84,726 words.
And that's the PLOT written.
Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.
Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.
Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.
If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.
Saturday, February 16, 2013
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«Oldest ‹Older 3601 – 3800 of 4957 Newer› Newest»Hi/Bye Fabi!
Wait, what just happened?
Must go, I have dinner and I have to give Fabi back her iPod.
My computer's been broken for millennia, so ya.
Anyway, Bye!
Green and blue.
Hi Val!
Bye Shai!
Which one is blue?
I'm on Fabi's iPod, and it remembered her account for some reason. We're doing a trade, she's got my camera to take pics of Henry.
I'm the one leaving.
So yeah, Bye!
Bye Sahi, he Val
ahh, people using different accounts or no being the actual person is so confusing!
My profile pic is now a chibi of me.
[Actually Fabi]
So now that Shai has
A. Been Shai...that is to say, confusing.
and
B. Given my iPod back
I'm here. Ugh, exhausted, but going to bed at 6:22 isn't going to get my mental clock back on schedule. I have to wait til at least eight, apparently.
soooo..this is the actual Fabi then? hehe
Hi Fabi!
Yay! My brother has surrendered the TV. I will now watch My Little Pony!
Sorry, Willow. Usually I'm the only one using my iPod...
looks great, Sev!
And yes, this is actually Fabi.
it's fine
ok, if anything scares me in life, it's My Little pony O_o
Have you watched it? It's actually pretty good.
If it's the little pony I'm thinking about, nope never have never will
Distant, typing up my MC chapters and waiting for Shai to finish eating so we can go to my place and make a Henry movie.
I don't watch my little pony. I don't really watch anything...
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OMG TINY APPLEJACK
I watch movies, I'm a huge movie fan, but I never watch actual TV shows
Sev, that means absolutely nothing to me.
I don't really watch much of either... Sometimes The Daily Show, if my dad's watching it, but I usually have better things to do with my time.
oh well, that's just you, I have a movie collection of old and newer
Man, what is it with german bands/singers and their military fetish..
Yep, it is just me.
Writer's block has returned...yuck. And Shai's done with dinner, so I'm going distant.
Everyone else I know likes movies. Even Shai, who hates movie theaters. Huh.
Anyway, distant.
suup
alrighty Fabi
Hey Vultus, don't believe we have met before, in that case, nice to meet you
dont believe we have. nice to meet you too
are you a regular or new?
i used to be a regular about 2 years ago but i rarely go on now :)
Hey Vultus!
I'm Persephone Grief. Assassin and occasional follower of the Faceless Ones. I can turn invisible.
Perse, for being an assassin you hardly ever assassinate lol :p
Hi Grief, why do you support the Faceless Ones!? oh wait shes gone..
nah, she can still here you, just keep bugging her
Hello, Vultus. [Nods]
I'm Fabi, nice to meet you.
Hey Fab *handshake*
I think Persephone's trying to assassinate me.
But I can take her on
Sorry for disappearing.
Rainbow Dash and Flutterby have great voices.
Vultus, no one's hired me to kill you, so I'm not going to bother.
I used to support the Faceless Ones completely. Now I only do it when my clients want.
Morning!
Hello Miss Cain
So Perse, if I ordered you to kill my annoying neighbor would you do it?
Hey there Miss Cain
I don 't take orders. GIVE ME MONEY
Hi Miss Cain!
No not my little pony!
goodbye, ill see you later team.
peace
Morning, Missy!
Apologies for being distant.
Au revoir, Vultus.
So if I gave you $20,000 would you do it?
It's actually pretty good. There are good characters. And even though it's corny, the plots are good.
Bye Vultus!
Von, probably.
HI PEOPLE!
BYE PEOPLE!
Bye Miss Cain
Interesting Perse :p
Wait, no I'm not leaving.
I meant the bye to Vultus.
Bye Missy!
Ah okay then. Not bye!
I have to go now. Toodles!
Bye Perse
ok, then I take that goodbye back :p
BYE SEV!!
Sorry, I can be incredibly confusing at times...
New MC chapter! Half of it was written by Marina, so you know it's going to be hilarious! (seriously though neither of us could stop laughing while writing this)
Bye Sev!
Ari--OOH! [goes to read]
Willow! I heard you were sick! How are you feeling?!?
HI ARI!!
While I remember....
DEREK DON'T YOU DARE BLOG WHILE I'M AWAY AT CAMP.
DON'T.
YOU.
DARE.
reading it now!
and ya I was sick, got a severe case of food poisoning, i got out of the hospital today, so I'm feeling loads better, thanks for asking
I've gotta go have a shower now.
Bbs!!
I'm so happy you're feeling better, and congrats on getting out of the hospital!
HI MISSY!!!
HI FABI!!!!
thanks Aretha, since I wasn't able to eat in the hospital i'm gonna go out with a friend to a buffet and engorge myself! I know that's bad, but I also need to gain some weight, but today and tomorrow I'm eating not as heavy foods.
See you, Missy!
Hi Ari!
Distant, adding to what I wrote on the plane.
Ok, published. Not my best, but whatever. I'm too tired to be much of a perfectionist just now.
hey do any of you watch anime?
I watch anime!! I've seen a few animes, at least... I actually just started re-watching a few of them. I'll be distant, and may disappear suddenly. *wanders off to read Fabi's chapter*
that's alright, but check out the anime Claymore, I just finished it and it's pretty good
Like I mentioned earlier, I don't watch much of anything. If I do, though, I'll keep it in mind.
And thanks for reading, Ari.
i shall read it also, but probably tomorrow, I'm getting distracted easily right now so I probably wouldn't finish reading
Really? What's it about?
Back!
Fabi- Marina wants to know if you hate Niccolo as much as she does- do you mind telling me for her?
Welcome back, Missy!
WB Miss Cain...it's so long to explain...umm in short terms theirs these demon like humanoid creature who go around killing people, I think they might be released from an organization (don't remember) but the story focuses aaround Claymores who are female warriors and they are part demon part human..and ya, it's long to explain but it mostly focuses on one Claymore and this one boy
and the more they use their power the harder it becomes to stay more human and eventually have to be killed by another Claymore
Ugh, I think I'm going to bed early. I'm getting angry... Low on sleep.
I haven't had a nice sleep in 3 weeks straight.
Damn school.
Wow, that is very little sleep
Goodnight Fabi
Night Fabi!
I've had sleep, but not much like I had on the holidays...
I hardly really get any sleep, at last when i'm not sick. I typically live off on 4 hours of sleep a night
I could never sleep for 4 hours.
meaning you can never sleep that long or you can't survive off of 4 hours a night?
The second.
I had no idea how to put it into words. *shrugs*
well not many canlive off of only 4 hours a night, I have no idea how I myself am able to function hehe
HII BLOGLANG!!!!!
msd...
*suddenly realizes that last comment was 10 minutes ago...*
HI JUBI!!
Jubiiii!!!!! *tackle hugs*
WILLOW!!!!! MISS CAIN!!!!!!!!!
hi.
soo how are you guys on whatever time of day it is where you are...?
jubi I have sugar, which I'm eating to treat myself for coming home from the hospital *has retarded grin on face* lol
YAY!!!! WILLOW'S OUTTA THE HOSPITAL :P
yup! *tosses a bunch of candy wrappers in the air* lol
I'm fine.
Bored a bit.
HOW ARE YOU??
I
AM
GOOD
Gotta go now.
BYE ALL!!
BYE MISS CAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bye Miss Cain
Hi! :)
Aww, I missed Miss Cain :( Lol, missed Miss Cain... That probably only makes sense in my weird mind
SAPH!!!!!!!!!!!
hi.
if you're still here...
Sorry! I didn't mean to disappear :( Hi Jubi, if you're still here *hugs*
Hmm-hmm-hmm.... Wbd, has sudden urge to write songs and fanfic
Hi!!!
Yeah I'm still here :P
wbd though :)
Same :) What're you doing?
Well it's kinda a mixture of re-watchin doctor who episodes and doing a bunch of other random stuff at the same time...
Heyoooooooooo.
Msd.
STAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi.
HI JUBI!
How're you? :)
I'm good!
Like a gumdrop :P
Hi Star! *hugs* wbd I'm writing songs that randomly come to my head. How are you?
Jubi, did you see that really old doctor who? I like DW, but I ended up turning the tv off because it was awful.
Saph...
don't
watch
the
old
ones
that's all I'm saying right now.
Ok... I won't... Although my friend saw the VERY first one nd she said it was great. How're you Star? Still there?
Still here. HI SAPPHIRE!!!!!!!
I'm annoyed, because strings orchestra. :/
ahhh...
I saw the first one..
it was a lot better than I thought that it would be, but it was still really really... old looking
I know, some of their attempts at 'the future' are really funny :)
Haha xD
I remember when I was watching one of the earlier ones and it was when they went a coupe years into the future to 2012 when the Olympics were in London, and when the Olympics actually happened I was like "Hey! This isn't how it happened in Dr. Who!!"
Hey Blogland...
*Sits in secluded corner somewhere*
*Sings*
I've kept the tears in so long
I don't know who I'm hidin' from
When your face comes into view
I know that they're for you
*Wipes tears away*
*all for you
DEATH!!!!!!!
hi.
Hey...
Hi Death! *hugs* You ok? You seem sad :( *Gives another hug*
I can only stay on for ten more minutes
My uncle's time is almost up...
Oh my god!!! I'm so sorry! D:
I don't want him to go... He's my favorite... He's got a three year old daughter too...
*hugs*
Hahahaha, I'm watching Bridesmaids xD
It's effing hilarious!!
That's horrible... :'(
Oh Death *hugs* Poor you. I know it's always really hard. It's the same for my granddad at the moment. I just keep making sure that he knows how much he means to me. I guess it's the best we can do :(
Mmmm... I'm going to miss him terribly...
Why does life have to be so cruel...?
I don't think I'm lucky... My oldest sister had BIH, my older brother had an arachnoid cyst in his skull, my little brother had epilepsy, my older sister is pain mean... And I'm clinically depressed...
My life rocks!
He wont be here for Christmas...
... I don't know what to say to that. Sorry if I upset you. I didn't mean to :(
I have to go now, but I'll be thinking of you. Bye *hugs*
It's okay... I can't get any worse now...
Bye Sapphire
Time is going by
So much faster than I
And I'm starting to regret not spendin' all of it with you...
Yep... There's definitely no hope left for him... Dad confirmed it right hen...
*then
Might be back... Might not...
Well, at least if he and his wife both pass, his daughter will come here
...Hello?
Hey...
Sorry, I'm gone... Wont be back for a while...
OH MY GOD DEATH
DONT LEAVE!!!!
I need a description of Ren!
Aw cackles.
I'm planning on hanging out with all my favourite dead people in my chapter.
Hullo. :)
CAIN!
Oh my god, I poofed.
HI EMBER!! *tacklehugs*
*tacklehugs*
For my MC chapter, I'm stuck in Heaven/Hell, so I can hang out with all my fave dead people.
CHAPTER 3 WILL BE UP SOON
Warning though - it's really bad~
Imma go start Chapter 4 in a minute, wbd.
That should be an.... interesting chapter.
HI L!!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY CHAPTER 3!!
DAMMIT I POOFED AGAIN
I'm watching Ellen, though, so it's natural.
Sorry I'm so distant. Just checking through Chapter 3 for errors.
Well, making Zath tell me where all the errors/mistakes are. XD
Zath is brilliant at checking for errors/mistakes.
Zath is brilliant at a lot of things, actually.
I AGREE
he's awesome.
But he needs to stop telling me I need to get some more sleep. XD
He fixed all the mistakesd for me, bless him
How I went from Grammar Nazi to Grammar Slave is beyond me, but frankly I don't care much.
HI ZATH!!
*Laughs*
Hey, Zath.
Hi Miss!
Hi Luce, who I'm now talking to in three different places at once!
*makes a mental note not to say "get some sleep" any time soon*
*hits foot*
It's fallen asleep...
*scowls*
I got first. Seriously?
*grumbles*
Hello, everyone who is here.
HI GABRIEL!
Hey Gab!
Haven't seen you since... since the last time I saw you.
Hey, Mist. Yeah, when was that... I don't know.
Well, how are you guys?
BLOGGER KEEPS CRASHING >_<
HELLO GAB!
Hi L!
Hey guys, guess what?
I got into the highest English class! ENGX!
So. I don't know how I got there.
I'm good!! And I just realised I like listening to songs like Cannibal by Ke$ha. O_o
Hi people
I think I'm only going to be here for about 5-10 minues so I don't even know why I bothered coming on.
YAAAAAY GAB!!
English is basically the best subject ever. :D
HI AISLING!!
Meh, I don't think I like songs...named Cannibal. It just freaks me out.
Hello Aisling, I don't think we've met.
Dozo yoroshiku.
*bows*
Hello Gabriel no we haven't met.
http://skuttlebugsassemble.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/chapter-3.html
Chapter 3 is up. :)
Guys, they revealed the PS4!! Well, the controllers but they announced the PS4!!
I need money right away!
Yellows!
HELLO IENI:)
HI IENI!!
Wait, there's gonna be a PS4??
CHAPTER 3!! *races off to read*
WAIT A SEC.
GAB, DO YOU KNOW JAPANESE??
Hi Leni!
Yes!!PS4! AND THE CONTROLLERS LOOKS SEXY AS.
Hi Ieni! I'm Gabriel, call me Gab!
I have to go play a football match BYE.
Well, I'm revising all the Japanese I know so I can get in Japanese next year if I fail music.
I think I know Hiragana, and some of the basic greetings and questions.
Bye Aisling!
I honestly don't know. It was a while, though. I haven't been on here frequently for months now.
I be good. Congrats on the English!
How's you?
Bye Aisling!
ONTO CHAPTER FOURRRRRRR
*frowns*
That only commented now?
Well, me and I friends are making a youtube channel *shh* it's a secret. And we already made the introduction video. My friend is editing them now. Uhh. Studying more or less Japanese. Biology. Music. Bass guitar lessons. Tumblr!! Games. Anime! Noughts and Crosses.
And Tumblring about games.
My writing playlist is the b e s t
Pokémon theme tune, then Papercut (by Linkin Park), then Sweet Child of Mine (Guns N Roses<3), Teenage Dirtbag (Wheatus), Learn To Fly (Foo Fighters) and Pulling Teeth (Metallica).
So far, this playlist is perfect c:
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