Saturday, February 16, 2013

Up For Air

84,726 words.

And that's the PLOT written.

Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.

Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.

Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.

If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.


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Unknown said...

Hi/Bye Fabi!

Unknown said...

Wait, what just happened?

Moss Harbor Elsinore Lantern Cryptic said...

Must go, I have dinner and I have to give Fabi back her iPod.

My computer's been broken for millennia, so ya.

Anyway, Bye!

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Green and blue.

Unknown said...

Hi Val!

Bye Shai!

Which one is blue?

Moss Harbor Elsinore Lantern Cryptic said...

I'm on Fabi's iPod, and it remembered her account for some reason. We're doing a trade, she's got my camera to take pics of Henry.

I'm the one leaving.

Moss Harbor Elsinore Lantern Cryptic said...

So yeah, Bye!

Willow Von Stratton said...

Bye Sahi, he Val

ahh, people using different accounts or no being the actual person is so confusing!

Unknown said...

My profile pic is now a chibi of me.

Anonymous said...

[Actually Fabi]
So now that Shai has

A. Been Shai...that is to say, confusing.
and
B. Given my iPod back

I'm here. Ugh, exhausted, but going to bed at 6:22 isn't going to get my mental clock back on schedule. I have to wait til at least eight, apparently.

Willow Von Stratton said...

soooo..this is the actual Fabi then? hehe

Unknown said...

Hi Fabi!



Yay! My brother has surrendered the TV. I will now watch My Little Pony!

Anonymous said...

Sorry, Willow. Usually I'm the only one using my iPod...

looks great, Sev!

Anonymous said...

And yes, this is actually Fabi.

Willow Von Stratton said...

it's fine

ok, if anything scares me in life, it's My Little pony O_o

Unknown said...

Have you watched it? It's actually pretty good.

Willow Von Stratton said...

If it's the little pony I'm thinking about, nope never have never will

Anonymous said...

Distant, typing up my MC chapters and waiting for Shai to finish eating so we can go to my place and make a Henry movie.

I don't watch my little pony. I don't really watch anything...

Anonymous said...

|||==||||~||||-|||-|==== formatting. Grr...

Unknown said...

OMG TINY APPLEJACK

Willow Von Stratton said...

I watch movies, I'm a huge movie fan, but I never watch actual TV shows

Anonymous said...

Sev, that means absolutely nothing to me.

I don't really watch much of either... Sometimes The Daily Show, if my dad's watching it, but I usually have better things to do with my time.

Willow Von Stratton said...

oh well, that's just you, I have a movie collection of old and newer

Man, what is it with german bands/singers and their military fetish..

Anonymous said...

Yep, it is just me.

Writer's block has returned...yuck. And Shai's done with dinner, so I'm going distant.

Anonymous said...

Everyone else I know likes movies. Even Shai, who hates movie theaters. Huh.

Anyway, distant.

Vultus Ulcorok said...

suup

Willow Von Stratton said...

alrighty Fabi

Hey Vultus, don't believe we have met before, in that case, nice to meet you

Vultus Ulcorok said...

dont believe we have. nice to meet you too

Willow Von Stratton said...

are you a regular or new?

Vultus Ulcorok said...

i used to be a regular about 2 years ago but i rarely go on now :)

Unknown said...

Hey Vultus!
I'm Persephone Grief. Assassin and occasional follower of the Faceless Ones. I can turn invisible.

Willow Von Stratton said...

Perse, for being an assassin you hardly ever assassinate lol :p

Vultus Ulcorok said...

Hi Grief, why do you support the Faceless Ones!? oh wait shes gone..

Willow Von Stratton said...

nah, she can still here you, just keep bugging her

Anonymous said...

Hello, Vultus. [Nods]

I'm Fabi, nice to meet you.

Vultus Ulcorok said...

Hey Fab *handshake*

Vultus Ulcorok said...

I think Persephone's trying to assassinate me.

But I can take her on

Unknown said...

Sorry for disappearing.
Rainbow Dash and Flutterby have great voices.

Vultus, no one's hired me to kill you, so I'm not going to bother.

I used to support the Faceless Ones completely. Now I only do it when my clients want.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Morning!

Willow Von Stratton said...

Hello Miss Cain

So Perse, if I ordered you to kill my annoying neighbor would you do it?

Vultus Ulcorok said...

Hey there Miss Cain

Unknown said...

I don 't take orders. GIVE ME MONEY


Hi Miss Cain!

Vultus Ulcorok said...

No not my little pony!

Vultus Ulcorok said...

goodbye, ill see you later team.

peace

Anonymous said...

Morning, Missy!

Apologies for being distant.

Anonymous said...

Au revoir, Vultus.

Willow Von Stratton said...

So if I gave you $20,000 would you do it?

Unknown said...

It's actually pretty good. There are good characters. And even though it's corny, the plots are good.

Unknown said...

Bye Vultus!

Von, probably.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI PEOPLE!
BYE PEOPLE!

Willow Von Stratton said...

Bye Miss Cain

Interesting Perse :p

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Wait, no I'm not leaving.
I meant the bye to Vultus.

Anonymous said...

Bye Missy!

Anonymous said...

Ah okay then. Not bye!

Unknown said...

I have to go now. Toodles!

Willow Von Stratton said...

Bye Perse

ok, then I take that goodbye back :p

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE SEV!!

Sorry, I can be incredibly confusing at times...

Alastair Cruciatus said...

New MC chapter! Half of it was written by Marina, so you know it's going to be hilarious! (seriously though neither of us could stop laughing while writing this)

Anonymous said...

Bye Sev!

Ari--OOH! [goes to read]

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Willow! I heard you were sick! How are you feeling?!?

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI ARI!!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

While I remember....

DEREK DON'T YOU DARE BLOG WHILE I'M AWAY AT CAMP.

DON'T.
YOU.
DARE.

Willow Von Stratton said...

reading it now!

and ya I was sick, got a severe case of food poisoning, i got out of the hospital today, so I'm feeling loads better, thanks for asking

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I've gotta go have a shower now.
Bbs!!

Alastair Cruciatus said...

I'm so happy you're feeling better, and congrats on getting out of the hospital!

HI MISSY!!!

HI FABI!!!!

Willow Von Stratton said...

thanks Aretha, since I wasn't able to eat in the hospital i'm gonna go out with a friend to a buffet and engorge myself! I know that's bad, but I also need to gain some weight, but today and tomorrow I'm eating not as heavy foods.

Anonymous said...

See you, Missy!

Hi Ari!

Distant, adding to what I wrote on the plane.

Anonymous said...

Ok, published. Not my best, but whatever. I'm too tired to be much of a perfectionist just now.

Willow Von Stratton said...

hey do any of you watch anime?

Alastair Cruciatus said...

I watch anime!! I've seen a few animes, at least... I actually just started re-watching a few of them. I'll be distant, and may disappear suddenly. *wanders off to read Fabi's chapter*

Willow Von Stratton said...

that's alright, but check out the anime Claymore, I just finished it and it's pretty good

Anonymous said...

Like I mentioned earlier, I don't watch much of anything. If I do, though, I'll keep it in mind.

Anonymous said...

And thanks for reading, Ari.

Willow Von Stratton said...

i shall read it also, but probably tomorrow, I'm getting distracted easily right now so I probably wouldn't finish reading

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Really? What's it about?

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Back!

Alastair Cruciatus said...

Fabi- Marina wants to know if you hate Niccolo as much as she does- do you mind telling me for her?

Welcome back, Missy!

Willow Von Stratton said...

WB Miss Cain...it's so long to explain...umm in short terms theirs these demon like humanoid creature who go around killing people, I think they might be released from an organization (don't remember) but the story focuses aaround Claymores who are female warriors and they are part demon part human..and ya, it's long to explain but it mostly focuses on one Claymore and this one boy

Willow Von Stratton said...

and the more they use their power the harder it becomes to stay more human and eventually have to be killed by another Claymore

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Anonymous said...

Ugh, I think I'm going to bed early. I'm getting angry... Low on sleep.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I haven't had a nice sleep in 3 weeks straight.
Damn school.

Willow Von Stratton said...

Wow, that is very little sleep

Goodnight Fabi

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Night Fabi!

I've had sleep, but not much like I had on the holidays...

Willow Von Stratton said...

I hardly really get any sleep, at last when i'm not sick. I typically live off on 4 hours of sleep a night

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I could never sleep for 4 hours.

Willow Von Stratton said...

meaning you can never sleep that long or you can't survive off of 4 hours a night?

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

The second.
I had no idea how to put it into words. *shrugs*

Willow Von Stratton said...

well not many canlive off of only 4 hours a night, I have no idea how I myself am able to function hehe

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

HII BLOGLANG!!!!!


msd...

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

*suddenly realizes that last comment was 10 minutes ago...*

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI JUBI!!

Willow Von Stratton said...

Jubiiii!!!!! *tackle hugs*

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

WILLOW!!!!! MISS CAIN!!!!!!!!!



hi.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

soo how are you guys on whatever time of day it is where you are...?

Willow Von Stratton said...

jubi I have sugar, which I'm eating to treat myself for coming home from the hospital *has retarded grin on face* lol

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

YAY!!!! WILLOW'S OUTTA THE HOSPITAL :P

Willow Von Stratton said...

yup! *tosses a bunch of candy wrappers in the air* lol

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I'm fine.
Bored a bit.

HOW ARE YOU??

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

I

AM






GOOD

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Gotta go now.
BYE ALL!!

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

BYE MISS CAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Willow Von Stratton said...

bye Miss Cain

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Hi! :)

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Aww, I missed Miss Cain :( Lol, missed Miss Cain... That probably only makes sense in my weird mind

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

SAPH!!!!!!!!!!!
hi.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

if you're still here...

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Sorry! I didn't mean to disappear :( Hi Jubi, if you're still here *hugs*

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Hmm-hmm-hmm.... Wbd, has sudden urge to write songs and fanfic

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Hi!!!
Yeah I'm still here :P

wbd though :)

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Same :) What're you doing?

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Well it's kinda a mixture of re-watchin doctor who episodes and doing a bunch of other random stuff at the same time...

Star Inkbright said...

Heyoooooooooo.

Msd.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

STAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi.

Star Inkbright said...

HI JUBI!

Star Inkbright said...

How're you? :)

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

I'm good!



Like a gumdrop :P

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Hi Star! *hugs* wbd I'm writing songs that randomly come to my head. How are you?
Jubi, did you see that really old doctor who? I like DW, but I ended up turning the tv off because it was awful.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Saph...
don't
watch
the
old
ones



that's all I'm saying right now.

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Ok... I won't... Although my friend saw the VERY first one nd she said it was great. How're you Star? Still there?

Star Inkbright said...

Still here. HI SAPPHIRE!!!!!!!

I'm annoyed, because strings orchestra. :/

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

ahhh...
I saw the first one..
it was a lot better than I thought that it would be, but it was still really really... old looking

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

I know, some of their attempts at 'the future' are really funny :)

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Haha xD

I remember when I was watching one of the earlier ones and it was when they went a coupe years into the future to 2012 when the Olympics were in London, and when the Olympics actually happened I was like "Hey! This isn't how it happened in Dr. Who!!"

Jophiel said...

Hey Blogland...
*Sits in secluded corner somewhere*

Jophiel said...

*Sings*
I've kept the tears in so long
I don't know who I'm hidin' from
When your face comes into view
I know that they're for you

*Wipes tears away*

Jophiel said...

*all for you

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

DEATH!!!!!!!
hi.

Jophiel said...

Hey...

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Hi Death! *hugs* You ok? You seem sad :( *Gives another hug*
I can only stay on for ten more minutes

Jophiel said...

My uncle's time is almost up...

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Oh my god!!! I'm so sorry! D:

Jophiel said...

I don't want him to go... He's my favorite... He's got a three year old daughter too...

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

*hugs*

Ariana Shade said...

Hahahaha, I'm watching Bridesmaids xD
It's effing hilarious!!

Ariana Shade said...
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I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

That's horrible... :'(

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

Oh Death *hugs* Poor you. I know it's always really hard. It's the same for my granddad at the moment. I just keep making sure that he knows how much he means to me. I guess it's the best we can do :(

Jophiel said...

Mmmm... I'm going to miss him terribly...

Jophiel said...

Why does life have to be so cruel...?

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...
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Jophiel said...

I don't think I'm lucky... My oldest sister had BIH, my older brother had an arachnoid cyst in his skull, my little brother had epilepsy, my older sister is pain mean... And I'm clinically depressed...
My life rocks!

Jophiel said...

He wont be here for Christmas...

Sapphire Iota (S/ Cam) said...

... I don't know what to say to that. Sorry if I upset you. I didn't mean to :(
I have to go now, but I'll be thinking of you. Bye *hugs*

Jophiel said...

It's okay... I can't get any worse now...

Bye Sapphire

Jophiel said...

Time is going by
So much faster than I
And I'm starting to regret not spendin' all of it with you...

Jophiel said...

Yep... There's definitely no hope left for him... Dad confirmed it right hen...

Jophiel said...

*then

Jophiel said...

Might be back... Might not...

Jophiel said...

Well, at least if he and his wife both pass, his daughter will come here

Luciana said...

...Hello?

Jophiel said...

Hey...

Sorry, I'm gone... Wont be back for a while...

Mycroft Holmes (Ember) said...

OH MY GOD DEATH

DONT LEAVE!!!!

I need a description of Ren!

Mycroft Holmes (Ember) said...

Aw cackles.

I'm planning on hanging out with all my favourite dead people in my chapter.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hullo. :)

Mycroft Holmes (Ember) said...

CAIN!

Oh my god, I poofed.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI EMBER!! *tacklehugs*

Mycroft Holmes (Ember) said...

*tacklehugs*

For my MC chapter, I'm stuck in Heaven/Hell, so I can hang out with all my fave dead people.

Luciana said...

CHAPTER 3 WILL BE UP SOON

Warning though - it's really bad~

Imma go start Chapter 4 in a minute, wbd.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

That should be an.... interesting chapter.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI L!!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY CHAPTER 3!!

Mycroft Holmes (Ember) said...

DAMMIT I POOFED AGAIN

I'm watching Ellen, though, so it's natural.

Luciana said...

Sorry I'm so distant. Just checking through Chapter 3 for errors.

Well, making Zath tell me where all the errors/mistakes are. XD

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Zath is brilliant at checking for errors/mistakes.
Zath is brilliant at a lot of things, actually.

Luciana said...

I AGREE

he's awesome.

But he needs to stop telling me I need to get some more sleep. XD

He fixed all the mistakesd for me, bless him

Zathract Mist said...

How I went from Grammar Nazi to Grammar Slave is beyond me, but frankly I don't care much.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI ZATH!!

Luciana said...

*Laughs*
Hey, Zath.

Zathract Mist said...

Hi Miss!

Hi Luce, who I'm now talking to in three different places at once!

*makes a mental note not to say "get some sleep" any time soon*

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*hits foot*
It's fallen asleep...

Zathract Mist said...

*scowls*

I got first. Seriously?

*grumbles*

Gabriel said...

Hello, everyone who is here.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI GABRIEL!

Zathract Mist said...

Hey Gab!

Haven't seen you since... since the last time I saw you.

Gabriel said...

Hey, Mist. Yeah, when was that... I don't know.

Well, how are you guys?

Luciana said...

BLOGGER KEEPS CRASHING >_<

HELLO GAB!

Gabriel said...

Hi L!

Gabriel said...

Hey guys, guess what?

I got into the highest English class! ENGX!

So. I don't know how I got there.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I'm good!! And I just realised I like listening to songs like Cannibal by Ke$ha. O_o

Aisling Dubh said...

Hi people

I think I'm only going to be here for about 5-10 minues so I don't even know why I bothered coming on.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

YAAAAAY GAB!!
English is basically the best subject ever. :D

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI AISLING!!

Gabriel said...

Meh, I don't think I like songs...named Cannibal. It just freaks me out.

Hello Aisling, I don't think we've met.

Dozo yoroshiku.

*bows*

Aisling Dubh said...

Hello Gabriel no we haven't met.

Luciana said...

http://skuttlebugsassemble.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/chapter-3.html

Chapter 3 is up. :)

Gabriel said...

Guys, they revealed the PS4!! Well, the controllers but they announced the PS4!!

I need money right away!

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Yellows!

Luciana said...

HELLO IENI:)

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI IENI!!

Wait, there's gonna be a PS4??

CHAPTER 3!! *races off to read*

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

WAIT A SEC.
GAB, DO YOU KNOW JAPANESE??

Aisling Dubh said...

Hi Leni!

Gabriel said...

Yes!!PS4! AND THE CONTROLLERS LOOKS SEXY AS.

Hi Ieni! I'm Gabriel, call me Gab!

Aisling Dubh said...

I have to go play a football match BYE.

Gabriel said...

Well, I'm revising all the Japanese I know so I can get in Japanese next year if I fail music.

I think I know Hiragana, and some of the basic greetings and questions.

Gabriel said...

Bye Aisling!

Zathract Mist said...

I honestly don't know. It was a while, though. I haven't been on here frequently for months now.

I be good. Congrats on the English!

How's you?

Luciana said...

Bye Aisling!

ONTO CHAPTER FOURRRRRRR

Zathract Mist said...

*frowns*

That only commented now?

Gabriel said...

Well, me and I friends are making a youtube channel *shh* it's a secret. And we already made the introduction video. My friend is editing them now. Uhh. Studying more or less Japanese. Biology. Music. Bass guitar lessons. Tumblr!! Games. Anime! Noughts and Crosses.

And Tumblring about games.

Luciana said...

My writing playlist is the b e s t

Pokémon theme tune, then Papercut (by Linkin Park), then Sweet Child of Mine (Guns N Roses<3), Teenage Dirtbag (Wheatus), Learn To Fly (Foo Fighters) and Pulling Teeth (Metallica).

So far, this playlist is perfect c:

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