Saturday, February 16, 2013

Up For Air

84,726 words.

And that's the PLOT written.

Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.

Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.

Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.

If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.


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Star Inkbright said...

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. :)

I WOULD SAY WE CAN BE CLUELESS TO GET HER, BUT I HAVE A CLUE . . .

*cuts clue in half and gives half to Saph* BETTERER? :)

Unknown said...

Hi people!

I'm on for a very short time.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

IT'S COOKIE DOOOOUGHHHH(:

*gives everyone a fork* LET'S EAT! XD

Star Inkbright said...

BETTER YET-A! BETTER YET-A!

I love This Moment . . . :)

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Star...I have no idea what that massive paragraphy is about...

NOOOO THAT WOULD BE MEAN D:

Hey Mara, hey Saphy, hey Sev! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*

Saph - nearly everyone does it:) Or calls me Leni...

Yayyy! *chomps of cookie dough*

Star Inkbright said...

*starts chewing fork like Darren Shan in Cirque Du Freak (The Saga of Darren Shan Book 1)* Yum. Danke, Mara! :)

Star Inkbright said...

*chops remaining bit of clue in half, making quatres, and gives one of said quatres to Ieni* Better yet-a? :)

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Hi Seph!
Mara; Cookie dough? That's my favourite *pounces* *gobble gobble gobble* Seph, do you want Cookie dough ice cream?
Ooh, thanks for the half-clue Star. Now I'm only half clueless :D

Luciana said...

Are you afraidddd to dieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?

Unknown said...

Yay! I finally got my reply from PETA!

*thinks of good interview questions*

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

PETA?

Unknown said...

People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals. I need to interview them for my speech against animal testing in cosmetics.

Unknown said...

Lunchtime. Bye!

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

DANKE MARA! *hugs*

Byebye, Sev! *waves*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Yes Luci, I am quite afraid to die! :P

COOKIE DOUGH IS AMAZAYN. NOMNOMNOMNOM.

Luciana said...

Bye Sev!

SORRY MUSE WAS ON c:
Also, Mara, really!? I'm not... Huh...

Maralie Lily Charm said...

NO PROBLEM STARARAR! *hugs back*

Bye Sev! *hugs*

Graham Norton is on toniiiiight(:

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Luci - Uhm, yeah, kinda.. Cause I might not wake up tomorrow O.o I DON'T LIKE THINKING THESE THOUGHTS.

Luciana said...

Hmmm. Doesn't faze me. Like, at all... :)

Star Inkbright said...

ICH BIN TERRIFIED TO DIE. D:

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

I dunno. Sometimes I still have my 'I want to die' moments, but they've mostly gone by now so meeeeeeh.

MUSE I LOVE MUSE OMG EPICNESS!

I just read faze as FAYZ. STAAAAAAAAAR

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I keep thinking I'll die horribly because of karma... ._.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Karma is stuff after death that will affect what animal you become (if you believe in that kinda stuff).

G2g - byebye *waves*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I believe the Celtic way :) you die, go to heaven, live there, come back as someone else, etc.

Bye Ieni! *hugs* :(

Luciana said...

Bye, Ieni~

Star Inkbright said...

FOURS IENINESS! :(

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

hAII

Star Inkbright said...

Hi Brave!

YOU'RE NOT THE ONLY TEN YEAR OLD ON THE BLOG!!!!!!!!!!

Star Inkbright said...

Scáth, if you're here, Nine Inch Nails are pretty cool! :)

Vocals too annoying quiet, but I think that's just you, because Anthrax had them too annoyingy quiet too. *nods*

Luciana said...

Nine Inch Nails are pretty good.

And Anthrax are awesome.

You checked out Metallica, yet? Or Megadeth? They're both pretty damned good.

Star Inkbright said...

Metallica are meh. I have rated them meh more than once, on different days, different MONTHS, so if it is just my mood, it's a coincidencalnessmoodnessness and my mood. *nods*

Megadeth? No.

Star Inkbright said...

I need more bands, though, so thanks. :)

MY DISTURBED PLAYLIST IS NEARLY COMPLETED. *sobs*

FIVE MORE SONGS. :(

Luciana said...

Hmm... What Metallica songs have you listened to?

I prefer the older bands to newer bands. That's where me and Mist differ. Old-school is what I've been brought up listening to, so that's what I like best.

Star Inkbright said...

Msd, as usualllllllllllll. Csgd, also as usualllllllllllll.

I often keep saying msd when I know I'll disappear soon, in case people forget . . .

Like at night when I know someonele'll turn off the network. And I could sneak down and switch it back on, risking being caught by awake parents who could theoretically be anywhere in the house, if it were not for the enourmas noise the printer makes when the network is switched on. Our old printer made this noise too (well, a different noise, but still a loud noise), so I am not too resentful.

Our new printer is failing, btw. Every picture it prints is all liney. Me and my dad are like, "Well, you can read the writing, so what's the problem?" but my mum's like "That is NOT what is required of a printer in . . . whatever year we're in, 2011, and you know it."
Considoring you COULDN'T read the writing on my RS homework very well at all, I'm glad it's as good as it is . . .

Basically, printerz suk.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Back - msd/mbd

Star Inkbright said...

On a random note, we've started listening to Capital again in the car. Kiss You came on today and I had it stuck in my head for twelve hours as a result. And I remembered how awesome some popular songs are.

I'm sorry, what were we saying?

I can't remember. XD

I listened to part of One because Apocalyptica did a cover of it and I liked Apocalyptica's version better.
And I listened to whatwasit. Uh, I can't remember.
And I listen to Welcome Home (Sanitarium) because you told me to, and I recognised the name once I knew the (Sanitarium) bit and then I remembered Bullet For My Valentine did a cover of it, which I haven't btw listened to yet. And that was quite cool coz it had what I call the homey sound in it. And I really do not know how to describe the homey sound. But they put it in a song with titled Welcome Home, so I'm like huh, maybe it's not just me that likes it. Land of Confusion by Genesis covered by Disturbed has it, which is mostly why when I first listened to it I listened to it three times in a row because I loved it because it's LoC and its jepic, and the chorus of Criminal by Disturbed has it. I love Criminal! And my favourite school song from primary (I know, I know) has it.

Wait, what was I saying?

Only I cut it short (I mentioned MOST) because orchestra. Plus I wasn't in a good musicy mood this morning. Because rushing to orchestra. When I listen to new music my mood has to be right and open to new suggestions. *taps head*

Otherwise I don't give it's yes or no excellant full considoration.

I think I am making no sense, here. I don't feel incredibly sensicle, sorry.

ANyway. Everything else I forgot.

Star Inkbright said...

HI IENI!

*so I thought huh, maybe it's not me that think homeness about it.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Merp. Popular songs aren't going to last the time battle. I doubt 1D will either. The Beatles survived, because it was all different types of people, but 1D it's mainly teenage girls, who will eventually grow up.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Hey, Jubi (and because I forgot to say hi to Star before) hey, Star! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

IENI!!!!!!!!!!!!!


hi.

*is ninjaeroplanetacklehugged*

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

g2g

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

aw.. BYYYEEE

Maralie Lily Charm said...

ASDFGHJKL; THE FEELS I JUST WATCHED OWOA AND OMGG«3

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Well then. I see you're all messing with your profile pictures.



GIVE ME ONE SECOND, I HAVE A GREAT PHOTO.



(Be warned: Coming from me, that is not a good thing.)

Star Inkbright said...

:( FOURS, IENI! HI, JUIB! :) HI, MARA! :)

OWOA?

The Beatles lastest because they were completely new and unique and completely unheard of. They influenced nearly all music to come and that is why they lastered. :)

Maralie Lily Charm said...

TAKE COVER! VAL'S DOING SOMETHING EVIL! *hides*

Star Inkbright said...

IVY! *grabs blood-sampling equipment*

I miss Eve. :( She was my email buddy . . .

Star Inkbright said...

I'm in my profile pic glaring murderously at my phone. It amuses me.

OH GREAT BRB.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

HIYO STAR! :)

One Way Or Another (Teenage Kicks) *nods*

THEY HUG THE PRIME MINISTER OF ENGLAND AND IT'S SO FUNNY AND BEAUTIFUL AND PERF CAUSE ARGH. THEY HIP THRUST AND THEN DO THEIR STEP DANCE AND NIALL'S IN THE SHOWER AND HARRY WEARING A CAP«3 IT'S JUST PERFECTIONNNNNNNNNNN.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

OKAY STAR!

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

HELLO, CHILDREN.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

*looks at picture and cracks up laughing*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

VAL YOU LOOK AMAZING. *grins*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Fletcher is just sad he doesn't get any of THIS.


*gestures at self in photo*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

And I don't know why Hansard Kray doesn't accept my sheer beauty here.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

As my friend would say, LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL :P

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Also, this is how I looked when Caelan first met me. No wonder he liked me so much he became a stalker.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...
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Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...
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Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

But I don't like Caelan. Besides, me and Fletcher make such a great couple, don't you think?


*points at new photo*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Naw, Fletcherie! *laughs*

Awesome sunglasses :3

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I borrowed them from my friend... The same friend who let me dress up like a guy XD

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Your friend seems pretty awesome :P if I tried to dress up like a guy, I'd get slapped.

Multiple times.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

My friends probably would slap me if they weren't terrified.


You should've seen her mum's face. I mean, she's used to me doing this, but the surprise never gets old XD

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

lovely pic Val :P

*not here*

Star Inkbright said...

Your beauty astounds me, Ivyness. :)

Back.

DAMMIT MARA STAR SHOUD'VE GOT THAT ABBREVIATION. BRAIN NOT SWITCHED ON. :/

Msd, wbd.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

NEW POST GUYS NEW POST

Star Inkbright said...

O_O

THIS PERSON HAD INDESTRUCTIBLE FOR THE INTRO ON THEIR BFMV LYRICS VID.

It was part of the instrumental, so I didn't know the song until the end, in fact I'm only 90 percent certain it was Indestrucyible, but I can recognise Disturbed anywhere;), and I was just like O_O OMGG DISTURBED AS AN INTRO YAAAAAAAAAAAY!

Sorry, just had to share my astonishment and yayness. :)

Star Inkbright said...

OH GOD INDESTRUCTIBLE COMES ON AT THE END AS WELL.

I love Disturbed. :) *moves to new post*

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