of a Coward said...

Photo: *smiles smugly and adjusts his jacket*
See?
Your girlfriend isn't the only lady who likes sequins.

*groans*
Snow, don't encourage him.
Mr. Finish, don't refer to her as my 'girlfriend.'

Snow said...

*smiles* what would you have us call her then? If not girlfriend, and if not boy friend for you, then what?

Sir said...

... Lovely, Ms. Priya.

The Grave of a Coward said...

Photo: Gentleman caller and lady-friend?

Mr. Finish, you little . . .
Hold up. That's actually rather nice.

Photo: Thank you. I thought so too.

Noelle said...

*Priya quickly curtsies, then waves her hand, a slight tremor going though he ground, and the snow breaks apart*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Ravel: *sighs watching Jekyll redress Zafira's worst wounds and sits beside her when he leaves*

*wakes* I remember

Ravel: remember what?

You...and I....*reaches for*

Ravel: *lays beside* shhh I'm glad.,..

Snow said...

That does sound very them. I like it.

you know, I think doctor has had an effect on you. I've heard stories of what you used to be like, but... well, you're not much like that now.
still OCD though.

but you've had an effect on her too, from what I've seen of her. You're good for each other, even though your past is a bit... dark

Sir said...

*raises his eyebrows*

The Grave of a Coward said...

. . .

Photo: . . .

. . .

Photo: Bro, this chick knows stuff.

Yes.
Yes, she seems to think she knows a lot about Doctor and myself.
And
it
makes
me
uncomfortable.

Snow said...

Sorry. Old habbit. Like I said earlier, I tend to annoy people.

Noelle said...

*Priya walks over to him, then stops*
*Thinks*

*Grabs his arm and pull him from the chair and towards the city Center*

Sir said...

Erm.

*digs his heels into the ground*

What exactly are you doing, Ms. Priya?

The Grave of a Coward said...

. . . Quite.

Photo: Isn't that Mr. Reingington's tagline?

Silence, wench.

Photo: *shuts up*
. . . Hey, hold on, I'm not a wench!

*looks back at Snow*
Can we help you with anything?

*adds pointedly* Before you leave?

Snow said...
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Noelle said...

*Priya stops, annoyed* "I'm taking you with me"

Snow said...

No. Thank you again. And sorry. I didnt mean to presume anything.

*smiles slightly at them both* it was nice meeting you. Hopefully next time - if there is a next rime- I wont be so annoying to you.

Sir said...

...

Where?

Noelle said...

*Priya looks dumbfounded* "Downtown....."

The Grave of a Coward said...

There won't be a next time.

Photo: I hope there is.

Mr. Finish . . .

Photo: I hope the next time involves a bottle of champagne and your dazzling smile.

Mr. Finish, stop flirting with her.

Photo: *gives Oscar a sullen look*

*looks back at Snow*
I'll walk you to the door.

Photo: WE'LL walk you to the door.

*sighs heavily*
WE'LL walk you to the door.

Noelle said...

(Phosnow)

Snow said...

Thanks.

...

((XD anni, photo is amazing. He should meet the others.))

Snow said...

(( adra, dont go tempting me to kill lea))

Sir said...

...
*frowns*

Why?

The Grave of a Coward said...

(Thank you. Thank you very much.)

*escorts her to the door*

Photo: *escorts her to the door*

I don't think those two gentlemen will be bothering you any longer. If they do, I trust you won't let me know.

Photo: You can let ME know, though. I'm always here for you, as a shoulder to cry on. I'm your rock.

GOODBYE, SNOW.

Photo: *sighs*
Goodbye.

Noelle said...

...

*Priya signs* "Why not? To take a walk?"

Snow said...

Bye. *she walks away, smiling to herself*

Doctor's in good hands

Noelle said...

(Yes.

I'm sure she is in good hands.
*laughs at her dirty jokes*
*which aren't jokes*
*is very immature around this hour*

Snow said...

Wbd, msd

Snow said...

Adra!! You understood my meaning XD

The Grave of a Coward said...

*shuts the door behind her*
. . . Well.
That certainly was a little adventure.

Photo: Yes. Yes it was.
. . .
Anyway, I should go get ready for my date.

You're despicable, you know that?

Photo: Boss, I'm like a 67 Chevy Impala.
I don't deserve to just sit in the garage.
*strolls off down the hall*
Ciao!

*sighs heavily*

Noelle said...

(That was the point and Anni SUPERNATURAL WHAT)

The Grave of a Coward said...

(You people are juvenile.
. . .
. . .
*whispers* Very clean hands, at any rate.)

Sir said...

*blinks*

Snow said...

XD omg I love you people. You're just so weird

Noelle said...

(Jesus)


*Priya blinks back, then pulls him slightly into a walk*

The Grave of a Coward said...

(If we weren't weird, we would not read Skulduggery Pleasant.)

Snow said...

A very good point anni.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hello...

On my laptop, so distant/msd, unless someone wants to RP with one of my characters, then I'll probably be less likely to get distracted by something else.

Sir said...

*sighs, and follows*

The Grave of a Coward said...

(I must go.)

Sir said...

Good bye, Ms. Barnosky.

Noelle said...

(Bye Anni! *huggles* *Wipes a tear, and waves a hankerchief into the wind*
Hey Fabi! *hugs*)

*Priya smiles, and nods happily, skipping lightly along*

Sir said...

*raises his eyebrows*

Noelle said...

*Priya wildly raises her eyebrows back, and stops near a small stand, looking at the menu that they have*
*Her real reason for coming down here*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*sighs hapoily*

Ravel: i love you. Always.

Always.

Ravel: *laughs* I'm supposed to help you dress yoh know. I got your pj's

Oh?

Snow said...

Anni!! No!,

*reaches out a hand to her fading shape*

*falls to the ground* no... dont leave me...anni...

*myhair whipsin the breaze and tears leave tracks down my cheeks* anni...

Sir said...

*quietly stands to the side*

Noelle said...

*Priya browses for a minute, thinking about getting actual food- maybe a burger and fries, or a sandwich, or a hot dog*
*Her eyes land on a particular bag of tantalizing coton candy*
*Her eyes widen hungrily and she quickly gets a bag*
*Takes a bite out of the sugary puff*
*It melts and she laughs*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Ravel: well okay listen, Jekyll needs to do something and when he does he isnt healing you with magic so you'll be pretty much at mine or his mercy for a few days, so he told me you'd want to be comfortable

Oh *gets uo and dresses with help*

Ravel: i promise when you wake I will be here

Sir said...

Well, it is good to see you feeling well today, Ms. Priya.

Snow said...

Oh hum...

Noelle said...

*Priya smiles, then offers him some blue cotton candy*

Sir said...

...

No thank you, Ms. Priya.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*smiles* I hope

Ravel: you doubt? *kisses gently watching her fall asleep*

Jekyll: *slips in* Don't worry I want to be certain, I have to work on her, she'll be a bit uneasy for a few days or hours so you'll have to help her with anything she needs *works on*

Sir said...

Sadly, circumstances force me to egress. I dearly hope that we could continue this some other time, however.

Noelle said...

*Priya shrugs, eating more of her cotton candy*
*She wiggles her toes on the concrete and makes a little crack where she stands, so it falls onto the road*
*The puddle on the side of the road falls into the crack and into the sewer, so if a passing car were to come by, it would not splash*

Noelle said...

*Priya's face falls, and she raises a hand in farewell*

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

((Fails at writing a dramatic goodbye for Annika))

((Hello Snow, Adra, Sir, Zaf anyone else.))

Snow said...

Bye sir

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

((Goodbye Sir))

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

((Bai Sir

Noelle said...

(Fubru

I'm writing a chapter... For nameless... And I think you'll like it.)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Jekyll; she is yours, Ravel. She'll wake in a few. Also I will allow her to the treehouse or your chambers so long as the meds stay attached to her

Ravel: my chambers

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

((I'll keep an eye out for if I can.))

((I posted on TSE, by the way, if anyone's interested...))

Noelle said...

(OKAY!!!! TSETSETSETETSETKSUBVUSDHVB)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Jekyll: *helps move her* *lets the two be*

*wakes*

Ravel: i promised

Snow said...

G2g, bye

Noelle said...

Bye Snow!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*smiles* Good.

Ravel: *slips next to* it is late

Noelle said...

http://anamelessattempttoestablishsomeorder.blogspot.com/2013/12/adrasdos-dark-brotherly-love.html


AYYYY

Fabi if you're still here... :)

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Okay, sorry. Reading if now.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I read it Adra it just is not letting me comment

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Msd falling asleep and i am going to NYC tomorrow

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Okay, Zaf.

Yeah, same. Except not NYC for me.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

We are going to Radio City...meh I'm not sure I rather go see Wicked but....

Well I can go to Times Square and all and i have to legit beg the others besides mom to go to Toys R Us to see it and the giant piano at the other one....and I know we're going to American Girl since my doll's being discontinued and i wanna get her clothes and all i have Molly and Emily, Emily is Molly's Brittish penpal and Molly looks like me. My mom has Julie who is in the 70's i think...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Well what I'm getting at is I mean I rather go other places as I find dancing for an hour kinda hard to watch, but i have no choice

I'm ticked though. Because my stupid uncle doesn't want to go to the Jekyll and Hyde place god forbid I do, so i cant go :/ so i'm upset as i wanted to go and i never go to NYC....

Like i get you have no interest but it doesnt mean i csnt even go see it i love Jekyll and Hyde....

Yeah my family is annoying...maybe i'll find a bookshop heh you cant get me put of those places....

I think mom is scared if Derek came over she'd be scared for me to go i'd never go out

Snow said...

Hope. I seem to be clinging to that word... and I dont know why...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Hmm i ought to sleep! Night everyone!

Snow said...

Hi/bye zaf

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

[Nods] I used to read the American Girl books in third grade, I think it was. Never got any of the dolls, though. I never really played with dolls much...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

My school has Hope day...we wear shirts saying Hope; Be the change

They come in colours and styles

Oopsie sleep yes *hoes

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hope is the thing with feathers

Bye Zaf!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I wasnt sllowed to pkay with them it was for show becausd they were so expensive

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

HOLY MOTHER OF GOD I LOOKED AT MY WINDOW AND SAW A CROW AND IT WAS SCARY

Snow said...

Zaf, sleep.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I AM GONNA OK LOOK IM NOT INSANE I SWEAR TO GOD THAT WAS A CROW LOOKING AT ME

I JUST HAD BEEN THINKING HOW I MISS MYTALKS WITH NIC AND OMG OK NOT COOL THAT IS TOO SCARY

*screams and curls up ttying to sleep

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Goodnight, Zaf.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hello?

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Kay, signing off for the night. See you!

Snow said...

I think my parents are worrying about me... I've been in my room all day and they seem to think somethings wrong.

but I just want to be alone and read...

but thats annoying: when I'm not upset people think I am and when I ak upset no one notices...

Star Inkbright said...

*bounces in*

#ChaseForBookNine

Unknown said...

hiruevhivhfd

Unknown said...

ugh i'm going to visit my grandparents today, so there will be no Emily for about 4 days... I bet that makes you really sad.

Star Inkbright said...

Hi Emily! :(


Aw. :( We'll miss you.

#ChaseForBookNine

Ieni Lorarté-Strider said...

*runs in singing Pirates of The Caribbean*
Such great films!:)

Of course you'll be missed, Emily! Blogland is made Blogland by the people who are here, which is why it changes by gens..
:) Have a fun time! *hugs*

STAR I think if you ever get a boyfriend/girlfriend they should tell you that they're starry-eyed xD (I am hilarious shhhh)

Anonymous said...

Hello?

Star Inkbright said...

@Ieni: *laughs* XD *hugs*

Hey, Ieni, Mith! :) :)

#ChaseForBookNine

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Hullo people! How are you all?

Star Inkbright said...

Hi Rhydian! :)

I'm good. :) Still holidays.

Msd.

#ChaseForBookNine

Anonymous said...

Hey Star! I just saw your mail with the Christmas tree! I can't answer the mail because my e-mail hates me, so it's great that you're here now! THIS TREE IS AWESOME!!! I wish I could do things like that!

Hi leni!

And hi Rhydian! Omg, I love your profile picture! :D

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Hey Starry! Kk!

Ieni! *hugs* That's hilarious!

MITH!!!!!! *tacklehugs* HAVENT SEEN YIU...WHEN WAS THE LAST TIME I SAW YOU? *HUGS* HOW ARE YOU?

Ieni Lorarté-Strider said...

Hey, Mith, Rhy!!:) *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*
I am good, thank you Rhy. Yourself?

BOB THE BUILDER CAN WE FIX IT

It's the Atlantis finale tonight, Starry!! (No, you don't get a say in what I call you before you protest)

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

I'm good Ieni!

Btw I'm called Rhydian Blake now. Just to see if I prefer it.

Anonymous said...

Rhydian, I don't know... too long ago, that's sure! *hugs back*
I'm fine now that I'm on holiday. Because holiday means: spare time!!! :D

Ieni Lorarté-Strider said...

WAIT ISN'T THAT MITH FROM BAVARIA OMG HI MITH (sorry guys she lives nearish to Bamberg and Bamberg is perfect but I don't get to go back there until July 2015 D:)

Loki doki, Rhy!!:) I changed my name quite a lot before I settled with something. And btw, your display picture is v.awesome.

Anonymous said...

Yeah, leni, it is Mith from Bavaria^^
And we don't have snow hereeeeeeee! No White Christmas... ;_;

Ieni Lorarté-Strider said...

Nooooo!!! We didn't have a white Christmas either:/
In History we've just been doing about Weimar Germany and apparently Bavaria used to be really right-wing and something about a revolution-attempt oops I've forgotten everything already:/

Anonymous said...

Um... I have to admit that I don't know much about Bavaria's history...
Sorry...

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

I'm gonna rp, if that's alright with y'all.

Anonymous said...

I'm afraid I gotta go now... It's time for my music lesson.
I might be back later, in two hours or something but I'm not sure about that...
Anyway, see you! *hugs*

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Bye Mith! *hugsies*

Ieni Lorarté-Strider said...

Bye Mith. I g2g also - mum wants me to study:/

Bye Mith, Rhy! *hugs*

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Bye Ieni! *huggles*

I'll do a solo-rp then :P

Luciana said...

...Hello?

Ebony Law said...

Hello, Luciana.

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Hey Aiden!

Hiya Luce!

How are ya both?

Ebony Law said...

Brilliant, Rhydian.

Might I ask, which of these do you think appeals more to the eye?

-I hold out two long barreled pistols, one a sleek, dark metal and the other a lighter silver, with brushed metal-

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Dark one. Definitely.

Well if you excuse me, I have work I need to do. *goes into house and climbs the stairs*

Ebony Law said...

I thought so. It fits well with my blade.

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

*sighs and looks at the work* I can do it later...

Ever: Can you let me out now?

*looks at cupboard* No.

Ever: Why?

Because you are broken. You tried to kill me!

Ever: I'm not broken. I'm real!

You're a reflection. Just a surface copy!

Ever: For God's sake! I'm a human being.

Ebony Law said...

-I pick up a handful of soil in my gloved hands, letting it seep through the cracks of my fingers, down onto the ground-

This soil has seen an age of tyranny, great evil and heroic avails.

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Ever: My name is Ever Sky. And I'm human...

I'm really sorry...but you're not! I'm trying to find a reset symbol for the mirror. You'll be back to normal doon

Ever: No!! You can't just erase me like that!

Sorry, but I don't have a choice!

Ebony Law said...

-dematerialising out of the air, I appear in the house with Rhydian-

Don't erase her.

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

It's a him Aiden...it's my reflection. It's grown. Tried to kill me yesterday! What else am I meant to do? And I can't send it to school like this!

Luciana said...

Sorry for vanishing! My new shirt arrived. ^_^

Ebony Law said...

(Hey Luci. :))

No. With years of experience, a reflection gains more intelligence, and becomes as intelligent as you, and will see things different to what you see. It's important you keep this one. He's something special.

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Ever: Please Rhydian! I don't want to become a copy again! I had no thoughts or emotions. I didn't exist then...Aiden talk to him!

Ebony Law said...

(Hey Luci. :))

No. With years of experience, a reflection gains more intelligence, and becomes as intelligent as you, and will see things different to what you see. It's important you keep this one. He's something special.

Ebony Law said...

(The fuck..)

Rhydian, stop. -a mark tattooed on the back of my hand vaguely glows-

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Ok. Fine! But if it tries to kill me again, or hurt anyone I care about...it's gone!

Ever: let me out now?

*unlocks cupboard*

Ebony Law said...

Rhydian, it gains it's morals from YOU. For whatever reasons it wants to harm another that you think is undeserving, you need to consider the variables.

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Ever: Thank you. About yesterday...I was scared.

Ok. I've got stuff to do anyway.

Ever: What work is this then?

Stuff.

Ever: You're trying to become a teacher aren't you?

So?

Ever: Need help?

Fine....

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

*opens a huge box of chocolates* Sorry.....I don't share chocolate. So, if anybody wants one, you ain't having mine!

Ebony Law said...

I'm pretty sure those chocolates are spiked.

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

Gtg now. BYE!

Noelle said...

(New nameless up!!)

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

((Read it this morning Adra. Going on mc later?))

Noelle said...

(Oh. Hello, by the way. How are you all doing?)

Noelle said...

(Can't- my computer doesn't support it anymore. Too many viruses. I'm at my dad's house anyway do I don't even have that computer with me..)

*Adra emerges from her lab with a cup of hot tea and sits on her swing*

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

((Fine. Dunno if I'm here or not. Yourself?))

Noelle said...

(Alright. A bit bummed that I have so much homework and so little time.)

Luciana said...

ADRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *tacklehugs*

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

((Not sure if I'm here or not...I left coz of silence, then realized nothing was happening in reality either :S))

Lewis Ravenscroft / Rhydian Blake said...

I'll just watch TV. See ya!

Noelle said...

(LUUUUUUUUUUUUUU *hugs*

Bye Rhyd!

Luuuuu could you please read my story??
Because
Now I know you ship it and
Pleaseeeee :3)

Luciana said...

CAN I FINISH THIS CHAPTER OF IMPERFECT FIRST PLEASSSSSSEEEEE?
I will! But not right now. :P


I keep being asked to help people write things, but I need to get a lot of Imp done before I can:P

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Baaaah

Noelle said...

Okayyyyyyyyy :P

Queen Flora Ophelia of the Flowers; Leader of the New Land of Stickers; Prophet of the New Order; General of the Shadow People said...

Hello...?

Anyone still here?

Star Inkbright said...

Might be here.

#ChaseForBookNine

Noelle said...

Floraaaaaaaàaáâäæãåā

Luciana said...

FLORAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA



STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRR

Queen Flora Ophelia of the Flowers; Leader of the New Land of Stickers; Prophet of the New Order; General of the Shadow People said...

HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY LOVELIES!

How are you all?

Queen Flora Ophelia of the Flowers; Leader of the New Land of Stickers; Prophet of the New Order; General of the Shadow People said...
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Noelle said...

I've got a really bad stitch in my side

Thank you asthma

Queen Flora Ophelia of the Flowers; Leader of the New Land of Stickers; Prophet of the New Order; General of the Shadow People said...

Woooo, asthma buddies *high fives, though is unsure that is something to high five about*

Noelle said...

No... *Sticks face into a jar*

Luciana said...

Adra - e-mail me what you've written? I'll read it now?:)


GUYS IS THIS OKAY BECAUSE IDK IT'S ANNOYING ME:

It’s only when I step outside that I realise how much my muscles ache from doing so much sport, and how dizzy I feel. Though, I don’t mention any of it, because it’s rather normal for me.
As we walk, Theo goes back to the conversation we were having in English Literature about the manuscript I’ve written: “Please can I read it?! I’m sure you’re an amazing writer!”
“It’s terrible, no!”
“Please! I bet it’s awesome!”
“Nope. You’re not reading it, especially because I’m scared you’ll hate it.”
“Why would I hate it…?”
“I don’t know. I’m just sure you will. It’s crap.”
“You’re a turnip.”
“I’m a what…?”
“A turnip. Type of vegetable. The funniest type of vegetable, actually. And you’re funny, especially with how you think your book is terrible when it’s probably amazing. Therefore, you are a turnip.” He nods at me, as though he’s proud and plasters a smug grin across his face, bringing laughter from my mouth the way Quinn always used to.
Despite saying that I wouldn’t, I pull my hoodie out of my bag as we walk home, because I’m shivering too much to be normal, and pull it over my head as I continue to walk.
“Are you sure you’re not cold…?” Theo frowns, as I continue to tremble. “Your skin is paler than it was earlier. Are you-?”
Before he can even finish his sentence, my legs buckle from beneath me, and I’m lying face-down on the pavement, which slowly changes into a pit of darkness which continues to engulf me until I’m too far gone to ever be reached.

Queen Flora Ophelia of the Flowers; Leader of the New Land of Stickers; Prophet of the New Order; General of the Shadow People said...

I think the last sentence could be changed - two 'which's is too many. maybe split it into two sentences after pavement?

Other than that it's really good :)

Luciana said...

THANK YOU FLORA. I knew it was doing my head in for some reason...!


And that's a short chapter... Might add it to the previous one...!

Noelle said...

Well I'm certainly interested... Did she faint because of the workout, or...?
Heh. Turnip. Is that the first time it was used as a nickname?
I thought it was good!

Queen Flora Ophelia of the Flowers; Leader of the New Land of Stickers; Prophet of the New Order; General of the Shadow People said...

Ooo, also if you use 'which' in context like that, a comma should always come before it :)


and no worries, here to help!

Star Inkbright said...

@Mushroom: It's awesome. :) :) *hugs*

Sorry, I'm distant . . .

#ChaseForBookNine

Luciana said...

She's anorexic, Adra, and because she's getting worse and worse with it, but continues to do things such as running and cheerleading, she collapsed. :)
And, yes, that's where the turnip thing starts, and it continues on in the rest of the story. :3

I thought it did, Flora! Thank you. c:


Thank you Star, *hugs*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Sorry distant I had to shower and dress and now im in line to dry my hair i mean my mom takes forever

Queen Flora Ophelia of the Flowers; Leader of the New Land of Stickers; Prophet of the New Order; General of the Shadow People said...

Need to go, lunchies!
Shall be back later! <3

Luciana said...

Bye Flora! *hugs*

Noelle said...

Okay Star-

Ahhhh I see. *nods* Well, that makes more sense, then. *whispers* I sent you the email

Luciana said...

I replied, Adraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Noelle said...

Oh. You sent one back

Noelle said...

Yeah :p

Luciana said...

CRAP

Luciana said...

I didn't realise we were close to first! DAMNIT.

I need to stay to try to get it next. XD

Noelle said...

Okay...
I'd like to dedicate to.... My da's little silver lab puppy. And to finishing these damn books for my English class. UGH.

Ja.

AND TO EACH AND EVERY MEMBER OF THE BL BECAUSE YOU ALL ARE EQUALLY FANTASTIC AND AMAZING

Noelle said...

*raises glass*

Luciana said...

YAY FOR DED!

Star Inkbright said...

Hear hear! :)

Sorry, I'm not really here. :/

#ChaseForBookNine

Noelle said...

That's okay Star *hugglebubbles*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*raises glass*

Adra I'd spark note the books if its getting tedious, I still can't believe you get this much work over break. Do they grade you on it at least?

Star Inkbright said...

@Mushroom: Imperfect sounds amazing. :)

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Luciana said...

Thank you, Star. :) I hope it'll end up being amazing...

Noelle said...

Er, we aren't supposed to use sparks notes, and they do grade our annotations. I have to make each page have writing all over it and be colourful, else I might fail it... It's going well so far, and the chapters are only four to five pages each...

I'm not sure about a Farewell to Arms, though.

But my Honors American Lit class starts after break, so I have to read two books...
*facepalm*

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hello. I'm gonna regret being up this early, but I can't go back to sleep at this point, either

Noelle said...

Fabi!!! *hugs*

Luciana said...

Hey Fabi! *hugs*

Star Inkbright said...

Hey Lantern! :)

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Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hi Adra, Lucy. [hugs]

Hm. I should probably try to be efficient so Mom hopefully doesn't go into full panic mode when she wakes up. Wbd/msd.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

Hi Star [hugs]

Noelle said...

Okay...


Yummy. Beignets.

Haiwgemsoznsjsuawvw

Star Inkbright said...

My thoughts decided to go clash, but I'm not really affected because my mood just decided it was kind of amusing and now I'm happy. :)

How is everyone?

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Star Inkbright said...

I think my mood and my thoughts must have fallen out, because seriously, they're paying very little attention to each other. :)

I'm sort of sitting here half-laughing now.

Fun. :)

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Noelle said...

I'm annotating, and okay, you??

Well.
Nevermind you just said didn't you..

Star Inkbright said...

AHAHAHAHA that might be where the disconnected feeling and ideking comes from. :)

This makes sense now, maybe. :)

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Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

I love beignets. :-)

Dad went to New Orleans once and he brought back some mix, and would make them on Sundays for a while. Haven't had them in eons. D:
I'm... Not sure how I am, actually. Huh.

Star Inkbright said...

@Adra Good luck with your annotating. :) :) *encouragingness*

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Star Inkbright said...

I don't know what beignets are . . . :

@Lantern: Well, if you're not sure, then that's better than being sure you feel bad, isn't it? :)

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Star Inkbright said...

(BUT SERIOUSLY, THIS DISCONNECTED FEELING I'VE BEEN OCCASIONALLY GETTING HAS BEEN ANNOYING THE HECK OUT OF ME. ALL OF A SUDDEN, I'LL JUST FEEL . . . DISCONNECTED, AND I JUST DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYMORE, AND I KNOW I NEVER KNOW BUT I JUST FEEL LIKE I DON'T KNOW, AND REALITY CAN JUST SEEM KIND OF DISTANT, EXCEPT IT'S STILL HERE AND HAPPENING, I JUST FEEL ODD.
And now I think I know where it comes from; it's probably from not knowing how I feel. *nods* Maybe.
Perhaps.
Just a theory.
It's like, I think something, and then I feel 'this' about that, and I sort of get the 'this' thoughts, but I just don't feel that way, and I'm just like what the fuck, because I do FEEL that way, but then I'm just smiling or whatever as if my mood is paying not attention to what it should be doing at all, and MAYBE I feel disconnected because I would feel 'this' - a mild 'this' - and then I don't, and then my brain is telling me there's something missing, something not connected, but obviously I don't know what it is and I just look around and I feel odd and disjointed and just don't really know, and don't really know what I think or how I feel, and MAYBE NOW I KNOW WHY IT'LL STOP BUGGING ME. :) :)

It hasn't been going on that long, though, so it might have disappeared sooner or later.)

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Star Inkbright said...

Msd - might start reading. :)

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Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

They're this fried pastry thingy dusted with powdered sugar. Idk if there's a British version.

I suppose so.

Fabi S. - Fashion-Conscious Fire Wraith said...

It's still six, I can't think about anything involving emotions until seven. Sorry.

And okay.

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