84,726 words.
And that's the PLOT written.
Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.
Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.
Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.
If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.
Saturday, February 16, 2013
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«Oldest ‹Older 4201 – 4400 of 4957 Newer› Newest»Hullo Robin:)
MARA, EAT SKITTLES
they will make you smile.
hopefully.
WAIT. Watch 1D videos and much on Skittles:)
AND DRINK TEA
I dedicate this page to Sir R, obviously. Blogland will never have another gentle-shark like him, or even at all.
Also to Luciana Clover Scàth. The person you usually are on here is the one that matters, and you are wonderful here. [hugs]
Also to ninjas. They are simply cool.
And Chat and Croquet. It's really weird to be back and not covered in cat hair.
Also to Holly Silvertongue, Marian Violet, Wackadoo Banana-Vader Bob, Glinda Doalot and all my other friends who have taken names. Thanks for letting me annoy you with SP quotes and rants.
I'd written a poem/song dedication, but it was too...I don't know.
I also ded to Mara (hope your voice gets better), Ember (thanks for making me laugh so hard when we had baked potatoes for dinner, it was priceless to see my family's weirded out expressions, like 'what's so funny, Fabi doesn't even usually like potatoes?'!), Death (sorry to hear about your uncle One Direction and Taylor Swift and Emeli Sande and Florence + the Machine and Disturbed and Mayday Parade and Hayley Westenra and all the other music Bloglandians like.
Also to Mycroft and his umbrella.
Hey L, Maralie *hugs*
Hi Robin!
*smiles* Luci, if there was a shop anywhere near me, I would have the biggest packet of Skittles right in front of me.
I'm already watching them, don't worry(;
Tea... With sugar. Loads of sugar :)
Hello Faaaabi!
SUGAR :D
Sugar is good. [Nods]
Great ded Fabigail :) *hugs*
When he opens his arms and holds you close tonight, it just won't feel right, cause I can love you more than this!
*reaches out* Yeah!
Good times... *laughs*
I love tea with SUGARRRR. And lots of milk :) AND MORE SUGARRRRR.
It's an amazing dedication, Fabi, not even the best of mine stand anywhere near close to how awesome that one was:)
I'm really annoyed with myself! I DON'T LIKE BEAST'S MINI ALBUM FROM LAST YEAR
Oh well. I'll listen to Fiction and Fact, again, because that's damn pretty c:
sorry i poofed :P
*reads Fabis script thingy*
*raises eyebrow*
Yes Henry. Mold id DEFINATELY cool
Hey Juuuuuuubi!
ROBIN!!!!!!!!
hi.
Thanks, Mara. [hugs]
I'm going distant now, writing for the MC and doing something else that's top secret.
Oh my flacking GOD. *laughs*
Louis, you are such a special child. Mwah, I love you so much«3
Thanks, Luci. I don't agree with that, I think your deds are better, but thanks.
Top secret? *raises eyebrow*
You can tell Mara... Right? Heh heh. *shifty eyes*
Glad you liked it, Jubi. [Grins]
Mara will get to know really soon.
COMMENT I COMMAND YOU.
Oh yeah. xD It took a while but we got there.
I spent £55 on books. Happiness.
Baked potatoes XD
Oh my god... I can see why you were laughing
I think our dog might be dying... :(
I'm going to miss my Molso. She's a Lab, and she's always been fat. *laughs* But she's gorgeous. I love her so much. I've had her since I was two, and mum told me when I got her, I was begging to hold her in the car. My mother let me, but she said I was holding her so tightly she thought Molly would choke, so she took her off me. *laughs*
Then Molly got hit by a car when she was small. She has a scar on her leg now, but she was always brave about it :)
I'm going to miss her...
SIR!
No....WHY.... WWWHHHHYYYY
Awwww Maralie *huggles*
Hi, Ember. Yep. [Tries and fails to keep a straight face] [Makes ridiculous face instead, then bursts out laughing]
Oh my god, just realised we had potato salad for dinner yesterday... ;D
But baked potato is definitely more funny.
Oh...:-( Well, I hope she doesn't die, Mara. [hugs]
Oh Mara... I'm so sorry ;(
I kept thinking it was going to ask me why Liberty was dead. I ate it fast so I wouldn't have to explain a talking potato to my family.
Yola Brave!
OMG MARA JUST SAID THAT WHILE I WAS WATCHING THE ENND OF MARLY AND ME!
It's alright :') *hugs everyone*
On lighter news... I JUST REALISED I CAN SING!!!! :D
AW...... I dont want youre dog ta die.
Hello, Brave.
Mara, really? That's wonderful! Singing is great!
I've got to sing for my school play *melts*
For the Service of Light, hopefully :)
"I kept thinking it was going to ask me why Liberty was dead. I ate it fast so I wouldn't have to explain a talking potato to my family."
I just fell over and died laughing XDXDXDXDXD
Yay, I hope you can!
And you'll be great, Robin!
Singing is a good idea...
Oh, great, Ember, you quoting that is making me laugh again! In the middle of recording, no less! [Pretends to be angry, but is too busy laughing]
Singing is fabulous.
I know this girl who takes singing lessons, and she is absolutely fabulous.
Recording what?
You know what, I'm going to put up a picture of me for one second, then change it back again.
So casually cruel in the name of being honest *sings*
Marian, Bob and Glinda took voice lessons, and they sing a lot. I can usually carry a tune around Marian, her voice is easy to pick out and follow.
Or I just play along on flute. I don't have much of a range.
Recording me singing. I do that from time to time, record myself.
HELLOOOOO
i keep poofing...
I have Voice lessons :)
And I really want to be a muscial theatre actress when I'm older.
*Grins sheepishly*
That's an awesome goal, Charisma. Good luck with it!
coolio!!
*laughs*
Derek's in LUUURVE with Ronda I see it now!
*has fallen out of tree in silent hysterial laughter*
Hello again, Jubi!
By the way, the guy next to me is just this random classmate who wanted to be in the picture.
I just like performing! I'm like that really overly enthusiastic one that is always happy. Yep.
I really want voice lessons...
But the only teacher near me is a snob and hates everyone...
Oh, that sounds cool Charisma!
I AM CHANGING IT BACK AGAIN
I could teach you Mara! (haha, not that I can sing myself XD)
Haha thanks guys! I'm going to try as hard as I can! :)
I had a gymnastics teacher who was so horrid to us. Like proper nasty. I was only six and she scared the bejesus out of me.
Ember, you're really pretty! O.O
I have come to the conclusion that everyone is prettier than me. *laughs*
Okay, I'm back to... well, pretty much normal.
I look a little bit like Aretha, right?
I am in no way pretty. YOU are pretty.
I have stupid teeth.
Yeah You kinda do... xP
Nice pic btw :)
(for the record, I'm in the middle)
Thank you Jubi...
You do look like Ari.
Also, your are pretty.
BBL
BLOG-WEEDING! MUST GOOOOO!
*you
Uh, Ember, look at my picture. You want to talk about stupid teeth? :P
See you, Robin!
There we go, back to adorable Mycroft art.
Here's a lovely picture of my awkward facial expression... :P
TADAAA
Excuse me, Mara, your teeth are not stupid. My mouth was not open in the picture for a very good reason.
I AM NOT PRETTY
This is me thinking about potatoes.
Oh my god Ju
You are the complete opposite of what I imagined you to look like
Haha xD
I HAVE TAKEN A COMPLETELY NEW IMAGE IN YOUR BRAAAIIIINNNNNNNNNN
Oh my god Fabi
You are the complete opposite of what I imagined you to look like
Oh my god universe
This is the complete opposite of what I imagined everyone to look like
You're both pretty, now shut up and don't argue!
Oh my god.... I... I just can't... holy..... oh my god.... what the..... potato? Apple crumble? Pizzafish? Hahahahahaha
WAT DE HOLY HAIL
THE WORLD HAS CHANGEEEEDDDDDD
What did you think I looked like? This?
Fabi....
Oh my god....
I....
Agagaga....
My brain is literally shutting down....
SHUSH EMBER. You are. SHUSH.
JUBI. STOP EVERYONE WITH THE PRETTINESS. I'LL DIE. TOO... MUCH... PRETTY...
No... I thought that..... never mind.... uh.... ahahahahaa..... brain gel!
LIUSHFAILJAFB
That's Henry with my new umbrella, btw.
Somehow the word fail got in there.
That was not intentional..
FABI. THE BEAUTY. IT'S KILLING ME. O.O
You know what... the expression on my face matches my profile pic right now
... i can never take a good picture of me...
I ALWAYS MAKE WIERD FACES!!!
it's fun tho..
Ok, I'll stop insisting you're pretty, Mara. If you stop insisting you aren't.
Mevolent choking a fish.
Jubi, stop looking like the opposite of what I expected you to be!
You know what? I thought you'd look more like Fabi, and I thought Fabi would look more like you.
I just realised that the three of us look completely different. Malicha looks a bit too much like me with long hair to qualify.
for some reason, ember, I thought that you'd have blond hair...
I'm strange..
Oh my god, like a boss just popped into my head
TRY TO IMAGINE MEVOLENT
Meeting a giant fish
and
****ing its brains out
Really? Is it because EmberTC has blond hair?
(How many of you realised that EmberTC's appearance is designed to be the exact opposite of mine?)
Oh... well no...
I don't think I know who that is xD
We do look very different.
And it takes so much effort not to make faces at cameras...
Well, when you emailed the description to me so I could use it, you did say it was the opposite.
FabiTC looks like me sometimes, not others.
oh wait... never mind ember!!!
I thought that Ember TC was like.. a real person....
heh
xD xD
TC = The Character.
Yeah I figured that out... xD
Me and my future husband »»
Me and my Tanith pumpkin.
Maralie has the same eyes as me, is the same height as me, acts like me, but different hair :)
That's an awesome pumpkin. *nods*
FabiTC looks like me on Tuesdays, when my hair is curlier for some reason.
Me when I was younger. I don't do photos often.
Thanks! It's the only photo of it I have, I'm afraid, but it looked great lit!
I made this one last night... in liike 5 minutes :P
->
Hi! Oooh photos... Gimme a minute :)
Cool. Ok. I'm sticking with this pic now. It wasn't photoshopped. Well, actually it sort of was, but the glow thingy wasn't. I darkened the background.
Jubi I thought you'd be this yellow alien because yellow = happy and glee = happy and wow I was very wrong.
Hmm...I wrote that comment like 20mins ago but I had to vanish D:
AAANNNDDDD now back to the smiley face :P
Hi Saphy! Ok.
hello!
haha xD
JUBI: THE YELLOW EYED ALIEN
Hi Mel, Ieni!
Hi anyone who came! :)
Omg, why is everyone so pretty?
And hey Fabi!
I went to Asda with my mum today to get some shopping y'know normal stuff but then I came home and my dad said to me...
dad: Hello, what did you do today?
Me: Just went shopping and stuff...
dad: stuff? whats stuff?
me: I just went to waterstones aswell...and stuff...
dad: ...what stuff?
me: ...I bought books...
dad: books? how many?
me: ... ... six
dad: What??? why six?
me: because I couldnt have only bought one that would be unfair to the other!
dad: You are weird. how much did you spend?
me: ... £28 ...
dad: *hangs head in shame*
Hi Mel+Leni! *hugs* btw I'm the one in the middle. We had to dress up as book characters that day, and I'm supposed to be Valkyrie. The girl in the hood is Scarlet, and she's supposed to be Melancolia. You can't see it in the photo, but she got a felt-tip and drew symbols all over her face and hands. And the girl on the left, Jasmine, is Tanith. She had an awesome foam sword and scabbard :)
*others
But you were right Mel. You couldn't be unfair!
SAPHY YOU'RE SO PRETTY O.O
You're really pretty, Saphy!
cool pic!! :D
Ooo...what books did you buy, Mel?
Saphy you're soooo pretty! *jealous face*
THERE ARE TOO MANY VARIABLES ;-;
Thanks guys *blushes* personally I think I look weird with my hair up. But you're all SERIOUSLY pretty as well. Jubi, you have the coolest hair. It's so long and wavy!
Hi Luci! *hugs* Doing hw?
haha thanks Saph :)
ehh well I got the hunger games, catching fire and mocking jay, the book for warm bodies and hereos of Olympus the lost hero :)
but I have read my brthers copys of all of them except from warm bodies - he doesnt have that one :)
*brothers
*heroes
I love Heroes of Olympus! Mark of Athena was so sweet :'(
yeah! and now I have to go Im having a late dinner so bye!
oh god... I really have to finish reading those... I read the lost hero... and i have the Son of neptune of my shelf waiting to be read..
Hello.
Hahahahaha, no.
Selling books.
Sorry I poofed! I'm back...distantly.
Hi again Fabi! Bye Mel!
Bye, Mel!
bbs, getting dressed
Agh, back from peeling brussel sprouts.
Wb, Ieni!
See you later, Saph!
I'm fiddling with settings to make the tape sound like it comes from the left!
BYE SAPH!
Have to give my sis the computer, gtg! Bye!
bye fabi!!!!!!!
Bye Mel, Fabi and Saph! *waves*
Aaaand now I'm back.... Oh. Fabi left :( Bye Fabi *hugs*
HI SAPH!!
Ah, helloooo again Saph! Gah, that sounds like Zaf and I'm getting really confused XD
Oh my god I can't take it!!!!'
First my mother screams at me yesterday over soup
Then she screams at me because I answer her when she screams my name even though I'm 2 feet away i mean what the hell am i supposed to do? Be quiet and not answer? Then she gets more pissed off if i dont answer her and she can't freakin walk to go get a bag? I mean she goes insane on me over answering her screams and then she asks me to get her a bag i'm sorry but does it appear i want to get a bag now that i get yelled at for answering you? Hell no get up and walk the extra steps it may actually take and get the damn bag
Seph, Saph, Zaf...
Hi Jubi and leni! *hugs*
I apologise for my mirror being all filthy, but here's a picture of me glaring murderously at my phone coz it won't take a picture right! XD
I dedicate this page to people who can be nice. I'm sick of people being nasty and all. Be nice it saves people agrivation. I ded to Ronda for good luck
:(
I'm sorry she's taking out her stressation on you, Zaf . . .
Good idea for a ded Zaf :) Star, woah. You're really, really pretty :O
She does it everytime she gets pissed over stupid stuff annd I'm sick of it! I'm treated like I don't have feelings and my dad doesnt even step in and tell her stop taking anger out on me
Hey, Zaf!
:(
Nice ded:)
Saph - it's Ieni ;P But danke for hug:)
OMG STAR YOU'RE ACTUALLY SO PRETTY! DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT DENYING IT OR THE IENI WILL MUNCH YOU UP.
You can see my little butterfly sticker next to my mirror, if you zoom in enough . . . :)
WTH???? I'M NOT PRETTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can you see this picture better now it's zoomed in . . . ?
*apologises* Sorry, I have to comment to see it.
You are, Star. Seriously pretty.
leni; I said leni... :S
uugghhh WHY DOES EVERYONE SAY THAT THEY'RE NOT PRETTTYYYYYY
BUT YOU ARRRRREEEEE! DO NOT ARGUE WITH THE JENIUS I thought it was easy to see anyway:)
Seeing as everyones uploading pictures of themselves. This is the same as last time, because I really cannot be bothered to take pictures of myself... BUT THE FUNNY BIT OF HAIR IS FUNNY
And now I have to comment to see it again. :(
I'll say something else as well! Er . . .
I AM THE INKY OCTOPUS GIRL AND THE ENEMY OF THE LLAMAS!
I used to say that att. :(
Aw, that sucks Zaf :( I hte it when people take out their anger on whatever and whoever's around them.
Enemy of the llamas... I tremble at the thought of it...
Wait no, this is me (not those shoes). Saph - exactly. There's a difference between I and l (though not on the name bit).
Its frustrating! All i did was answer her! I mean am I not supposed to answer being screamed to? I'm sitting in my room so she didnt need to yell across the workd
I AREN'TTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! DO NOT ARGUE WITH THE INKY OCTOPUS GIRL! :)
Gtg, breakfast. Bye!
Byebye Saph! *waves*
GGGGGGUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYSSSSSSSSSS
I have variables. >_<
SHUSH. STOP ALL YOU PRETTY PEOPLE SAYING I'M PRETTY!
She just wanted to scream. *shrugs* She didn't care how valid her reason was. That's Star's interpration, anyway. Sorry.
*explains* Saying sorry for something that isn't your fault? "It's a way of empathising."
The Mortal Instruments, Cassandra Clare.
:( FOURS, SAPH!
Variables?
Variables?
*refreshes page*
Ah...Star wrote that already. Oops.
hate*
Prices for things, all so dependant. The variables change so often...
*laughs at me and the Jenius*
*nods slowly( I think I get it, which probably means I'm suffering from some horrible disease.
AHHHH BEN AND JERRY'S!
You're really not allowed to call me the Jenius;P Only I'm allowed to do that when I'm trying to prove I'm right about a point *nods*
Ooh we're eating fish tonight
I hate working things out like this...
There's the availability, desires, prices of others on the market, time of year, trustworthy-ness, rarity, how many people want it, how much P&P will cost... UGH! TOO MANY DEPENDANTS.
Gah....that sounds too confuzzling, Clover :S
Hey, Mara! Ooo...what flavour? GIMME SOME! *puppy eyes*
It's not confusing, just time-consuming...
. . . Okay, now I REALLY think I get it, which probably means I'm DYING from the disease . . .
I wish I could help, Scáth, but I don't have clue. I'm clueless. I am without a clue. I without a clue am. I am wanderiong about bewildered in the desrt. The desert is wonderinfg about bewildered in my stomach, which tickles. The desert is tickling me. ARGH STOP! *giggles* I HATE BEING TICKLED. Ooh, now the desert is tickling me with clues. OOH CLUES. *starts trying to wrestles clues off the desert* Now me and the desert and having a boxing match. The desert won, but I got my minions to steal the prize (the prize is clues) beforehand, so I SHALL NO LONGER BE CLUELESSSSSSSSSSSSS. :) Aw, my minions betrayed me and ate all the clues. *sobs* FOREVER ALONE! And forever clueless, but meh, I can live. Until I lessness the clue that would hint someone was trying to kill me, so I don't know someones trying to kill me, so they kill me, so I die, so I don't live, so I am clueless and not I won't live. I lied, earlier, then. No clues I noticed pointed to lying being a bad thing. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH. *eats my ex-minion* NOW I HAVE ABSORBED THEM AND THE CLUE INSIDE THEM! STAR IS NO LONGER CLUELESS! STAR SHALL NOT DIE! YAY! *celebrates*
Me: WTH was that, Me?
Me: I DON'T KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWW. XD
Me: I DON'T KNOW EITHERRRRRRRRRRRRR. XD
Me: WE'RE KNOWLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: No, you cannot be knowless! See, I gave you a no! You are not noless anymore because I gave you a know!
Me: OH YEAH.
Me: IKR.
Me: You do know because you are not knowlesssssssssssss. :)
Me: I feel a bit hyper.
Me: YEAH I GUESSED THAT. XD
@Ienarno: I call people all sorts. Deal with it or thwack me on the head with a spade. ;)
And I'm back again, 'cause I finished breakfast and I'm bored. Hi everyone!
I hate variables too :( But I love Maths.
Oh, I just re-read what you said about your name Ieni. I think I get it now *facepalm*
Ben and Jerry's? Can you teleport over and give me some???!!!!!!
HELLO MARAAAAAAAAAAAAA. :)
HELLO SAPPHIRE!!!!
Star, I have absolutely no clue wht you're on about. Does that make me clueless too?
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