Saturday, February 16, 2013

Up For Air

84,726 words.

And that's the PLOT written.

Now I go back to the very start and write the STORY. The story is different from the plot. The plot is everything that has to happen at certain points— the plot is the writer inflicting his will on the book. The story, however, is how we get to the plot. The story is what drives the characters forward. The story is what captivates US, the reader.

Naturally, there's a whole heap of overlap between the two. A lot of the time, plot is story and story is plot. But not ALL the time. And for this one, the war book, I needed to get the plot hammered into shape before I start to lather on the story.

Now I get to spend time with Val and her family. Now I get to write about Scapegrace and Thrasher. Now I get to have fun and make jokes.

If there's one thing I don't want, is to have a less-funny Skulduggery book. I like it when they're funny. The danger, as Val gets older and the books get darker, is that they lose their humour. I haven't read the first few books in a while, but I'd imagine there are a lot more jokes per page in the early ones than the later ones. I expected this, but there is still a certain ratio I have to keep. Even though you Minions respond to the emotional beats of these stories as they get more mature, no one is really wishing for a joke-free book, are they? Where's the fun in that? So now I go back and make sure that no matter how grim things get (and they DO get grim) or how dire the situation becomes (and it DOES become dire), we have enough jokes and laughing-in-the-face-of-death to see us through the darkness and out the other side.


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Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Huh, what do you mean Death?

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Wbd.

Luciana said...

Awh, this is so cute.

*is sort of enjoying writing, today*

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Can you post that link without anything else in the comment?

iPod won't let me copy the link.

Jophiel said...

I mean that one of my best friends and I are having a massive fight and now we aren't friends...

Jophiel said...

http://www.qwiki.com/v/cKUjxWpQ

Jophiel said...

*Half-smiles*
Thanks... WE were bored on a houseboat so she decided to take selfies...

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

...It's my b-day in two days...

Jophiel said...

*Grins*
Happy birthday in two days!
(If I don't see you, that is!)

Jophiel said...

My dog is a cannibal...

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

I don't want to be fourteen!

Just no!

Jophiel said...

It's fun! I'm almost fifteen!
*Shudders*
I'm... old...

Luciana said...

Flame, at least you're not seventeen this year!

Jophiel said...

You're sixteen?!

Luciana said...

Noooooo, I'm seven.

*facepalm*

How old did you think I was!?

Jophiel said...

YOU'RE SEVEN?!!! EPICNESS!!!

Luciana said...

One plus six is seven. So, technically, I sort of am seven. c:

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

*facepalms*


I don't want to be old and wrinkly.


DEREK DO THE HARLEMMM SHAKE

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...
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Maralie Lily Charm said...

lnl. Liam's face in Kiss You C:

Jophiel said...

Some of the Year 12s did the Harlem Shake... Then they all jumped into the pool...

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

*sobs*


I need to know what Derek wants with Becky :/

Jophiel said...

I act like a six year old half the time...

MARA!!!!
*Tacklehugs*

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Me and Adra were talking about Derek doing it and getting his characters CGId into it

CHINA IN A CHICKEN COSTUME

Jophiel said...

My little bro keeps blowing himself up on Eden...

*Sighs*
I miss Eden...

Maralie Lily Charm said...

OMFGG HARRY AND THE NIPPLE BIT. ASDFGHJKL I HAVE NO WORDS.

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Nipple bit? :o


Death weren't you and him like going out?

Maralie Lily Charm said...

*is tacklehugged* DEATH!!!!!

AND THE ZARRY KISS AT THE END. PERFECTION.

Jophiel said...

*Dies of laughter at the thought of China in a chicken costume*

Jophiel said...

Yeah... Pretty much... At the Ball we were... Now...
*Curls up in a ball*
I dunno...

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Mara, what video is this?

Jophiel said...

I miss him...

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Fun Fact:
Harry has four nipples.

IT'S SO FUNNYYYYYYYY :'D

Harry's tattoo is so cool! It's his X Factor number. *grins*

NIALL YOU'RE SO FUNNY. LOUIS AND HIS CAR XD

Luciana said...

I think it's just the fact she had to get up early

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Kiss You. *grins*

THEY'RE TOPLESS!!!!!! O.O HOLY MOTHER OF NANDOS.

Jophiel said...

Who had to get up early?

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Aw, Death... *huggles*

If it makes you feel better, I won't have a chance with any of the amazing boys here. *laughs*

HARRALIE FTW!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

OH MY FLACKING GOLDEN GOD. NIALL AND LOUIS AND "DRIVE FOR ME PEASANT!" XD

*coughs* Ahem, I'm in fangirl mode again this morning. So.

STOP WITH THE BEAUTIFULNESS BOYS D: I'M GOING TO DIE OTHERWISE.

Jophiel said...

*Hugs back*

You have a massive chance with Harry though

Maralie Lily Charm said...

NO LIAM! :O

HE JUST FELL OVERRRRR

HARRY ZAYN YOU MEANOS. YOU DROVE AWAY WITHOUT LIAMYKINS. DADDY DIRECTION.

Granted, the car isn't moving...

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I wish, Death... :P I haven't even met them yet..

I WILL THOUGH. C:

The 1D3D movie... In a room of my own kind :')

I'm seeing it for my biiiiirthday :D

Luciana said...

My internet is too slow, today ._.

Jophiel said...

Ah, in algebra, 1D3D would be 2D

Jophiel said...

*6D

My internet died before...

Jophiel said...

Ah... It's bed time... Night all!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Death - Really? I haven't done algebra yet. :)

Luci - I know how you feel... I can't watch my babies on the computer D: But they're all over the music channel, thankfully :P

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Bye Death! *hugs*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Night Death! *hugs* :(

Jophiel said...

*Hugs back*
I have a feeling that the last time we were both on here, something bad happened... Just a feeling...

*Is really gone now*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

I'm sure he's just not on the same time as you, Death. He's probably at school. *hugs* Have a good sleep!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HULLO!!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hey Missy! :) *hugs*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Huh. Today is Rihanna's birthday. *raises eyebrow* Didn't know that :P

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hi Mara!! *hugs back*

Wbd, reading latest chapter of Skuttlebugia. :D

Luciana said...

Bye people who left!

Hello people who appeared!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

JUST... ONE... DAY...

*can't breathe*

Until OWOA comes out... THE MUSIC VIDEO. *le dead* :')

Luciana said...

Wbd, writing Chapter 3

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI L!!
Omgg. Chapter 2 is amazing. :O

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Gonna go! Bye :)

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE FLAME!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Bye Flame! *hugs*

Luciana said...

Bye Flame!

I'm honestly not at all enthralled by anything I am writing. I'm just proud that it's done...

Maralie Lily Charm said...

The Saturdays' new song is awesome!

HOLY CRAP IT'S KISS YOU AGAINNNNN«3

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Oh, wbd.
Looking up Distict 2 info...

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*District

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Anyone know what channel the Brits are on tonight? Hopefully it's on Sky in Ireland... 1D are performing...!

Luciana said...

Cain, D2 as in HG? I can help if you need me to~

My obsessions are useful sometimes :3

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Yes, as in Hunger Games.
I've kinda given up searching for now, as movie/book trailers have distracted me. XD

Mycroft Holmes (Ember) said...

Hiya Malicha, Luclosca, and Mica!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI EMBER!!

L, are you able to go on Skype?

Unknown said...

Hi its Brad but my old accunt crashed I made a knew one. Go check out my blog its called Skulduggery Pleasant stories and news

Unknown said...

Its Brad miss Cain remember me my old account crashed so I have a new account

Unknown said...

Hello its Brad

Unknown said...

Hello...
Its Brad

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hi Brad!

Wbd, finishing off Science homework...

Unknown said...

Will u tell Star that Brad has a new account because his old account crashed.

Unknown said...

Hi

Unknown said...

wbd finishing maths homework
300 questions yikes!

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Heelllooo?

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hi Ieni!!

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Hey, Miss Cain!!! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*
Well, that was a morning full of procrastination...

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*is ninjaareoplanetacklehugged*

Wbd...

Anonymous said...

Good morning, everyone.

And it wasn't.

And you are!!

And everyone should.

They're awesome.

And |==~|=_:||||~|||~|||:-||==|=|||=_|||||>

Anonymous said...

And oh....okay.

SkulduggeryPleasant said...

Face kicks face kicks! What you gonna do, what you gonna do when they come for you? Face kicks face kicks, what you gonna do? What you gonna do when they come for yoooooooooou!?

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Hey, Fabi! Hey S.P!
*ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*
How are you?

*ignores homework*

Anonymous said...

That's classified information. If I told you what I usually do when people try to kick me in the face, that would give them a warning, and they would try to stop me from doing it, because it's painful.

Anonymous said...

[is ninjaeroplanetacklehugged]

I'm...well, I just woke up, so I don't know how I am. Let me get back to you on that one. How are you, besides the homework?

SkulduggeryPleasant said...

l

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI FABI!
HI SKULLY!

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

Hi Missy!

In answer to your earlier question, Ieni, I'm feeling cryptic this morning.

||=_||=_:|=_||=_||=_>

Believe it or not, that actually said something, if not something useful.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Ah, I'm good thanks:) I just spent the morning with my friend, which was fun:)

Ah, I hope you have a good day:) Me no understand that...

Anonymous said...

The stuff I put in code is mostly to make me look mysterious...it doesn't carry any important meaning...usually. So it's ok if ||||~|=_|==|||== doesn't make sense.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*looks at clock*
Hmm, I should go sleep now.
I have a deal with my parents, that if I get up every morning without complaining (I'm not a morning person) and get ready for school, I get the Skulduggery UK proof copy from eBay. :3

So, off to bed I be.
Bye!!

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Bye Miss Cain! *waves* Ooo...hope you get it!
Wbd - homework

Anonymous said...

Bye, Missy!

Distant, Chat keeps following me around, and even Croquet seems to think I have nothing better to do than pet the kitty-cats all morning.

Anonymous said...

Ah, now it's their breakfast time. Ok. While they're eating, I am less distant.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

"This is kidnapping! Or Catnapping... Hehe."

Victorious...

Anonymous said...

Hi, Mara!

Well, one of the cats is now napping on my foot... The other has decided to go climb on the kitchen table.

They're real trouble-makers, my grandparents' cats.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Hey Fabigail! :)

I want a cat! I'd call her MIMZY. Like my other cat. *smiles*

Anonymous said...

I wish I had a cat at home... Just when I visit my grandparents. Chat is a lazy kitty who just wants people to scratch his head and rub his tummy all day. Apparently I am good at doing this, and he keeps licking my hand if I stop to type. He's the one who was asleep on my foot, but woke up wanting to be petted.

Croquet is more athletic, likes to climb on things and hasn't really hasnt been trained out of it. He was on the table, but he got bored and is now in his climbing structure in the sunroom.

Anonymous said...

Ok, breakfast time for the people now.

Bbl! Ciao!

Aisling Dubh said...

Hi!

Aisling Dubh said...

Hmm it's been over half an hour I doubt anyone's here.

Aisling Dubh said...

Is there really no one here?

Anonymous said...

Nope, we're all hiding behind the cat.

Aisling Dubh said...

Ok it's been an hour since someone else commented I'm leaving.

Lots of people will probably come right after I leave.

Aisling Dubh said...

Yes finally

Aisling Dubh said...

Where's the cat?

Anonymous said...

Actually, I'm hiding behind the cat. I think everybody else is gone.

And yeah, people always come on right after you leave. And you always come on right after other people leave. Same with everyone.

Anonymous said...

I don't know, can't see past all the fur! [sneezes]

Aisling Dubh said...

Hmm most people on the same time as me are probably doing homework or still in school if their in secondary.

Some people are probably asleep.

Anonymous said...

Time
Time
Time
Time
Time

Some people are sick, too. :-(

Aisling Dubh said...

What time is it where you are it's 2:31 here?

Aisling Dubh said...

Yeah quite a few people are sick.

Anonymous said...

9:32

Aisling Dubh said...

No sorry it's 3:32 here

Aisling Dubh said...

Am or pm?

Anonymous said...

Take your pick. I don't care what time it is. It's the wrong time, and that's all there is to it.

Aisling Dubh said...

How is it the wrong time?

Anonymous said...

It just is.

Anonymous said...

Sorry, I'm feeling confusing today.

Don't expect anything I say to make sense. Just a warning.

Aisling Dubh said...

Ok.

Ahh it feels like Tuesday but its Wednesday.

Anonymous said...

No, it's still Sunday.

[Scowls]

IT'S STILL SUNDAY

[Takes deep breaths]
Okay. Sorry about that.

Aisling Dubh said...

Ok it's Sunday.

Anonymous said...

It should be. [Glares at Time]

My vacation shouldn't be more than halfway over! There should still be lemon-lime soda left! And chocolate cupcakes! And I shouldn't be dreading going back to school, I'm on VACATION (sort of).

Okay, rant over.

Anonymous said...

Soooo.... How's your day been going?

Change of subject.

Aisling Dubh said...

Gránáid is stuck in my head we have to sing it in school for seachtaine na Gaeilge.

It's grenade in irish.

The name seachtaine na Gaeilge doesn't even make sense it means week of irish but its actually two weeks long.

Sorry I just had to get that out of my system.

Aisling Dubh said...

Just don't think about school at all.
That's what I do whenever I'm on holidays.

Aisling Dubh said...

My days been fine thanks.

How's yours been?

Anonymous said...

Short. Miniature-golfing later.

Aisling Dubh said...

That sounds fun.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

HII GUYSS!!!!

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

MSD....

Aisling Dubh said...

Hi JUbi!

Anonymous said...

It might be. I really don't know.

Hi Jubi!

I'm going distant...Croquet is sitting on the table again...

Willow Von Stratton said...

Hello to everyone

Aisling Dubh said...

Now more people come on?

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

WILLOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! AIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FABI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





hi.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

Ais, more people are coming because I'm here.... I'm just that awesome.
:D

Willow Von Stratton said...

yup Jub, i saw you're on and I just had to come one hehe jk

Anonymous said...

Hi, Willow, you feeling any better?

Sure, Jubi.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

I typically have that affect of people...


xD

Willow Von Stratton said...

A bit, the stomach pain feels a bit better and my fever is slowly but surely going down

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

OH NO!!!! WILLOW DON'T BE SICK!!!!!!



UNSICKIFY!!!!

Aisling Dubh said...

I hope you feel better soon willow.

Anonymous said...

Well, good that you're improving. May you continue to do so.

And as Jubi said, unsickify!

Willow Von Stratton said...

not just unsickify jubi also unhospitalify I'm getting so sick and tired of being here

Aisling Dubh said...

Are you in the hospital willow?

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

you're in the hospital???????!!

UNHOSPITALIFY!!!!!!!



It'll work in a little while...
maybe a few days...
It's pretty unpredictable

Melica Frost said...

Ello !

Willow Von Stratton said...

haha thanks jubi :p

and yup Aid been in here since monday, first few days were hell and I still feel like crap but now I'm so bored all it is is either tv, skulduggery reading or comic book reading

Anonymous said...

Well. If you're better enough to be bored, that's something.

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I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

MEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!













hi.

Anonymous said...

Hi, Mel!

Aisling Dubh said...



UNHOSPITALIFY!!

I hope you get better soon and out of hospital soon as well.

Willow Von Stratton said...

hey Mel

and ya Fabi it is....or maybe because Thomas asked me out on a date once I get better :p

Willow Von Stratton said...

thanks Ais, I'm sure I will

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Hmm...however hard I try, I don't seem to be able to teleport to London...

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

IENI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Jubi!!!!!! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*

*runs around in circles*
DAMN YOU HOMEWORK

Aisling Dubh said...

Ahh homework never trust it. You think you have a little bit of it and it turns out to be a mountain.

I'm Jubilance Glee / Occasional Haiku-er / And a dinosaur said...

*is ninjaeroplanetacklehugged*

Homework sucks.....

Willow Von Stratton said...

yup homework does suck, at least when you get to college you don't get as much homework as you do in high school

Anonymous said...

Congratulations, Willow!

Hi Ieni. Teleportation is a difficult skill to master...

Inside Glitch joke that everyone can ignore
[Leaves lemons at a shrine to Lem in the hope that the extra favor points will help speed up Ieni's learning of Teleportation V.]

Msd, possibly going shopping.

Willow Von Stratton said...

on what? Thomas asking me out? hehe I don' know if you'd say that if you knew the age difference it's less then 20yrs but more then 10 yrs...plus it's not like I'm going to get with him :p

Anonymous said...

High school homework is horrible.

Thanks, Captain Obvious

You're welcome.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

BUT I DON'T UNDERSTAND SCIENCE IT CONFUZZES IENI D:

But I can do it Fabi! I teleported to another universe once *nods* I mean, it was precisely the same as this one and there was no way to tell the difference but I must of just eaten the Ieni there and her unsuspecting parents had no idea it was not her!

Star Inkbright said...

No, 3D1D in alegraba is 3d squared. Because anything times 1 equals what it was before you timesed it, so you can leave it out. And 3d times d is 3d squared. :)

Richtig?

Anonymous said...

[Shrugs]

Ok then. Not congratulations.

Gtg, going shopping with mom and grandma now.

Star Inkbright said...
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Anonymous said...

Ah, nice Ieni. Good luck teleporting again!

Bye!

Aisling Dubh said...

Bi Fabi!!

Aisling Dubh said...

Teleportation so useful

Willow Von Stratton said...

he's 15 yrs older then me haha but still thanks anyway

eesh math, theonly math I'm good at is statistics

Star Inkbright said...

Ah, I have such a tricky homework to do for Friday. *ignores it*

Aisling Dubh said...

I like maths it's interestind

Maralie Lily Charm said...

DED!

*is not here*

Star Inkbright said...

I'm good at maths . . .

You Americans call it math, singular. Because you can't count, my dad says. :P

Star Inkbright said...

MARAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

Aisling Dubh said...

What mara?
What does DED mean?
Also hi Mara

Willow Von Stratton said...

hey Mara

And what's so interesting Ais?

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Staaaaaaaaaaaaar!!!!!!!! Maraaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*
HOW ARE YOU LOVELY PEOPLE?
IENI WAS SOCIABLE TODAY IT WAS A STRANGE FEELING

Aisling Dubh said...

Maths

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Ded means dedication.

Aisling, you have to dedicate! :P

Aisling Dubh said...

Willow maths is interesting very interesting

Aisling Dubh said...

Mara why do I have to dedicate?

Maralie Lily Charm said...

"No!" Jimmy protested.

Star Inkbright said...

^^^Ash, you have to dedicate the pagr to something because you got first comment on it. :)

Star Inkbright said...

IENIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.

Willow Von Stratton said...

certain aspects of it is interesting, but in gerneral to me it's just eh

Aisling Dubh said...

Um ok.

I dedicate the page to eh skulduggery pleasant and that derek better give the title of book 8 soon.


There that work star?

Melica Frost said...

I have SO much studying to do...next week is my exam week O.O on wednesday I have a french, 2 maths, a biology and art exam but I also have SO many more...*wants to curl up in bed*

Maralie Lily Charm said...

YORKSHIRE TEAAAAAAA HAHAHA NO.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

MEL I SHALL SAVE YOU FROM THE EXAMS I SHALL EAT THEM AND THEN MAKE ALL TEACHERS TO THEM INSTEAD!

Aisling Dubh said...

That doesn't sound fun melica.

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Oh Louis... *laughs*

Star Inkbright said...

AWESOME, AISLING! :)

I feel sorry for you, Melicaro. :( *incinerates exams before Ieniness can reach them, coz I'm evil*

Star Inkbright said...

Brb, need to switch to another electronic device as my school VLE dun't appear to like the mini laptopple.

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