84,726 words.
And that's the PLOT written.
Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.
Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.
Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.
If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.
Saturday, February 16, 2013
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«Oldest ‹Older 3001 – 3200 of 4957 Newer› Newest»Thanks Ember! And sorry that it seems that way with SPPB and MAHU xP of COURSE we can be blogfriends again :)
No, I don't think that the roof is on the bird I have tried to say, but wrong could be I.
i do thank Sept for the compliment, I'm just sayin' I don't like to boast about things :P
ember what do you mean a little piece of you died? :)
YAAAAA
*chariots of fire plays*
*runs in slo-mo*
*tries to jump in the air and hi5 Jubi*
*falls*
*an octopus danced the cha-cha*
Sorry, MC reference XD
I keep doing it and its annoying, like when Im writing if I think ahead to the end of the sentence I start writing the bit at the end at the start of it if you know what I mean?
i wanna see an octopus dance the cha-cha! haha
haha xD
I moved from Singapore to Austria, and then I stopped learning it, even though I'd been learning it ,y whole life pretty much, so it was like a piece of me died
*random thought in my head so I have to put it out there* I was watching a music video and then I realied...German and Irish guys are so damn attractive *starts laughing*
aww right :) well if it helps everytime I step into my french class a little piece of my happiness just dissapears...dont know where it goes...it just does...
NOOOOOOOOOO MY PERSONALITY IS JUSTINE AND IT'S NOT AWESOME OR ANYTHINGLE. D:
ABER DANKE! :)
So half an hour later, I haven't done my French homework, but I copied the exercise down onto a piece of paper so I can do it whilst getting ready for school and on the bus tomorrow. Yeah, wonderful. XD
I may start on the translation right now actually . . .
Msd.
HI RIM!
HI ANYONE ELSE I MISSED!
Where did Luci go?
The idea came from Fictionpress, where somebody said...
Would you rather see an alien baby or a talking rat doing the salsa before you die?
And also my stories from when I was four, which went like
"Why do I have to kick a ball?"
"Because that's what you do on a slide."
I swear, that was pretty much a word for word quote.
Want to hear a word for word quote which I wrote when I was four and now use all the time for no reason?
Birds are owls.
STAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi.
VAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi.
hey Val. and I wanna hear the quote!
I just got out of school... IM ON THE BUSSS
HI IVY!
I've been here hours, Jubi! *hugs* :)
ooohhh
*dramatic voice*
THE BUUUSSSSSSS
Hey Val!
you heard about that too Sept?
I hate busses!
Star, Oh yeeaaahhh.....
heh heh
HI RIM! *gives her a green squirrel*
the...bus? Im kiddin I know what a bus is but Im more of a train person :)
*takes squirrel* Thanking you kindly.
*hugs her*
Public transport. *groans*
I prefer walking or my dad's bike...
Btw, Star has no idea what the French for tie is, but I'm honoured you condidored I might. :)
The bus is fun, though! O:
The school bus, guys, not a public one. Y'know, the big banana limo.
*squirms out of Rim's hug because I'm awkward around people*
Sorry, someone was stealing my whole "Necromancy in my boots." thing ._.
Ah, Val. My hugs are awesome! You know you're awesome when you receive one!
ahhhh the school bus :) we dont have those in my neck of the woods :)
I go on the bus to and from school . . .
YAY BUSIANS. *hi-fives Ivy* Give me 500!
Oh wait, they may not have the 118 500 advert in America . . .
I just don't like any busses, I'd rather walk or drive.
It's alright Luci.
aaaannnnddd now i gotta go..
BYE GUYS!
baii Jubi :(
Bye Jubi!
We take school buses in America
They yellow and they only drive schoolkids and we have stops at or close to our homes each bus has a community to drive kids to and from school in
ahhh yeah we have public buses but Im more of a train person CHOO! CHOO!
But it's fun, on the bus! :(
Bye jubi
*oggles at chris pohl in music video*...i think...I'm...TECHNICALLY IN LOVE WITH THIS GUY...and the female singer reminds of a Valkyrie in her 40's, just the singer needs to be thinner
FOURS JUBI! :(
Our buses only go to the school and our village (some stop at more than one village, maybe town), so it's like, why would an ordinary member of the public get on the bus to just go to another placr in my village or the school?
I don't even know if members of the public can get on. Probably.
Do you have to pay to get on the bus then, Americans? £1:50 per journey for us, but I have a bus pass. Assuming I go on the bus every day, which I do, it equals half the total cost per year than the cost of paying every journey.
*stands arms crossed, foot tapping*
An hour to go D:
I got a good welcome back to school today :D
Star, how far away is your school?
75p per journey... That's a lot of money per year.
we pay $1.50 for public buses in california
yay, you're eeling better Flame ^^
An idea formed for a story, don't know about it though.
and that's our price per journey or wecan get a bus pass for the day for $4
Guys! Guys! Look!
I MADE CHIBI SKULDUGGERY!
http://persephonegrief.blogspot.com/2013/02/chibi-skulduggery.html
£1:50??? I only have to pay 75 pence! but yeah like I said I get the train because I live in Glasgow...which is a city...as you all probably might know...
Hey Flameboi!
omg I love the chibi skuldiggery!
Any suggestions for who to make next?
I'm still coughing, though :L
How are you?
And 1.50 for the bus everyday? Seriously?
I live five minute walk away from my school.
Literally.
Here's my school
.
. <That's my house.
I it takes me 5 minutes to walk from my house to my locker :3
Imagine my house 6 spaces to the right.
have you made a chibi Valkyrie?
Well it's 1.50 per journey so I pay once, then to go back home I pay 1.50 again, but I never take the bus unless I HAVE TO
thats close flame :) I live two and a half miles away from my school :D
Valkyrie has brown eyes, right?
yeah Sev :)
Well, it's only about a five-minute bus journey if you don't count the stops (if you do . . . fifteen minutes?), but it would be around three miles to walk because the route the buses take is hazardous for walking. Even the route they take when it's snowy so they can't go the normal roure (coz steep hill) is hazardous.
And if you don't have a bus pass, it's £1:50 per journey. 75p is well cheap. :)
HI FLAME!
Msd, merember. :)
they're dark eyes, but i think they are brown
You get a bunch of weird people on the public buses
School buses free
Public buses i think $1.00
I gave Valkyrie a stick :D
What color eyes does Tanith have? I can't remember and I'm too lazy to look it up.
Anyway, I thought I would grace you with my presence.
I g2g now. Bye :)
AND OMG DEREK SIGNING COPES OF TMS.
JUST LOOKS :( BECKY TOOK THE PHOTO.
HOW HOW.
I wonder does she have a copy...
Anyway, Bye!
(pic on FaceBook btw, in case you're wondering)
bye Flame.
I think Tanith has blue, I don't really remember
Bye Flame!
Bye Flame!
£1.50 THERE, £1.50 BACK, £3 per DAY . . .
Dark eyes, so yeah, brown. :)
We can't TAKE the train. The bus goes from our village down the hill past the fields opposite the chalk quarry, then turns left at the bottom of the hill, goes with the trees on one side and the quarry on the other, goes round the roundabout, past the houses of the village my school's in, turns right, turns left, then turns left into the bus park.
We're not in the middle of the country, but trains to school? *laughs at the thought of a train track beside the road up the hill to my village*
trains are fun to ride in, I admit
Ugh. I was going to re-ded last page... But then the internet went down for an hour...
And no, I'm not Mycroft Holmes, Jubi. Not that you're still here, but for the record.
Hi Fabi!
Fabi!!!! *hugs*
Hi Sev! Assuming I am here. I don't trust the Internet [glares at router suspiciously]
Willow!!! [hugs]
How are you feeling?
Anyway, I thought I would grace you with my presence.
I g2g now. Bye :)
AND OMG DEREK SIGNING COPES OF TMS.
JUST LOOKS :( BECKY TOOK THE PHOTO.
HOW HOW.
I wonder does she have a copy...
Anyway, Bye!
(pic on FaceBook btw, in case you're wondering)
SCHOOL BUSES FREE????
Although, I almost forgot, if you live three miles walking or more away from the school you get a free bus pass. Ah, in year seven they told me I was 2.974 miles. away so I didn't get one. There was a big hoo-hah about it and all. We have three kids in our family, so about a thousand pounds on bus monry per year? Only I keep forgetting this year I have a free one. Coz people nearer than us by a street got one, so my mum phoned up, they double-checked, and said oh yeag you're over three miles. (?)
Fabi!
I am creating SP chibi's!
Look at my Skulduggery one.
http://persephonegrief.blogspot.com/2013/02/chibi-skulduggery.html
i'm feeling better little by little still have a low-grade fever but if i do fine for the rest of the day, they'll release me tomorrow
I hope you feel better, Von!
thanks Perse, day by day i am :)
Willow, Yay, congrats! Hope you do get to go home.
Star, it's probably as the crow flies versus as the sidewalks let you walk.
Bye, Flame!
Nice, Sev!
Okay. I'm going to post my Fletcher, Valkyrie, and Tanith chibi's and then I have to go.
Aww, okay. Bye, Sev!
Bye!
yay, I wanna see.
and thanks Fabi, can't wait to have normal food, lol
I just wanted to say that every single one of you guys have been absolutely amazing through this hard time that I've been going through.
But I'm afraid that I have not shown the same kindness back. I haven't been coming onto the blog or being there for some true friends.
I'm sorry that I haven't been coming on and checking up on you all because you are all just as important to me as anyone else in my life.
I just wanted to let you all know that you really are my best friends and I'm sorry, I will try to be there for you whenever you need me from now on.
Normal food is great! [agrees wholeheartedly]
Sorry that I keep disappearing XD
I'm trying to busy myself by writing...
it's alright Luci
yup, it is, and then I'm looking forward to the buffet with Thomas on Sunday, so I hope I can eat what I want
[hugs Em]
You need the kindness more than I do right now.
Fooooooooooooood.
Aw, it's close to dinner, can't get a snack... There wasn't much left by the time I got to lunch, but being here was more important.
And sorry for disappearing also. Internet hates me right now.
Internet can be such a both, and EM if you need someone to talk to, I'm here!
Nonsense Fabi...
We're friends, that means being equal.
As the crow flies, it's probably five minutes walking. :)
It's a complex walking route . . .
EMMMMMMMMM don't feel bad. :(
Don't feel you have to do everything and act normal. *hugs*
You're such an awesome person. :)
Not necessarily, Em. Think. In Gone, Sanjeet and Virtue are friends. Sanjeet is always optimistic and Virtue is always pessimistic. Virtue always worries, Sanjeet shrugs it off. That's very unequal, but it works out as a friendship. :) This can apply to other contexts as well. *nkds*
Internet again... Not an hour this time, thankfully.
[Smiles] Em, I appreciate that you're trying to be here more. [hugs again]
You guys are so much nicer than the people on my street, or even most of the people at my school.
Msd, dinner and/or internet.
I'm sure their's some nice people on your street or at school
HEY! LUCIANA! OI! GUESS WHAT?
I just got the SP audiobook from the library, so I can learn from his accent.
Seeeeee? I is a smart one, yes.
And I got Divergent and Insurgent, too.
VAL, I APPROVE C:
I THOUGHT SO :D
AND IT'S REALLY COLD MY HOUSE
I'm shivering even with my duvet wrapped around me!
In my*
Stupid phone:L
What colors are Davina Marr's eyes? Which is left and which is right?
Anyone?
Je ne sais pas.
HIII PEOPLEEEE
i'm jailbreakin my phonee :P
What does that consist of anyway?
i think that one's blue and one's green...
I think one is brown though.....
I'm pretty sure it's green..
Hi Jubi, Sev!
I'm writing a really tough chapter that just won't come out! Distant.
FABI!!!!!
hi. :P
Hiya! [Grins evilly]
Hiya *laughs evilly*
Hiya. [Evilly doubles over with laughter]
Hiya. *sits on a rock*
*Ferdinand appears*
FERDY!! I MISSED YOU!!!
Hiya! [Evilly scratches ninja-cat behind the ears]
*jumps on Ferdy's back*
FLY FERDY FLY!!!!!
*soars up into sky*
*Summons Clemy*
CLEMY!!
*hops on back*
*flies around*
Haha!
[Calls Henry. Henry is being stubborn and won't enter Blogland] Drat!
... Henry the /owl/????
*Ferdy growls at Clementine*
FERDY! DON'T BE MEAN! Is that even possible?
*Clemy growls back at Ferdy*
Henry the owl indeed. Or rather, his subconscious.
psshhh
everyone knows that you can't ride OWLS
Depends on the size and cooperation of the owl, I assure you.
But wouldn't you be in the way of the wings?
Depends on where I was sitting. There are more places to sit on a twenty-foot owl subconscious. Then again, I've never tried it in Blogland, for the simple reason of Henry not being here. He's stubborn that way. Also, I think he's mad at me for leaving him back in Seattle, so...yeah.
G2G
BYE!
Au revoir.
Aaaaand, I'm packing now! Can't believe vacation is over, already... Already being tomorrow morning.
Hallo an alle! Ich darf das Krankenhaus von morgen, yay verlassen!
which means, hello everyone, i'm allowed to leave the hospital tomorrow, yay!
Congrats!
[Veryveryvery distant, packing stuff]
Oh, and hi!
hi, lol, and thanks
that's fine pack away, I'll just be reading comics :p
?????What is a baggy of neon pink sequins doing in my backpack?????? They're NEON PINK, so they can't possible be mine. [Shrugs] Well, guess I'll put then in Grandma's seeing box. I certainly don't need them.
sure they're not yours? lol
Jubi really really really hates homework
I really really really hate homework to, at least so far you don't have to write a 6 page essay
No, I have to write nine different essays by tomorrow.
haha no problem! Actually I like writing, people say I have a way with it, it comes "easy", and well i just overall enjoy it
can you write me 9 essays on ancient greece then, please?
I'LL BE YOUR BEST FRIEND!!
^_^
Well 1) i'm still not fully well and 2) you ned to learn! Expand your knowledge!
uuggghh
BUT I DON'T NEED TO KNOW THIS!!!
Sure you do!..knowledge is power! :p
Speaking of essays I have no idea what topic I wanna do, that's always the hardest part for me, picking the topic
Blech, essays.
well, evel though they're blech to you, I'm sure you guys are pretty good at it
And the sequins are definitely not mine.
ok Fabi :p
Lily's theme to harry potter is so sad
I get decent grades. They're not good enough in my opinion, though.
I usually get B- or better...
Now if they were purple, they'd definitely belong to me. PURPLE!!!!!
I get these number thingies that translate to As and Bs.
that's a weird way o grading, and I usually get A's and B's
Yeah. It's almost percents, but the people who set up the system were too lazy to go all the way to 100 and stopped at 99.
that's actually kinda funny, being that lazy just to add the extra 1% :p
And it's based other people who have done the homework assignments... Yeah, it is weird.
That's the way I explain it, I'm sure there's sensible reason somewhere.
i guess, but a weird reason. Well I'm going to go, so goodnight until tomorrow :)
Night.
Won't be on much tomorrow, up early to fly and then sleep, but see you when I see you!
I just sent an email to my orchestra teacher with a link to the score for music from Order of the Phoenix...
MAYBE SHE'LL LET US PLAY IT IF WE'RE GOOD
Okay, that sounds odd...
Okay, that sounds odd...
Today I got flaked on.
Meaning that my duet partner dropped out, and now I have to rebuild am entire chamber music group from scratch again.
Which is really annoying. And difficult.
And I may just get first twice in a row.
I will ded very quickly and then poof.
I ded to anyone who helps me in my future chamber group. That means anyone who joins, anyone who helps recruit others, and anyone who listens to our music. We're going to be a fabulous team, and I will do anything to get us where we want to go.
To Ieni, my Tumblr follower!
And to all the MAHUvians. And to Mycroft Holmes and his umbrella.
Hullo! :)
Hey guys.
HI GABRIEL!!
HI MISS CAIN!!!
Its Brad in a new account..!
Koala account I will add my proflie picture soon.
... Is awasome...!
Hi its koala guy my old account crashed
...is Brad
... IS BRAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SP IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
... Hi its Brad someone answer
No one answers to koala guy(brad:(
Hi miss cain it brad
HI BRAD!!
Sorry, 'twas on YouTube...
HEYY!!!
HI SNOW!!
Whats up all?
Erm not much.
Just drawing, weather being strange and camp next week.
How about you?
Aw hell...
i am serching up pic for a draing homework thing
BYEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Bye Snow!
CAIN, GUESS WHAT I ORDERED LAST NIGHT
THE US PROOF COPY!!
GUESS WHAT I ORDERED LAST NIGHT :3
It /should/ be the US proof, anyway c:
If they advertised it wrong I'll scream at them:P
UK PROOF?
YAAAAAAAY!!!
And yes. :3
PROOF COPIES FTW!!
Oh, by any chance are you able to go on Skype...?
I'm on my phone and I'm going out soon. Sorry!
Also, next month I'll have a KotW LPB!:D
Yay for proof copies!
7 DAYS UNTIL KOTW NPB. :D
HI IENI!!
Oh, OK L. *should of said that in the other comment*
Hey, Miss Cain (and Clover if you're still there)!!! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*
GAH I actually cannot be bothered for this homework *eats it* Does anyone else need there homework eating? You can contact me at Ninja Aeroplane Co-operations, or my manager Maralie Lily Charm...
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