Monday, January 28, 2013

Progress

50267 words written... and Valkyrie and Skulduggery are barely in it.

This doesn't mean, of course, that they won't be taking their usual starring roles in Book 8. Of course they will. But I've had to approach this one in a slightly different way than normal.

Because this book is about, essentially, total war, I've had to think long and hard about how the different sides would fight— such as what tactics they would use in both the short and long term. It means I can't chop and change sequences like I usually would. If they're written, then they've been written for a very specific reason, and I can't mess about with that. So I figured the best way to write about these military actions is to write them FIRST. Write the skirmishes and the battles and the politics and the arguments, and get it all down on the page. Then, once I have the military aspect taken care of, I go back and write my usual Skul & Val stuff around and on top of it all.

It's an interesting way of working, to willingly ignore your main characters for large chunks of writing time. I sincerely hope it works...

Oh, and sometime in February I shall announce the title. I've had this title in mind for YEARS. Some of the early alternatives were:

Skulduggery Pleasant: The Billingsworth Continuum.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Behind Gold Eyes.

Skulduggery Pleasant: It's War, Baby.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Revenge of the Screaminator.

Skulduggery Pleasant: When Warlocks Attack.

Skulduggery Pleasant: A Very Nice Picnic.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Brain-Puncher.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Gut-Eater.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Skulduggery Goes Camping.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Things Get Nasty.

Skulduggery Pleasant: People Gonna Die.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Readers Gonna Cry.

Skulduggery Pleasant: Horace.


And amazingly, the actual title is better than ANY of those! I know, right?

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Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*is hugged*

No worries, L!

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Luci, it's Maratastic! :D

Wbd. Msd. Going for the evil test in a few.

Lavender Hope said...

It's not bad, L.

So what's Skuttlebuggia about again?

Lavender Hope said...

Good luck with the test, Marrrrrraaaaa!

Melica Frost said...

Im going to golf in about ten mins so if I mysteriously dissapear thats why... :D

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

YOU CAN BEAT THE EVIL TEST, MARA!!

Lavender Hope said...

Have fun at golf, Mel!

Melica Frost said...

Im going now so byeeeeeee and thanks lav! :D

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE MEL!!
DO WELL AT GOLF!!

Lavender Hope said...

Bye Mel!!! You're welcome! :)

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Thanks Lav and Missy! :)

At least I'll be with my friends so hopefully...

Maralie Lily Charm said...

Bye Mel! Have fun at golf! :)

Luciana said...

Skuttlebuggia? Hmm... Skuttlebugs are wide spread throughout the world and there are so many of us that suffer, because we're "different" or just because life is difficult.
A group of Skuttlebugs decide it's time for a "Minion Uprising", it's time to rebel. Minions all around the world are called in for meetings. These meetings cause action. People begin to train, learn and majority develop strong powers.
Elementals and Adepts work together in the name of Minions to take over Australia and turn it into a new country - Skuttlebuggia.

It all about taking over Australia & living there, I guess. And how life works over there...

I think

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

SKUTTLEBUGIA IS ONE OF THE BEST THINGS EVER THOUGHT OF!! *nods*

Lavender Hope said...

Hmm. Sounds cool, L!

Could my character be in it?

I'm not sure if I'll be able to write... If people can contribute to the blog.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I talk to myself waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too often XD

Luciana said...

If you like, Lav :)

E-mail me about your OC?

You can write your own Skuttlebuggia story, for the blog. If only short. If you like.

BUT CHARISMA, LUNA, DORCHA AND CASSIDY ARE MAKING ME WRITE MY OWN AND THIS IS WHAT IT IS C:

Lavender Hope said...

I sometimes talk to myself...

Mostly it's to an imaginary audience. :P Reason why I made a blog for it.

But most of what I do is something only videos can catch...
*is thoughtful*
Hmm...

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I just talk to myself.

It's kinda strange...

Lavender Hope said...

Thanks L! :) I'll email you.
*remembers she's supposed to email her OC info to Flame too*
Oops... I should do that after I email you.

Maybe, but I don't know where to start! :P

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

L, you've still got my OC info for Skuttlebugia, right?

Lavender Hope said...

Yeah, especially the conversations one can have with oneself. XP

Luciana said...

Yes, Cain, I have!

YOU AUSSIES COME INTO IT LATER C:

Might be mentioned during the meeting... But I'm not quite sure, yet...

The meeting will be Chapter 2.

Lavender Hope said...

My friend's brother is so odd...

He just said if you want to think, you need to drink orange juice...

And I just said WHAT???

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I would have said WHAT??? as well.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

OK, L!!

Lavender Hope said...

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

*realizes something*
The meeting's in England right now, isn't it?

Which is why Lynxia is there?

Just a thought. I know it could be anywhere, but Lynxia also lives in England so... Yeah.

Lavender Hope said...

Oh yeah. Dance practice is over. It's been for a bit...

Luciana said...

Yes, Lav, it starts of being set in England. Since I'm English, y'know. :)

Lynxia and Rivia are there because they are also English. Rivia is my best friend irl, so I had to put her in this story.

Lynxia and Rivia are sort of similar, which makes this really difficult... XD

But, yeah, it starts off in England. I should probably have put that in... Hmmm... :/

Star Inkbright said...

I realised last night that although I like never speak to her, my sister is the person I can confide the most in and probably the best friend I have.

*smiles* That's kinda nice.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hi Star!!
That is nice. :)

Star Inkbright said...

DUCK CTHULHU!


But relax, it's only my sister.

Star Inkbright said...

HI CAIN! :)

Star Inkbright said...

*looks at Derek's blog* Horace, really. XD

Luciana said...

HELLO STAR! :D

Star Inkbright said...

SO, HOW IS ANYONE HERE THIS FINE MORNING???????????????????

Star Inkbright said...

HI SCÁTHLES! :)

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

VERY GOOD!!

Oh, I need advice.
What pose should I have for Valkyrie on my SP shoe?? i.e. Back of new Mortal Coil, etc.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Yahola

Star Inkbright said...

DARK DAYS.

Back of UK paperback, front of UK hardback, same thing.

Star Inkbright said...

Yahola, Brave.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI BRAVE!!

OK, 1 for Dark Days.
*needs Derek to unvail back of KOTW NPB so it's another possibility*

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

OMGG! Is anyone here going to the Galway signing!

Lavender Hope said...

Hi people who arrived!

Sorry, I got kinda sidetracked...
*looks at black paint on her fingers*

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

I love Galway now! 5 of my friends read SP and tehy are not going so I have to get them ALL autos!

Lavender Hope said...

I'm not! Is Galway in Ireland or England...

I'm sorry! I forgot!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

THATS 5 AUTOGRAPHS DEREK! bE rEaDy mWaHaHaHaHa




HA

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Ireland!

Lavender Hope said...

Oh. Okay. You live in Ireland too???

Lucky ducks...

Don't ask.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

\OMG! Found a new way of refreshing the page. i just ex this small thing and click it again!

Star Inkbright said...

HI LAVENDER!!!!!!!!!

I generally pronouce my H's, danke, but I understand the type of English accent you are referring to when you imitate the bogeyman. :)

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

yes i live in Ireland! Go Irish People!

Lavender Hope said...

That's... One way to do it.

Good job! Might get hard though!

Really, why not try F5 or ctrl+r?

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I want to live in Ireland, as well...

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Hi Staaaaaaaaar!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Do you have to press the plus and all that at the SAME time!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Do you have to press the plus and all that at the SAME time!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Okies! iM A SICHO!

Lavender Hope said...

TE BOGEYMAN IS AWESOME. OMGG!!!

Where is the accent from? I know not everyone in Britain talks like that.

... I say both Britain and England cause I'm not sure which is better to say. So I say both. Just an FYI.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I say Britan, England and UK.
Only because I can't make up my mind.

Lavender Hope said...

Not the plus. Just ctrlr.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Hi Lav.

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Hey.

Star Inkbright said...

Ah, I can go all formal sometimes. Occasionmally, there is no other way to form my sentences as I wish them to be formal.

ARGH! FORMALNESS IS TAKING OVER ME.

Lavender Hope said...

Or just the F5 key.

Yeah, I say UK sometimes too. But not as much.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI FLAME!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Flame, i know you do not really like me so... This is not awkward at ALLLLl!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Just declaring that!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Oh I took a stroll dow the old long walk on a fine soft day-i-ay!

Lavender Hope said...

Um... Hi Brave.

Hi Flame!

FORMALITIESSSSS. IS THAT EVEN HOW YOU SPELL IT BESIDES HAVING LOTS OF SSSSS?

Sorry, caps off now. And dinner was called... I help clean up after... Might be a few hours before I can come on again. Still here though!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

AND I ASK YOU FRIEND..whatta fella should dooooo!


when her hair is black and her eyes are blue!

Luciana said...

HELLO FLAME! :)

Sorry for being distant! Msd, btw.

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Bye Lav.

*growls in Brave's general direction*

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*catches myself talking to mayself*

...

I'm weird...

Lavender Hope said...

You know, Brave?

I bet when you're older- say, 15 maybe? You'll look back on the comments and think of how different you were/are now. ;P

I'm just teasing.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

I am not lying am I though. You are not too fond of me!

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Brave no one, but me, has a clue what you're on about.

Lavender Hope said...

Flame, please don't leave because Brave is on...

Tbh, I'm trying not to get annoyed myself. He's only ten! Course he'll act like this!

No offense, Brave. Please don't take that to heart.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I look back on my first comments now, and I acted like a total weirdo.
I'm still weird, but a better weird. *nods*

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Recess!


Omg, that show. I love it!

It's on RTE. I haven't seen it in a while :3

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*is confuzzled a bit*

Lavender Hope said...

Everyone's weird, Miss. :P

Star Inkbright said...

HEY FLAME!

Um. Well, from the written word, you could pin that accent as coming from various places in Britain . . .

*shrugs* So I couldn't really say. D:

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

DO NOT LEAVE! I HAVE TO GO ANYWAYS!

Luciana said...

I THINK I PREFER THE OLD ME

BUT NOT THE FIRST ME THAT COMMENTED

THE MIDDLE ONE

WHERE I WAS ALMOST ALWAYS REALLY HYPER

AND NYAN CAT

omg, nyan cat *puts Nyan Cat on repeat*

Lavender Hope said...

I remember Recess! If that's the same one you're talking about.

It was a bit too odd for me...

*wonders if she should wash the paint off her hand*

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Do ye guys ever just start walking in a general direction!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I PREFER NOW ME. *nods*

Star Inkbright said...

*frowns at reminds you all of DUCK CTHULHU*

My sister said to tell you all I don't like llamas.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Paint makes you colourful! do not destroy the colourfullness!

peeeeeece duuuedes

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

oOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo that looks cool! 0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0

Lavender Hope said...

Nope! It's always random!
*has no clue what she's talking about*

I prefer me... I don't really know... Neeever maaaiiind.
*bops self on the head to try and get the craziness out*

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

I used to think mabey you loved me now baby Im suuure......



IM WALKING OON SUSHINE WHOOOAHA AND DONT IT FEEL GOOD? YA! ALL RIGHT NOW! dont it feel good!

Star Inkbright said...

The word 'paint' always reminds me of Paint from Gone.

He died, btw. He wasn't useful, so Caine di'n't really bother looking after him, as far as memory serves.

Lavender Hope said...

I remember when your name said you were the inky octopus girl who is the enemy of llamas and Blue(omg Blue! If you see her anytime soon, tell her I said hi and still remember her!) made a story of you, her, and Rim(I think) trying to fight them.

Phew that was a bit of a mouthful...

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

i USED TO THINK THAT I WAS ALL A-LONE HERE NEVER NEW THAT IT WOUL BESO HARD LISTEN LISTEN OK....

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

i G2G GUY BUB-BYE!

Lavender Hope said...

Well I'm talking about black and white(from earlier that still didn't wash off completely) paint that's on my hands...

I don't really want to read Gone... Sounds scary...

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE BRAVE!!

OMGG LIGHT COMES OUT IN APRIL!! *fan-girling*

Lavender Hope said...

Bye Brave!

If you really are leaving...

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

*throws a brick after Brave*

Lavender Hope said...

I should be going too...

See ya in a few hours!

Bye guys!

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

*sighs*

My mother is in Sarurday mode.

*sigh*

Luciana said...

GOTTA GO SHOPPINGGGGGGG

BBS!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE LAV!!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE L!!!

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Well I have to fucking waste a ful lsaturday cleaning, again.


*throws myself through the window*

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

*full Saturday.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Brb, gonna go eat...

Star Inkbright said...

FOURS BRAVE! :(

I'll see her on Monday. :)

Sister (Dem): Unless she's ill. Or broken her leg. Or died!

Me: Uh, cheerful.

Dem: Meh.

Me: NO NO NO NO NO. MEH IS MY WORD!!! Okay, it's not JUST my word, it's primarily Ieni's word, BUT HOMEWISE, IT'S MY WORD. *glares friendilily*

Dem: *laughs*

Me: THAT IS ODD LAUGHTER. :/

Dem: Well I was laughing normally before but you were too busy typing to notice it. So I did a fake laugh after.

Me: *cheerful tone* Ha ha ha ha ha, he he he he he . . . THAT IS SO FAKE IT'S OFF THE SCALE OF FAKENESS. O_O

Dem: *that's because it's my BAD fake luagh. This is my GOOD fake laugh. *starts doing terrible fake laugh, that turns into real laughter at funniess of fake laugh*

Me: Can I post the commential now?

Dem: MEH.

Me: NO NO NO. STAR'S WORD. STAR'S WORD!!!!!!!!

Star Inkbright said...

Apparently Dem can do better fake laughs when she can straighten her back up. *is sitting with Dem on my loft bed that neither of us can sit up straight on*

That sucks, Flame. :(

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

It's every stupid Saturday!

I hate it.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Baaaaaaaack!

Star Inkbright said...

Sorry, had to feed my rabbit . . .

WB Cain.

That sounds really unfair. :(

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

I agree, it does sound really unfair... :(

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Ok. No need to throw bricks. WHY DO YOU HATE ME!!!

Star Inkbright said...

Hi Bravles.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hi Brave.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Yahola!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Saturday is good fer meh!

Star Inkbright said...

Yahola indeed. :)

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

I love that wordywordwordzers

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

IreallyloveSPbutiamyoungsoistartedlate.ifistartedwhentheyfirstcameoutiwouldhavereadthemwheniwas3...

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

HMMM.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

G2G

Star Inkbright said...

@Brave: . . . Okay?

Most of us started late. :)

Star Inkbright said...

:( FOURS BRAVE! :(

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

If I started when it first came out, I would have been 6/7 ish.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE BRAVE!

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

Brave, I thought you ten?

It wasn't 7 years ago.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*started reading it

Star Inkbright said...

I'm 14.

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Yellows?
Msd.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HI IENI!!

Wbd...

Star Inkbright said...

IENI!!!!!!!! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

Hey Star! Hey Miss Cain! *ninjaeroplanetacklehugs*
How are you?

Gah, stupid homework D:

Star Inkbright said...

Ieni, DON'T REMIND ME OF HOMEWORK. *groans*

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

I'm sorry D:
It's just I got 13 pieces this week *breaks down and sobs*
Ah, I have a plan.
*eats homework*

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

*is ninjaareoplanetacklehugged*

I don't have homework... YET

Star Inkbright said...

I have two big English homeworks to do before Monday. TWO, honestly.

I had tons of homework to do for Monday this week, but I've done quite a bit of it. :)

Just the English and the German. Then I could put off the rest. :/

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

I have 2 English as well, but for Tuesday and I don't understand the 2nd bit, so I won't do that and I've got some stupid Geography homework, which we were supposed to find on the VLE, but it isn't even there.

Star Inkbright said...

I mean, once I've done the homework due for Monday I could put off the other days . . .

Star Inkbright said...

Our school used to put homework on the VLE. Now they put it on the SLG (Sims Learning Gateway) only tons of people can't access the SLG . . .

However, we can always email our teachers using the school email system, which worked for me once . . .

Melica Frost said...

Hey guys! Im back from le golf :D

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HIYA MEL!!

How was golf??

Ieni Strider (Ieni The Ninja Aeroplane, Eater of Fabi's armses) said...

I actually cannot be bothered to do any of this when it's so sunny outside -_-
Do you know what the impact of fair trade is for banana growers?
Because I can't find a damn thing on it.
G2g - byebye *waves*

Melica Frost said...

Golf was cold...my fingers nearly froze but its all good because I got a hot chocolate!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYE IENI!!

I'd love to have a hot chocolate, but it's summer and waaaaaay too hot.

Melica Frost said...

Aww yeah I forgot that your still in summer time...
Its sunny outside here but its SOOOO cold :)

Star Inkbright said...

HI MELICA!

. . . No clue, Ieni. :(

Sunny? *laughs* I just want to continue sitting here commenting, playing Coin Dozer and and finding an Asylum vid.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

But then, while you get hot chocolate's, we get ice-creams. So in the end, it even's itself out.

Flame Phoenix (Fawkes)~roleplaying said...

My mum's going for a shower, and the house hasn't been cleaned yet.


Boop.

Star Inkbright said...

Ice cream is better. My sister, being a huge fan of hot chocolate and not really liking ice cream, would disagree with me.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

*groans* I think I'm getting sick.


*can barely speak from how much throat is hurting*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...
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Star Inkbright said...

:( Poor you, Ivy.

*wonders if sampling her blood whilst she's sick is a very good idea*

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

*frowns* Maybe I should go to sleep.


It's 4:23 AM.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hi Val!

Aaaand maybe, just maybe, you should get some sleep.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Well, I was sleeping. I had curled up towards the wall on my bed and wrapped myself up in my Skulduggery blanket. And the light was on. But I woke up because sleeping in normal clothes isn't comfortable...

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

First

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I dedicate to Derek.


Thanks for agreeing to meet me :D

Star Inkbright said...

A drink of water would be better. :/

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I tried drinking water and it didn't do anything.


I'm kind of regretting not drinking the tea my mum brought in here for me around 11... I'd really like some now.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Or tea.
Tea's amazing.

Star Inkbright said...

*frowns as the cuckoo clock chimes twelve, least I think it's twelve* That clock needs rewinding up.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

It's 8:30 here, we're 8 hours ahead, your clock is half an hour slow.

*frowns*

I can't believe I worked that out... XP

Star Inkbright said...

Ja, tea would be better . . .

I seem to be turning German. *frowns*

I won't sample your blood right now. It's tainted with sickness. *hums Down With The Sickness*

Star Inkbright said...

Yes, Cain! :)

It's often exactly half an hour out. It's kind of odd, actually.

The grandfather clock downstairs is more reliable.

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

Missy, you're 16 hours ahead of me, then.

Star Inkbright said...

Ja. I remember Ivy's eight hours behind me. Zaf's five.

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Oooh.
I have a sudden urge to write these time differences down...

Lavender Hope said...

*is here but distant and may not respond for a few minutes*

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

HULLO LAV WHO MIGHT NOT RESPOND FOR A FEW MINUTES!! XP

Valkyrie V. - Ivy said...

I think I'mm gonna go...



Byeeee

Star Inkbright said...

LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAV! *tackehugs*

Asylum is just beginning to sound depressing now. And the intro's annoying me. ANd so's the first verse. And the chorus. And the second verse is just sad.
"Death's images are all around again
They're right behind me
They're gonna find me
Judgement for the immortal sin
That had enveloped me completely!
I know I'll never know a peaceful night again
Afraid they'll hear me
They don't fear me . .."

. . . Yeah. The person in the song just feel so trapped and helpless . . .

Gah. I've nearly done searching for a vid anyway. :)

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

BYEEEE VAAAAL!! GET BETTER!! *throws tea after her*

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

AWW... I wanna adopt a wittle kitty kat!





AWWW!


Hi BTW

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Hi Brave!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

I am Gonna Go Ta Galway!

Lavender Hope said...

Bye Val!!!

Hi Brave, Star, and Miss!!!

Okay, so it was more like I wasn't here and just commented to mean that I will be here soon. Which is now. Hi and still distant, but not as much.

Lavender Hope said...

*is going to start a post on her Blog Under Construction*

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Miss Cain *nods*

Ok so I have met you before but I have never really became friends...


We are friends now. You have no say. You are y friend or you are my enemy and seen as Its me that youre choosing between I pick friend. BOOM!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

I have an Idea! I must feed my ponies first... CARROTS

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

AH No Ill wait a while. I feel funny! BoomBoomshockalockboomboomshockalockbebobeobbeowawwawawawaboomboomshocklocka BOOOM!

Lavender Hope said...

I can't tell if your serious, or pretending, Brave... When you say ponies...

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Ok. HERE IS A STORY!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

I do havve ponies!

Lavender Hope said...

*looks around*
Where?

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Sal and Prim!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

PONIESSSSSSSS XD

Lavender Hope said...

Okay, so that could mean two things...

I meant to say where as in your story, but when you said you had ponies, it kinda connects to that one too...

You can answer both. But I really meant your story.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

Ok.


As Miranda shackle walked down the highway they cars that passed screeched and beeped. She breathed in the air. She it as good to be alive. She stood on the roadside and waited. When she saw the bus coming she braced herself. As it passed she jumped out on front of it. The bus crushed her. her bones and her blood splaterd all over the road. As another car drove over her her body came together. her arms flew towards her open wounded chest and the same with the legs. She shoved her organs into her stomach, Got up and smiled. The car onfront of her had stopped. The drivers mouth was open wide and a long line of cars were lined behind him. Miranda stretched out her hand and his car flew backwards through the air and into the other one. The other car crushed underneath the wait of the one on top. The blood of the passanger in the car underneath splatterd accross the window and ou could see a hand streatched upwards, Touching the window.


Miranda turned and walked into the forest on one side of the high way.

She was back.



Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

READ ABOVE!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

A few mistakes but i was in a rush. Sorry!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

Whoa.
That's pretty cool, Brave.

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

THANK YHOOO!

Miss Cain; The Aussie Ninja Stalker said...

No worries. :)

Wbd, reading...

Lavender Hope said...

Very imaginative...

I could totally see the blood and guts...

But typos.

I think you mean Miranda Shackle and you need a period between highway and they- which may also need to be fixed to 'the'. She is as good to be alive? You may want to fix that too. Just remember to capitalize the first letter at the beginning of a sentence. I know you do, but just not all the time. Oh, but you accidentally capitalized 'got' when it was only a comma that seperated the sentence. On front might need to be changed to 'in front', beneath the wait- wait needs to be weight, ou? You mean you? Simple mistake. I do that too sometimes. But I fix it. Touching- same as got.

I hope you don't mind my corrections. Other than that, it was really good! :)

Lavender Hope said...

Ah, yeah... But still, don't forget to read over and fix them!

I can understand the typos when someone's rushed. No worries!

Eli (Ulcabhán) Brave said...

g2g byyye!

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