Saturday, February 16, 2013

Up For Air

84,726 words.

And that's the PLOT written.

Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.

Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.

Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.

If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.


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Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Chapter 3 was awesome, Clover!

Gah...my computer keeps going funny this morning D:

Gabriel said...

Oh and right now I'm editing a picture. Because it. WON'T. FIT. ON.MY TUMBLR. BACKGROUND. And I am kinda OCD about that.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE AISLING!!

Japanese is a cool language to learn. *nods*

OH MY GOD CHAPTER 3 WAS AMAZING, L!!

Gabriel said...

Ahhh. This is the 4th time. I've resized and re-converted that picture for the maybe 4th time!! It just wont fit nicely!

Gabriel said...

Yeah, I know, I cant believe I dropped Japanese for Music last year, I think I want to do both.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Gab, nice to meet you:) - you do Japanese? That's quite cool *nods*

Gabriel said...

I finally got it right. After so many conversions and re-sizes. I got it!
...

Guys?

Gabriel said...

I'm just studying for it. If I talked to a Japanese person now.. I would sound very, very dumb.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Wbd, reading/writing...

Luciana said...

I HATE THIS CHAPTER ALREADY

i can't start it.

GOING TOL WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER BECAUSE I'M IN TOO GOOD OF A MOOD TO WRITE THIS CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRRR C:

i don't even know why i'm tellling you guys this

Turnips.

Gabriel said...

Guuys. I'm gonna go get midnight snacks.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

MIDNIGHT SNACKS FTW!!

Gabriel said...

Okay. Bye everyone. If I don't turn off the computer I'll be here for another five hours. Ja, mata!

Luciana said...

Bye Gab!

brb, need to help my mum with putting away the shopping.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Bye, Gab! *waves*

Wbd - making parsnip soup for lunch

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE GAB!!

Okay L!

Luciana said...

Back~

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

WB L. :)

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Brb, dinner...

Unknown said...

Miss cain its Brad how long do u spend on this blog a day
ussualy 3 hours staring at a screen waitig for derek to post again:)

Unknown said...

Hi...!

Unknown said...

Oh great. its typical every time I come on everyone go's have I got the plauge or something...?

Luciana said...

Hello Brad. :)

Do me a favour and use full stops and capital letters where necessary? You'll get along here much better that way, I promise:)

Unknown said...

Is there anyone on, IM MAD WHA WHA QHA WGAYGFDGHJKL,MN

Luciana said...

And apostrophes and, maybe, commas.

Most of us here are grammar Nazis, y'see. :')

Star Inkbright said...

HI PEOPLE!

Luciana said...

Hello Starrrrrrrrr:)

Unknown said...

Yes.

Star Inkbright said...

Hi Scáth! Hi Brad! :)

Unknown said...

Yeah I'm only in year 7 you know.

Unknown said...

Yeah I'm only in Year 7 you know. Oops posted that twice.

Unknown said...

Sorry for my grammar I am only in Year 7.

Luciana said...

Year 7 or not, simple punctuation is expected. How else do you expect us to understand what you're saying?

Most Y7s are capable of it. I'm not trying to be mean, sweetheart, I'm trying to help.

Unknown said...

Hello... I'm in Year 7 bye the way.
I'll write a weird story in a second, who's on Twitter??!!

Star Inkbright said...

Well, you know my and my sister started a Mother's Day card yesterday? No, you don't. Anyway, my brother today wanted my sister to help him make a Mother's Day card, so we invited him to join our card instead . . .

This is turning into quite a large project. :/

My brother's doing patterny stuff now. Yesterday, my sister was coming up with all the ideas and I was drawing everything. Playing to our strengths, y'know.

Msd, csgd. :)

Unknown said...

I'm not like this at school I'm on the top table for writing. Its just I'm bad on a computer... sorry:(

Luciana said...

I'm on Twitter. Right this moment, actually.

I'm laughing at Zath's awesome picture... :)

Unknown said...

I am bad typing good doing handwriting u know

Star Inkbright said...

I'm in Year Nine. Scäth's in Year Eleven, richtig? *frowns*

Luciana said...

YES. IT'S SCARY

I don't want to grow old ;-;

Unknown said...

Ok I have a confesion to make I'm in yaer 5:( I lied my age like 1 of my friends o here:( shame on me:( Thats why I'm bad.

Unknown said...

Did u get that message I'm 10 soon to be 11 but thats like some people on here so yeah...

Unknown said...

I'm i Y5

Unknown said...

I'm in Y5 Hello... Please dont get mad.

Star Inkbright said...

*shrugs* I don't mind toi much about grammer, Brad. Some do though.

Unknown said...

I'm in Y5 I lied my age cause I wanted to be on this blog so badly but I was 2 youg so I had to lie my age:( Shame on me:(

Luciana said...

I can't stand bad grammar.

Most of us can't. Some are quieter about it than others, however.

I'm just one of those odd people who will speak their mind and not care what others think. :)

Unknown said...

Star u do realize I'm a 10 year old kid soon to be 11

Unknown said...

Star and Luicana I am in Y5 u do realize that

Star Inkbright said...

*blinks*

Like Brave?

I don't mind. :) I understand that people'll lie, it's the internet. :/

Unknown said...

I am in Y5 r u Ok with that?...

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Brad, you said it about seven times. I think they got it.

Unknown said...

I dont like lying I would read all the chats and think god I cannot do that for years. So I lied:( I didnt like doig it. Star what do u maen Brave the movie or Brave as in your Brave.

Unknown said...

sdfg Yeah

Luciana said...

Brad, you keep saying.

You only have to say something once for us to notice, you know? We're not dim. We can read.

It just gets irritating when you repeat yourself ._.

Unknown said...

Did anyone watch wolfblood it is filimed in Newcastle

Unknown said...

Sorry I just...

Star Inkbright said...

Brave as in Ulchában Stiltskin Brave, the other Bloglandian I know who's 10 . . .

I'm okay. *nods* !)

Hello Maraness!

Unknown said...

I'll only do things 1nce happy?:()

Star Inkbright said...

No, I haven't watched it. Is it good? :)

Unknown said...

Ok on another note I've got a new baby girl cousin she will either be called Summer, Amelia or Ava I am leaving it to u the public (Luciana, Star) 2 vote.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hi Star :) hi Luci :)

Yes, Brad. Very happy indeed.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

MENTALLY DERANGED LLAMA!

Sorry, I'm feeling slightly random today and I'm trying to stop refering to myself in 3rd person D:

Luciana said...

Hello, Maralie~

Your name is so fun to say. c:

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Luci there's a motorcycle show going on in Ireland somewhere! :P

Unknown said...

Star- Wolfblood is great watch it on CBBC iplayer. It feels good not to keep my secret anymore it was a bit like China's dark little secret:() I dont know what that means.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Mara - your name reminds me of pokemon and I DOES NOT KNOW WHY! Is there a pokemon called Maralie? Isn't it an evolved form of Jigglypuff?

Star Inkbright said...

Uh, :)?

Sorry if I'm all disconnected, trying to be fully participating in real life and here at the same time . . .

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

But real life is so...REAL!

Unknown said...

Hi... Hi... Hi...Hi...Hi

Luciana said...

D;
MARA WHY DO YOU TELL ME THESE THINGS ;-;

CANNOT WAIT FOR DAYTONA THIS YEAR C:

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Luci - It is? Maralie. Maralieeeeee. Maaaaaralie. Marrrraaaaaliiiiieeeeee. Maaaaaarrrrralieeeee.

Hey Ieni! :)

Unknown said...

Nothing to do... might go

Unknown said...

Nothing to do... might go

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Hey, Clover, Star, Mara and Brad! :) *gives one big ninjaeroplanetacklehug*

Unknown said...

What should I do... Eat bricks I have a new topic eating bricks Yay!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

It was on the radio and I thought of you and was like asdfghjkl ImusttellLuciiii *grins*

POKEMON! I want to get a Pokémon game...

Star Inkbright said...

SUMMER! :)

Hi Willow, hi Ieni!

*nods* I'll try and watch it when I'm not being bombarded with things to do. D:

It is fun to say, it's it Scáth? I'm surprised there isn't a flower called a maralie, actually. :)

Unknown said...

Thanks for the hug Leni

Unknown said...

What to do... start eating curry?

Unknown said...

Nah... I hate curry... Corn?

Unknown said...

drtyui

Unknown said...

Star whats it like in high school I'm going to a emanual high school in Gayeshead:)(

Unknown said...

Hello;.....

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I WAS GOING TO TAKE THE NAME MARALIE FOR MY CONFIRMATION ACTUALLY BUT THERE ISN'T A SAINT MARALIE SO I CAN'T D: So I'm Ameliaaaaa :)

Unknown said...

...No hard feelings...

Unknown said...

Bored...

Unknown said...

This sentence will make no sense:
nobd r dhdjsklaaaaaaaaaaaawoi
Translated in English:
Nothing to do
Translated in Geordie:
Nought to dee

Unknown said...

This sentence will make no sense:
nobd r dhdjsklaaaaaaaaaaaawoi
Translated in English:
Nothing to do
Translated in Geordie:
Nought to dee

Unknown said...

Sorry every time I do a message it sends it twice what to do

Unknown said...

dOES ANYONE ever Talk

Anonymous said...

Morning. I am still on the wrong time, so it's 5 in the morning here. 7 in Chicago, and the sun is streaming through the blinds of grandma's seeing room, reflecting off all the snow they got right as we left...

Aaaanyway, hi.

Unknown said...

I might go

Anonymous said...

Brad, be patient.

"What's it like in high school" is a question with a complicated answer. People take time to type.

Unknown said...

Should I go sTAR

Luciana said...

Sorry, I'm talking to someone about selling some of my Skulduggery books...

Unknown said...

I am being pacient I am pacient no 1 ever answers my questions I dont care

Maralie Lily Charm said...

YOU'RE SELLING SOME OF YOUR BOOKS LUCI?! :O
but you tried so hard to collect them...

Unknown said...

Sell some of your books Auaghhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why would u do such a thing. I'm called braddeat on Twitter.

Unknown said...

:o SHAME ON YOU HOW CAN U SELL A SKUL BOOK

Unknown said...

:O not :o

Luciana said...

I've got loads of spares I don't need. XD

And I NEED TO BE ABLE TO GET TMS BECAUSE REMNANT TANITH IS MY FAVOURITE

that is the sole reason i want to sell the spare copies i have
Tanith.

SHE IS A BAMF. c:

Unknown said...

Luci how do u get Dereks blog as ur homepage?

Unknown said...

Tanith has lost her leather

Unknown said...

Luci it was very hard not to reapet that question.

Luciana said...

TANITH HAS NOT LOST HER LEATHER COMPLETELY

Derek said so c:

And if she had lost her leather, it'd be because I had stolen it XD

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Oh okay phew :P
I NEED TO GET TMS D: I need to save uppppppp.

Unknown said...

Hello...

Anonymous said...

Ah, spares, okay. Good luck selling them!

Unknown said...

I have saved up I've got £15.35

Anonymous said...

[Sarcastically] Mmm hmm. Totally patient.

I'm a bit grouchy, msd, I might try to sleep again.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Fabiiiiii!!!!!! Hi! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*

Apologies for disappearing - the washing up was forced upon me D:

Maralie Lily Charm said...
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Unknown said...

Is that enough. Do u think book 8 skulduggery goes camping will be longer than KOTW?

Anonymous said...

Hi Ieni!
[is ninjaeroplanetacklehugged]

Luciana said...

Plus, some other people will probably need them to complete their collections!

It's better than me holing onto spare copies that sit in my wardrobe, when they could make other people screech with happiness c:

Unknown said...

L

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hi Fabi! :)

Wb Ieni! :)

I'msothirstyandwe'reinthecaranddad'stalkingtosomeoneandIwanthimtoshutupanddrivemehomesoIcangetadrinkkkkkk D:

Unknown said...

L

Unknown said...

O

Unknown said...

I am gonna go at tthe 4000 comment Ok

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Nooooooooooo Mara -
Would you like to buy a drink from Ninja Aeroplane Cooperations. Please contact the manager if you do:)

Maralie Lily Charm said...

BUT I AM THE MANAGER D:

Unknown said...

42 COMMENTS LEFT AUAGH!!!! UNTIL I GO!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Hi Mara! :-)

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Brad, stop wasting valuable comment space! *frowns*

Unknown said...

49 COMMENTS L... FOR F*UCKS SAKE I'M GOING ALREADY

Unknown said...

i'M BACK NO I WILL COUNTIE TO USE COMMENT SPACE TO MAKE A LONG STORY SHORT
WE ALL WASTE IT. IS DRUNK

Maralie Lily Charm said...

No need to curse... *raises eyebrow*

Unknown said...

HEELO

Melica Frost said...

hello!

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Exacamoh Mara *grins*

Love your new picture Fabi! Are you away from the airports now?

Please stop wasting the comment space, Brad:)

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Mel!!!!!! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*
How's life in Meland?

Unknown said...

yES TEHRE IS CAUSE I'M DEAD

Melica Frost said...

Ieniii!!!!!
Lifes good! Im currently eating which is always a good time :)
you? :)

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Don't waste space, we need it to talk, Brad. Not listen to your random comments about nothing. If you're going to waste comment space, just leave.

Luciana said...

GUYS-

http://youllneedtofindyourselfanewhero.blogspot.co.uk/

Unknown said...

PEOPLE ALWAYS TELL ME THAT AND I JUST DONT LISTEN! WHA WHA

Unknown said...

PEOPLE ALWAYS TELL ME THAT AND I JUST DONT LISTEN! WHA WHA

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hey Mel! :)

Anonymous said...

Brad, while its true we all comment a lot, saying the H in one comment, the E in the next, et cetera is completely in necessary.

You could try

H

E

L

L

O

Which all fits in one comment. Or just not say hello again, because you triple-posted "Hello..." earlier.


Yes, I am definitely grouchy at the moment. Deal with it...or don't deal with it. Take your pick.

Unknown said...

I'll check it out later

Unknown said...

I will talk to myself then
Hello Brad how r u 2day
Not very good cause I'm being attacked by my computer

Anonymous said...

Thanks, Ieni.

Yeah, I'm done with airports until summer! [Celebrates]

Hi Mel!

Melica Frost said...

hey Mara! :)

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Mara - your emails make me laugh XD
I will reply to it later though, because of this stupid homework I haven't done, in which Blogland is distracting me D:

Ooo, yay for food Mel! And yay for anti-airports Fabi!

I'm good danke, Mel EXCEPT FOR STUPID HOMEWORK WHICH I SHOULD EAT. I procrastinate waaaaaay too much.

Unknown said...

People dont like me on this blog I might just destroy my account

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Why are you being attacked by your computer Brad?

Melica Frost said...

hey Fabi!

Unknown said...

JEAMAIL

Melica Frost said...

I procrastinate WAYYYYYYY to much aswell :)

Unknown said...

Leni- cause people r attacking me on this blog I will probaly just delete my account becasue people dont like me:(

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Ieni - I make you laugh? :P

Brad - That's good. It'll stop you wasting space.

Unknown said...

how r u today brad
good

Unknown said...

Maralie- I dont care

Unknown said...

Is there any way to delete your account

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Yes you do *nods* Would you like a certficate? With unicorns and rainbows and stars?

Hey, Kaleb! I don't think we've met:)

Brad - surely you wouldn't be good, because the computer is attacking you...?

Anonymous said...

Brad, people I hate I completely ignore. Since I'm talking to you, it means I don't hate you. I will admit, however, that I find you extremely annoying.

I do not think I am in the right frame of mind to deal with this immediate situation. Why did I come on here at 5 in th morning again? Probably because y'all are awesome.

Unknown said...

The sad life of Brad Wood
People didnt like Brad Wood
THE END
WHAT A NICE STORY

Anonymous said...

*the

Maralie Lily Charm said...

People like you annoy me so much -_- 10 year olds aren't even meant to have emails. I do because I talk to my dad because I never see him. But you, Brad, you just use yours to annoy us on purpose.

Unknown said...

Oh u find me anoying wow thats nice

Luciana said...

Fabi, I adore you. Just thought I'd let you knowwwwwww:)

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HULLO.

Anonymous said...

Greetings, Kaleb.

I'm probably going to go...too grouchy.

Unknown said...

Not talking to any of u's

Melica Frost said...

hey Miss Cain!
how're you?

Unknown said...

To myself
I am considred anoying by a girl that is annoying herself.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hey Missy :)

Brad, I never talk to people I hate. I ignore them, and don't bother myself with them. You, I find annoying. Hate is a strong word. I don't 'hate' anyone. But you are extremely annoying.

Fabi - WE'RE AWESOME? YAY! *grins*

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

I started emailing in Year 6, because of my music friend I never saw. I got Club Penguin at the beginnig of Year 7 (I still get the parent emails from that D:) and Facebook at the end of Year 7. The middle of Year 8 I got Twitter and I got Tumblr during summer holidays. Blogland was the beginning of Year 9.

MY SOCIAL NETWORKING LIFE STORY!

Anonymous said...

Thanks, Luci. [Hugs] You're awesome. And that is a statement of opinion, not a topic up for debate.

Hi Missy!

And possibly bye, I don't know... Msd.

Luciana said...

UGH

I DON'T WANT TO DED

If anyone else wants it, let me know. But I will ded if I have to.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Hey, Miss Cain! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Bye Fabi! :( *hugs*

That's fine Brad. I get that you find me annoying. I've been called worse. *shrugs*

Unknown said...

I find u extremly anoying how can u be like that when u havnt even met me face to face.

Anonymous said...

Yes, Mara, you are.

If not for Bloglandians, I would not be awake at this ridiculous hour of 6am on a Saturday. Well, Chicago and time zones probably have something to do with it, but I wouldn't be awake awake, I'd be trying to sleep again.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

How can you find me annoying when you haven't met me face to face?

Luciana said...

Hmmm... I'm dedding, I guess. Wbd.

Unknown said...

I JUST DO

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I'd be reading Jacqueline Wilson if I hadn't met Bloglandians... AND THERE IS NO VIOLENCE IN HER BOOKS D:

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Brb, gonna switch devices...

Unknown said...

SO THERE

Unknown said...

SO THERE

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Yay Luci! :) This'll be amazzzing. *grins*

So I just find you annoying Brad. You just answered your own question. :)

Anonymous said...

My "yes you are" was referring to awesome, not annoying, if there is any need for clarification.

Unknown said...

MARALIE R U TRYING TO SAY THAT I AM VIOLENT WHEN U CALLED ME ANOYING FIRST
*PUSHES*

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

If I had never met Bloglandians, I'd never have my amazing collection of Skulduggery books. :3
And I'd never know what a proof copy is.

Anonymous said...

Erm, pushing her is violent, Brad.

Unknown said...

WHAT THE...
WHAT TO DO.... WHAT TO DO

Maralie Lily Charm said...

*frowns* Brad, when did I say you were violent?

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Thank you Fabi. :)

Unknown said...

I'm not violent talking to myself Bye

Anonymous said...

Same, Missy. I'd have no idea so many different kinds of the books even existed.

Unknown said...

No I didnt I said r u saying I'm violent so get your facts right.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

*laughs* Brad, I meant Skulduggery is violent sometimes. I was making a joke.
And we all know you'll be back in a few minutes. :)

Unknown said...

yellow soup

Maralie Lily Charm said...

And I answered the question correctly, Brad. You should get your facts right :)
Oh, this is fun. :)

Unknown said...

Look ca we just stop this argument soryy OK! :(

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Great practice for my debating :) thanks for helping me practice, Brad! *hugs*

Now for the spelling bee... *frowns* I left the sheets at home...

Unknown said...

Say sorry

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