Saturday, February 16, 2013

Up For Air

84,726 words.

And that's the PLOT written.

Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.

Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.

Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.

If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.


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Luciana said...

ZELDA MUSIC IS SO PRETTY O_O

Unknown said...

I have to go to bed now, so night! :) *hugs everyone*

*teleports to bed with just-been-synced iPod which now has OWOA/TK on it :3

Unknown said...

* :3*

Willow Von Stratton said...

bye Mara...Zelda music is alright

Luciana said...

ALSO,

KANSAS ARE BEAUTIFUL

Once I rose above the noise and confusionnnnnn

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*sits in tree*

Willow Von Stratton said...

is kansas a band?

*waves* hi Zaf!

Star Inkbright said...

Worry.

It entombs us.

People say that people do all kinds of things for love, but a lot of that is also because of worry. You worry about the people you love, so you do all kinds of things. Worry is a horrible thing. Worry can drive people to insanity. Worry kills people. People kill themselves because they're worried of others disliking them, people get killed because other people worry about their actions and want them gone so they don't have to worry about them. Fear is worry is many ways. We all know fear can drive people insane; that's worry driving you insane, because you're worried what you fear will come to pass. Your fear is worry.
Worry is forever there in your head. It's an unwelcome passenger. You want to be rid of it, but it just won't leave, and you're sick of it and you hate it and it makes you want to scream and cry because of it. You want to relax, but you can't, because worry's there. You can't get the worry out of your head. Worry stops you enjoying yourself and laughing, and that's evil. It steals happiness. It destroys love and friendship. Suspicions, doubts . . . they're worry too.

Worry is evil.

Worry also is a part of sin. Sorry to go all religious on you, but before they ate the fruit, Adam and Eve were happy and happy and blah. Then afterwards, they saw they were naked, and they were ashamed - why? Because they were worried about what people would think when they saw they were naked. They hid from God because they were embarrased - because they were worried about what he would think of them.

Worry is evil. Worry is wicked. Worry is sin.

Sam from Gone had all those things he had to do weighing on his mind, so he almost had a nervous breakdown. Because of worry. People died, because he wasn't there, because of worry.
Anorexia's worry. I don't have to explain why anorexia's bad.
Dekka was worried about Brianna. That caused pain for both of them. Especially Dekka.
Astrid was worried about the fact she needed to be good and keep things together and stop the world collapsing on them (uh, metaphorically), so she lied and she became a horrible person and she caused loadsa pain for herself.
Tons of kids got sent to Coates because of their parents' worry.
Sorry, Gone's just the most depressing book series I know. :P

Valkyrie got her true name protected because she was worried about someone controlling her and making her become Darquesse. Therefore Nye almost killed her and she DID become Darquesse.
Kenspeckle had recurring nightmares about vampires because he was worried about them.
Ghastly got given a job he didn't like because worry for Tanith.
Serpine created tons of plans, tons of schemes, because he was worried some might go wrong and he wanted back-up. Then as Skulduggery said, they all cancelled each other out. He made himself a zombie because he was worried about dying, and therefore got himself disintigrated by the Sceptre.
All the Teleporters save Fletcher got killed because Baron Vangeous was worried abou them.
China was eaten up from the inside (METAPHOR) about SKulduggery finding out she'd killed his family, which equalled pain for her.
Remus Crux went half-insane before his encounter with the Faceless One because he was so worried about losing his job. He wanted to sort out the conspiracy, get something right, because worry. He arrested all the wrong people because he was worried about them.
People have often tried to eliminate Skulduggery and Valkyrie because they're worried about them and what they might do.
Skulduggery got away with his rescue pretending he had a bomb and a remote that controlled it because he played on the bad guy's worry. They were worried about dying.

And now, I have some songs for you. I know, I know. But I'll put them in the next comment. ;)

Melica Frost said...

Im back!

Luciana said...

I USED THIS NEW SHAMPOO THIS MORNING AND MY HAIR IS RIDICULOUSLY SOFT, NOW

Pokemon, gonna catch em allllllllll

Melica Frost said...

Really?!? Awesome!
I used the last of this shampoo this morning and now my hair smells nice! :D

Willow Von Stratton said...

hey Mel!

And soft hair is awesome

Melica Frost said...

I would say hello but I actually have to leave now so bye bye!

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

HI PEOPLE.

Willow Von Stratton said...

Bye Mel and Hi Val

Star Inkbright said...

Curses, by Bullet For My Valentine:

(It's about wanting to reverse time, go back to the good old days. I know the sentiment . . . And also, at the chorus . . . We can't understand our minds, they're big and confusing and muddle us. Our minds are evil and work against us. Worry is part of that evility.)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LoxnRWu6L_Y&list=PLTslNdjmKxFvEDeBs51KyDH2OKJVPfqXh&index=4

We've waited far too long too
Watch it all crash and fall through
So when you feel like shit you've gotta keep on pushin'
If you saw the world through my eyes
Then you wouldn't feel so high rise
It's time to take our chance
You gotta sit back and hold tight

There's forces workin' in our heads but we don't understand them
I need a map to find my way out all the time
There's curses lurking in our head but we don't want to find them
We need to come back down and face what we've become
WE'VE BECOME!

The more I think the more I wish I
Could push stop and then hit rewind
What I would give to have a day back then when no one really cares
I remember when we all used to
Kick back take days off school
So many times I've smiled
So many times I've cried but never did we try
Never did we TRY!!!

BECAUSE!
There's forces workin' in our heads but we don't understand them
I need a map to find my way out all the time
There's curses lurking in our head but we don't want to find them
We need to come back down and face what we've become
It's haunting me!
I'm so alone!
I'm just trying to find my way back home!
I'm so alone!
ALONE!!!

There's forces workin' in our heads but we don't understand them
I need a map to find my way out all the time
There's curses lurking in our head but we don't want to find them
We need to come back down and face what we've beCOME!!!!

Argh, the comment's too long for even one more song . . .

Star Inkbright said...

Next up, One Direction! XD I Should've Kissed You:

(He's going out of his mind with wory because he thinks he did the wrong thing and he wants to know what does hse think God is it okay no I did it all wrong I should've kissed her oh why can't I go back in time argh how does she feel does she like me is it okay will it turn out all right I'm so sorry. Worry. Horrible mind-numbing worry. *nods*)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LB3aCwTj8mU&list=PLTslNdjmKxFsXz2LntpGvF068LBkU1PxW&index=18

I keep playin' it inside my head
All that you said to me
I lie awake just to convince myself
This wasn't just a dream
Coz you were RIGHT HERE and I've should've taken the chance
But I got SO SCARED and I lost the moment again

It's all that I can think about!
Oh!
You're all that I can think about!

Is your heart taken?
Is there somebody else on your mind?
I'm so sorry
I'm so confused
Just tell me
Am I out of time?
Is your heart breaking?
I'm so sorry I let you down
I can't believe I let you walk away when
When I should've kissed you

I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!

Every morning when I leave my house
I always look for you (yeah)
I see you every time I close my eyes
What am I gonna do?
And all my FRIENDS SAY that I'm puchin' over my wieght
But in YOUR EYES I saw how you were lookin' at me

It's all that I can think about!
Oh!
YOu're all I can think about!

Is your heart taken?
Is there somebody else on your mind?
I'm so sorry
I'm so confused
Just tell me
Am I out of time?
Is your heart breaking?
I'm so sorry I let you down
I can't believe I let you walk away when
When I should've kissed you

I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!

When you stood there
Just a heartbeat away
When we were dancin'
And you looked up at me
If I had known then
That I would be feelin' this way
If I could replay
I would've never let you go . . .
No oh . . .
Never let you go . . .
Am I out of time?

Is your heart taken?
Is there somebody else on your mind?
I'm so sorry
I'm so confused
Just tell me
Am I out of time?
Is your heart breaking?
I'm so sorry I let you down
I can't believe I let you walk away when
When I should've kissed you

I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda!
I shoulda!
Oh!
I shoulda kissed you!
I shoulda kissed you!

Star Inkbright said...

Just Stop by Disturbed:

("About a situation where your other half is always trying to come up with reasons to argue with you and you are constantly apologizing, and constantly asking for forgiveness, over and over again, and the frustration that comes with it. The song is asking "that person" to just stop."

The voice in your head, your worry, is constantly preventing you from relaxing and enjoying yoursef. :( )

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgNxN_8Md0s&list=PLTslNdjmKxFtyDjXNSMNesm8F-RgBg0Av&index=26

Just stop
Enough of the limitless critical comments
On my life
Just drop
The judgment and all of your pseudo-involvement
In my life

Step back
A moment, and look at the miracle started
In our life
Don't stop
The moment, and let the incredible happen
Knowing that

All that you want is to criticize
Something for nothing
And all that I want, is forgiveness one more time
To be the best in the world!

Just stop
With all your little deliberate problems
With my life
Enough
Of all of the crippling terrible pain
We feel inside
Step back
A moment, remember how the miracle started
In our life
Take back
The torment, I won't be enjoying this moment
Knowing that

All that you want is to criticize
Something for nothing
And all that I want, is forgiveness one more time
I know that all that we want is to feel inside
Some kind of comfort
And all that we've done we can't hide
We'll be the best in the world!

All I ever wanted was to be a real source of
Compassion for the moment, that we find ourselves drowning in
All I ever wanted was to be a real source of
Compassion for the moment, that we find ourselves drowning in

All that you want is to criticize
Something for nothing
And all that I want, is forgiveness one more time
I know that all that we want is to feel inside
Some kind of comfort
And all that we've done we can't hide
We'll be the best in the world!
We'll be the best in the world!

Just stop
Enough of the limitless critical comments
On my life
Just drop
The judgment and all of your pseudo-involvement
In my life! . . .

--------

ANd I don't have deds, but I can bloody make a speech anyways. :)

Star Inkbright said...

And that took me an hour and now it's bedtime coz school tomorrow and argh . . .

Msd.

Unknown said...

Heyy people

Star Inkbright said...

I didn't delibratly get a sing from each playlist, those were just the songs that sprang to mind . . .

Anyway, my mission is now fulfilled. *nods*

Star Inkbright said...

*song

Star Inkbright said...

HI KALEB!

Unknown said...

Hey star. Have U found out way the new book is called

Star Inkbright said...

No. :(

We're waiting for Derek to blog and tell us. :)

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Hello again! Sorry for disappearing...

Willow Von Stratton said...

WB Val

Star Inkbright said...

WB IVY!

HI WILLOW!

Willow Von Stratton said...

hi Star! if I don't respond fast it's because I'm also crocheting

Anonymous said...

Hi...

Anonymous said...

Hi! Sorry, Aunt Dee decided to come back for "five minutes," and it ended up being almost an hour.

Willow Von Stratton said...

understandable Fabi..ughhh facebook is so annoying me right now

Anonymous said...

Sorry to hear that, Willow, and hi!

Willow Von Stratton said...

hi to you to! i might respond late I'm doing other stuff also...hmmm i wonder what derek's way would be to kill a zombie I'd ask on here but I doubt he'd respond

Anonymous said...

It's actually possible. He's usually up at this hour. Then again, I don't think there are enough people on and annoying him.

And I'm multi-tasking, too, so it's ok.

Willow Von Stratton said...

well i know he answers on twitter...man everyone is hooking up with people except me lol

Anonymous said...

Yeah, he's going on twitter less often, though. Also, he's probably bombarded by questions! Worth a try, though.

And "what is popular is not always the right path" --some poster or other.

Anonymous said...

From this point on, I may or may not be here. I keep getting interrupted. :-|

Willow Von Stratton said...

same here

well i shud ask on twitter anyway..i like knowing how people would kill zombies :p

Anonymous said...

I would try to decapitate them with my sword. [Nods]

Unless they were pierced zombies, with earrings and nose rings and stuff. Then I'd turn their piercings super-hot, and then try to decapitate them while they're distracted.

My power is metal.

Willow Von Stratton said...

I would do the good ol classix chainsaw, i have a weird humor when it comes to zombies hehe. Have you seen Zomblieland? It's pretty good

Anonymous said...

I've seen ||==-==-/|||||-|~|||=_|||/||==|||~||==| zombie movies.

Apparently I've seen too many, though.

How is that supposed to work?

Willow Von Stratton said...

For now, I shall be going! The Walking Dead is coming on, but I might be on later. So bye for the time being!

Anonymous said...

=|||||~|!

Bye!

Oh, dear. I'm talking in code, again.

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Anonymous said...

||=_|||||:|=|||=_-||==|||--|||=_|~||==||||~|||=_:|=_-||||=|:=_|||=_-|||-|||-|||||:|==||==||||~|~|||=_||==|~|||>

O.O
Did I just say that? I never use that word... I guess that's why it came out in code... I was complaining about the Internet connection. When I get home, I will not complain about the Internet for weeks. It isn't that bad, after all.

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Anonymous said...

Okay, I'm *probably* going to sleep now, night!

And of course someone will come on right after I leave... [Sigh]

[Trudges off to bed]

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

You're right Fabi, I did come on just after you left *rolls eyes* Sleep well :)

Anonymous said...

Hi Saph! [hugs]

And I'll try! Jet lag, and all that. :-|

I'm here for maybe 5 minutes, yell at me if I stay longer, but I really need to talk to someone who doesn't go on and on about "Look how you've grown! And you do ballet! And play the flute! And you're taller than I am! Oh, I remember when you were six and vomited on Stevie's shoes!"

Anonymous said...

And I actually inescapably have to go this time...:-(

Why can't I be back home, where it isn't sleepy time yet???

Night!

[Laughs in advance as you come on again just as I leave]

Jophiel said...

Ah, damn you Fabi...

Willow Von Stratton said...

lol, night Fabi...and hi death!

Jophiel said...

*Is depressed*
I... missed... Eden... again...

Jophiel said...

Hi Willow!!!1

Willow Von Stratton said...

Eden was on?!

Jophiel said...

Yeah, just over an hour ago...
*Sits on tree branch and cries*

Willow Von Stratton said...

Damn, gotta go, bye for now!

Jophiel said...

Bye...

Willow Von Stratton said...

oh and don't worry, you'll speak to Eden again soon!

Anonymous said...

What'd I do now?
[Sighs]
[Puts iPod under suitcase to avoid getting it out and being here more]
[Realizes iPod needs to charge]
[Gets iPod back out to plug it in, and finds Blogland again]
[Nods at Willow and Death]
I'm really not supposed to be here. If you ignore me, I'll be gone in a few minutes... That was a rhetorical question at the top, I guess.

[Is sharing room with sister today, stealthily commenting under the covers isn't really an option. She's a tattletale, and I ran out of jelly beans to bribe her with]

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

I want to ignore you Fabi so that you can pack and stuff, but it's hard :(
Hi Death and Willow! *hugs everyone, including Fabi* Wow, I need to be on this more :) Msd, dinner soon

MonsterMouse said...

ALL THE JOKES! MORE AND MORE AND MORE!

Jophiel said...

Hi! Sorry, was reading about Santa being a teleporter...

Anonymous said...

==-||=_||== it all!!!

Friends upset, and what can I =||=|~|~|||-|==||==|= do about it???

I'm sorry to say, Eden was on more like 12 hours ago.

[Bops self on head with the baggie of watermelon jelly beans that nobody likes] ==-||=_||=_|==||||! I was supposed to keep him busy with something-or-other until you showed up! [Bops self again]

I never curse, not even in code...

And yes, you should be here more, Saph! [hugs] It's not packing, it's sleeping. I'd usually hide my iPod under the bed so I can't get at it, but there is no under the bed here...

I found some chocolate cake, so I have until Neli finishes eating it...msd.

Jophiel said...

Hi! I'm extraordinarily hungry. I need food. I want food. The only condition is, I have to change outta my school uniform. I can't be stuffed changing. I'm in my room, my clothes are knee deep but the real problem is this:...









My feet are dead... THEY ARE ASLEEP!!!

Jophiel said...

Fabi, it's okay... I'm just... uck...

Okay, I'm getting some type of food... My stomach feels as if it is burning!

Anonymous said...

Santa Claus is teleporting to town. [Nods]

Jophiel said...

Ah! He was... Still... I hate it when I miss him...

I miss the way we were at the Requiem Ball...
*Sighs unhappily*

Anonymous said...

[Hugs Death] Happy eating. Sorry about the uck.

Anonymous said...
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Anonymous said...

[Sings]

The storm is coming but I don't mind
People are dying, I close my blinds
All that I know is I'm breathing now

I want to change the world, instead I sleep
I want to believe in more than what I see

But all that I know is I'm breathing
All I can do is keep breathing
All we can do is keep breathing now
Now, now, now

All that I know is I'm breathing
All I can do is keep breathing
All we can do is keep breathing

All we can do is keep breathing
All we can do is keep breathing
All we can do is keep breathing
All we can do is keep breathing

[Stops singing]
I want to change the world, instead I sleep.
Night...

Jophiel said...

Night Fabi!!!

*Has decided that money is needed for McDonalds*
*Attempts to find money*
*Gives up*
OH WAIT! HOW ABOUT IN THE-
*Remembers money from secret spot is gone*
Aw, hell!
*Begs older brother for money*
*Older brother doesn't listen*
*Looks at empty wallet*
Maybe if I wish really hard...?
*Still no money*

Jophiel said...

Okay, I will be distant....

Writing stuff!

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Hey, any awesome people on?

Jophiel said...

I am... Kinda...

Jophiel said...

But I ain't awesome

Jophiel said...

*Is hungry again*
Dinner is in an hour, I'm not allowed to eat, I have food from many months ago hidden under my bed in a bag, I'm starving... What should I do?

Jophiel said...

*Is feeling very lonely*

I'm going to continue writing for the HGC... If you want me (which I highly doubt), put a beacon up

Lavender Hope said...

Finally wifi's working!

Aaand I got an hour...

Jophiel said...

Name and Occupation
- Taken Name: Zathract Mist
- Pronunciation of the Name: Zath-ract Mist
- Given Name: Jake Mansion
- Pronunciation of the Name: Jake Mansion
- Character Job: Detective at the Australian Sanctuary [Not Prime Detective]
- Titles: N/A [None]

Character Mentality
- Character Personality: Zathract is relatively cheerful, though is very determined when it comes to a case. He generally despises anyone with evil or intentionally harmful intentions and sees himself as one of the people to stop them. He feels the need to stop these people due to multiple people he had known in the past being murdered in front of him.
Zathract will tell an occasional joke but mostly sticks to whatever topic he and whoever else are discussing.
- Character Likes: A good battle, his knives, people who aren't annoying, the darkness, rain
- Character Dislikes: Lack of sleep, criminals, people who are annoying
- Mental Traits: Zathract is unusually observant and is also a good strategist when he wants to be. He'll notice things out of the ordinary and tiny details that others would completely overlook. Zathract can also pick apart fighting styles, though only when he really has time to concentrate.
He was also once completely insane, and also a serial killer which followed extreme an extreme mental breakdown when his sister was murdered [Elaborated in Bio]. This is not known to anyone and Zathract is now recovered.

Nationality and Allegiance
- Race and Nationality: Human, Australian
- Allegiance: Good [3]
- Reasons for Allegiance: Because of past experiences of loved ones being murdered in front of him [will be elaborated on in bio]

Relationships
- Allies: Nixion Strange, Slayn Redeem, Vai Melt
- Enemies: Nagier, Jack Rank, Criminals in general
- Family: Jargon Darkshade, Heather Emancipate, Lily Spire [ALL DECEASED]
- Friends: Nixion Strange
- Significant Other: N/A [Nope]

Character Age
- True Age: 15
- Appearance Age: 15
- Character Birthday: 9/8/97

Character Appearance
- Character Skin Colour/Ethnicity: White skin with a light tan
- Character Height: 168cm
- Character Weight: 63kg
- Character Hair Colour: Black hair. Straight and thick.
- Character Hair Length/ Style: Long, shoulder length. Covers ears, parted for face.
- Character Eye Colour: Emerald.
- Character Description: A fairly average build for a 15 year old with stronger arm and leg muscles.
- Character Attire: Zathract wear black pants and a black jacket with black boots, all made by an Australian tailor, Kassd None. These clothes are protective, and will shield Zathract from almost all physical harm that comes into contact with them. He wears a simple black shirt (non-protective). Zathract also has black gloves that he wears at almost all times. These gloves house his Necromancy. Occasionally, Zathract will wear shades, but not often, even though he carries them around at all times.

Habits and Mannerisms
- Character Voice: Zathract’s voice is deep and mostly flat, though not so much so that it will be a lasting memorable trait.
- Speech Traits: [N/A]
- Habits: Zathract will crack his knuckles every once in a while for no reason at all. He doesn’t cliché and crack them before a fight either.
- Mannerisms: Out of the four elements he can influence, he prefers to use fire when he begins a battle.

Weapons, Equipment and Artifacts
- Large Equipment: [N/A]
- Small Equipment: Padlock on a chain around his neck.
- Pocket Items: Loose change when he has it, phone and shades
- Ammunition: It varies as sometimes Zathract needs to use his pistol a lot, but usually four to five magazines.
- Weaponry: Two onyx-hilted knives and a pistol.
- Magical Equipment/Artifacts: Necromancy housed in gloves (if this needs to be listed)
- Other: Zathract owns a large apartment with more room than he needs.

Lavender Hope said...

You still here, Death?

Lavender Hope said...

Oh. Haha, right when I asked.

Hi!

Jophiel said...

Magic and Abilities
- Magic: Zathract is mainly an elemental, but has basic training in Necromancy.
- Specialization: Flame
- Immersion Metamorphosis: [N/A]
- Ability Specific Info: Gloves
- Signature Ability: Channelling his Necromancy abilities through his elemental powers, creating flames of darkness.
- Strengths: Has the power of a Necromancy attack and an open flame. Twice as powerful and with both the effects.
- Weaknesses: Is as easy to defend against as any other attack and takes more energy out of Zathract than usual.
- Training: He used this technique first completely by accident after having shortly learnt basic Necromancy. Zathract intended to summon a flame while his mind was also on Necromancy. Afterwards, he continued to perfect the ability.

Goals, Motivation and History
- Major Goal: To imprison as many criminals as he can.
- Minor Goals: Solve whatever cases he’s working on.
- Reasoning behind goal: Because of loved ones being murdered in front of him in his past [again, elaborated on in Bio].
- Motivation: The memory of why he’s actually doing this (see Reasoning Behind ^)

Lavender Hope said...

Ugh. Never mind. Sorry. Gotta go. *mumbles* just my luck...

Bye.

Jophiel said...

- Bio: Zathract’s family were all magic and stretched back a long way. They weren’t well known, but then that didn’t exactly matter. He was bought up like a normal child under the circumstances he was living in, which were fairly good, but his parents, Jargon Darkshade and Heather Emancipate, were both murdered when Zathract was seven.

By that time, he had already taken a name and begun to learn Elemental Magic. He witnessed the entire thing from the protection of the back of a couch. He saw a man summon shadows and spear his mother through her throat. He saw the man call a wave of darkness to his aid and drown his father it its depths. He saw the man take a small vial of pale liquid, and saw the man run off again, leaving a terrified Zathract behind. He burned the house down as well.

Zathract and his sister, Lily, escaped the scene before any of the mortal authorities arrived and ended up living in an abandoned alleyway – unwilling to devote themselves to the mortal world and unable to find a sorcerer anywhere. Zathract kept them alive by breaking into people’s houses and scavenging food for both of them.

Finally, one day, a man came for them. He made them an offer to work for him for a short period of time in exchange for the information of who killed their parents. They accepted after a debate about it. This man sent Zathract on a mission to retrieve an object with magical properties powerful enough to heal the man who apparently had been injured almost beyond repair in the war. Zathract retrieved this and returned to the headquarters the man had had.

Jophiel said...

True to his word, the man healed himself with this object and told them that he was the person who had killed his parents. Naturally, Zathract and Lily attempted to kill him. In the struggle, however, Lily was killed, and Zathract’s mind snapped. Insanity lent him power and rage and darkness overwhelmed him, and Zathract murdered the man before then proceeding to seek revenge on the world, now utterly without any real mind at all.
For a few years, he was what Nixion was; an insane murderer. His anger and rage and darkness consumed him. Because he was still only a child, Zathract wasn’t a very good killer at first. But his body quickly attuned to the way of living insanity bought and he had no conscious anymore to judge what was right from wrong.
After his fuel and rage was finally burned up, Zathract eventually regained control of himself. But during the time that he was an insane murderer, his anger and rage had grown and thrived, and regaining control was not something so simple. He had too much rage and darkness inside his body and mind to contain with anything else.
So all of it was expelled from his body and reformed into a different being and manifested into something identical to Zathract. With, uh, red eyes. Because red eyes are awesome.

Zathract, after killing Nagier, set off to find someone who could seal his True Name. He eventually did, and swore to pay the person in cash when he got a job. From there, he found some which took him to the Australian Sanctuary where he applied for a job. When he was asked what kind of job he wanted, he responded with ‘anything that would help people’. The interviewer wanted to give him a job as a cleaner, but someone else took over and ended up applying Zathract for a suggestion in Detective work. A few years of training bought Zathract excellent detective skills and he was eventually given the job.
Now a detective, Zathract spent his time solving small murders and robberies involving sorcerers at first. But he quickly begun to find a series of murders in the same general area with patterns of messiness and no effort to hide the body. Zathract eventually begun to track the killer and discovered he was a fifteen year old boy. The next thing he discovered was that he was also clearly insane, much the same he had been. His tracking and investigation led him from murder to murder until he actually found the boy killing someone. He managed to arrest the boy and took him to the Sanctuary. By the time they’d arrived, however, Zathract had decided that instead of subjecting the boy to prison, he’d attempt to find the boy’s sanity and to clear his name. After all, insanity wasn’t even something he could control, so who knew what this boy had been through?

Jophiel said...

It took a little while, but the healers managed to reverse the effects on the boy’s brain, and Zathract learnt that his name was Nixion Strange. Nixion was an adept, forced into insanity through torture and illegal liquids, and while he was no longer a serial killer, he shared a distaste for practically everything, including Zathract. Despite this, Zathract worked to clear Nixion’s name in court and finally succeeded. After that, Zathract was bumped a bit to a higher position of detective work in the Sanctuary, though still not Prime Detective. And despite Nixion’s disliking Zathract, they became friends of sorts following that.

- Additional Notes: This new being is called Nagier. Nagier is a different being, the manifestation of all of Zathract's old rage and evil and hate. So Nagier is the evil criminal and Zathract is now someone who is actually nice and actually cheerful – for almost all of his rage is now contained inside Nagier. Because of that, these days Zathract is rarely enraged.

But now, because the two are different beings, they are still linked. They may be separate entities, but are still apart of something that was once joined. So when Zathract managed to kill Nagier, he was revived, anchored to Zathract still being alive.
If Zathract dies, a similar thing will happen. This is not something that is completely overpowered, and there is some sort of limit to how the revival process works, but neither have actually worked out what that is yet.

Another thing. When Nagier was transferred into a separate entity, he took all the things that Zathract knew and more. Because he is all the rage that Zathract had once had, that means that Nagier was also Zathract's subconscious before he went insane and lost himself to the rage. So now, Nagier knows Zathract's True Name, because Nagier was Zathract's subconscious, which is where his True Name was. When being transferred into his own entity, Nagier took not just the knowledge, but also the power of someone with their sealed True Name.

And now, because Nagier is a completely different person - however linked they may be - he has a True Name of his own too. He doesn't know his True Name, though. So Nagier has the power of someone who has found their True Name, and has yet to find his own True Name.
Apologies for going on about Nagier, but I felt I had to make that clear.

Jophiel said...

*Has no idea how that was found*
*Sees Lav's comments*
NO! Aw... Bye!!

Luciana said...

MORNINGGGGGGG

Jophiel said...

Morning Lucy!!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hullo. :)

Jophiel said...

*Grimaces*
Ugh... Sorry! I was busy...

And now I'm gone... BYE!!!!!!!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE DEATH!

Anonymous said...

Metal. That is all.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I have done a new MC chapter

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Woah, I just had a crazy dream. I smacked a Hogwarts teacher in the head with a chair.


They deserved it, though.

Willow Von Stratton said...

Lol, Hey Val! Which teacher was it?

Star Inkbright said...

There goes my valentine again
Soaked in red for what she said . . .
Abd now SHE'S GONE!

Oh my God, have I done it AGAIN!?
THERE'S A PULSE AND IT'S DEAFENING!
I can't help what I hear in my HEAD!
It's the switch that I flick, they said . . .

HAND OF BLOOD!
I don't wanna see
My heart is breaking
HAND OF BLOOD!
I don't wanna feel
My life is burning . . .

I saw you look away!
Is what you've seen too much to take?
Or are you blind and seeing nothing?
I SAW YOU RUN!
I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take?
Or are you scared of BEING NOTHING?

There's a stain on my hand and it's RED!
OH MY GOD, AM I LOSING IT?
I can't help what I've done or I've SAID!
It's the button I push, they said . . .

HAND OF BLOOD!
I don't wanna see
My heart is breaking
HAND OF BLOOD!
I don't wanna feel
My life is burning . . .

I saw you look away!
Is what you've seen too much to take?
Or are you blind and seeing nothing?
I SAW YOU RUN!
I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take?
Or are you scared of BEING NOTHING?

*INSTRUMENTAL*

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

HAND OF BLOOD!
I don't wanna see
My heart is breaking
HAND OF BLOOD!
I don't wanna feel
My life is burning . . .

I saw you look away!
Is what you've seen too much to take?
Or are you blind and seeing nothing?
I SAW YOU RUN!
I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take?
Or are you scared of BEING NOTHING?

----------

Meh, that Hand of Blood's so sad and depressing but very brilliant. :/

Does anybody feel sorry for the person in the song? Because I didn't. And I don't, really. Because, y'know, he beats his girlfriend up and is a horrible person and won't even blame himself, he just goes "I can't help it, it's how my brain's wired." But he's similar to Hunter in ways so I'm under the illusion I understand how he feels and so I DO feel sorry for him. (?)

Sorry, I'm being depressing. HELLO, ALL! *hugs*

Star Inkbright said...

HI MELICA!

Msd.

Aisling Dubh said...

Hi

Melica Frost said...

Hey star!!

Aisling Dubh said...

Hi star hi melica frost

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Not sure which teacher. I think I made her up. Tall and bony and old with short black hair.

It was her fault, though. She was trying to stop my rebellion by kidnapping people I like. Like Skulduggery.

Melica Frost said...

People like that do deserve to be hit with chairs :)

Star Inkbright said...

Agreed, Melica. :)

HI AISLING!

Unknown said...

I need a hug... *sighs* *holds out arms to anyone who cares*

Melica Frost said...

*hugs mara*
Whats up? :)

Hi Aisling!

Aisling Dubh said...

Hi melica *hugs mara*

Star Inkbright said...

*gives Maraness big hug*

What's up? :/

I was telling my 1D friends info about 1D on the bus today. *nods*

Aisling Dubh said...

What purpose does homework have apart from being really really annoying?

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Thanks guys. *smiles*

I just feel horrible... :/

Star - Really? C: News you've heard from me, or news you heard on the radio/news/TV? :P

Mel - I remember there was a Scottish girl in our class, and her name was Erin. We were talking about her today, because she left a few years ago, and I thought immediately of you :)

Star Inkbright said...

Well, technically I first heard about the 1D movie from Robin, and technically Melica first informed me (well, informed you and Inky was there) of the Let's Danxe thing, but otherwise youness. :)

Melica Frost said...

I love how that just happens now mara, you hear that and think of me! I do that with all you guys aswell obv :)
And I was telling my friend about you all and she wanted me to ask mara, do you sound like Luna from harry potter? I did tell her just because you are both Irish doesnt mean you sound the same but she didnt believe me... :D

Maralie Lily Charm said...

The 1D3D movie :) *is happy*

I could be in it! If I send in a video saying how much I love them.... *ponders*

And the Red Nose Day song on Let's Dance. *grins* BRING RED NOSE DAY TO IRELAND!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Mel - Uh, I don't read/watch Harry Potter... But I'll check out her voice later on YouTube and see. *laughs*

Star Inkbright said...

Luna is AWESOME . . .

Aisling Dubh said...

You're right melica not all irish people sound like Luna from Harry potter

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I sound very not-like Niall Horan... I think. *laughs* The accents are so different...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Damn my MC chapter took forever to write

Oh and I have a confession

Mevolent is actually now my favorite character

Aisling Dubh said...
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Aisling Dubh said...

Hi zafire kerias

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Hiya Aisling! You can call me Zaf, Zafira, Damn Necromancer or Elder Kerias

Yes I'm an Elder in America ask Derek...wait no dont ask him he'll kill me off in Book 8

Aisling Dubh said...

Bye I've got to go

Aisling Dubh said...

Bye zaf

Star Inkbright said...

:( FOURS AISLING!

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Adios!

Aisling Dubh said...

Why will he kill you off in book 8

Aisling Dubh said...

Bye star

Aisling Dubh said...

Bye everyone on blog land at the moment

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Bye Aisling! :(

Hey Zaf! :) *hugs*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Because Derek is Derek and he told me on Twitter I'm toast then on Saturday he said killing me is too good

Personally I have fears he's plotting revenge for me exploding Ireland

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Hey Mara! *tacklehugs*

Aisling Dubh said...

Why did you explode ireland he shouldn't kill you.

Oh yeah I'm back

Aisling Dubh said...

I thought I had to go but then I didn't so now I'm happy

Star Inkbright said...

Oh you don't have to go thats good . . . and yeah I'm so mean I know.

*kills self*

Aisling, you remind me of me when I was new. *nods thoughtfully*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

*sighs* I wish I had a friend like Skulduggery.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

My comment just poofed...

Ugh.

I NEED A SLUSHIE. *whines*

With red and blue syrup mixed together... Yum...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Aah Aisling

Well lets see gimme few minutes and I'll give a link to a video then you'll understand te exploding bit

As for killing me? Not me personally he's killing my character off in Book 8 I bet. I'm in Book 8 and that's all I know but knowing Derek 'you're toast' implies 'i wrote your death'

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Don't we all, Val. *le sigh*

Imagine...

Aisling Dubh said...

I just realised something,yiz have all been typing out Aisling which is kinda long. Yiz can call me ais or ash or something else if yiz want to.

That was a lot of yizs

Aisling Dubh said...

Well at least you get to be in book 8 zaf even If he kills you.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I mean, I wish I had a friend who actually cared, like they would protect me like Skulduggery protects Valkyrie. You know, someone I could talk to and they wouldn't get mad, because they know what to do and how to fix it. Someone really funny and quick witted. I just wish I knew someone like that.


Ew, gross, now I'm ranting about sappy stuff. I need to hit someone.

Star Inkbright said...

DAMMIT MARA STOP MAKING ME WANT ONE. XD

Inky really really really want a slushie now. *sulks*

Yeah Zaffles. :)

Maralie Lily Charm said...

That would be awesome Val... But we're always here if you need to talk :)

Here, hit this squirrel! *gives Val squirrel*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Alright Yiz xD

Yup so far I think I'm an Elder because I got fired by Derek in October from being Grand Mage but I may be an Elder since during Christmas I was told that it may be possible

Aisling Dubh said...

That'd be so cool if you got to be an elder.
I hope he does make you an elder.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

SORRY STARARAR BUT I NEED ONE D:

Ooh, Rihanna's new song is pretty HOLY CRAP TURN IT OFFFFFFF TURN IT OFFFFFFFFFFFFF! D: *blocks eyes* Nobody wants to see Rihanna in a bathtub, NAKED! O.O *is grossed out/

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I think he will even though I'm a Necromancer I mean Morweena Crow was a Necromancer! I may ask in April if I dont fangirl lol in April NJ is Skyping me so I can meet Derek

Luciana said...

I'M ABOUT TO READ UNRAVELLING

It better be awesome

Aisling Dubh said...

Has derek ever gone on tour to America?

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Screw Mist, Mara Elder now! MWAHAHAHA. *kills Mist*

Melica Frost said...

Sorry for poofing I was making cheesy pasta :D

Aisling Dubh said...

Mara you'd make a much better elder than mist as long as you're not one of those spider people

Aisling Dubh said...

But it is good having an evil elder

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Thanks Ais! :) I'D GIVE EVERYONE RAINBOW SKITTLES AND MAKE UNICORNS NON-EXTINCT. *grins*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

No Derek never toured America EVER

Maybe he will maybe he won't I came to te conclusion the only book i'll have signed is my Scepter of The Ancients book i sent him and the closest to meeting him will be the Skype call

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Yeah... It's funny. *smiles* Good twist to the story.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

You know Derek's address...? O.O

ARGH I WANT A SKYPE D:

Star Inkbright said...

Unravelling was pretty awewome . . . *looks at it on bookshelf* Hey, Scáth.

Ivy? I've realised I make up stories about things I want. In a metaphorical way, often. Amazing friendship, two people who are such good friends and they'd do anything for each other, pops up quite a bit. Ooh, wonder why that is?

Skul + Val friendships don't occur for everyone. -_-

The blog and you lot is the closest I have, and . . . and it's so so so awesome. :) GTG DANMIT. CUT MY SPEECH SHORT.

Aisling Dubh said...

He should tour America he would get to meet loads of minions.
It doesn't make much difference to me cause I'm not Americian but I still think he should do it.

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Tis not his address I had to send the letter and all to HC in New York who then sends it to Derek

Aisling Dubh said...

I just realised how lucky I am to be irish and live in dublin

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Bye Star! :(

Ahh. That makes more sense Zaf :P

AHHHH NO FLACKING WAY 1D ARE 15 ON THE CHARTS :') *is cryibg*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Yiz you are lucky I'm an Ameriminion so...

Aisling Dubh said...

Bye star!:(

Melica Frost said...

OMG your irish?!?
*fangirls*
Sorry I lost my cool there, but yeah cool ...

Aisling Dubh said...

The only bad thing about Ireland is the amount of rain we get no matter what time of year it is.

Luciana said...

I can't be bothered with this book, yet

I'll read, uhm, I don't know, yet. I'll go look on my bookcase. Maybe the second Cirque du Freak book... Though, I don't have the first one... Hmm..

Aisling Dubh said...

Yep I'm irish

Melica Frost said...

Your preaching to the choir, Im from scotland :D

Aisling Dubh said...

The Darren Shan series is really good except for the 10 or maybe it's the 11th one

Aisling Dubh said...

Well derek is more likely to go to Scotland than America.

Oh do you have one of those Scottish accents?

Aisling Dubh said...

I'm going bye

Maralie Lily Charm said...

lol. Louis is just so... Sassy XD

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Bye Ais! :(

Melica Frost said...

Yeah I have a strong scottish accent :)

Aisling Dubh said...

That's so cool and NOW I am going

Star Inkbright said...


BACKLES.

My card-making skills are apparently improving with practice. Yays.

*wonders vaguely if I should make a card for my irl friend*

Willow Von Stratton said...

Hello everyone!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hey Star! :)

*watches comment count carefully*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hi Von! :)

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

*sighs*

Yiz is right! The odds of Derek going to Scotland are greater then America unless he threatens HC with spoons

Willow Von Stratton said...

HC is lame in te sense they won't send him to America, I even e-mailed them about two weeks ago

Melica Frost said...

Thanks :) ok bye then :P
There is a MUCH better chance of me meeting derek than any ameriminion :( its such a shame for you all :(

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I aent a letter and never got crap back not even a thank you we'll take this into consideration

I'n sorry but who the hell does that? Derek seems to have time to talk to his fans

*sighs*

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Oph

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Lalalala...

Willow Von Stratton said...

Hey Star!

Well I guess that is a plus at least he talks to his fans.

And Mel all an Ameriminion has to do is vacation is Ireland and hope to meet him! I'm going to Germany in August and I'm debating if I should go to Ireland.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Dammit! XD

Willow Von Stratton said...

Dammit what?

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

Yeah and the odds of half of us going? I'm destined to never meet him

Melica Frost said...

Yeah but why visit a cold and wet country? I certainly know I wouldnt, but thats mainly because I live in a cold and wet country already...oh the joys...

Zanida Laufeydottir Queen of Asgard (Zafira Kerias) said...

I dedicate this page to Ameriminions. I guess we gotta stick together! Its the only way. Or we could kidnap Derek

To NJ for being awesome

To Bloglandians: YAY LETS GO HAVE A BLOG WATER FIGHT i dunno we just epic

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I wanted deds... C:

I'm suddenly hyper...

Willow Von Stratton said...

I love cold and wet countrys! I hate the sun anyway so Ireland would be good for me!

One day Zaf you just might meet him you never know. If I choose to go to Ireland this summer I'm going to see if I can meet him.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

*throws light at Zaf*

MARA NO LIKE WATER SO LIGHT WILL HAVE TO DO! *sings 1D*

Star Inkbright said...

HEY, PEOPLES.

Orange on light blue background, orange on light green background, orange on dark green background, or orange on medium purple background?

Star Inkbright said...

Or orqnge on dark blue background?

Star Inkbright said...

AW, SHIZZLES. I'VE SOENT TWO HOURS ON THIS CARD TODAY. IT'LL LIVE IF STAR LEAVES IT.

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