Okay, I have done SOMETHING with the comments section...
Now when you comment, a new window should pop up. It isn't perfect, but at least there are pages now, and you don't have to keep reloading to get to the newest comment...
This is all VERY annoying.
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«Oldest ‹Older 2801 – 3000 of 4714 Newer› Newest»I'm going to be leaving soon...
ok
bye
can't wait to read "the begging" of your story.
I'm not gone yet.
ha spelled begining wrong by accident!
ok
sorry
how much have you done?
A page, wanna read it?
After that I have to leave.
Thrust?
ok
sure
you still there, im sorry
I'm baaaaaaaaaack~
hi.
Here's the story so far!!!
Scarlet walked out of school, her two ‘friends’ complaining about a Maths test or something.
‘Scarlet, what do you think?’ One of them asked. Scarlet turned, glaring. The two girls cowered.
‘I think that you wouldn’t be complaining as much if you had been paying attention in Maths instead of drooling at Travis.’ She scowled and kept walking. The girls looked at each other, looked back at Scarlet, realised they were being left behind and caught up with her.
‘Scarlet, you can’t treat us like that. You lucky to even, like, be talking to us.’ The second said. Scarlet stopped and faced them again.
‘Lucky? Lucky? How could anyone possibly think of me as lucky when I have two morons following me everywhere? Your constant chatter is turning my brain to mush. Goodbye Charlotte. Goodbye Jessica.’ And with that Scarlet walked home by herself, feeling like she should’ve done that three weeks ago when the two idiots had started to follow her like lost puppies. Scarlet sat down on her favourite bench at the park and started doing her homework. About five minutes later, a boy sat at the other end of the bench.
* * *
Two boys peeked around the corner. They were looking at an enormous set of doors. The door were tall and grey. They looked like steel, but the boys couldn’t tell from the distance.
‘Dude, it can’t be true.’ The first said.
‘Shush! Travis, if they hear us, we are dead meat.’ The second whispered frantically whispered. Travis laughed.
‘It is! I swear, it is.’
‘Prove it.’ Travis smirked.
‘Okay. Look at the entrance. If it wasn’t the entrance, why are there people guarding it? And why are there chains and locks around the door?’
‘Ace, it could be a prison.’ The Travis said.
‘Travis! You know that isn’t a prison. You took me to the prison.’ Ace groaned.
‘True. But I still don’t believe you.’ Travis said. Ace sighed.
‘C’mon, if we stay any longer we’ll get caught.’
‘Fine.’ Travis grinned. They headed back to Ace’s house.
‘Travis I am sure that was the place.’ Ace insisted, walking in the gutter.
‘Why? Ace, really, why?’ Travis asked.
‘Because it makes sense. The doors wouldn’t be small or decorated if it were for, say, the town hall.’ Ace was about to continue, when he saw someone walking in the other direction. ‘Sorry Travis, got to go.’ Ace ran in the other direction. Travis watched him go and shrugged.
GOTTA GO BYE!!!!!!
nice! I read it twice. I want to know what Travis and Ace were talking about, and who that 'boy' who sat across from Scarlet is!
My story also starts off with people walking out of school.
Good start to it. Is it to do with SP?
How do you apply for A Collaborative Effort to Meet the Golden God?
Hello?
Negative?
YOU WERE JUST HERE!
*stomps foot*
And I can't write.
...
Poo.
*is intensely bored*
I want my laptop back...
Hrmmmmmmm........….........................................
*sees Tesseract coming back for round two*
Rule Nine.
T:....?
M: Never go anywhere without a knife.
*throws knife at Tesseract*
*blurs towards him as he dishes and drives Makhaira into his chest*
*sees Tesseract coming back for round two*
Rule Nine.
T:....?
M: Never go anywhere without a knife.
*throws knife at Tesseract*
*blurs towards him as he dishes and drives Makhaira into his chest*
Okaaaaay.
I meant dodges not dishes.
Derek one day I'm going to meet you...one day..im ur biggest fan..
HELLO!?
I need to entertain myself for twenty more minutes.
hello!
hello!
twenty minutes later...
I'm gonna go now...
BUT!!!!
NOOOO.
NOOOOOO.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
Fudge.
Jemma!
Hi!
How are you today?
Good!
You?
i'm on a Laptop!
I'll be on one in a sec. Brb.
BRC
lol
just curious, do you happen to have a facebook account?
No.
I AM ON A LAPTOP!!!
yay, what about twitter?
I'm actually against Facebook.
Like, REALLY against.
Same towards Twitter.
And MySpace.
And everything like that except Skype.
may i ask why?
Why what?
why are you against them?
Cause they suck.
i don't really get the point of them my self, but facebook is a great way to keep in touch with faraway friends
Yeah.
But it isn't nice.
I heard some 'popular' girls talking about
'I can't wait till so-in-so reads that'
i've never had a bad experience on facebook, and if anything did happen i'd report it to the police!
I like it here.
yeah, it's pretty neat all right, i just hate having to always click refresh
I like it.
I'm writing, so my responses might be a bit slow...
It would help if you were still talking.
I'm leaving in ten minutes.
Gotta go BYE!!!
AND GO TO COLLABORATIVE EFFORT I JUST POSTED!!!
Wheeeeeeeeee! I got a response to the Christmas present question! Even if it means I will always wonder now what it was...
Oh. Oh! I know what else I want to know!
Valkyrie states quite explicitly in Death Bringer that she's sixteen. ("Dude, I'm sixteen.") Yet if she was supposed to have been fifteen in Mortal Coil, and if her birthday is in August (both according to the blog post here), and Death Bringer takes place in May (explicitly stated in the book), then, um, she can't possibly have had her sixteenth birthday between Mortal Coil and Death Bringer, can she?
(I did think for a moment that maybe DB took place a year and five months after MC, not just five months, but if baby Alice is, what, four months old in DB, then it pretty much has to be the year that started right after Mortal Coil.)
Unless, of course, Valkyrie's just been anticipating her sixteenth birthday so much that she's already thinking of herself as almost sixteen, even though it's still three months until her birthday...
Kribu! Check out collaborative effort blog!
I posted earlier!
Tell me what you think!
I think it's a really cool project, Sparky! I haven't had time to read people's stories yet, though.
Hello?
Anyone there?
Hello! I'm here again, sorry about before, Sparky.
Also, seriously, who is this guy I need to email my email address to? Also, you need to visit my blog: http://myuselessshortstories.blogspot.com/
I can't. I'm on my iTouch. Please check out collab effort and read my stories. AND COMMENT THERE IF YOU GOING TO SAY ANYTHING ABOUT IT.
I'll look at your blog tomorrow. I promise.
Flame. You must tell Flame.
How? Just comment?
Yes. Just comment.
PLEASE READ MY STORY.
*coughs*
How are you?
Negative?
I'm going to sleep now.
BYE!!!
I will now.
I'm good.
Bye
Please read it and comment.
Okay, now I'm really gone.
BYE!!!
Bye.
I commented.
Derek Landy came on just a few minutes after i left yesterday!!!!!!! I can't believe it!!!!!! I am so unlucky!!!!!!!!
Hello? Anybody there?
Please come on somebody!
I'll be waiting for when someone does!
Somebody?
Hello!!!!
ita another 21 til A new page I am going to get it! hopefully! :D
DEREK LANDY,
I HAVE A REQUEST FOR YOU TO SAY HELLO TO ME PLEASE DO. IT WOULD MAKE BE VERY HAPPY.
I AM GOING TO KEEP REPEATING THIS OVER THE NEXT FEW DAY SO YOU MIGHT see THIS
DEREK
DEREK
DEREK
GUESS WHAT!!
GIVE UP??
OKAY I'LL TELL YOU.
We had to do an English exam today!!
We had to write an Article.
An Article about some one we Admire!!
I wrote about YOU!! YES YOU!!
And why wouldn't I??
You have inspired so many young people!!
DEREK
DEREK
DEREK
GUESS WHAT!!
GIVE UP??
OKAY I'LL TELL YOU.
We had to do an English exam today!!
We had to write an Article.
An Article about some one we Admire!!
I wrote about YOU!! YES YOU!!
And why wouldn't I??
You have inspired so many young people!!
Thats is sooooooooo cooooooool NJ!
DEREK LANDY,
I HAVE A REQUEST FOR YOU TO SAY HELLO TO ME PLEASE DO. IT WOULD MAKE BE VERY HAPPY.
I AM GOING TO KEEP REPEATING THIS OVER THE NEXT FEW DAY SO YOU MIGHT see THIS
DEREK
DEREK
DEREK
GUESS WHAT!!
GIVE UP??
OKAY I'LL TELL YOU.
We had to do an English exam today!!
We had to write an Article.
An Article about some one we Admire!!
I wrote about YOU!! YES YOU!!
And why wouldn't I??
You have inspired so many young people!!
DEREK
DEREK
DEREK
GUESS WHAT!!
GIVE UP??
OKAY I'LL TELL YOU.
We had to do an English exam today!!
We had to write an Article.
An Article about some one we Admire!!
I wrote about YOU!! YES YOU!!
And why wouldn't I??
You have inspired so many young people!!
Nj that is so cool! Oh my god lols :D
Hi crystal?
Are you going to dedicate the page?
Hey Crystal!!
*hugs*
How are you??
I think Derek will absolutely see your post!!
And hi nj!
Hey Star!
How are you??
So, are you going to dedicate it?
I'm fine. You?
I am good.
Exams are finally OVER!!
They were over today!!
Oh Yes!
i dedicate this page to Blankets! Because I have two around me now and I am soooo snugly!!!!
Awesome Dedication!!
I <3 Blankets.
I have 3!!
I'm fine thanks NJ, you?
I am Good :)
Exams Are finally over :D
(for the time being)
You must be so happy =P
Shhh, Crystal - did you check page 14 of the comments yet, around comment 2750 or so?
Was that when derek landy was there? He came on a few minutes after i left! :(
oH MY GOD! Lol I feel thick now because I have kept saying it over and over lolz :D thanks derek!
Can you say hi to me now derek? Please? I'll buy dark days if you do! (Although i might do anyway. However, if you say hi to me i'll definately buy it!)
Nj are yiu still here?
Crystal you are so lucky he has said Hi to you!!
I haven't spoken to him in ages and it was only brief, like 2 minutes and that was over the Summer holidays.
I was literally on a few days ago while he was and I asked how he was... He didn't respond :'(
I meant you
Yes I am Star
HI
At least you were on when he was! I know i've said this before but yesterday he came on just after i left!
Yeah, I suppose.
Hopefully i'll be there next time he comes on.
Hopefully it will be soon.
Maybe He'll post soon.
This one is getting Pretty Full!!
Oh! All crystal DEREK LANDY etc.s have beem deleted! Crystal, was that you or derek, are you watching us? If you are, please speak to us!
Even if you're not watching us, please speak to us anyway!
Star, I am pretty sure Crystal was the one that deleted them. Since she wrote them.
Although i'm not sure how you'll do that if you're not watching us. . .
Yes, but he could still be watching us. . .
OMG DEREK LANDY said HI to me!!!!!!!
*faints in a fangirl fashion* I love this blog!!
Not if he is Writing Book 7!!
Or not near the Computer/Lap-Top
Whichever he has :P
Crystal, are you still here?
Hi rim!
Hey Rim
*hugs*
How are you??
I'm good thanks eating noodles (that's why I was gone for 6 mins) *hugs*
I don't think crystal's here.
Rim it was 9 minutes. At least that's what it says here.
Sorry I was here just I was too busy shoving noodles to comment...
I'M SORRY! I'm here just distracted :D =P
Were they nice noodles?
Beef flavour with strips of jerky thrown in so yes very!!!
Put your hand up if you're not here!
Once a teacher asked us that question. I put my hand up. And i was there.
is jealous of rim :D
I'm on a diet!
HIIII GUYS.
Can't stick around unfortunately.
EVERYONE READ COLLABORATIVE EFFORT, I have posted something.
Oh sorry...
But I don't regret eating the amazing moist noodles with chewy jerky with black pepper! jelous now?
Hi Sparky Bye Sparky!
Cool I will!
Hi Sparky bye Sparky!
just a bit =P
Lol... What's everyone doin?? Apart from this obviously...
I put a new post on my blog. Will you go check it out and follow my blog too plees :D
http://crystaldswonderfulblog.blogspot.com/
?????????? Anyone on ?????
I am :D :D
Yay someone!!
I mean yay someone's on!!!
Lol:D did u go on my blog?
Yep he also said hi to you and me 2 pages ago!!! In soooooooooooo HAPPY *sighs deeply and jumps backwards onto bed.*
Lol I have showed everyone in my family and everything!
Same!!! I only just realised it when I read the previous comments!!!
My dream last night was SP related and my mum said I said "Val just stay with Fletcher" and "caelan is near." in my sleep, she slept on the floor next to my bed cus my grandparents have hers...
If anyone's still on I got to go...
BYE!!
I'm on!!!!
Is nobody else on?
Is nobody else on?
Whoops it posted twice.
Please somebody come on!
Last time i came on nobody was on. It's so annoying.
i'm sorta here
I have to go now! Byeee!
Oh no i missed you! Please! Somebody come on!
Please come on please come on please come on please come on please come on please come on pkease come on please come on please come on please come on
I'm back again! Oh and Star incase you didn't know theres a chat where we all go. Heres the link http://xat.com/aquilafelis
Hi crystal!
No i didn't know. Thanks.
go now if you can :D
I have to go now! Bye Star! I will probably be on later!
Anyone on?
I'm on!
Good!
You still on?
Yeah
Oh yeah you are
But i've gotta go soon. I need to look for my swiss army knife-i'm going camping.
Bye!
Cool! Going camping where?
HELLO WORLD!!!
WHY DOES EVERYONE ALWAYS POST RIGHT AFTER ME ON COLLAB EFFORT?????????
NO ONE'S GONNA READ MY STORY NOW SHADOW!!!
Hello?
You were here a minute ago Star...
Why is there no one here?
I AM HERE!!!
Well hello there Sparky!
How're you?
Great now that I'm talking to someone.
There's a cop in front of me...
I have started a new story!
And new new story. That has a name.
A new new story.
A new new story, excellent.
The cops in my stories don't last long *looks thoughtful* Distinct lack of magic
Now, there was an actual cop. He was getting a coffee. :3
Ah, would you like to read the story?
Why was he getting a coffee? Sounds lazy if you ask me
Sure thing!
I dunno. I wasn't about to ask him.
http://meetthegoldengod.blogspot.com/2012/01/i-have-two-stories-which-one-should-i.html#comment-form
Go to that link and the story shall be there.
You can also read from where you were up to in the Kat Ryan Harper story.
AND COMMENT ON IT THERE PLEASE.
Oh and to prove my theories about cops being distinctly unmagical can you chop off his head and see if it regrows?
Okay I will
*shrugs* It might regrow
Commented for you Sparky!
*hugs Robin*
Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!
I actually now where Echo is headed so, I'm kinda hoping that it'll get more votes...
Do you write Robin?
I prefer echo it's still got lots of things to unfold I feel. Oh and yes I do write
Can I read something of yours?
Echo is actually based on a nightmare I had....
And it was freaky scary.
Brilliant! Sounds fun...
If you want
http://rsnowscar.blogspot.com/
Or do you just want me to put the beginning up on here
Put it here if possible.
At one point in the nightmare I thought I had killed my best friend. Starkid.
Damn. Look, I gotta go.
I'll be on later, I'll read it from your blog. And I'll comment on it.
BYE!!!
Kay thanks bye
STARKID POTTTER!
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